Hello guys..
Ye meri 2nd thread hea yaha par..
1st thread just friends jisse mene english mea likha tha sayad islli yaha par usse jadda prem na mila jiske chalte muje wo thread band karni pari qki uske sare updates already mene english mea likh diye the..
Khair is story ke baad jarur usse hindi mea subbed kar fir post karumgi qki mea apni pehli he kahani ko adhuri ni chodna chahti..
Ab aate hea is kahani ko likhne ki waja bolo ya prerna..
Par jesa ki mene dekha he yaha par jada magic related story karna pasand karte hea sab..
Toa fir mene b isme apna hath aajmane ka socha..
Par mea batadu ki meri hindi jadda achi ni hea qki suru sea he english lagualan he jada use ki thi bachpan se..
Isliye thori bohot mistake hogu jarur mujse toa jell lena ha plss..
Mea pichle kuch dino se is story ke plot ke bareme soch rahi thi..
Par kuch khass idea he ni aaya..
Tab mere friend jinki yaha ek story already chal rahi hea unhone kaha ki mea pehlea kuch stories read karu fir muje kaise or kya likhna he uska idea aayega..
Fir kya tha hogai suru..
2 din mea mene bohot sari stories pari jiski links mere dost ne he muje bejithi..
Jisse muje ye toa pata chal gaya ki yaha par magic ke sath sath adultery incest romance agar ye sab ho story mea toa almost sabi reader's usse parna pasand karengea..
Mea pehlea toa upar likhe prefixes ki story parna b pasand ni karti thi..
Par jab mene meri family mera goan or mea,dil ka rista,chehek ta chirag,aise b or b links he par mene abi tak ye 3 he pari hea...
Ye muje kafi achi lagi..
Bhale he inka content extraordinary tha par usme b inke writers ki mehnat saaf dikhai deti thi..
Isliye mene b socha ki ek try karti hu..
Achi hui or aap sabi ko pasand aai toa tk warna waise b muje kisise farak ni parta(joking)..
Toa fir jada bor na karte huye shuru karti hu meri story..
RISHI THE SAVIOR(BEING EVIL)..
ab isse acha naam muje ni suja..
Agar app logo ke pass koi suggestion ho toa jarur dena.. N koi acha cover ho toa b aap muje pm me suggest kar sakte ho..
Or batadu ki mea ye story me jitna hosake aaplogon pasand aaye wo content likne ki puri kosis karungi..
Or yaha agar kisiko index banana aata he toa pls pm me..
INTRODUCTION jald he post hoga..
Read my story.. Rishi the SAVIOR (Being evil).. A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..
INTRODUCTION (AARTIS FAMILY) {Yaha par mea jinka b introduction dungi unka relation hero ke sath kya hoga uss hisabhse jaise ki}
Nanaji - ARUNLAL RAJAWAT {Hero ko chor imp character ke he male pics dalungi} (Inka mumbai mea bohot bara business hea diamond ka or ye pure state mea top business mans mea aate hea. He toa ye b Raj pariwar se he par inke pitaji ne wo sab chor mumbai aagaye the.. Q ye aage bataungi Bohot he sulje huye inshan he ye.. Or apne tino betiyo se bohot pyaar karte hea khaskar aarti se.. Or uske jane ke baad se he inka bartav thora sakt hochuka hea.. Par aaj b ye aarti ko bohot yaad karte hea or veer bahadur ko apna dushman mante hea)
Naniji - SHUSILA DEVI. Agr 54
(Ye behad he shant or khush mizaz he.. YE hamesa apne pariwar khush dekhna chahti hea.. Chahe iske liye inhe kuch b karna pare.. Ye b apni betiyo par jaan deti hea.. Or usse yaad kar kabi kabi apne kamre mea beth roti b hea)
Badi masi - ARCHANA RUHIA Age 38
(Shadi ho chuki he inki or ye apne pati ke sath rajasthan mea rehti hea.. Inke sar yoga ka bhut sawar hea.. Or issi wajase ye kafi fit or attaractive b hea.. Inke pati RAHUL RUHIA rajasthan ke janemane imdustrialist hea Naam rutba sab he inke pass bas kami hea toa ek bache ki.. Q aage batungi)
2nd Badi masi - ARUNA RAICHAND Age 34
(Ye or aarti dono judwa he bas inke bich 10 seconds ka fasla tha.. Dono behene 2 dil ek jaan jaise rehti thi.. Par uparwale ko inka pyaar na bhaya isliye aaj aruna aarti se itni nafrat karti hea jitni sayad he koi karsakta ho apni he behen se.. Q ye b aage bataungi.. Inhe modelling ka bhut sawar tha ek samay isliye kafi modern hea.. Or open minded b.. N haa ye b aarti ke tarha he pregnant hea.. Inke pati ka naam ROHIT RAICHAND hea.. Ye mumbai ke jane mane business man ke sath sath bohot khatarnak or vaishi kisam ka insan hea.. Aisha koi galat kaam ni hoga jo ye ni karta hoga.. Par iski ek khubi hea chahe kitne b galat kaam ho iske karta sab kuch legally he hea.. Or toa or inka usul hea ki galat ke sath bohot galat or sahi ke sath bohot toa nai par thora he sahi par sahi jarur karega.. Inka character samajna thora muskil hoga.. Isliye ham ye waqt par chor dete hea.. Ha par itna jarur bata deti hu ki ye kafi important character hea..)
Mom -Aarti singh Age 34
Ye b modern hea par sath he sath apne sanskaro se b judi hui hea.. N aksar judwao mea ye aam baat hoti hea ki dono ka behaviour kuch chijo mea opposite ho or aarti or aruna mea b yahi baat thi.. Aarti kafi sulji hui hea or apne pati ko or apne bhai raamu ko apna sab kuch manti hea.. Manti toa ye apni judwa behen ko b bohot thi par aaj inhe b unse nafrat hea bohot.. Ab inke bareme jada toa aage he bataungi warna majja nai aayega parne mea.. Ha par itna jarur batadu indono beheno ki ladai ya jagra kah sakte hea kafi ehmiyat rakhta hea story ke liye.. N q ye b aage hea bataungi..)
Ab hero ke dad ka joki aarti ke pati RAAJ BAHADUR SINGH Unka intro unki family ke sath he dungi.. Filal ke liye itna he bas he ki wo aarti ke pati hea n hero ke dad..
Last edited: Dec 30, 2018
Read my story.. Rishi the SAVIOR (Being evil).. A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..
Ye story kai parts mea divide ki gai hea.. Jo ki aap sabi ko dire dire pata chalegi..
UPDATE 1 Hamari brahmand mea pure 9 univers he jisme hamara universe 6th no. Par aata he jismea milky way jo ki hamari galaxy he or usme hamara pyara earth..
Ab thora in 9 universe ke bareme batati hu jiska is kahani mea bada important role hea..
In 9 universe mea 8 universe ek round circle mea gumte hea jiske bicho bich he the omni universe(jisse ham saral basha mea 0 universe kahengea)..
Toa guys is 0 univers ke ird gird baki ke 8 universe ek circle me gumte hea..
Or ye 0 universe ko in baki 8 universe mea sabse barkar mana jata hea.. Qki in sabi ki rachna ussi ek universe se suru hui thi..
Ab aate he in bache 8 universe par toa batadu ki ye 8 universe ko jab the Omni king ne banaya tha tab unhone inko apas me jorne ka socha isliye unhone har dusre universe ko uske sathi universe ke sath jod diya unhone..
Matalab ki 1st univers ko 8th ke sath 2nd ko 7th ke sath 3rd ko 6th ke sath or 4th ko 5th ke sath..
Ab unhone aisa q kiya ye toa wohi batasakte hea hame..
Khair unke aisa karne se ek or musibat aapani ki ab in 8 universe ki dekhbal ke liye kuch karna hoga.. Qki wo khud har universe ki dekhbal ni kar sakte the isliye unhone apne sakti se 8 aise taqate banayi jo ki in aatho universe ke dekhbal karegi..
Par unse in aatho sakti ko banate waqt ek galti hogayi thi.. Jo ki ye thi ki unhone in sakti ka nirman karte waqt is baat par dyan ni diya ki ye kis hit mea kam karegi..
Matlab ki ye vinash kari hogi ya udhar kari..
Par jab tak wo iss baat par dyan dete tab tak der ho chuki thi.. Or in aatho saktiyone apne apne universe ke taraf prasthan kar liya tha.. Jinme swayam the omni king 10% energy mojud thi.. (Ab 10 he q thi aap log sochoge toa batadu ki.. Omni king ne 10% he isliye di ki agar kabi future ye sabi energy bagawat par utar aaye toa ye akele he unka samna kar sake qki.. Aatho sakti milkar b omni king ke taqat ka 80% hissa he banta tha.. Or omni king toa khud 100 ka dum lekar bethe the.. Bas isliye)..
Par ab omni king ko chinta satane lagi ki kahi unki energy galat raste par na chali jaye.. Par wo kar b kuch ni sakte the qki unhone already apni bohot sari urja use kar li thi..
Pehlea toa 8 universe banane mea or fir unki dekhbal ke liye 8 sakti ka nirman karne mea..
Isliye ab wo chahkar b khud kuch ni kar sakte the.. Isliye unhone ye sab kuch waqt par chor diya..
Yaha par jo sakti 6th universe mea aayi thi jisme hamari earth b mojud thi jaha abi abi jeevan ka aana suru hua tha..
Usne waha pohach or tin taqato ka nirman kiya jisse ham brahma vishnu mahesh ke naam se jaante hea..
Ab aage kya hua hoga aap sab toa jaante he ho..
Khair aise he kai sadiya biti.. Or ab darti par lok jeevan ka ana suru hogaya tha.. Or ye log bohot jald tariki kar rahe the..
Or dusri or tridev ne milkar devo ka nirman kiya taki wo janlok ka udhar kar sake..
Par devo mea b kuch jagre huye jisse wo do bhag mea bat gaye..
Pehla bhag toa devo ke naam se he jana jata tha par dusre ko assuro ka naam diya gaya jo ki kuch b kar dev lok ko pana chahte the..
Aao sab logo picture clear hogai hogi.. I mean yaar samaj gaye na ki or detail mea batatu..
Khair in dono grp mea aksar yudh hote rahe.. Khair aise he kuch waqt or bita or fir aaya wo din..
jab itihass me pehli bar devo or assuro ne milkar koi kaam ek sath kiya tha..
Or vo tha SAMUDRA MANTHAN..
Devtao or assuro ka issme niji swarth jarur tha par iske alwa unke pass koi chara b ni tha..
Dono ne milkar is samudra manthan me hath bataya or iska fal swarup dono ko he bohot se achi chije prapt hui..
Par kehte hea na har achi chij apne sath buri chij ko b sath lati hea..
Yaha b waisa he hua tha..
Aap sabi log bagvan shiv ko neelkanth q bulate he sayad jaante hoge..
Ye khana b uss gatna se juri hea jab bagvan shiv ne samudra manthan se nikla vish(poison) ko chuna tha jisse na koi dev na he asur apanana chahta tha..
Par mahadev ne tino loko ki bhalai ke liye wo jeher pine ka nirnay liya jise HaLaHaLa ke naam se jana jata tha..
Mahadev ke aisa karne se devta or asur dono me ek bar fir khusi or harsh ulhas ki lehar doud uthi..
Par unko kya pata tha niyati ne apne god me kya chupa rakha tha..
Mahadev ke HaLaHaLa pine ke baad uska kuch ansh abi b bach gaya tha..
Jiske bareme kisiko ni pata tha..
Ab is HaLaHaLa ke prabhav se aage kya kya hoga..
Ye sochte huye b dar lagta hea..
Qki HaLaHaLa kisi abhishap se kam ni tha..
Jo apne andar bhavishya mea failne wale lalach ka andhera le panap raha tha..
Ab najane bhavishya me iska kya prabhav hoga..
Ye toa waqt he batayega.
Read my story.. Rishi the SAVIOR (Being evil).. A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..
dusri taraf baki ke universe ke kya hal chal he ye b bata deti hu..
Jesa ki mene kaha tha ki har dusri universe uske opposite universe se judi hui hea..
Iske wajase agar ek mea kuch bura hota toa dusre mea b wahi haal hota tha..
Khair ab jaise ki mene bataya tha 1st universe 8th ke sath 2nd 7th ke sath 3rd 6th ke sath or 4th 5th ke sath jude he..
Ab inme mea kon rehtw he ye b bata deti hu..
1st mea demons ka basera he..
Or in sab ke maharani jo ki wo sakti he jisse omni king ne yaha ki dekhbal ke liye beja tha..
Par usne yahi par kabja kar yaha ki rani ban bethi..
Or apni taqat or dimag se 8th universe ke sath mil issne dusre universe ko b apne kabje mea lane ka socha hea jisme inka ansh jisse inhone apni taqat se banaya he wo inka sath dea raha hea..
Ab aate hea 8th universe par..
Yaha par witches ka basera he or yaha par jo sakti aayi thi dekhbal karne usse 1st universe ki sakti ne chal se apne mea sama liya tha..
Jisse wo ab 1st ke sath sath 8th universe ki b rani ban gayi thi..
Ab aate hea 2nd or usse judi 7th universe par..
Yaha par 2nd mea Wolf's toa 7th mea Vampires ka basera tha..
Jinki aapas me he bohot he khatarnak dusmani hea..
Vampires or Wolf's dono he ek dusre ko khatam kar unki universes ko pana
Chahte the or sath he omni king ki neki gayi saktiya b yahi karna chahti thi..
Or is ladi ka fayda demon queen ne uthaya or vamps or Wolf's dono ke he dekhbal karne aayi saktiyo ko chalaki se apne andar samma liya..
Aisa karne se demon queen bohot he sakti sali ho chuki thi..
Ab uske pass omni king ki 40% power aa chuki thi..
Par usse malum tha ki wo itni he power se omni king ka samna ni kar payegi isliye usne baki ke charo universes ke b dekhbal karne aayi saktiyo ki taqat apne andar sama lena chahti thi..
Omni king ko demon queen ke karnamo ka pata chal chuka tha par abi tak wo puri tarha recover nai huye the isliye unhone..
Baki ke charo universes par ek shield banane ka socha jisse demon queen kabi par na kar payegi..
Jab tak un charo universes me se koi 2 universes ki saktiya khud usse waha lana na chahe tab tak..
Jab ye baat demon queen ko pata chali toa wo bohot nirash hui or usse omni king par bohot gussa aaraha tha..
Par chahkar b khud kuch ni kar sakti thi..
Isliye usne apne ansh ko waha bejne ka socha..
Par abi ke liye wo sambhav ni tha qki omni king dwara lagai gayi sheild bohot he taqatwar ghi..
Jiske karan abi uspar na demon queen na he uska sathi ja sakta tha..
Ab usse us shield ke kamjor hone ka intazar karna tha or ye tab he sambhav tha jab charo me se koi 2 universe apas me larre..
Or aisa filal waha kuch ni ho raha tha..
Ab chalte he baki bache charo universes ke bareme janneko..
Toa 3rd universe jo ki pari lok tha or 6th universe jisme hamari prithvi thi..
Wo dono apas me jurre huye the..
3rd or 6th universe ke bareme apas me shivay un saktiyo or tridev ke kisi ko ni pata tha..
3rd universe me behad he shanti or harsh ulhas ka mohol rehta tha or wahi 6th universe me HaLaHaLa ka prabhav ab dire dire bar raha tha or uska sabse bara shikar asur he the qki..
Unke dil me kafi burai thi..
Or HaLaHaLa ko apni taqate barane ke liye burai ka he saraha chahiye tha..
Isikaran asuro or devo me aaye din yudh hone lagge..
Jisme kabi asur toa kabi dev jitte..
Par tridev ke ashirwad ke karan kabi b assuro ki hukmat ni aayi thi 3ino loko par..
Kintu halahala din ba din taqatwar hote ja raha tha..
Yahi baat chinta ka wishay tha tridevo mea..
Chaliye chalte he unke pass..
Brahmaa dev - dekha apne kaise ye halahala logo me lalach or irsha bar apne saktiya bara raha hea..
Vishnu dev - Sahi kaha brahmaa dev par ham kuch kar he ni sakte shivay intazar ke..
Qki halaHaLa ko isbar tabi he ant kiya ja sakta he jab uski saari saktiyaa jagrit hogi..
Or aisa tab he hoga jab dharti par kal yug kaal shuru hoga..
Jaha na beta apne pita mata ka hoga,na bhai bhai ka or na hi dost dost ka..
Har taraf sirf chal,swarth or grina bari hogi..
Brahmaa dev - yadi aisa hua toa uska ant kaise hoga..
Qki hamme se koi b uska ant ni kar sakta..
Hamme iski anumati ni hea..
Mahadev jo ab tak chup the or kuch soch me the we bole .
Mahadev - Jab chal or kapat apni charam sima par hogi..
Jaha har taraf burai he burai hogi..
Tab hamme uska janam ko sidh karna hoga..
Jisme ham tino ki saktiyo ka ansh ho..
Tabi waha ek roshni se chamki or 6th universe ki dekhbal ke liye beji gayi shakti waha prakat hui..
Wo shakti ek roshni ka gole ke roop me thi..
Sakti(ye ussi energy gole ka naam he) ko apne samne dekh tridevo ne unhe naman kiya..
Tab sakti ne kaha..
Shakti - mahadev jo aap bol rahe the wo sahi tha parantu halahala ka prabhav uspar ni hoga is baat ki spasti(bohot muskil se ye wala word dhundha he) karna abi muskil hea..
Shakti ke baat sun tridevo ke chere par fir ek baar chinta ki lakire utpan hui jisska samadhan sirf shakti he kar sakti thi..
Tabi we bole..
Shakti - Gabrane ki baat nai he..
Har muskil ka hal hota hea..
Or is muskil ka b hea..
Halahala ka prabhav se wo jiv jise app apni saktiyo se banayenge jarur prabhavit hoga..
Qki uska prabhav swayam devo par b horaha he..
Paruntu ham halahala ka prabhav positive(ab iska hindi word dimag me ni aaraha he) ho jisse us jev ko aage koi muskil na ho apne maqsad me ye jarur kar sakte hea..
Paruntu iske liye mahadev aapko apna brahmcharya tyagna hoga or fir jab aisa hojayega tab aap tino ki saktiyo ke sath sath us jev mea swayam kaam dev b apni saktiyo ka kuch ansh denge jo bhavishya ke liye jaruri hea..
Shakti ke baat sun tridevo khush b the toa pareshan b qki kaam dev agar apni sakti ka ansh denge matlab wo jev ke liye koi rista mayne ni rakega..
Qki kaam dev ke liye b koi rista mayne ni rakta tha siway nar or nari ke..
Fir kuch or waqt gujra or mahadev ki b shadi hogai parantu we abi b kalyug suru hone ka intazar kar rahe the..
Qki HaLaHaLa ko sirf kalyug me he mara jaa sakta tha..
Aise 1000 million years or gujar gaye..
Or ab kal yug suru ho chuka tha paruntu abi b tridevo ko kisi ka intazar tha najane kya thi unke abi b rukne ki wajha..
Read my story.. Rishi the SAVIOR (Being evil).. A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..
Story me aage barne se pehle.. Mea app sabi ko bache 2 universes ke bareme batadeti hu.. Wo the 4th or 5th universe..
Ab inme 4th mea toa jins rehte the toa wahi 5th mea unke jani dusman naag rehte the..
Jab in dooni unvierses ko banaya gaya tha or inme jeevan aana suru hua tha.. Tan jin or naag me bohot he gehri dosti hua karti thi khaskar unki saktiyo mea jo unki dekhbal karne aayi thi..
Par kuch waqt baad najane kya hua ki wo dono universes ke sath sath unki saktiya b aapas me ek dusre ke dusman ban bethe..
Par inhone mil ye nirnay liya tha ki ham aapas larengea nai.. Par naa koi 4th universe ka jin 5th universe me aayega or na he koi 5th universe ka naag 4th mea jayega..
Par fir b taqat or satta ke kuch lalchiyo ne unki baat na mani or guspet karna suru kardiya ek dusre ke universes mea q kar rahe the iska b ek karan he jo ki hamare hero ke aane par bataungi..
Khair ab aap sabi ko aatho universes ke bareme toa batadiya hea meane.. Ab jara chalte he 0 universe mea.. Jaha omni king akele he bethe the or kuch soch rahe the..
Omni king in mind - meri beji 8 mea se ab 5 saktiya he bachi hea.. Usme se b demon queen ne jin tin saktiyo ko apne andar samaaya .. Ab unki power b usse mil chuki hea.. Par mea karu toa karu kya.. Mea usse khud khatam b ni kar sakta.. Qki meri banayi sari saktiya mera he ansh hea.. Or mea jada din tak usse rok b ni paunga baki ke 4 universes par kabja karne se.. Muje usske aisa karne se pehlea he kuch karna hoga.. Warna sab kuch andkar me chala jayega..
Tabi unhone baki bache charo saktiyo ko yaad kiya.. Or wo charo shaktiya unke samne aagayi.. Or fir unhone unse kuch baate kahi or kuch plan banaya .. Jisske pura banne ke baad omni king ke chere par santusti ke bhav the.. Par koi tha unme jo aisa ni hone dena chahta tha.. Ab wo kon tha ye toa aage he pata chalega..
Chalo ab fir 6th universe mea aate he jaha dharti par kal yug suru huye kafi waqt gujar chuka tha..
Jaisa ki tridevo ne spast kiya tha.. Kalyug mea HaLaHaLa sabse jada taqatwar hogi qki kal yug me uska prabhav sabse jada hoga tino loko par.. Khas kar dharti par.. Par yahi sahi waqt hoga usse harane ka..
Par abi tak tridevo ne us jev ka nirman nai kiya tha jo aage chal kar halahala ko hara sake.. Ab iska karan kya tha ye toa swayam tridev
Wahi dharti par rajgadh gaav jo ki andhra pradesh ki hasin wadiyo me tha..(yaar koi gaav ho ya state ho ya city saari achi achi toa yaha ke writers ne book kar li hea.. Mere liye kuch chora he nai.. Not fair) Bohot he khubsurat gaav tha ye.. Sab kuch acha tha is gaav mea.. Par yaha ke thakur veer bhadur singh jo ki rajgadh ke sath sath ass pass ke 101 gaavo ke mukhya the(ab ye mat puchana ki 101 he q.. Yaha b mere sath annyaay{cheating ab hindi me kaise likhte he pata nai} hua hea)..
Unke baap dado ke be baap dada yaha ke raaja hua karte the parantu angrejo ke janeke baad sarkar ne loksatha lagu kar di thi.. Jisme raajo se unke adhikar chin liye gaye the.. Paruntu fir b in 101 gaavo me inke anumati ke baghair ek patta b ni hil ta tha.. Pure rajya ki sarkar sirf in 101 gaavo ke vote or veer bahadur singh ke sath se he banti ya girti thi.. Khair inke bareme story me aage kabi baat karengea detail mea..
Ha toa itna sab kuch hone ke baad b veer bahadur kafi chintit the qki unka bara beta raaj bahadur apne gaav or pariwar ko chor videsh mea bas chuka tha or or raaj bahadur he ek matra purus the jo apne pita veer bahadur ke baad unki raaj gadhi or pure 101 gaavo ki jimedari sambhal sakta tha..
Par bhutkal me huye jagre ke karan raaj bahadur ne toa apne sare riste naate he tor diye the apne pitaji se..
Yaha tak ki raaj bahadur kis desh mea rehta he ye b ni pata tha veer bahadur ko..
Par veer bahadur apne kul or apne baap dado se chali aarahi parampara ko tutne ne dena chahta tha.. Jo thi har 50 saal mea aane wale mele mea agle raaja ya mukhiya ko gosit karna.. Jiske liye kuch padav hote the wo aage bataungi..
Or we raaj bahadur ko apna pratinidhi banakar raja gosit karna chahte the.. Par raaj bahadur toa apne pita ko chor apni patni ke sath khusal ya bekar jo b ho jindagi gujar rahe the Australia mea..
Veer bahadur apni he soch me gum apni haveli ke bahar baramadea mea beth yahi sab soch rahe the ki kya kare.. Kese apne bete ko wapas bulaye..
Raaj bahadur ko ghar chore 3 saal ho chuke the.. In 3 saalo mea uske taraf se na koi khabar aai na uska kuch pata chala..
Ab kewal 19 saal he bache the mele ko.. Veer bahadur ne soch liya tha ki ek aakhri kosis jarur karega apne bete bahu ko wapas lane ki..
Isliye apne kursi uth unhone kisi ramu ko awaj di jo inka sayad sabse barose mand banda tha
Usse unhone kuch kaha or fir wo apne haweli mea chalegaye..
Wahi switzerland mea aarti apne kamre beth ro rahi thi.. Or upar wale ko kos rahi thi..
Aakhir me he q prabhu.. Muje he apne maa baneke sukh se wanchit q rakha he aaj meri shadi ko 3.5 years hochuke hea par muje abi tak maa banne ka sukh ni prapt hone diya he aapne.. Pichle 3.5 saalo se har baar jab b mea pregnant ho mera bacha paida hota toa wo mere kokh se he marra hua nikal ta q akhir q prabhu..
Itna bol aarti or phut phut kar rone lagi..
Uski ye halat dekh muje b rona aaraha he isliye ham yaha se fir tridev ke pass chalte hea or aarti ka sawal unse karte hea..
Toa tridev aapas me fir baate kar rahe the tabi.. Vishnu dev bole..
Vishnu dev - Waqt aagaya he ham apne saktiyo ke kuch ansh se ek nayi sakti ka nirman kare..
Brahmaa dev - Par hamare saktiyo ko daran kar sake aisa majbut or balwan sarir tino loko mea kisi mea b nai hea..
Vishnu dev - Isska jawab b aapko abi mil jayega itna bol unhone kaam dev ko yaad kiya or we b waha pohach gaye..
Tabi waha ek sath 5 roshniya chamki.. In paacho rosniyo ke bich wali roshni me sabse jada chamak or urja thi.. Jisse sayad tridev b mehsoos kar paa rahe the..
Tabi un paacho rosniyo ne apna apna aakar badla or apne real avtar me aagaye wo pacho..
Ab ye sab kon the or aage kyahoga ye toa agle update mea he pata chalega..
Till then keep smiling.. Keep commenting.. Keep supporting.. Last edited: Dec 24, 2018
Read my story.. Rishi the SAVIOR (Being evil).. A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..
Tridev or kamdev ne milkar apni saktiyo ka use kar halahala ko harane ke liye apni saktiya kendrit karne wale the jisse wo fir kisi jeev mea dalenge..
Par tabi waha 5 roshniya chamki.. Or fir kuch he der me wo roshniyo ne apna asli roop daran kiya..
Ab aage..
Jinme bicho bich the omni king or unke do no baju thi baki ki char saktiya jise unhone 3rd,6th,4th or 5th universe ki dekhbal ke liye beja tha..
Apne samne omni king or baki charo saktiyo ko dekh ek narbtoa tridev b achambe mea the..
Tabi omni king bole..
Aap sabi jo karne ja rahe the usme kuch badlav karne honge qki.. Aap charo ki saktiya daran kar sake aisa is waqt koi nai hea dharti par..
Isliye mea khud yaha aaya hu in charo saktiyo ke sath.. Qki jo shakti aap charo ki urja se nirman hogi or usse jo jev dharan karega wo na sirf dharti lok ya 6th universe ka balki aatho universes ka rakhwala banega sath in un aatho ratno ka b..
Ab demon queen ko rokne ke liye or usse baki charo universes jispar uska kabja he unhe churane ke liye yahi sayi hoga..
Unki baate sun mahadev bole..
Mahadev - Paruntu aisa jeev jo hamari saktiya dharan kar sake fir un aath ratno ki b.. Aise shamta toa kisi mea hea b nai in pure 8 universe mea siway aapke or aatho saktiyo ke jiska aapne he nirman kiya tha..
Mahadev ki baat jab puri hui tab vishnu or brhmaa dev ko b unke baate kis or ishara kar rahi thi ye baat samaj aagayi..
Omni king ko b ye baat pata chalte der ni lagi ki tridevo ko or kaam dev ko unke yaha aanekaa maqsad samaj aachuka hea..
Isliye omni king bole..
Aap sabi jo soch rahe ho wahi baat hea.. Aap charo ki or un aath ratno ki sakti dharan karne ke liye jis sarir ki awasaktaa hea.. Wo mea khud apna sarir tyag banaunga.. Qki mea ye kaam meri nirman ki gayi kisi b sakti ko ni dea sakta.. (Iska reason ye he ki kahi wo b demon queen ki tarha apni taqat par ahakar kar lalchi na banjaye..)
Meare sarir tyag te he meri aatma 0 universe mea chali jayegi.. Jisse khud mera sarir dharan karne wala he ajad kar payega..
Par usse pehlea usse un aatho ratno ko panna hoga.. Jisse na sirf us ratn ki taqat usse milegi balki aatho ratno ko ek sath karne par he mea aajad ho paunga.. Or ye sab aatho universes mea fir khusali laa usse kayam karne ke liye jaruri hea..
Tridev or kam dev b ye sab karne ke liye tayar hogye. Tabi 8th universe ki sakti boli..
Paruntu is baat kya guarantee ki jis jeev ka aap nirman karne jaarahe ho usme taqat ka gamand ni aayega.?? Wo apni saktiyo ka galat istemaal ni karega???
Omni king ne is baat par muskurate huye kaha..
Mene kab kaha ki jis jeev ka ham nirman karne jaa rahe hea wo galat kaam ni karega.. Wo toa aaj tak ka sabse bada evil hoga.. Par uske kiye gaye karya jan hit ke liye he lab dayi honge..
Or rahi baat taqat ke gamand ki toa jiss khok mea is jeev ko ham dalne ja rahe he wo mahila usse bohot he achi parwarish degi..
Or nahi usse sari taqat khairat me baati jayegi.. Usse unhe pana hoga.. Apne liye,apne logo ke liye,uski or baki sabi universe ki bhalayi ke liye.. Or insab mea uska marg darshan mea khud karunga or sath he uske sath har padav par uska ek sathi / hamsfar b hoga..
Jo ki uske sath uski madat karegi.. Or in sabme sabse upar meri beti b uska sath degi..
Omni king ki last wali baat sun tridev or kaam dev ke sath sath charo saktiyo shock mea thi..
Q ab ye baat toa wo sab he jaane par ab omni king ki baat sun sab kuch na kuch soch rahe the..
Tabi fir 8th universe ki sakti haklate huye boli..
Ye kaise ho sakta he usse toa khud apne he..
Unki baat ko omni king ne he bichme kaat te huye bole..
Ha ha mene he usse apne hatho se mara tha.. Par uski aatma aaj b 0 universe par he meri talwar me kaid he jisse usse muje marna para tha par demon queen ko harane ke liye us jeev ko draguna ki jarurat hogi.. Or rahi baat usse ajad karne ki toa mea uski aatma ko b punar janam dunga..
Jisse wo us jeev ke sath he rahegi or usse wo maa ki mamta b milegi jisse mea ni dea paya tha..
Ye baat kehte huye omni king thore dukhi jarur huye the par turant apne chere par aaye bhav hatakar..
Unhone fir aage kaha..
Ham jis jeev ka nirman karne jaa rahe hea wo jeev baki dharti wasiyo ki tarha samnya toa ni hoga isliye jis khokh me wo palne wala he usse mahila ko b hame kuch sach batana hoga..
Fir kuch der or insabi ne baate ki or fir omni king ne un charo saktiyo ko isara kiya jisse pakar unhone apne apne hatho se ek bada blueish gola banaya or fir omni king ke taraf kiya jisse dekh omni king ne b apne dono hath hawa me kar kuch mantr pare jisse unke sarir se roshni nikalne lagi or wo us blueish gole mea jane lagi..
Kuch he der mea omni king ke sarir mea se roshni nikalna band hua or fir unka sarir ka akar badlne lagga or wo b ek choti si white roahnirmea badal gaya jisse dekh tridev or kaam dev ne b apne saktiyo ka kuch hissa uss white roshni mea dal diya..
Jisse wo roshni or chamak ne lagi or waha se gayab hogayi..
Or jo blueish gola tha jisme omni king ki aatma thi..
Wo b waha se chali gayi..
Ab dekhte hea aage kya hota hea.. Mera ye 1st attempt tha kuch unnatural likhne ka so kuch non logical baate ho toa maaf karna.. Sirf ek story samaj kar he parna isse.. Meane ye sab sirf ek entertainment purpose se likha hea.. Koi isse galat na samje..
Till then keep smiling.. Keep commenting.. Keep supporting.. Last edited: Dec 14, 2018
Read my story.. Rishi the SAVIOR (Being evil).. A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..
Aaj ke 1st update mea aap sabi ka response acha tha.. At least meri pichli story se toa bohot he acha tha..
Hope ye response aage or b bare or ye story ko kamayab banaye..
Meri taraf se toa puri kosis rahegi hi..
Chalo bore ni karti hu jada or aaj ke 2nd update ki surwat karti hu..
Ha toa uparwalo ki conversation toa aap sabhi ne padli ab niche walo ke taraf rukh karte hea..
Toa sabse pehle chalte hea Australia..
Australia ke ek research lab mea 2 scientist the jo dono apne apne kamo mea wyast the..
Sayad kisi chij ki khoj bin kar rahe the wo log..
Par jaha unki research lab thi wo jagha kafi ajeeb thi..
Vo research lab jungle me thi.. Or uske ass pass bohot sare guards the jo apne ass pass ki jagho par najar rakh rahe the..
Kuch der tak dono scientist apne apne kamo me lage rahe tabi (scientist ko sc 1 or sc 2 likhungi).. Sc 1 ne sc 2 ko apne pass bulaya or usse bola(inke bich hui baat chit hinglish mea likh rahi hu.. Bhale he vastavik ta me eng me ho rahi ho batchit.. N aage b jo conversation australia se related ho samaj leana ki wo english mea tha)
Sc1- mil gaya formula.. Sayad is bar banaya hua formula kaam kar jaye yaar..
Uski baat sun sc2 ke chere ka rang fikha padgaya jese usse kisi ne uska jeevan mang liya ho.. Or sc2 kuch sochte huye bola..
Sc2-pichle 3 salo se yahi bol raha hea tu.. Or har bar tera banaya hua formula galat nikal jata hea.. Isbar b waisa he hoga dekh lena..
Sc1-Saale tu mere sath he ya mere khilaf hamesa narkundi lagata hea..
Fir sc1 ne banaye huye formula ko ek tube mea liya or hydro mixture mea daal gumane lagga..
Or dusre taraf sc2 us mixture ko dekh bagwan se prathna kar raha tha ki har baar ki tarha is baar b wo formula galat he nikle.. Warna puri duniya tabha hojayegi..
Tabi wo hydro mixture jor jorse hilne lagga jisse dekh sc2 ki b dhadkane tej hogayi thi.. Jese uska b dil andar jor jor se hil raha ho .
Tabi.. Achanak wo hydro mixture shant hua or ek dam se fatgaya.. Dhamaka bohot he khatarnak tha.. Jis table par wo mixture tha wo table ka namonishan he ni bacha tha..
Wo table aise gayab hua jese ganje ke sar se baal or Gadhe ke sar se singh..
Bas antar itna tha ki wo dekh kar kisi mea deshat ni hoti thi.. Or yaha sc2 ke dil mea dehshat ghar kar gayi thi..
Par sc1 ka reaction dekh usse sukun mila qki sc1 ko lagraha tha ki formula galat tha isbar b..
Par sc2 ke reaction dekh lag raha tha ki usne yamraj ko dekh liya ho apne samne..
Chalo inko yahi chodte hea or aap logo ko aarti ke pass lea chalti hu..
Jo ki iswaqt shubha ke 8 bajne par b apne bi apne bistar par aaram se leti hui thi..
Par bichari ka chera dekh lagraha tha ki raatko kafi roi ho wo..
Par usse kya pata tha ki ab swayam bagwan he uska putr ke roop mea aane wale the...
Chalo isko b pata chalwa dete hea.. Tabi usse sapna aaya.. Jisme wo ek andheri jagha me kaid thi.. Jaha sirf dur dur tak gana andhera tha..
Aarti ye sab dekh gabra gayi thi.. Isliye.. Wo yaha waha dornelagi.. Or raaj (raaj bahadur) ko pukarne lagi..
Tabi uske samne achanak ek rosni prakat hui or us roshni ko dekh aarti or gabra gayi..
Tabi usmea se ek awaj aai..
Gabro nai aarti mea yaha tumhari sahayata karne aaya hu..
Roshni ke muh se apna naam sun aarti chounk gayi or uske kadam wahi ke wahi jam gaye or wo ek tak ussi roshni ke taraf dekh rahi thi..
Tabi uss roahni ka aakar badalne lagga or dhire dhire kar khud omni king aarti ke samne khare the..
Par aarti ko kya pata ki uske samne kon he isliye wo ek tak samne wale ko matlab omni king ko dekhe jarahi thi..
Tabi fir omni king bole..
Beta mea janta hu tumme ek bache ki lalsa he or pichle kuch salo mea tumhare sath kya hua ye b muje pata hea.. Par ab tumhe bohot jak putr sukh prapt hoga par usme ek muskil hea..
Aarti toa pehle he omni king ko apne bareme mea ye sab janta dekh chounki huyi thi. Or ab unki last wali bate sun usse laga ki.. Usko barso ki maa banne ki murad ab puri hogi.. Isliye usne turant he jawab diya..
Kaisi muskil baba.. Pls mea apse minatee mangti hu kuch b kare par muje ek bache ke banne ke sukh prapt hojaye.. Baba.. Mea har muskil se gujarne ko tayar hu..
Aarti ki ek bache ke prati chah or lagav dekh omni king ko laga ki aarti he sayi hogi rakshak ke janam ke liyea..
Tabi we bole..
Beti tumhare nasib mea ek putr laab he or wo bohot jald is duniya mea kadam rakhega parantu..
Itna bol omni king wahi rakgaye..
Aarti unhe yu rukta dekh kafi dar si gayi thi isliye ruaasi awaj mea boli..
Baba mea har muskilo ko jelne ke liye tayar hu.. Aap sirf bolke toa dekhiye..
Omni king - beti tumhara jo beta hoga uska janam jan heet ke liye hone wala hea isliye usme kayi devya saktiya b hongi.. Ye oro bacho se kafi alag hoga..
Par kehte heana jaha achai he wahi burai b milegi.. Toa tumhare bete mea swayam kaam dev ka ansh hoga.. Jisse usme kaam dev ki b saktiya hogi.. Jisse bavishya me uske liye koi b rista mayne ni rakega..
Omni king ki baate sun aarti apne gutno ke bal beth gayi.. Or rote huye boli.. Ye sab mere sath he q hota he.. Ab tak ek bache ke liye taras rahi thi or ab jab uske hone ki asha ki kiran dikhi toa ye sab hogaya..
Itna bol aarti fir rone lagi..
Omni king ko b bichari par daya aane lagi thi.. Isliye we bole..
Beti isme rone jaisa kuch ni hea ye sab toa niyati ka khel hea.. Tumhare bete ko puri duniya juk kar pranam karegi.. Wo sabi ke liye hamesa acha he sochega ha par kaam dev ka ansh hone ke karan kaam wasna mea uski bari ruchi rahegi..
Par issbe bari takleef ye heki wo itna jada taqatwar hoga.. Ki muje dar he ki wo kahi isi taqat ke ahankar or gamand ke niche na dab jaye..
Isliye usse tumhe bohot achi parwarish deni hogi taki bare hone par uska pehla udeshya dusro ki bhalayi ho..
Omni king bato se aarti sambal chuki thi or usne kaha..
Tk hea babaji mea apne bete ko bohot achi parwarish dungi..
Omni king - or haa beti tumhare beta uske nanhi haal mea he janam lena chahiye.. Isliye ho sake toa jald he waha chalijana..
Itna bol omni king waha se chale gaye..
Or aarti ki b nind khul gayi..
Aarti nind se jaag kar soch mea dub gayi.. Ki aakhir jo kuch b usne dekha kya wo sach tha..
Yahi sab sochte huye wo apni din chariya mea vyast ho gai..
Or aise he 4 mahine bit gaye..
Or ab aarti 3 mahine ki pet se thi.. Or usse ab jo kuch b usne dekha tha wo sab sach lagne lagga tha isliye usne raaj ko b apna sapne ke bareme batane ko socha isliye wo raatka besabri se intazar kar rahi thi..
Or wahi AR grp of companies ke head quarter mea bethe raaj kafi pareshan tha.. Q ye kal bataungi.. Gn frnds Last edited: Dec 24, 2018
Read my story.. Rishi the SAVIOR (Being evil).. A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..
Toa pichle update mea hamne dekha ki kaise omni king ne aarti ko rakshak ke bareme bataya or usse apne mayeke mea ja kar rakshak ko janam dene ko kaha.. Or dusre side raaj b kisi pareshani me tha par kal waqt kam hone ke wajase uski pareshani ki waja ni jaan sake hamsab..
Par aaj toa ham jaane bina jayenge nai.. Toa chalo chalte hea raaj bahadur ke taraf..
Jo apne company jiska naam AR grp of companies he uske head quarter mea apne cabin me beth apni soch mea gum tha..
Tabi uske cabin ka door knock hua or usne darwaze ko knock karne wale ko andar aaneke anumati di..
Jab raaj ki najar apne samne khare sakhs par gayi toa uske chere ke bhaav badal gaye or wo apni jagha se uth uss saks ko gale laga liya or bola .
Unknown - Nai bhaiya ji wo toa bas ham aapke diye huye kaam mea he wyast the.. Ek pal b hamne unhe akela ni chora tha.. Aapke janeke baad..
Unknown ki baat sun raaj usse alag hote huye bola..
Raaj - Toa bhai bata kaise he sab waha..
Unknown - Sabi log bhetar he bhaiyaji bas maaji ki tabyet ab thori dhilli se rehti hea.. Aapko sabi bohot yaad kar rahe hea.. Khaskar aapke pitaji..
Uski baato ko sun raaj ne usse apne cabin ke side mea bane sitting sofas ke taraf leagaya or usse bethne ko kaha or bola .
Jana toa mea b chahta hu yaar apne apno ke pass par jo kuch b hamare sath hua tha usse kaise bhul sakta hu mea.. Kaise pitaji ne galat ka sath diya tha uss din or hame ghar se nikal jane ko kaha tha.. Wo b bina sach jane..
Unknown - Bhaiyaji ab toa un bata ko bhul jayi yea.. Malik ko jab apke janeke kuch mahino baad sach pata chala tab unhone usse ghar se or gaav se dhakke mar kar nikal wa diya tha.. Or tab se aapko dhund rahe hea wo..
Raaj - Ab der hochuki hea mere bhai.. Ab mea sayad he kabi lout saku waha.. Qki tu b jaanta he jis raaste par mea chal raha hu waha mere sath sath mere apnoko b khatra hoga..
Unknown - Bhaiyaji aap chor q ni dete ye sab..
Raaj - Ye sab itna asaan ni hea.. Ye wo daldal he jaha sirf aanekaaa rasta he janeka nai.. Or agar koi isme sea nikal ne ki kosis karega toa wo or andar dasta chalajayega..
Par muje meri nai aarti ki fikar hea ab toa uske sath ek or jindagi b juri hea..
Unknown - Matlab bhaiyaji aarti didi pet se hea..
Raaj - Ha bhai.. Mea ab uski or mere bache ke safety ko lekar he pareshan hu.. Qki wo log muje toa kuch kar sakte ni he par mere biwi bache par jarur hath dalenge taki unhe wo miljaye jiske liye ye sab kar rahe hea..
Unknown - Bhaiyaji chota mu bari baat lagegi.. Par agar aarti didi ko ye sab pata challa toa kya hoga.. Isse acha toa aap unhe wapas india bejdo..
Raaj - Ha yahi sahi rahega par india mea usse ghar b ni bejsakta pitaji ke pass wo jane ko raaji he ni hogi mere bina..
Unknown - Q na aap unhe unke mayke bejdo mumbai mea.. Waha janeka sunkar didi b khush hojayegi..
Raaj - Sahi kaha tune.. Mea aarti ko mumbai he bejdunga. Par sun tu he aarti ko mumbai tak chorne jayega qki yaha mea kisi par b viswas ni kar sakta hu.. Or sun meane apna yaha ka legal karobar india shift pehlea he kar chuka hu par ye research wala me ni karsakta qki agar unhe pata chalgaya toa wo jarur kuch bura karengea..
Toa mere bhai ab yaha se mere biwi or hone wale bacho ki raksha ki jimmedari teri or meri company ka manager tuje mil jayega india mea usse mil tuje mere pure pariwar ki suraksha karni hogi..
Unknown - Bhai aap aise q bolrahe ho.. Aap ko kuch ni hoga.. Mea kahi ni ja raha aapko chorkar..
Raaj - Tu he toa mere sahara he mere bhai agar tu b aisa karega toa mere sath sath sayad ye duniya b tabha hojayegi..
Unknown - mea samja nai bhai..
Raaj - ye baat bohot he kam logo ko pata hea yaha tak ki mere or un 2 scientist ke alawa bas ek wo organization he jisse sab pata hea... Or ab mea tuje bata raha hu.. Taki agar mea mara gaya toa tu Jis formula ko yaha se lekar ja raha hea uske sath kya karna hea samaj jana tu..
Fir kuch der aise he undono me kuch baate hui jisme dono ke he aankho se aasu ki ganga jamuna bahi.. Or fir
Raaj ne us unknown aadmi ko ek round box diya or kaha isse sirf password se he khol sakte ho or agar galat password dalla toa iske andar ke fomula par acid girjayega.. Or aisa he iske sath jabardasti kholne ko kosis karne par hoga... Isse na koi hack kar sakta he na koi dusra attempt milega wrong hone par.. Qki isse mene khud banaya he isliye isse mere alawa wahi insaan kholpayega jiske pass password hoga..
Or ab jab mere mar jane ki khabar aaye tab tu is formula ko nast kar dena galt password daal... Or ha yaha se mera ek sathi b tere sath jayega.. Wo b mera barose mand hea.. Or iss formula ka galat hath mea ni jane dene ki usne kasam khayi thi.. Isliye wo backup ke liye tere sath rahega..
Fir raaj ne us unknown sakhs ko gupt darwaze se company ke basement mea lagaya or waha se usse hotel jane ko kaha taki kal wo aarti ke sath he india ke liye nikal sake..
taki kisiko pata ni chale ki raaj kisi sea mila tha or mila b toa wo saks kaha gaya ye baat kisiko b khabar na ho..
Fir raaj b apne ghar ke liye nikal gaya.. Or jab raaj apne ghar pohacha toa gate par he aarti uska intazar kar rahi thi..
Aarti ke chere b kai sare bhav the jisse raaj par ni paa raha tha par usse itna toa samaj aahi gaya tha ki aarti aaj badi khush hea....
Isliye uski khushi ka karan jaane ke liye raaj ne usse pucha..
Kya baat he aaj meri koyal kafi chehek rahi hea..
Aarti - Haji meana aaj bohot khush hu muje aapko kuch batana hea..
Raaj masti karne ke mood mea..
Kya baat he meri koyal ko koi ladka pasand aagaya kya.. Ab mera kya hoga..
Itna bol raaj hasne lagga or aarti uski baat sun uske sine par mukke barsane lagi..
Kuch der aise he unka hasi majak chala or fir aarti ne jo kuch b uske sapne mea hua tha raaj ko batadia jisse sun raaj kafi shock tha.. Usse toa yakin b ni horaha tha aarti ke baato par..
Isliye usne ye baat ki pushti karne ki sochi..
Guys batayega jarur ki ye wala update kaisa tha..
Read my story.. Rishi the SAVIOR (Being evil).. A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..
Pehle toa sry bolungi late hua hea ye wala update pichle updates se..
Kal hyderabad ja rahi hu clg se trip par for 5 days so ussi ki tayariyo mea wyast thi..
aap log sayad samaj sakte honge ki ek ladki ko kya kya ni dekhna hota he trip par janne se pehlea bas isliye late hogaya..
N bhale mea waha jaa rahi hu par raat ko ek update jarur dungi..
Thora late hoga par aayega roj ek update..
Toa jada tym waste na karte huye aaj ke update ki survat karti hu..
Toa guys jese ki aap sabi ko kal pata chala ki raaj ke b kahi sare raaj hea..
Or aarti ne b apna raaj raaj ko batadiya hea..
Jisse sunneke baad raaj ko uske raaj par yakin nai hua..
Isliye raaj ab anjali ka raaj sahi he ki nai iska pata karne walla..
Or ye raaj b mea iss update mea batadungi ki kaise raaj uska raaj patakarega ..
Sry for the above non sense..
Lets start the update..
Raaj ko aarti ki baato par vishwas he ni horaha tha par usse ye b jaana tha ki aarti ne aisi baat par vishwas kaise kiya..
Qki aarti kafi modern or khule vicharo ki thi..
Or agar usse ye baate koi or kehta toa wo samne wale ko hi pagal karar dea deti par viswas na karti..
Yahi wajha thi jo raaj ko sochne par majbur kar rahi thi bar bar ussi baat par sochne ke liye..
Or aarti apne samne yun khoya dekh..
Usse hilakar wapas vartaman me lati hea..
Jisse raaj thora hadbada jata hea..
Par jald he sambal te huye aarti se kehta hea..
Toa aarti ye toa achi baat hea..
Ek kaam karo tum kal he mumbai ke liye rawana hojao..
Mera yaha ek chotasa kaam he mea usse nipta kar wahi aajaunga..
Aarti india or wo b apne mayeke jaane ki baat sunkar bohot khush thi..
Par jaise hea raaj ne usse abi uske sath na aaneke baat kahi toa uska khila hua chera utar gaya or wo kafi udass hogayi or boli..
Mea aapko chor kahi nai ja rahi..
Aap chalenge toa he mea jaungi nai toa rehndo mea yahi tk hu..
Raaj usse samjate huye bola..
Aray meri koyal mea hamesa ke liye india jane ke liye he yaha kuch din or ruk raha hu...
Jisse mea apna sab kuch waha shift kar saku..
Aarti raaj ke ye waali baat sun kaafi khush hojati hea..
Qki kuch b ho apna desh akhir apna hota hea..
Or hamesa ke liye india loutjane ki khabar sun aarti kafi khush thi or chehek te huye boli..
Toa tk hea mea b aapke sath he india chali jaungi..
Ab raaj ko baat bigadti dikh rahi thi..
Qki aarti toa uske har baat ka koi na koi baat bol counter kar rahi thi..
.tabi raaj ki dimag ki batti jalli or wo bola..
Toa tk hea mene socha tha ramu bhai ko bulalu tumhe lejane ke liye..
Par ab tumhi ni jaana chahti toa mea kya kar sakta hu..
Ramu ka naam sun aarti fataf se boli..
Nai nai..
Meane kab mana kiya waha jane se..
Tk heana aap badme aajana mea ramu bhai ke sath chalijaungi mumbai kal..
Aap koi tnsn mat lo..
Aarti ye sab ek he saas or hadbaddi mea bol gayi thi..
Jisse dekh raaj hasne lagga or jab aarti ko apni stithi ka aabas hua tab usse b apni nadani par hasi aagayi tabi raaj haste huye bola..
Aaj b tumhara bachpana waise ka waisa he hea jaisa 3.5 saal pehlea tha..
Aarti - ha toa bhulo mat ham dono ko ek karne or hame switzerland pohachane ke piche mere ramu bhaiya ka he hath tha samje..
Vo ni hote toa ham kabi ek he ni ho pate..
Raaj b aarti ke baate sun un purani yado mea khote huye bola
Sahi kaha aarti agar us waqt ramu bhai na hote toa najane ham kabi ek b ho pate ya nai..
Mohol ko emotional hota dekh aarti ne baat badalte huye kaha ki..
Toa fir raamu bhaiya ko call karo or muje kal lene aaneko kaho jaldi..
Unse mile ek saal upar hochuka hea..
Raaj b ramu ko call laga deta hea..
Or usne pehle he ramu ko samja diya tha ki call par kya bolna hea .
Fir kuch der tak toa inki call par baate hote rahi..
Fir aarti waha se uth apne kamre mea chaligayi packing karne..
Or raaj hall ke sitting mea he beth aarti ki kahi baato ke bareme soch raha tha..
Ki kaise wiswas kare aarti ki baato par..
Aaj ke tym mea ye sab kaise ho sakta hea..
Tabi usse kuch idea aaya jisse uske chere par smile aagayi or wo b bedroom mea chalagaya jaha aarti ne apne wardrobe ko pura khali kar bed par kapde phaila diye the..
Raaj jab kamre ki halat dekhta hea toa usse haste huye kehta hea..
Aray pagli q itna jol jamela karing..
Waha se shopping karleana apne kapro ki fil hal kea liye toa kuch kapre lea lo bas..
Aarti ko b raaj ki baat sahi lagi isliye..
Usne waisa he kiya or kuch he der mea uski packing hogai..
Or wo dono bed par let gaye..
Tabi raaj bola..
Aarti mea kya soch raha tha..
Abi toa 3 months he huye hea n tumhara check up date b 3 din baad ka hea..
Or ab tum india b ja rahi ho..
Toa ek kaam karte he mea he tumhara ek routine checkup kar leata hu..
Taki india jaaneke baad kuch din toa koi problem na ho..
Or tum or bacha healthy ho ki nai pata chal jayega..
(Ji ha raaj ke pass dr. Ki b degree hea..
Or detail mea mea kal bataungi introduction mea..)
Aarti ko b uski baat sahi lagi isliye wo dono unke ghar mea he bane basement lab mea aagaye
Ye ek fully high tech or well equipped lab thi..
Jaha har modern gadgets present the jo raaj ki company ke research mea kaam aate..
Khair aarti research lab mea aa machine ke opening mea let gayi..
Ye ek aisi machine thi jisse insan ho ya janwar unki puri body scan kar unke deeply inner organs aaram se dekh sakte the..
Raaj ne ye machine apne research ke liye banwayi thi..
Aarti kea machine par lette he raaj ne machine suru kardi..
Par waha usse kuch na mila jo ab normal ho..
Aise he usne 4-5 or test kiye jisse usse koi thos sabut ni mila ki uska hone wala bacha ab normal hea..
Tabi ussne bache ka bone marrow test karne ka socha jisse vo uske hormonal activity ko study kar sakta tha..
Isliye usne aarti ko nind ka injection lagaya ye bolte huye ki sleeping activity b dekhni hea usse uski body ki..
Jispar aarti ne jada sawal ni kiya qki usse raaj par bharosa tha..
Ho b q na aakhir konsa pati apne biwi or baap apne bache ko takleef pohachayega..
Khair usne bone marrow se b sample lea liya test ke liye or usse machine mea dal diya jo usse analys kar kal tak report degi..
Fir agle din aarti ki jab nind khuli toa wo apne bedroom mea thi or uske bajume raaj nai tha..
Jab wo uth raaj ko dhundne ke liye bahar aayi toa usse raaj kitchen mea gana gun gunate huye breakfast banate huye dikha..
Raaj ko u dekh aarti ko uspar kafi pyaar aaya isliye jakar usse pichese hug karte huye gud mrng wish kiya..
Raajne b usse gud mrng wish kiya..
Or jaldi ready honeko kaha qki..
Ramu airport par he inka wait karne wala tha..
Aarti b jaldi ready hogai or jab bahar aai toa breakfast table par lag chuka tha or raaj b tayar ho chuka tha..
Aarti ko bahar aata dekh raaj uske pass gaya or bari bari uske dono gal par kiss kiya or bola .
Meri koyal aaj kafi hot lagrahi hea..
Raaj ki baat sun aarti thori sharmane lagi..
Or fir raaj usse kandho se pakar kar dining table par uski seat par bitha deta hea or aarti ko apne hatho se khilane lagta hea..
Jisse dekh aarti usse kehti hea..
Kya baat he janab ham par kafi pyaar aaraha he aapko..
Warna kabi ek glass pani b ni lakar dete ho or aaj dekho..
Raaj is baat par kuch na bola bas muskurate huye uske muh mea ek or niwala banakar dala .
Or apne aap se bola..
Sayad ye hamare akhri kuch pal ho aarti..
Sayad fir ham kabi mil payenge ya nai ye b ni pata muje..
Par mea tumhe or apne bache ko kuch ni hone dunga..
Ye sab sochte huye uski ankho mea aasu aagaye..
Jisse usne rokne ki kafi kosis ki thi par rok ni paya..
Aarti raaj ki aankho mea aasu dekh gabra gayi thi or jatse usse gale laga liya .
Or boli..
Aray kya hua aapko..
Mene kaha tha mea aapke sath he jaungi .
Par aap sunte kaha ho..
Raaj ko jab ehsas hua apni halat ka toa wo jatse aasu puchte huye bola .
Aray pagli ye khushi ke aasu hea .
Ab kuch din mea chain se ji sakunga .
Itna bol wo hasne lagga or aarti usse marne..
Kuch der aisehi hasi majak karte huye dono ke nikal ne waqt hogaya .
Tabi raaj ko yaad aaya ki wo log raaj par najar rakhe huye honge..
Isliye usne aarti ko bahana batate huye uske sath airport tak janeki baat ko taal diya .
Aarti ne kafi na nukur kiya par ant mea maan he gayi..
Fir raaj ko hug or kiss kar wo chal pari airport ki taraf or raaj apne ghar mea bane secret lab mea..
Ab aage kya hota hea ye toa kal he bataungi usse pehlea ek helo chahiye..
Aap sab intro kaise parna pasand karoge..
Sab ka ek sath du ya..
Jo jo characters aate jayenge unke hisab se or fir index ke baadwala res post ko edit kar waha chipka du..
Pls batana qki meko fir likhna b hoga..
N kal wala update late aayega thora raatko bcz i will b in train
Read my story.. Rishi the SAVIOR (Being evil).. A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..
Toa guys bohot deri hogai update aane me isliye maafi chahungi.. Ab jada bhasan baji na karte huye update pe aate hea..
Jaha aapne 7 update me dekha ki kaise raaj aarti ko apne bina mumbai janeke liye convince karta hea.. Or sath he ramu jiske bareme abi bohot kuch janna baki hea uska indono se ek khass rista he iska b pata chala tha.. N raaj ne kaise anjali ke raaj ko jaaneke liye tarha tarha ke test kiye jisme usse kuch na mila par last wala test 7 update me he adhura re gaya tha.. Jiski report mea abi dea rahi hu jo muje raaj ne khud di thi..
Toa suru karte hea report se he..
Raaj jaise aarti ke janeke baad apni secret lab mea aaya.. Tab usse yaad aaya ki report b ab tak ready hochuki hogi.. Isliye usne machine se connected computer par bethkar(computer ke upar nai haa) darha dar typing karne lagga.. Or uske samne kuch files open hui.. Jisme ka likha hua par raaj ke chere par dar,khushi or chounk ne wale bhavo ka mila jula expression tha..
Report ka data par usee ek dar or uljan si thi isliye usne ye sab sahi nai he ye sab sabit karne ke liye us report ke data ko nikal apne research ke data mea dala or fir usne ek final click kiya.. Or kuch der analyse honeke baad jo report aayi usse dekh toa wo apni chair se uchal para..
Or jor jor se chilate huye bola .
Ye ye kaise hosakta he.. Nai mera bcha koi aam inshan ni he ye sach ni hosakta..
Itna bol wo rone lagga..
Or rote rote bola.. Matlab aarti jo kuch b bol rahi thi sapne ke bareme sab sach tha..
Or agar uske sapne sach he toa mera bacha ek super human hea..
Fir kuch der raaj ek dam shant ho kuch soch raha tha.. Tabi usse 2nd report jisme usne apne bache ke reports ke data ko apne research wale data me enter kiya tha uska result yaad aaya..
Or turant he usne ek gadget nikala jo sayad kisi tarha ka messenger tha.. Usme usne apni kuch baate records ki or usse apne bharsose mand dost ajay jo ki wahi scientist tha jo apne ek or sath he scientist ke sath mil issi formula par kaam kar raha tha..
Par wo iss formula ko kabi successful ni hone dena chahta tha taki iska koi miss use kar sake..
Or ajay ke liye b ussne ek msg bijwaya jisme usne apne hone wale bache ke bareme bataya or usse aage kya karna hea ye b bataya..
Wahi dusri taraf aarti ramu ko airport par dekh.. Khush hojati hea.. Or bhag ke jakar uske gale lag jati hea..
Ramu b aarti se mil kafi emotional hogaya tha.. Jiske karan dono ke aankho se aasu behne lagge..
Kuch der dono aise he rahe fir aarti ko apne se alag kar uske aasu puchte huye bola..
Kya choti tuje kitni bar kaha hea.. Aise roya mat kar. Muje ne bhata ye sab.. Or wese b tu rote samay bandariya dikhti hea.. Itna bol ramu ki hasi chut gayi..
Aarti b ramu ki baate sun muskurate huye ramu ke sine me ek punch mara or boli..
Ha ha mea toa bandariya hu aap toa bare salman khan ho na jo ab tak kuware ho.. Mene kaha pehle b ki aap check up karwalo aajkal bohot sare ilaj aagaye hea.. Aapka b ilaj hojayega..
Itna bol aarti pet pakar kar hasne lagi..
Or ramu ke cherasaram se lal hogaya tha.. Or wo bola..
Kya choti teri abi tak bachpaana gaya nai ha.. Aaj b waisi he hea jaise 3.5 saal pehle thi..
Aise he wo dono hasi majak karte huye runway par aagaye jaha inka private jet ready khara tha
Fir dono us jet mea beth gaye or hogaye rawana mumbai ke liye..
Jet me beth te he aarti fir suru hogai.. Bhai batao na maa kaisi he or baba kya wo abi b mujse naraj he.. Or aruna or archana didi ke kya hal chaal hea.. Unko b mea yaad hu ki nai.. Or mere saas sasur ke yaha kya chal raha hea.. Or..
Ab aarti issi aage kuch bolti tamu ne uske muh apne hatho se band kiya or bola..
Bas kar meri maa.. Dimag kha jayegi kya.. Itna sab ek sath kaise bataunga ek sath.. Ruk ruk kr puch or apni is express train ko mumbai ki local train bana..
Or fir ramu usse ek ek kar apne pariwar walo or unke haal chal ke bareme batane lagga..
SHORT INTRODUCTION
(AARTIS FAMILY) {Yaha par mea jinka b introduction dungi unka relation hero ke sath kya hoga uss hisabhse jaise ki}
Nanaji - ARUNLAL RAJAWAT {Hero ko chor imp character ke he male pics dalungi} (Inka mumbai mea bohot bara business hea diamond ka or ye pure state mea top business mans mea aate hea. He toa ye b Raj pariwar se he par inke pitaji ne wo sab chor mumbai aagaye the.. Q ye aage bataungi Bohot he sulje huye inshan he ye.. Or apne tino betiyo se bohot pyaar karte hea khaskar aarti se.. Or uske jane ke baad se he inka bartav thora sakt hochuka hea.. Par aaj b ye aarti ko bohot yaad karte hea or veer bahadur ko apna dushman mante hea)
Naniji - SHUSILA DEVI. Agr 48
(Ye behad he shant or khush mizaz he.. YE hamesa apne pariwar khush dekhna chahti hea.. Chahe iske liye inhe kuch b karna pare.. Ye b apni betiyo par jaan deti hea.. Or usse yaad kar kabi kabi apne kamre mea beth roti b hea)
Badi masi - ARCHANA RUHIA Age 26
(Shadi ho chuki he inki or ye apne pati ke sath rajasthan mea rehti hea.. Inke sar yoga ka bhut sawar hea.. Or issi wajase ye kafi fit or attaractive b hea.. Inke pati RAHUL RUHIA rajasthan ke janemane imdustrialist hea Naam rutba sab he inke pass bas kami hea toa ek bache ki.. Q aage batungi)
2nd Badi masi - ARUNA RAICHAND Age 24
(Ye or aarti dono judwa he bas inke bich 10 seconds ka fasla tha.. Dono behene 2 dil ek jaan jaise rehti thi.. Par uparwale ko inka pyaar na bhaya isliye aaj aruna aarti se itni nafrat karti hea jitni sayad he koi karsakta ho apni he behen se.. Q ye b aage bataungi.. Inhe modelling ka bhut sawar tha ek samay isliye kafi modern hea.. Or open minded b.. N haa ye b aarti ke tarha he pregnant hea.. Inke pati ka naam ROHIT RAICHAND hea.. Ye mumbai ke jane mane business man ke sath sath bohot khatarnak or vaishi kisam ka insan hea.. Aisha koi galat kaam ni hoga jo ye ni karta hoga.. Par iski ek khubi hea chahe kitne b galat kaam ho iske karta sab kuch legally he hea.. Or toa or inka usul hea ki galat ke sath bohot galat or sahi ke sath bohot toa nai par thora he sahi par sahi jarur karega.. Inka character samajna thora muskil hoga.. Isliye ham ye waqt par chor dete hea.. Ha par itna jarur bata deti hu ki ye kafi important character hea..)
Mom -Aarti singh Age 24
Ye b modern hea par sath he sath apne sanskaro se b judi hui hea.. N aksar judwao mea ye aam baat hoti hea ki dono ka behaviour kuch chijo mea opposite ho or aarti or aruna mea b yahi baat thi.. Aarti kafi sulji hui hea or apne pati ko or apne bhai raamu ko apna sab kuch manti hea.. Manti toa ye apni judwa behen ko b bohot thi par aaj inhe b unse nafrat hea bohot.. Ab inke bareme jada toa aage he bataungi warna majja nai aayega parne mea.. Ha par itna jarur batadu indono beheno ki ladai ya jagra kah sakte hea kafi ehmiyat rakhta hea story ke liye.. N q ye b aage hea bataungi..)
Ab hero ke dad ka joki aarti ke pati RAAJ BAHADUR SINGH Unka intro unki family ke sath he dungi.. Filal ke liye itna he bas he ki wo aarti ke pati hea n hero ke dad.. Last edited: Dec 21, 2018
Read my story.. Rishi the SAVIOR (Being evil).. A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..
