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Chudai Ki Story - ABHI -- THE WARRIOR

[color=rgb(41,] Update - 83[/color]

[color=rgb(41,]ab tak aapne dekha k Raktasur ka anth ho gaya ....aur pret lok asuro se mukt ho gaya .......[/color]

[color=rgb(41,]ab aagee....

Abhi Gk & team ..Pj & Bhadra k saath Pretlok k mahal mein aagaye

........Pret lok se asuro ka aatank toh khatam ho gaya tha .........Abhi ko yeh aabhas ho raha tha k uska aage badne ka marg yahi se hokar jaata hai.....

Yaha Patal lok mein ......

KS - Nahiiiiii...yeh nahi ho sakta ......aur jo sainik Raktasur ki mrityu ka samachar laaya tha uski garden apne khadak k ek hi waar se alag kar deta hai.........

kroddh k kaaran uski aankhien laal ho jaati hai jaise jalte hue laal angare ho.....

KS k saamne kisi ki bhi bolne ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi........

KS - Bhayaksh kya kaha tha tumne ......awasar do ......diya awasar ....toh kiya hua ......maine pahele hi Kaha tha k sawdhan raho ........

Main apni sadhna k wajah se bandha hua hu ......Abhi kewal 5 hi bali hui hai 9 abhi baaki hai ......

Nahi toh main hi akela kaafi tha Rakshak k liye ........

Abhi kewal apni shaktiya badhane ka prayatna karo.........Aur Maarkesh tum apne guptacharo ko 14 bhuvan mein kriya shil kardo ......

koi toh kamjori hogi Rakshak ki hume wohi hi pata karni hai ......jab tak mera aadesh nahi milta ....tum nazar rakhne k siwa kuch nahi karoge.......

Sabha barkhast ho jaati hai.........KS waha se apne pooja kaksh mein jaata hai .....aur hawan kund k aage baith jaata hai .......

KS - Rakshak bada shauk hai na tumhe shatruo ka saghar karne ka ....ab ...dekh mera indra jaal

aur hawan mein apni dahine haath ko chira lagakar kuch mantra bolta hai .....toh usmein se ....sammohak naam ka ek sapt rangi . ..Baccha..jiske sharir se alag alag rang pragat ho rahe the.......

Sammohak (sk) - Aagya kare asur samrat.......

KS - Sammohak Tumhe pata hai kya karna hai.....

lekin dhyan rahe apne aapko uske saamne pragat mat karne ........bas

uski shakti ko hi astra banakar uske virudh prayog karna hai.......

Yaha Abhi ab ATAL LOK ko asuro se mukt karne ki yojana ko aage badhane k liye .......Abhi apne naye safar ki shuruwat k liye jaane liye Pretraj ki aagya lene gaya...

unse unhe pata chala k Atal lok jaane ka marg pretlok se hi jaata hai.......

Bhadra bhi saath jaane ki zid karne lagi, .lekin Abhi usse le jaane k paksh mein nahi tha ....

..Abhi - Nahi jaan mein tumhe nahi le jaa sakta ...aage pata nahi aur kitni chunautiya aane wali hai, ..aur tumhe abhi aur abhyas ki awashyakta hai ..

.kyuki abhi tumahari shaktiya nayi hai ....tumhe unke baare mein gyat nahi hai..
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Pj - aap uski chinta na kare rakshak ....Bhadra ko mein swayam prashikshan dunga....jisse yeh jaldi hi saari vidyao mein parangat ho jaaye.....

Abhi - aur waise bhi vivah k baad tum mere mann se jud chuki ho ...ab jab bhi tumahara mann kare tum muzse baat kar sakti ho ....

Abhi waha se vida hokar GK aur uske sainiko k saath Atal lok jaane wale portal mein praveah kar jaata hai..........

jaise hi woh sab log uss portal se bahar nikle unke saamne ek vishal aur ghana jungle tha ....lagta tha kai varsho se yaha suraj ki roshni tak nahi pahunchi.....

Ghane van k uss raaste par jaane ka vichar tyag kar pahele toh unhone aakash marg se jaane ka vichar kiya....

phir socha k isse shatru satark ho sakta hai.....

Toh Abhi ne apna prwt roop dharan kar liya aur uss van k pedo se hoya hua apni tez gati ka prayog karte hue Van ko dekhne laga .....

lekin poore van mein siway bade bade pedo k kuch nahi tha.........

Abhi ne socha kahi yeh maaya toh nahi .....toh apni antarman ki drishti se dekha toh woh kou maaya nahi thi charo taraf ghane jungle se woh log ghere hue the.......

Abhi ne ab aakash marg se hi jaane ka nirnay liya .......Abhi aur GK dono aakash mein uss jungal k uper pahunche .....tabhi jungle se kisi bacche ki madat k liye pukarne ki aawaj aayi .....

jab dono ne nicche dekha toh jungle mein kaale andhere k siwa unhe nazar nahi aaya

tab Abhi ne apni agni urja se waha thoda sa prakash kiya toh unhone dekha k ek baccha buri halat mein bhag raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise qoh kisi se apne pran bachane k liye bhag raha ho.......

Jab Abhi ne dhyan se dekha toh ek bada sa kaala bhediya uas bacchw k picche laga hua tha.....

Abhi turant niche aagaya aur bhedyia aur uss bacche k bich khada ho gaya.....

apne shikar k bich mein Abhi ko aaya dekhkar bhediya guraya ..uski aakhien andhere mein chamak rahi thi......

Uss bache ne abhi ko jab dekha toh usko ekdum pakad liya ,

Baccha - Bhaiya muzhe bacha lo ...dekho na yeh bhediya muzhe kha jaayega........

Abhi - chinta mat karo beta , ...tum abhi bilkul surikshit ho .......

Bhediya Abhi ki taraf ghuraye hue dekhne laga ......uske muh mein bade paine daant aur bahti hui laar usse aur bhayavah bana rahi thi

tabhi uss bhediya ne Abhi par chalang laga di......aur Abhi ne ek jor dar punch uske jabde par maara .....aur woh bhediya sur jaakar gira .....jisse dwkhkar baccha khushi se taali bajane laga

Bhediya phir Abhi k taraf aaya ....toh Abhi ne apne haath se jabda pakad liya ...aur chir diya ......jisse woh bhediya wahi mar gaya .....baccha khushi se uchalne laga.....

Baccha - aapka bahut bahut dhnyawad bhaiya ...aaj aapne meri raksha ki hai .......agar muzhe kuch hota toh ...meri dadi ka kya hota.....

Abhi - beta yaha toh dur dur sirf jungle k alawa aur kuch nahi hai ....na koi basti hai toh tum kaha se aaye

......aur Abhi yski aankhien padneki koshish karne laga

lekin safal nahi ho paa raha tha ....kyuki ki jab bhi Abhi uss bacche ki aankhon mein kuch pata karne k liye dekhta ....toh woh jaane kyu apna sa lagne laga tha .......

Uss bacche ko dekhar Abhi aur GK dono ko bhi woh apna sa laga .....

Baccha - Bhaiya yah paas mein hi hamara gaon hai chaliye dikhata hu

....aur woh baccha aage aage aur dono piche piche tabhi baccha ek badi si chattan k piche pahunch jaata hai aur dono ko bulata hai ......

jab dono waha jaate hai toh dekhte hai uss patther piche ek surang hai....baccha usmein chala jaata hai......

Abhi - accaha beta aapka naam kya hai....

Baccha - mera naam Mohak hai

Abhi - sach mein tum bade mohak, aur pyare bhi .....meei wk bahen bhihai bolkul tumahari hi tarah.......

uss surang se ek maidani ilaka tak pahucnhe ....jaha thodi thodi dur par chote chote ghar bane hue the , ...

Abhi poori tarah satark tha usne phir antarman ki drishti se uss gaon ko dekha k ywh maaya toh nahi....lekin woh sab ghar asli the.......

Abhi - Accha mohak ....tumahare ghar mein kaun kaun hai......

Mohak - sirf mein aur meri dadi ,, Dadi kahti hai ki jab main bahut chota tha toh bhediyo ne mere mata pita ko maar diya tha ......

Ek ghar ki taraf ishara karte hue.....lo aagaya mera ghar......aap yahi ruko ...mein dadi ko dekhkar aata hu ......aur Mohak ander gaya........

Lagta hai dadi kahi jaruri kaam se bahar gayi hogi....abhi jald hi aajayegi........

Abhi ne dekha k Mohak ka muh kuch utara hua hai........

Abhi kya baat hai beta ....aise udas kyu hogaya.....

Mohak - aapne meri jaan bacahyi lekin mein aapki koi sewa nahi kar saka.......dadi bhi pata nahi kaha hai.........

Abhi - Koi nahi beta hume kuch nahi chahiye

Tabhi mohak apne aas paas dekhta hai usse apne ghar k bahar.....kuch phool khile hue dikhe .....

Mohak waha gaya aur unn phoolon ko lekar aaya ...yeh phool bade hi alag the ....yeh saat tang k the aur inse nikal ne wali sugand badi hi acchi thi .......

Abhi aur GK ne muskurate hue uske haatho se phool lekar sunghne laga.....uski suganda dono kho se gaya......

tabhi Abhi Aur GK ne dekha k waha bada hi bhayanak Asur khada unki taraf hi bad raha ..dono ko alag asur dikhayi de rahe the .....

dono apne apne saamne dikhayi dene wale asur se yudh k liye tayar ho gaye .

......Gk apni talwar lekar uss asur ki taraf dauda aur jordar war kiya ..
toh uss asur ne badi furti se uske war ko block kar diya ....aur use kick maarne hi wala tha k GK piche hat gaya .....

woh asur aage bada aur ek mukka GK k pet mein maara......jissase Gk niche zhuka toh uss asur ne apne ghutne se GK k naak par prahar kiya ......jisse GK dur jaakar gira ......

GK apne aapko surakshit karne k liye khud wahi chip gaya aur apne danavo ko uss asur se ladne bheja

Yaha Abhi ne jab uss asur ko dekha jo dikhne mein bada bhayankar dikh raha tha......toh dekha ki woh apni talwar lekar abhi k taraf dauda ...jaise hi uska war Abhi par padta Abhi ne uskw waar ko block kiya , aur ek kick uske pet mein maari lekin woh bach gaya .....

Abki baar phir Abhi ne uuspars par waar kiya toh Abhi ne ek jordar kick uske pet mein maari jise woh zhuk gaya toh abhi ne jordar prahar uske naak par kiya jisse woh asur dur jaakar gira .....

abhi uss or badne hi wala tha k .....ab uske saamne do asur ek saath aagaye.....Abhi undono k saath ladne laga , ....woh dono viparit disha se abhi ki taraf apna khadak lekar daude .
..toh Abhi ne apni gada se bijli ki gati se unke sir par war kiya ...jisse un dono k sir tarbuj k tarah khil gaya.....

Abhi GK ko dhundne laga toh woh waha kahi bhi dikha nahi....
woh kuch aur karta k waha ab 4 asur aagaye .....unko bhi Abhi ne apne gada k war se dharashayi kar diya....k Tabhi Waha 8 asur aagaye ......

jaise jaise Abhi unko marta gaya unki sankhya badti jaa rahi thi ....
.Abhi alag alag shastro se unpar war kar diya ....lekin phir bhi unku sankhya badti jaa rahi thi.....

Abhi ko yaad aaya k aisi shakti Uske mitra GK k paas bhi hai ........

ho na ho jiss asur se pahele mukabla hua tha wahi in sab lagatar badte hue asur ka mool hai .....pahele usse hi samapt kar na hoga.....

Abhi ab un asur k pran naa lekar bad apne prahar se bas unhe murchit kane laga ....jisse Asuro ka badna ruk gaya taha......

Ab Abhi pret roop dharan kar ke, uss asur ko dhundne laga ....aur ped k bhiter sama gaya.......

jab Uss asur ne dekha k ab waha koi nahi hai ...Apne aapko surakshit dekha bahar aagaya....

jaise hi Abhi ne ped k ander rahte huve uss asur ko dekha toh Abhi ne apni gada se ek jordar prahar uss Asur k sir par maara ..jissne woh asur niche pada tadapne laga.....

Woh asur jameen par pada apni Akhri sanse le raha tha.....Abhi ne uska khel ek zhatke mein
khatam karne k liye apni gada uthayi.........ki tabhi dur se kisi ki aawaj sunayi dene lagai......nahhhiiii

aaj k liye itna hi ......
agla update kal.......
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[color=rgb(41,] Update - 88[/color]

[color=rgb(41,]ab tak aapne dekha Atal lok asuro se mukt ho gaya hai........[/color]
[color=rgb(41,]Abhi ko apni agli shakti Daksha k roop mien mil gayi hai.....[/color]

[color=rgb(41,]ab aage ...........

Atal lok mein parajay ki baat se KS timila gaya....
KS - Kaise ....aakhir kaise Rakshak bach gaya.........humne toh uski aisi haalat kar di thi ki....uska marna tay tha.......lagta hai humare bich hi koi hamare shatru ka sahayak hai...........

jo bhi hai woh itna jaan lo ......ki woh apni hi jaati ka drohi hai........

jis Rakahak ne humesha se hi har yug mein aasuro ka nash hi kiya hai......uske iss yug k janam ka bhi yahi kaaran hai........

Jiaka sankalp hi hum sab ka nash hai ....kya uaki sahyata karne hum asuro k saath kiya gaya droh nahi hai......

yaad rahe humare purvaj Rakshas raaj Ravan sarva samarth the ....lekin apne hi bhai Bibhishan k chal k kaaran maare gaye.........

waise hi koi bibhishan humare bich hai.........woh shayd yeh bhul gaya k Asurraj Kaalasur ki uspar drishti nahi padegi......

hum usse ek aur awsar dete hai.....vichar karne ka ......
k jiski woh sahyata kar raha hai woh ....humare bete ka ...aur na jaane kitne aaur veero ka hatyara hai.......

Atal lok ki parajay se, hamari parajay nahi hui hai........

aanewale maha yudh mein Abhi 8 mahine aur baaki hai........

aap sab apni shaktiyo ka aur badao.....kyu k yudh nirnayak hoga .....sabha sthagit......

aur sabhi asur waha se chale jaate hai.....kewal bhayaksh rah jaata hai.......

Asur raj jab apni sabha ko sambodhti kar rahe the.....tab sabha k bahar koi unki baatein sunraha tha .......sabha samapt hone k baad uski aankhon mein aansoo the......

Bhayaksha - Kshama kare pitashri ....yadi aagya ho toh kuch kahu.....

KS - kaho .....

Bhayaksha - pitashri yadi aap jaante hai ki humare bich woh drohi kaun hai jisne Rakshak ki sahyata ki thi toh aapne usse dand dene ki bajaye ..ek aur awsar de diya......

KS - (kutil muskurahat aankho mein chamak liye) putra mein koi bhi karya aise hi nahi karta......KS ki har baat k piche ek kaaran hota hai ......aur tum abhi woh samazne mein asamarta ho........

Yaha Abhi Atal lok ko apne suraksha ghere mein bandh kar waha se vida hokar ghar aagaya
tha......

Subah ki apni daily routine poori karke ,Abhi Ritu k room ko or gaya ....
kyu ki Apne roop se usse kuch aisi baatein ko jiske liye Abhi ne Ritu di se milna jaruri samzha .....

Room ka door ander se band tha......Abhi door knock karne hi wala hota hai .....toh andar se Ritu ki awaj aarahi thi jaise kisi se baat kar rahi ho......

Abhi ne socha k jara dekhe toh di itne sawere kis k saath baat kar rahi hai......isiliye qoh apne room mein aagaya ....aur Daksha k milan se mili shakti dur shravan se waha ki baatein sun raha tha .....ab Abhi ko saf saf dono or ki saari baatien sunayi de rahi thi.....

jaise jaise baatein aage badh rahi thi.....Abhi k chehere par chinta k lakeere nazar aane lagi.......
Ritu ne call cut karne se pahle kuch aisi baat kah di k Abhi ki aankhien bhar aayi.......

ussi samay door par knock hui ....lekin Abhi apne hi khayalo mein gum tha.......

Tabhi bahar se aawaj aayi ...bhai darwaja kholo na kya kar rahe ho.....aAbhi ne jab bahar Addu ki aawaj suni toh jaakar door khol diya

Addu - kya bhai aap bhi kitne der se mein aapko bula rahi hu .........

Abhi - arre gudiya mein gallery mein tha ....isiliye sunayi nahi diya.......

Addu - gud morning bhai.....aur apnr dono haath aage kar deti hai.......

Abhi addu ko gale laga leta hai......aur uske matthe par kiss kar deta hai ......aur Addu ko lekar ander aajata hai.......

Addu - bahi aap pareshan lag rahe ho........kya baat hai....

Abhi - kuch bhi toh nahi gudiya .....aur tuzhe aisa kyu laga....

Addu - bhai main jab apne room mein thi toh muzhe aisa laga ko aap sad ho......isilye mein yaha aagyi....

Abhi - Addu ko apnigoad mein bithakar gale laga leta hai .....ohh meri pyari gudiya ....kitna sochti hai apne bhai k baare mein ......

Addu ko gale laga kar humesha Abhi ki saari tension khatam ho jaati thi.......

Abhi - Accha betu vacation kaisi kat rahi hai.....

Addu - kya bhai .....mein toh bore ho rahi hu ......Aap bhi busy rahete hai.....bas saara din gahr par .
kahi bahar ghumne ka plan banao na bhai .......

Abhi - accha meri gudiya bor ho rahi hai.......toh batao kaha jaana chahti ho........

Addu - Bahi kal mumma baat kar rahi thi k chaachi ka call aaya tha .....
Sonu bahut jidd kar rahi hai aapse milne ki .....Parso uska birthday hai .....

Abhi - Thik hai gudiya maine usse aane ka wada bhi kiya tha ....apne kaam mein itna busy ho gaya k muzhe yaad hi nahi raha.......ab vacation k baaki din hum USA mein sonu k saath bitayenge .....

Addu - wow bhai....I luv u aur Abhi k gaal par kiss kar deti hai......

Abhi - Luv u too ..gudiya ....aur Abhi bhi kiss kar deta hai hai......
tab tak breakfast ka time ho jaata hai......Toh Abhi aur Addu niche aajate hai .....Mom aur Dad dining table par hi the ......lekin Ritu nahi thi.....

Abhi - Mom dad k pair chuta hai aur apne chair par baith jaata hai.....

Abhi - Mom di nahi aayi break fast karne........

Mom - maine bulaya ...lekin kah rahi hai Abhi bhuk nahi hai office mein hi kha lungi .....yeh ladki bhi na aajkal isska kuch samaz mein hi nahi aaraha hai.......

Abhi - aap rukiye mein bula kar laata hu .....

Aur abhi Ritu k room ki aur chal deta hai .......knock kar deta hai.......
lekin darwaja nahi khulta .....andar aw aawaj aati hai.....

Ritu - kya hai .....

Abhi - Di main hu .....aaj aap Breakfast karne nahi aayi ....chalo na di.....

Ritu - tu jaa muzhe abhi bhook nahi hai ....mein office mein hi kha lungi.....

Abhi - chalo na di pls .....

Tabhi door khul jaata hai aur Abhi ander aajata hai....

Ritu - kya hai ...tuzhe samaz nahi aaraha jab bola bhook nahi hai.....toh kyu pareshan kar raha hai.....ab jaa muzhe office k liye tayar hona hai...

Ritu ne kabhi Abhi se aise baat nahi ki .thi ...aaj apni di ka aise baat karna usske dil ko dukh pahunch raha tha .....aur uske aankhon mein aansoo uski haalat bayan kar rahe the .....

Abhi ki aankhon mein aansoo dekhkar Ritu normal ho gayi.....

Ritu - kya betu tu ab bada ho gaya hai ...aur itni si baat par kya baccho jaise aansoo bahane lag jaata hai ......thik hai chal ...chalte hai....

Abhi - Rahne do di aap kyu pareshan hoti ho ......mein hi pagal hu .....jo aapko pareshan karne aagaya ...sorry....

Ritu - chup ab jayada bolega ..toh khayega ek .....aur Abhi ko gale laga leti hai.......

sorry betu bas kuch problems k wajah se thodi tense thi aur saara frustration tuhh pat nikal diya ...

Abhi - toh muzhe batao na di kya problem hai.....

Ritu - kuch khas nahi woh business se related hai......
cahl ab bahut bhook lagi hai .......

Aur Abhi k saath niche aajati hai ....breakfast hone k baad di aur Dad office k liye jaane lage toh maine Dad ko rok liya k muzhe unse kuch jaruri baat karni hai...

Dad ruk jaate hai ...main Dad k saath unke Room mein chala jaata hu ....

Dad - haa toh bolo beya aisi kya jaruri baat hai.....

Mein - Dad kya aapne kuch dino se Ritu di mein change notice kiya .....

Dad - Beta businesd k kaamo mein itna ulaz gaya hu k jayada tho nahi lekin kuch din se woh kuch tense lag rahi hai...aur kuch chup chup rahene lagi hai.......

maine socha shayad yeh kaam k pressure k wajah se hai.....

Dad parso sona ka birthady hai ...mein soch raha hu k kuch dino k liye waha ho aau aur di ko bhi le jaau hosakta hai di ka mann kuch fresh ho jaaye......Addu bhi jaana chahti hai......

Dad - beta main toh nahi aa paaunga ....tum apni mom ko bhi le jana saath ......

Phir maine mom se kaha toh woh raazi ho gayi.......

Uske baad meine socha kyu na Rimpy ko bhi le jaaya jaaye.........

toh main Teleport hokar sidha Rimpy k terrace par pahunch gaya ...aur utarkar room ki gallery mein aagaya ..aur curtain k piche se ander jhanka ......socha k Rimpy ko surprise karunga ....toh mein khud yaha surprise ho gaya

Andar Rimpy change kar rahi thi .....black leggins ...aur upper sirf black bra .......bed par kuch t shirts padi hui thi aur woh decide nahi kar paa rahi thi k kaunsi pahnu.......

Tabhi mere muh se nikal pada .....
Jaan yeh red top accha rahega .....Achanak meri aawaj sunkar woh chaunk gayi aur aawaj ki disha mein dekhne lagi .....tab tak mein chup chuka tha .....

Rimpy - mein bhi na ....yeh Abhi ne toh muzhe pagal kar diya hai jagah jagah woh hi dikhayi deta hai aur ab toh awaaj bhi sunayi dene lagi hai .....

aur usne white top utha liye.....toh mein phir bolne k liye curtain pakadkar khade hi hone wala tha....k curtain niche gir gaya ...aur mein saamne aagay .....

parda girne aur mere dikhne ki wajah se Rimpy phir chaunki .....aur muzhe apne saamne dekhkar .....

Rimpy - yeh kya hai jaan ...aise bhi koi aata hai ....tum darwaje se bhi toh aasakte the ...aise hi muzhe dara diya ........ab khade kyu ho ander aajao.......

Lekin Abhi Rimpy k khubsurti mein aisa kho gaya k usse jaise kuch hosh hi nahi raha, bas aankhien fade fade dekh raha tha ......

jab Rimpy ko apni halat ka ahsas hua ....toh usne dono haath apne seene par rakh liye ......aur sharmane lagi.....

Rimpy - Aise kya dekh rahe ho udhar muh karo muzhe change karna hai .....

lekin abhi ander aakar uske paas khada ho jaata hai....

Abhi - abhi toh kah rahi thi ander aajao ...aur kah rahi ho muh udher karo.....aur Abhi apne haatho se uske haath hatne lagta hai toh Rimpy aharam k maare uske seene mein chup jaati hai.....

Abhi - uff yeh ada ....jaan ...humse hi parda ...aur phir bahon mein samana ....gazab hai yrh ada .....Abhi bhi kas kar usse gale laga leta hai......
dono ek dusre ko mehsus kar rahe the ....Abhi ne Rimpy ka chehra uper kiya ..aur usski aankhon mein dekhne laga ....dono k honth ek dusre k karib aagaye....ek dusre k saansoo ki khushboo aur bekarari bada rahi thi ....dono k honth ek dusre se mil gaye ....aur kiss chalu hi hua tha k.....Door knok ki aawaj aayi.......aur aawaj aayi Rimpy k dad Khemraj ji ki

jo shayad curtain girne ki aawaj sukar aagaye the ....

Kj - beta Rimpy kya hua yeh aawaj kaisi thi ....

Rimpy saans bhari hone k wajah se badi mushkil se

Rimpy - kkkuuuch....nahhhhi ...dad....

Kj - phir yeh aawaj kaisi ....

Rimpy - woh dad curtain ki pipe kuch kamjor ho gayi thi ...mein usse band kar rahi thi k woh ukhadkar poori gir gayi .....aur uske wajah se window par rakha gamla bhi girkar tut gaya........

Kj - kahi tuzhe chot toh nahi aayi aur yeh teri saans kyu phool rahi hai.....

Rimpy - kha phul rahi hai dad ...mein change kar rahi hu aap chaliye mein abhi aayi......

Kj - jaldi aaja beta mein tuzhe breakfast k liye hi bulane aaraha tha k aawaj aayi .....

aur woh niche cahle gaye .....

Rimpy - ab acche bacche ki tarah bahar jaao aur front door se andar aao mein bhi ready hokar aati hu ........

Abhi - kya jaan ....jaam hontho tak aakar chala gaya ....uff ....aur Abhi waha se teleport hokar ....Rimpy k ghar k door par pahuncha aur bell bajayi

Abhi k liye itna hi .....
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Ab tak aapne dekha ...Ritu kisi baat se upset hai
Abhi ka apne chacha k yaha USA jaane ka programme banta hai
Rimpy k saath kuch shararate
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[color=rgb(41,]ab aage........

Abhi Rimpy k ghar ander aajata hai .....aur Rimpy k dada k charan sparsh karta hai.....

Kj - kaise ho beta .....bade din baad aaye ho ...

Abhi - woh uncle kuch busy tha isliye ......

Kj - koi baat nahi beta ....aaajao bade acche samay par aaye ho .....aaj saath mein breakfast karenge ....Rimpy bhi aati hi hogi .....

Abhi - Nahi uncle ...aap kare.....main kar k aaya hu .....

Kj - arre beta roj toh ghar mein hi karte ho aaj mere haat ka bhi kar lo .....

Kj k itna kahne par Abhi baith gaya , tabhi Rimpy bhi aagayi ...aur Abhi ki taraf dekh muskurane lagi .......Black top aur jeans mein bahut ki khubsurat lag rahi thi.....

Kuch der ghar parwar k baare mein baatein hoti rahi...phir maine Uncle ko USA ki trip k baare mein bataya aur Rimpy ko bhi lejane ki baat ki.......

pahele toh woh nahi maane lekin phir maine mom se baat karayi toh badi mushkil se maane.......

Rimpy USA jaane k baat se bahut excited thi ......phir maine kal subah correct time par aane ka kahke waha se nikal gaya......

maine di ko office mein call lagaya ...aur unhe USA jaane k baare mein bataya....pahele toh woh chup rahi ......phir ghar aakar batane ka kahkar call cut kar di....
Ghar aakar Addu k saath mall gaya ...aur waha sab k liye shopping ki ....
saara din kal ki packing aur shopping mein hi chala gaya.....

Raat aur dad aur di office se aaye.....toh hum aab ne saath dinner kiya ......aur hall mein baithkar kal k baare mein baatein karne lage .....di chup chap baithi thi ....mein unke mann ko padhne ki koshish karne laga ........lekin padh nahi paaya.....

mein - Di kya soch rahi ho ........aapne jab kaha tha ghar aakar bataungi......

Ritu - arre issmein batana kya hai .......teri baat main kabhi taal sakti hu........
jaha tak muzhe mehsus ho raha tha k baat kuch aur hai .......lekin accha hai di taazi toh ho gayi....

phir mein apne room mein aagaya ...aur Shivali se telepathy k jariye baat ki .....
Baat karte karte Shivali wahi aagayi .....

Shivali - hmm toh kal aap ghumne jaa rahe ho ........Kaash hum bhi aapke saath ghum sakte ....lekin kya kare ........

maine uska haath padakar apni goadh mein bithaya .....aur bahon...mein kaste hue bola....toh saath chalo na ...jaan ....

Shivali - Abhi k gale mein baahen dalte hue....
hamare aisi bhagya kaha .....k hum sab saath ghum sake ......

Mein - Bas jaan woh din bhi jald hi aayega jab hum sab saath honge........aur meine uske hontho par apne honth rahk diye....aur chumne laga ......woh bhi saath de rahi thi ......Shivali meri goad mein baithi thi ......

kiss todte hue ..Shivali boli .......jaan ab aaram karo kyu k kal se kuch dino k liye tumahe aaram karne nahi milega ......Ab tum dono soo jaao....

Mein - kyu nahi milega ...kya hone wala hai kal se ...........

Shivali - woh toh yumhe pata chal hi jaayega .....abhi tum dono so jaao....

Mein - kya yr jaan ....tum kabhi poori baat batati nahi .....aur yeh kin dono k baat kar rahi ho ........

Shivali - Ek toh aap ....ek ek yeh jo niche muzhe chub raha hai .........

Mein usse lekar bed par let jaata hu ......jaan jab tak yeh jaga hai tab tak nind kaise aayegi ......aur phir use kiss karne laga ......aise hi thodi masti thoda maza karte hue dono ek dusre ki baahon mein so gaye........

Yaha dur America k Honduras k ghane jungle mein kuch gatividhya tez ho gayi thi ........jaha kisi jamane mein Monkey god ka shaher tha .....waha k khandher mein adbhut kalakritya thi jo bhartiya shilp kala se mel khaati thi .........

Waha k kuch logo ka yeh manna tha k yaha koi bahut bada khajana dafan hai ......issi liye kai log waha khoj karne gaye......kuch wapas nahi aaye aur kuch wapas aane k baad rahasymayi dhan se mar gaye .....

uss site se dur ek aur khander tha jaha tak abhi koi insan pahuncha nahi tha .......woh jagah chaaro taraf se bhayankar barsaati van se ghira hua tha ........

iss van mein aur uss khander mein bahut se log nazar aarahe the.......sabhi kaale chonge mein the...

Wahi khander k ander bane tah khane mein ek pooja sthali thi lekin waha murti ki jagah ek gahra hole tha.......uske saamne koi do log baat kar rahe the....

2 - hum jisse yaha laana chahte the ...ab woh khud yaha aarahi hai.......lekin uske saath woh bhi aaraha hai jo hamara sabse bada shatru hai.....

1 - Lekin hume yeh khatra uthana k hoga .......4 din baad Devi Nikumbla ki jayanti hai.....hame ussi din apna karya poora karna hoga .....
yadi yeh kaam sahi se ho gaya ....toh mein ho jaaunga iss sansar mein sarva shaktishali......
pitashri itni tapasya se bhi jo shaktiyan prapt nahi kar sake .....mein ban jaaunga un shaktiyo ka swami ......aur logo ka naya bhagwan....ha...ha...ha...

yeh tha Markesh aur uska viswasniya chela Karkatasur....

Yaha subah Jab Abhi 4 baje utha toh dekha Shivali jaa chuki thi.......
apni daily routine poori kake dhyan mein baitha ........

aaj dhyan mein usse apne ander ki urjao k rang k saath saath kuch drishya bhi dikhayi dene lage the.......jo kisi khander k the .....lekin drishya spasht nahi the......

Khair Subah k bf k baad Sabhi tayar ho gaye ......Rimpy bhi time par aagayi thi......

Hum sab bahut excited the ...lekin di kuch soch mein gum thi .....

Hum sab apne privet jet se jaane wale the ....Chacha Newyork city mein rahte the.......jo Bharat se lagbhag Aiways se 11,356 km dur hai jaha Hawai marg se pahunchne mein 14.5 hr lagte hai ....humne Norway mein mid halt kya ...phir waha se udan bhari ......

Norway mein fuel bharne mein aur mid halt mein koi 2 hr lage isilye hum koi 16.5 hr k lambe safar k baad Pahunche Newyork city........Bharat k time aur waha k time mein 8.5 hr ka farak hai isiliye hum waha lagbhag.....sham 5.5 baje pahunche......

Jet se nikalkar hum bahar aagaye ....waha hume recive karne chacha ji aaye the .......Chacha ji k maine charan sparsh kiya ....toh unhone muzhe gale se laga liya ........

Chacha - Wah mera gabru jawan ab toh bikul Shadi layak ho gaya ....lagta hai koi dhudni hogi ......
Ab mein kya batata k pahle hi bahut bahut saari dhund li aur kuch dhund ni hai .....

Chacha ji ne mom k pair chue ......aur sabse mile .....Rimpy mere saath hi khadi thi .......Tabhi usne muzhe kohni maari ......Maine uski taraf dekha toh usne muzhe piche dekhne ka ishara kiya .........

Maine dekha ek ladka....6 khubsurat ladkiyon k saath aaraha tha ........
jab maine unkho dhayan se dekha toh mera mattha thanka......aur muh khula khula rah gaya......

Chalte chalte woh hamari bagal mein hi aakar ruke aur meri or dekhkar muskurane lage.......

woh aur koi nahi Rinku tha aur uske saath thi Lima.....aur unhe piche 5 ladkiya jo western dress mein bahut khubsurat lag rahi thi woh aur koi nahi meri 5 patniya thi
Shivali...Shalu...Sulekha.....Bhadra...aur Daksha......
Paancho meri taraf dekh muskura rahe , jaisi rahe rahe ho beta teri toh vaat lagne wali hai

mom ne jaisa Rinku ko dekha ....arre beta tum ......
aur jab Shivali aur Shalu ko dekha mom unhe pahchanti thi ...toh woh sab samaz gayi....

Rinku - Arre aunty aap .....aur pair chuta hai .....aur meri aur Rimpy ki taraf dekhkar ...ohhh toh aap bhi ho .....kabhi ......ab toh maza aayega ........

Lima ki or ishara ...karte hue .....Aunty yeh hai meri frnd ....Lima ....aur yeh 5 meri behane hai cousins........hume

Mom - toh beta yaha kaha rukne ka programme hai.....

Rinku - Aunty hotel....mein 4 din k tour k liye aaye hai.....

Chacha ji - arre aise kaise tum Abhi k dost ho hotel mein kyu hamare saath hi rahoge .....

Rinku - ab aap itna kah rahe hai toh thik hai ...waise uncle you r the best aur unke pair chu leta hai........

mein mann mein beta chal ab teri toh vatt lagne wali hai....

Phir hum sab waha se nikal kar Chacha ji k ghar aaye .......
unka ghar City k outer area mein tha aur Bunglow k paas chote chote cottages bane hue the ........

Abhi unke Ghar mein kisi aur ko pata nahi tha humare aane k baare mein ........

Jab hum ghar pahunche aur ander aaye ussi samay chachi upsairs se utar kar lobby mein aarahi thi......Aur achanak hum sab ko waha dekh kar chank gayi ........
phir chachi mom aur sabse mili........phir mere paas aakar muzhe gale laga liya ........woh muzhe apna beta hi maanti thi.....

chachi - toh aagayi yaad apne chachi ki .....mein toh soch rahi thi tu bhul hi gaya hoga ........

Main - arre nahi chachi .....aapko kaise bhul sakta hu ....woh toh college aur padai k chalte time hi nahi mila ......

accha chachi ...Payal ...shreya ....aur meri pyari angel Sona kaha hia .....

Chachi - beta ....payal aur shreya bahar gayi hai frnds k saath party hai .....aur sona muh fulaye room mein hai.......kah rahi thi muzhe nahi mana hai birthday ..bhai .k bina.....

Toh main bakkiyo ko wahi chodkar Sona k liye liya hua bada sa teddy lekar pahunch gaya sona k room mein ...

Aur door kholkar teddy k piche chip gaya......

Sona bed par udas si baithi thi .....

Apne door k saamne bada teddy dekhkar

Sona - Mom muzhe nahi chaiye koi teddy.......

Mein - lekin mein toh tumse hi milne aaya hu

Sona - arre yeh teddy toh bolta bhi hai .......
hmmm ....muzhe pata hai picche koi chupa hai.....

Mein - kaha chipa hai ....mein toh teddy hi hu.......

Sona - door ki taraf aate hue ......accha abhi pata chal jaayega.........

Aur jab teddy k picche muzhe dekhti hai .....Arre yeh toh mera pyara teddy hai aur apne dono haath aage karti hai......aur mein usko goad mein utha leta hu.....

Mein - kaisa hai mera pyara baccha .....aur uske gaal par ek kiss kar deta hu.....

Sona - Ab toh mein bahut khush hu .....muzhe laga aap nahi aayenge .....
i luv you bhai mera pyara bhai aur mere gaal par kiss kar deti hai........

thodi der hum aisi hi baat karte rahe .....phir chachi waha aayi ......

Chachi - beta ...bhai ko abhi fresh karne do .......itne dur se aaye hai baad mein baatien kar lena .....

Phir mein niche chala aaya ....aur apne room mein chala gaya

Rinku & group ki vyawastha cotteges mein ki gayi thi ......

Fresh hokar mein chal pada cottages ki or .........jismein Rinku tha .....

Jab mein ander pahuncha toh uss samay woh bathroom mein tha .....

Jaise hi woh nikal muzhe dekhkar phir bathroom mein ghus gaya......toh meine usse pakad liya ...

kaha bhag raha hsiruk tu ab muzhse hi chipakar plan banata..hai teri toh ......Maine usse pakad hi rakha tha ....k Tabhi Shivali ander aagayi.......

Rinku - dekh bhai maine kuch nahi kiya ...yeh sab bhabhi ka hi plan hai.......tu unse hi puch le .......

Shivali ko dekhkar maine usse chod diya......

Aur Shivali ki aur badha .....kya yar jaan ...ab humse hi chalaki......kal hi bata deti jab tum mere saath thi......

abhi k liye itna hi .....
agla update jald hi .....
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