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[color=rgb(184,]Update 20[/color]


Aniket ke apna dil nikal ke shravni ke saamne rakh diya tha aur shravni ko samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ke ye sab sapna hai ya hakikat , itne sab mahol me shravni chakra gayi thi, uski aankhon me khushi ke aansu the aur aniket aakho me asha liye uski taraf dekh raha tha, shravni ke man me bhavnao ka aveg kuch is kadar umad raha tha ke uske muh se shabd hi nahi nikal rahe the

Aur ab sabko is baat ki tension hone lagi thi ki shravni kuch bol kyu nahi rahi hai aur achanak shravni apni jagah se uthi aur apni dono baho ka haar banate huye usne aniket ko gale laga liya. shravni ke is taraf gale lagne se aniket bhi thoda chauk gaya tha aur idhar avi ne apni do ungliya muh me daalte huye siti bajayi aur pure canteen me jallosh shuru ho gaya, full dhamaal aur akhir kyu na ho aniket ka proposal shravni ke accept jo kar liya tha, sabne milkar canteen ko sar par utha liya tha, sabhi log khushi me nach rahe the aur aaj to aniket aur shravni ke khushi kea age aasman bhi chhota pad gaya tha.

Kuch samay baad ye masti ka mahol thoda kam hua par abh bhi aniket ke shravni ka hath nahi chhoda tha jise dekh ke akhir me avinash bola

Avinash- o bhai, ab to hath chhod se bechari ka, ab to usne ha bhi keh diya hai, chinta mat kar kahi bhag ke nahi jane wali wo ab.

Avinash ki baat sunkar shravni se pat se aniket ki pakad se apna hath chhudaya par aniket wapis uska hath pakadte huye bola

Aniket-tere baap ka kya jata be aala motha shahana gyan dene wala

Itne me komal boli

Komal-aaila principal!!

Principal ka naam sunte hi dono ne pat se hath chhod diya aur aniket ne dheere se piche mud ke dekha to waha koi nahi tha..aur idhar avinash aur komal daat nikal ke jor jor se has rahe the.aura b unke sath shravni bhi hasne lagi aur boli.

Shravni-komal main aapka kin shabdo me dhanyawaad karu samajh nahi aa raha. aaj aapki wajah se ye jo anmol pal mujhe mile hai wo main jindagi bhar nahi bhulungi.. aapka ye ehsan hai mujhpar mujhe aniket se milane ke liye, main kaise chukaungi ise

Shravni ki baat sunkar apne shirt ki sleevs upper karte huye komal boli

Komal-ekdum easy hai, tumko bas teen chize karni padengi jya kuch nahi

Shravni-manjur!

Komal-arey didi sun to lo pehle
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to pehla kaam ye ki tum mujhe ye aap aap karke nahi bulaogi, tumko ab job hi ye inhe unhe aap tum karne ka hai uske liye tumhare paas ek banda hai usko karne ka
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Shravni-manjur, aage

Fir komal apni jagah par se uthi aur canteen malak ko bola, bola ka jahir kiya

Komal-kaka, canteen me jitne bhi log hai sabko aaj meri taraf se ek ek petis aur ek cutting chai do, behno aur unke bhailogo enjoy!

Fir koml niche baithte huye boli

Komal-ha to dusra kaam ye ke is sab ka bill tum bharogi
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Komal ki baat sunkar shravni ghabra gayi par fir aniket ne use aankho se don't worry ka ishara kiya ki wo sambhal lega, komal ne aage bola

Komal-ab teesra aur sabse important kaam bata rahi hu..

Fir komal ne ek bada pause liya.. Shravni ka dil jor se dhadak raha tha , wo man hi man me soch rahi thi k ye mahamaya ab kya mangegi, aur komal uske chehre par ke ye expressions dekh rahi thi aur fir komal boli

Komal-chill baby doll tu to aise tension me aa gayi jaise main anya ko maang lungi, chill baby main usse kuch bada mangne wali hi

Ab shravni aur jyada tension me

Komal-to aaj tu mujhe anya ko sakshi maan kar ye vachan de kit u aage aane wali jindagi me kabhi bhi kahi bhi ek chhoti sib hi kavita nahi sunayegi, bol manjur.

Pehle pehle to sabki hawa tight ho gayi thi ye sochkar ke komal kya mangegi par fir uski baat sunkar has hasne lage aur shravni ne uski ye baat bhi maan li..aur aniket haste huye bola

Aniket-ek number ki nautanki hai tu kammo..

Komal-ha na tere se kam hi hai..

Fir avinash ne ekdum se pucha

Avinash-komal, wo paper to pehle ekdum kora tha fir candle par pakadne ke baad akshar kaise dikhne lage uspe? Ye kaisa jadu tha?

Waise to ye sawal sabhi ke dimag me tha aur komal khulasa karte huye boli

Komal-wo ek badhiya trick hai tumlog bhi kar sakte ho, kya karna hai batati hu, ek kanda lene ka (pyaz) uska ras nikalne ka aur fir us ras se kisi bhi paper par likhne ka fir jaise hi tum wo paper candle par sahi se pakdoge jisme pyaz ke ras se likha hai to wo likha hua bhag jalne lagega aur jo likha hai dikhne lagta hai, bas itni si trick hai
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Jispar avinash komal ko shabasi dete huye bola

Avinash- kya gazab kamal ladki hai be, kaha kaha se lati ho aise idea, komal tu na ek dukan khol le, hamare yaha alag alag taraf se propose karke milega, dukan ke saamne line lag jayengi bata raha hu.

Teeno dost dil khol kar has rahe the, unhe dekh ke koi nahi keh sakta tha ke kuch samay pehle inke dimag par bhari tension tha. Shravni jab jane lagi to aniket use chhodne gaya aur unke jate hi avinash ne achanak apna hath komal ke samne shake hand ke liye aage kiya

Avinash-hello, main avinash.

Komal-meko pata hai, dmag ghum gaya hai kyat era? Aise kyu baat kar raha hai jaise ham pehli baar mile hai.

Fir avinash gambhir hote huye bola.

Avinash-sach hi to hai, aajtak to ham sirf mil hi rahe the, asli komal ki pehchan to mujhe aaj huyi hai.

Komal ekdum sambhal ke baith gay aur boli

Komal-kuch bhi kya bol raha hai avya, ye kya badbada raha hai.

Avinash-sabne aaj khush hua aniket dekha, sihri huyi shravni dekhi par maine aaj dekhi komal, ekdum uske naam jaisi, swach manasvi, sacchi komal, maine tumhari aankho ka wo aansu dekha tha aur bahut kuch bol gayi woe k bund..

Komal-please avi iske aage ek shabd bhi mat bolna..

Avinash-par kyu?

Komal-kyuki main keh rahi hu isliye, tumhe hamari dosti ki kasam, tumhe aniket ki dosti ki kasam, aaj mujhe ek vachan de ki aage jindagi me kabhi bhi ye baat apne hotho pe nahi layega aur agar aisa hua to kasam hai mujhe aniket ki wo din mere jindagi ka aakhri din hoga

Avinash-vachan to main de dunga par ek baar sirf itna bata, aakhir kyu?

Komal-kabhi pyaar kiya hai?

Avinash-nahi..

Komal-to karo fir samjhoge

Itna bol ke komal waha se nikal gayi aur jate jate ek dharam sankat avinash ke liye chhod gayi, ek taraf apne baalmirta ka pyaar aur dusri taraf komal jisme mohabbat hote huye bhi haste haste uski khushi ke piye apne prem ka gala ghot diya, avinash aasman ki taraf dekhte huye bola

Avinash-parmeshwar, ab job hi kar sakte ho tum hi kar sakte ho, bas itna karna ki mujhe kabhi kisi ke pyaar me na girana...


To Be Continued.
 

[color=rgb(184,]Update 21[/color]


To aniket ne apne dil ki baat shravni ko bata di thi aur shravni ne bhi uska proposal accept kar liya tha, ab halanki ye pyaar tha ya sirf attraction ye dono me se koi nah jaanta tha aur abhi is baat se koi fark bhi nahi padta tha, dono filhaal kafi jyada khush the.

Agle din jab komal college pahuchi to aniket abhi college nahi aaya tha aur jab komal canteen me pahuchi to avinash pehle se hi waha maujood tha matlab jo hamesha time par aane wala banda tha wo aaj gayab tha aur late aane wala samay se pehle hi pahuch gaya tha. komal avinash ke paas jakar baith gayi

Komal-kya avi set aaj akele hi anya kidhhar hai?

Avinash-malum nahi, hoga shravni ke sath ya uske sath gaya hoga kahi..

Aaj avinash ka mood thoda off tha

Komal-kya hua avi aur aisi utri huyi shakal leke kyu baitha hai. bhains bhag gayi kya teri jo itni sadi shakal bana rakhi hai..?

Par avinash ne koi jawab nahi diya

Komal-kya hua avi tabiyat theek nahi hai kya, kuch to bol?

Avinash-kya bolu komal, meko khud samajh nahi aa raha hai ke main khush hu ya dukhi..

Komal-ab aisa kya ho gaya hai?

Avinash-tu jaanti hai komal aisa kya hua hai

Komal-bas samajh gayi main aura b is bare me kuch mat bolna, aura b ye sochna band karo

Avinash- itna easy hota hai kya apni soch ko rokna.

Avinash ki is baat ka jawab komal ke paas nahi tha..

Avinash-meko samajh nahi aa raha hai ke main kya karu. apne baal mitra ko uska pyaar mil gaya hai isiliye khush hou ya meri hi aankhon ke saamne mere dost ka pyaar usse dur ho raha hai aur isme na to main kuch kar sakta hu na bol sakta hu ye soch ke dukhi hou. kuch bhi kar lo ye khayal dimag se ja hi nahi rahe.. aur ye sab kam tha to tune usme mujhe kasme aur de di.. apan pehle jaise the sahi the yaar ye bematlab ka pyaar ka lafda mol le liya.. aura b main teko kaise samjhau ke wo gadhe anya ke liye tu hi sahi hai wo pujarin nahi suit hogi anya ko..wo do alag alag disha ke do tok hai aur ye baa two paagal anya ko kaise samajh nahi aa rahi..

Komal-avi arey mujhe bhi kaha ye sab pata tha.. kal pehli baar maine in bhavnao ko samjha hai.. agar mujhe pehle pata hota to main itna kuch karti hi nahi. Wo kehte hai na jo chiz hamare paas hai uski kimat ham tab tak nahi jaan sakte jab tak ho hamse dur nahi ho jati..mere sath bhi wahi hua hai. jab pyaar samajhna chahiye tha nahi samjha aur jab samjha tab der ho chuki thi. aur do alag alag swabhav ke log ek nahi ho sakte ye kaha likha hai.

Avinash-kammo tu khali ek baar bol teko anya chahiye, main tumhari Jodi banane ke liye jo nahi wo karunga.

Komal-murkho jaisi baat kar avi, pyaar adhikar ka nahi samarpan ka naam hai,pyaar me adhikar nahi jataya jata samarpan kiya jata hai, kaisa hai na, aajtak pyaar pe bare me bas kitabo me padha tha logo se suna tha par pyaar ko samajhne ke liye pyaar karna padta hai..

Avinash-aur pyaar karke kya fayda agar ham jisse pyaar karte hai use hi ye baat na bata paye

Komal-sacche pyaar ko shabdo ki jarurat nahi hoti, mujhe bhi kaha aniket ne kuch kaha hai fir bhi main wo bhavnaye samajh gayi na

Avinash-par anya to nahi samjha na, aur use na tu batayegi aur na mujhe batane de rahi hai, fir kya fayda hai aise pyaar ka.. aur suppose kal ko un dono ki shadi ho gayi fir? Fir tumhare pyaar ka kya?

Komal-wo to hai hi aur hamesha kayam rahega..

Avinash-apne samajh ke baahar hai ye concept

Komal-avi tujhe pata hai Krishna ne kisse shadi kit hi?

Avinash-ab uska yaha kya sambandh hai?

Komal-pyaar se to hai

Avinash-pata nahi maine ye sab itna padha nahi hai maybe radha.

Komal-nahi, Krishna ki shadi rukmani se huyi thi.. par radha wo kayam Krishna se prem karti rahi aur ye usi pyaar ki kimat hai ki aaj bhi ham Krishna ko radha ke sath pujte hai radhakrishna ke rup me..

Avinash-fir mujhe batao jab itna hi pyaar tha to Krishna ne radha se shadi kyu nahi ki?

Komal-uski ek bahut sunder kahani hai, suno, ek bar radha aur Krishna sath baithe the aur Krishna to swayam bhagwan the bolte huye Krishna bol gaye ki radha tum kahibhi jao tumhe kewal main hi milunga main hi dikhunga, is srishti me aisi koi jagah nahi hai jaha main nahi hu, Krishna ki baat sunkar radha ki aankho me asu aa gaye, Krishna ne pucha ki kya hua tab radha ne kaha ke hey Krishna! Ek aisi jagah hai jaha tum nahi ho, radha ki baat sunkar krishnako ashcharya hua, laga ki ye to kadapi shakya nahi hai, sab jagah to wo khud parmeshwar virajman hai fir aisi kaundi jagah hai jaha main nahi hu, Krishna soch me pad gaye..

Komal kahani suna rahi thi aur avi mantramugdha hokar sun raha tha aur fir jab komal ne pause liya tab avi ne utsukta se pucha

Avinash-fir radha ne kya kaha

Komal-krishna ne jab pucha ke aisi kaunsi jagah hai jaha main nahi hu to radha ne fiki muskan ke sath kaha ki hey Krishna, mera naseeb ye aisi ekmatra jagah hai jaha aap nahi ho.

Avinash-badhiya.

Aur bilkul radha ki taraf komal bhi fiki muskan ke sath boli

Komal-ise kehte hai prem, isiliye kabhi Krishna ke sath rukmini ka naam nahi liya jata radha ka liya jata hai.isiliye keh rahi hu in bato ko dimag se nikal de anya mere naseeb me nahi hai

Avinash-gazab kammo, kaha se sikha hai tune ye sab

Komal-main library aise hi kitabe nahi padhti.. tune kabhi padha hota to pata hota

Avinash-acha! Aisa hai kya..theek hai to fir tujhe kya lagta hai tu akelehi kitabe padhti hai hamto bewkuf hai. to dekh maine ye pauranik kathaye kabhi nahi padhi par jo padha hai uske hisab se main tere sawal ka jawab deta hu sun,

Komal-arey waah, khushi huyi jaan ke ki tum bhi padhte ho

Avinash-ek famous Marathi writer hai V.P kale (व.पू. काले) unki likhihuyi ek line hai, hamara jo prem hota hai na use kabhi bandh ke nahi rakhna chahiye, use free chhod do jise chahte ho apne dil ki baat keh do, agar tumhara pyaar saccha hai to wo tumhare paas jarur aayega aur jo na aaye to samajh lena ke wo tumhare prem ke layak hi nahi.

Komal-badhiya. to matlab agar anya na aaya to wohi layak nahi hai hai na

Kafi samay baad dono ke chehre pe muskan aayi thi

Komal-avi yaha na har insaan apne chehre pe mukhota leke chalta hai, asal chera kisi ko najar hi nahi aata, ab hamari hi baat le lo, hum dono ko kitabe padhna pasand hai par aaj tak hame ye baat pata nahi thi, tumhe dikhi wo asli komal aur bakiyo ko kammo to ab main is komal ko jara ghar chhod aati hu taki wo kisi ko dikhe na aur fir aayegi kammo aur aage ka aage dekhenge

Avinash- done.tere se koi nahi jeet sakta

Avinash komal kea age jath jodte huye bola aur komal ka chehra badal gaya aur wo wapis se apne purine andaj me aate huye boli

Komal-ek aur baat avya, dobara agar komal ko dekhne ki koshoish ki na to ye tera hath hai na ise tod ke dusre hath me pakda dungi samjha

Avinash-hao, samajh gaya kammo bhai, ab bahut paka diya hai tune cha lab mash cutting chai piya

Komal-teko pina hai tu bula main kyu pilau be, aur meko class me jana hai tu baith yaha chai pite huye aur ladkiya tadte huye main chalti hu..

Avinash ke sir pe tapli maarte huye komal nikal gayi aur avi uski or dekhte huye man me bola

Avinash-kya ladki hai yaar, bahut kuch sikha gayi aaya, bhagwan khayal rakhna iska...
 

[color=rgb(184,]Update 22[/color]


Sharabi ke do thikane ya to theka ya to thane ab na to apna hero full sharabi tha na full mawali aur waise bhi subah subah daru pine ka to chance hi nahi tha isiliye is waqt maharaj canteen me baithe gappe haak rahe the aur unke sath the avinash komal aur shravni.. ab in logo ki bate chal hi rahi thi ke utne me waha entry huyi docter suman ki jo inhe pure college me dhundhte huye yaha pahuchi thi aur use dekhte hi aniket bola

Aniket-O dispensary aaj idhar kaise?

Suman bhi unke paas aakar baith gayi aur boli

Suman-kya aniket ye kya baat huyi aise nahi hota hai? Wo headphone wapis kar du kya? Komal keh rahi thi aniket aisa hai waisa hai par ab lag raha hai faltu me ye badi badi baate kar rahi thi tumse kuch nahi hoga.

Aniket-tumhare kehne ka kya matlab hai, siddharth ab tak kuch nahi bola kya? Par ye kaise ho sakta hai uska game bajane ke chakker me avi ne mera game baja diya aur tum keh rahi ho koi fark nahi pada? Matlab meri party fokat gayi.

Avinash-sachme party ka koi fayda nahi hua kya
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Tab aniket ne avi baitha tha us khurchi pe laat mari

Aniket-sale naradmuni maje mat le teko baad me dekhunga

Jispar avinash bhola chehra banate huye bola

Avinash-par maine kya kiya hai.

Ab ye dono ki behasbaji shuru ho isse pehle hi suman unhe rokte huye boli

Suman-ye tumlog ka aise hi chalega to main jau kya.

Tab aniket suman wow aha baithate huye bola

Aniket-arey dispensary ruko jara baitho yaha aur avya harami apna gutter band kar thodi der dekh nahi raha docter ka dimag garam hai, jyada bolega to aisi jagah injection lagega ki har waqt baithte time yaad karega..

Ab avinash shant baith gaya aur aniket suman se bola

Aniket-ek baat batau docter suman, tumhara siddharth hoga bada docter par pyaar ke mamle me wo aadmi ekdum paidal hai, itna samjhaya fir bhi koi fark nahi pada, dekho ek baar aur soch lo tum..

Suman-kuch fark nahi pada aisa nahi hai, thoda to fark aaya hai, baatchit wagaire me par ab mujhe lagta hai ke main hi pasand nahi use, aura b mujhe uska picha chhod dena chahiye

Bolte bolte suman ki aankhen dabdaba gayi thi to aniket use pani ka glass pakdate huye bola

Aniket-arey prem diwani, jara santi rakhone bhai ye ekdum devdas banne ki jarurat nahi hai, wo pasand karta hai tumhe

Suman-mujhe acha lage isliye ye bate mat karo aniket

Aniket- arey nahi sachem wo bahut pasand karta hai tumhe, us din jab wo hotel me aaya tha tab ekdum sata savitra (male version of sati savitri
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) banne baitha tha ki pucho mat par jaise hi maine tumhara naam liya aur use bataya ke main tumse pyaar karta hu tab banda full devdas mode me chala gaya tha aur char beer khatam kar di thi agle ne, ab isse ye baat to saaf hai ke wo tumhe pasand bhi karta hai aur umse pyaar bhi karta hai.

Wahi idhar jab shravni ne jab suna ke aniket aisa bola ki wo suman se pyaar karta hai shravni madem ekdum bhadak gayi na bhailog

Shravni-aapne aur kitni ladkiyo se kaha hai ke aap unse pyaar karte ho.

Shravni ki baat sunke aniket ne apne sar pe hath maar liya

Aniket-arey deviji aap abhi kripaya gussa mat hoiye yaha docter sahiba pehle hi garam hai pehle unko shant karne dijiye aap kaha chalti train me chadh rahi hai, aapko baad me sara kissa sonata aur samjhata hu pehle inki baat hone dijiye

Aniket ki baat se shravni chup to ho gayi par uske hoth hil rahe the aur wo muh ki muh me kuch badbada rahi thi jise avinash ne dekh liya aur bola

Avinash-shravni apne pyaar pe bharosa rakho jara.

Par shravni kuch nahi boli uska badbadana chalu hi tha par aniket ne uspe dhyan nahi diya aur suman se bola

Aniket-suman tumne itna samay raah dekhi hai na kuch samay aur sahi, ab itna utawala kyu ho rahi ho aur aisa kaha likha hai ke propose sirf ladka hi karega ladki nahi, jab ladkiya har jagaho par ladko se barabari kar rahi hai aur sirf barabari kya ladko se aage nikal rahi hai to fir is mamle me abla nari kyu ban jati hai? Wo propose nahi kar raha tu kar de...

Suman-main propos to kar du par meri himmat hi nahi hoti hai, uske saamne aate hi pair kaampne lagte hai aur muh se shabd hi nahi nikalte aur ha FYI Mr. aniket rane tumne shravni ko propose kiya tha usne tumhe nahi.

Aniket-theek hai theek hai mat kar propose use propose karne lagayenge par kare kya?

Aniket soch raha tha itne me komal boli

Komal-easy hai, jab ghee sidhi ungli se na nikle to ungli tedhi kar lo

Aniket-kammo sidhe sidhe bata na dialogue kya maar rahi hai

Komal-arey lunth aadmi, kisi bhi chiz ki value tab tab nahi samajhti jab tak hame uske khone ka darr na ho, hame kuch aisa karna chahiye ke siddharth ko lage ki suman usse dur ja rahi hai tabhi uski aankhen khulengi.

Aniket-waah! Kya dimag lagaya hai kammo, gazab solid idea diya hai tune

Komal-experience se hi sikhta hai insaan..

Komal ki baat sunkar avinash ne chauk ke use dekha aur usne use shant rehne ka ishara kiya..par aniket ke is baat ki taraf koi dhyan hi nahi diya wo suman ke bare me sochne laga aur shravni boli

Shravni-par aaplog kisi ko jabardasti pyaar me kaise gira sakte ho?

Jiska jawab avinash ne diya

Avinash-hum use pyaar me gira nahi rahe balki wo pehle se pyaar me hai hum to bas use uska ehsaas kara rahe hai isse pehle ki samay hath se nikal jaye.

Avinash ne apni baat bolte huye halke se komal ko aankh maar di aur usne avi ko table ke niche se laat..

Aniket bhi kuch samay tak kuch sochta raha aur fir bola

Aniket-Ok done..suman kal hospital me badhiya ready hoke jane ka.

Suman-par kyu?

Aniket-kyuki tumhara birthday hai kal

Suman-kuch bhi, mera birthday aane me char mahine hai abhi

Aniket-ye baat siddharth ko nahi malum na bas isiliye hum tumhara birthday kal hi manayenge

Suman-aur use pata hua to.

Aniket-to kya, feka feki ke paise nahi lagte, wo us time dekh lenge

Suman-ok done fir aage..

Aniket-kya sari kahani aaj hi sunogi? Kal ke liye bhi kuch bacha ke rakhne ka, tum bas meri ha me ha milate jana baki ka main dekh lunga, aur ha agar use aur jelous feel karwana hai to tum kuch bhi bol sakti ho I don't mind kal dophar me milta hu.

Suman-theek hai tumhe jo sahi lage karo..

Aniket-don't worry, don't fear Aniket Rane is with you dear
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Aniket ki baat sun kar suman muskurayi aur boli

Suman-be careful while calling me dear coz seems something is burning there..

Itna bolke aniket ke sar pe tapli maar ke suman waha se chali gayi, suman ki baat sun waha sabhi hase the siway shravni ke aur ye baat aniket ke dhyan me aa gayi aur fir usne shravni ko sara kissa sunaya, us samay ke liye shravni bhi samajh gayi par ek baat uske dimag me baith gayi thi wo ye ki aniket daru pita hai

Fir jaisa decide hua tha dusre din aniket mast ready hua raste me ek jagah ruk ke cake aur buket liya aur hospital me pahucha, siddharth ko najar aaye isiliye jaanbujh ke uske cabin ke saamne se dheere dheere chalta hua gaya,

Aniket k dekhte hi siddharth khurchi se uth khada hua aur aniket ne use dekh ke bhi undekha kiya aur sidha dusre section ki or gaya, usne sabko dikhe aise hath me buket pakda tha aur dusre hath me cake,aur ye baat bhi uske dhyan me aa gayi thi ke siddharth uske piche piche aa raha hai.


To Be Continued..
 

[color=rgb(184,]Update 23[/color]


Jaisa decide hua tha dusre din aniket mast ready hua raste me ek jagah ruk ke cake aur buket liya aur hospital me pahucha, siddharth ko najar aaye isiliye jaanbujh ke uske cabin ke saamne se dheere dheere chalta hua gaya,

Aniket k dekhte hi siddharth khurchi se uth khada hua aur aniket ne use dekh ke bhi undekha kiya aur sidha dusre section ki or gaya, usne sabko dikhe aise hath me buket pakda tha aur dusre hath me cake,aur ye baat bhi uske dhyan me aa gayi thi ke siddharth uske piche piche aa raha hai.

Aniket buket aur cake leke docter suman ke ward me pahucha aur suman ko dekhte hi jor jor se gane laga, happy birthday to you happy birthday to you, happy birthday dear suman, happy birthday to you

Gate huye aniket ne jaanbujh ke dear suman pe jor diya tha aur use dekh ke suman jo sharmayi hai na matlab uske sarmane se aniket ko bhi do minute ke liye jhatka lag gaya, ab jara socho ki ye natak hai yer pata hoke bhi aniket ko jab jhatka lag sakta hai to siddharth ki kya haalat ho rahi hogi, docter siddharth ka dimag hi sunn ho gaya na aur aniket jor jor se gar aha tha aur n chahte huye bhi siddharth usse bola

Suddharth-aniket! Aniket, arey ye sab kya chal raha hai, ye hospital hai koi hotel nahi hai jaha tum celebration kar rahe ho..

Tab aniket apne kaan pakadte huye bola

Aniket-maaf karo docter par aaj suman ka birthday hai to..

Siddharth-kuch bhi kya bol rahe ho, uska birthday 1 may ko hota hai..

Siddharth ki baat sunkar docter suman ke chehre ka rang hi ud gaya, use laga ki ab to sari planning fail ho jani hai to asha se aniket ki taraf dekhne lagi aur aniket bhi pakka khiladi thaw o siddharth ke paas jake bola

Aniket-aapko kaise malum..
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Ab siddharth t t p p karne laga, kya boloe use samajh hi nahi aa raha tha kyuki ye sawal uske liye anapekshit tha fir bhi baat sambhalte huye siddharth bola..

Siddharth-office record me sabki birthdate likhi hoti hai..isiliye pata hai

Aniket-aapka bolna ekdum sahi hai docter sahab par jo birthdate aapko pata hai wo sirf on paper hai.. aapko pata hi hoga pehle gaon me teacher log birthdate pata na hone pe 1 may likh dete the aur admission le lete the bas suman ke sath bhi wahi hua hai, on paper birthdate 1 may hai par asal birthday aaj hai, isiliye aaj hi suman ka janmdin hai.

Aniket ke logic ke samne siddharth clean bowled ho gaya tha fir bhi siddharth ne apni aankho me sawal liye suman ki taraf dekha, waise to suman bhi aniket ke logic se impress thi to usne bhi siddharth ko aanko ke ishare se bataya ke ye sab sach hai, ab siddharth ke liye waha rukna mushkil tha wo waha se jane laga to aniket ne uska hath pakad ke use roka aur ward me patients se bola

Aniket-bhailog aaj apne docter madem ka birthday hai to yaha cake katne se kisi ko koi problem to nahi hai na?

Sabne eksath na bola aur un patients me se 3-4 jo chal sakte the unhone aakar suman ko birthday wish kiya aur aniket siddharth ke kaan ke paas jake bola

Aniket-docter please ruk jao yaar, aap ya ahoge to mujhe bhi sumanse baat karne ki himmat milegi..

Ab aniket ne waha nakabandi hi aisi kit hi ken a chahte huye bhi siddharth ko waha rukna pada fir suman ne cake cut kiya aur fir wahi har birthday wala celebration ise cake khilao use khilao jo hamesha hota hai (sach batau apne ko ye bilkul pasand nahi
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) fir suman ne apne hath me ek cake ka tukda liya aur aniket ki taraf badhi, aniket aur siddharth agal bagal me khade the aur siddharth ko ab waha rukna ashaniya ho raha tha, uske saamne suman aniket ko cake khilayeg ye soch ke hi uska dimag thanakne laga tha par uske baad waha jo hua uski siddharth ne kalpana bhi nahi ki thi

Suman cake leke aayi aur cake usne siddhath ke saamne pakda, wo ashcharya se kabhi aniket ko dekhta to kabhi suman ko, aur aakhir me suman ne siddharth ko cake khilaya jiske baad siddharth bola

Siddharth-h..happy birthday docter..

Suman-thank u sir, is sab ke liye allow karne ke liye.

Siddharth kehna to kuch aur chahta tha par birthday wish kea age badh nahi paya aur udhar aniket ne chehra barik kar liya aur jab suman waha se sarki to aniket siddharth ke kaa ke paas bola

Aniket-kya yaar docter sahab sala sab kiya hamne aur cake mila tumko, ye kaha ka insaf hai..

Aniket ki baat sun kesiddhath galo hi galo me has raha tha, aniket ko chhod ke suman ne use cake khilaya thaw o banda to isi baat se khush tha par use kaha pata tha ke uski ye khushijyada samay tak nahi tikne wali hai,use hasta dekh aniket suman se bola

Aniket-o docter madem, arey hamper bhi najar dalo bhai hum bhi hai yahya pe

Suman bhi siddharth ki aur dekhte huye aniket se boli

Suman-tum to special hi ani, tumne itna sab kiya hai mere lioye meri bhavnao ko samjha hai tum hi sacche dost ho mere

Aisa bolte huye suman se dost shabd pe jara jyada jor diya jise sun ke siddharth aur khush par agle hi pal suman ne aniket ke diye chocolate ka rapper faadke uske paas aate huye chocolate ka ek tudka aniket ke muh me diya aur use gale laga liya aur thanks kaha.

Suman ko aniket ko gale lagate dekh siddharth ki halat jo huyi hai na ab kya batau, wo banda ek pal bhi waha nahi ruka aur waha se chala gaya, aur yaha sumane ke aise gale lagane se aniket ko pasina aage laga tha aur siddharth ke jate hi dono alag huye aur aniket pasina pochte huye bola

Aniket-o bai o devi, hum dono ki jaan lene ka irada hai kya? Wo to acha hua shravni yaha nahi thi, agar hoti to yahi African jungle wala adiwasi dance karte huye hospital sar pe utha leti wo, nahi to maut aane tak kavita fek ke maarti, suman ye thoda jyada ho gaya?

Jispar suman bhi naak chadhate huye boli

Suman-hone do, jalne do use, jal ke koyla ho jane do, tabhi akal aayegi..

Aniket-bas use jalane ke chakker me meri jaan mat lelena.. bas

Suman-kuch jaan wagaire nahi jane wali kisi ki aur tum bhi dhyan me rakhna ke hum dost hai sirf faltu me ise triangle mat banana

Suman majak me aankh maarte huye boli

Aniket-ghante ka triangle, mere paas ek hai aur wo hi kafi hai mere sar pe nachne ke liye

Suman-fir bhi jhutha hi sahi tumne badhiya birthday manaya hai mera thank you ani

Aniket-arey usme kya hai tum bolo to main roj aise surprise de dunga bas bill mere account me transfer karte chalna, kya hai pappa bambani nahi hai apne..

Suman-acha wo chhodo ab batao aage ka kya plan

Aniket-sach batao suman, mat tadpao bechare ko kyu uska kabir singh banana chahti ho, meri baat mano sab mere jaise nahi hote, kuch logoko apni bhavnaye bol ke nahi batate aati aur bol ke batane se hi bhavnaye samajhti hai kya? Wosach me bahut pyaar karta hai tumse maine dekha hai uski aankhon me, mri mano aur ye jid chhodo, mujhe batao tum bhi to chahti ho na use, fir tum kyu apni bhavnaye use bol ke kyu nahi batati.. ye pehle aap pehle aap ke chakker me gadi chhut jayegi docter madem, apni jid chhodo warna jindagi par pachtana bhi pad sakta hai.

Aniket ki baat suman ko samajh aa rahi thi aur wo bhi ab soch me pad gayi thi..


To Be Continued...
 

[color=rgb(184,]Update 24[/color]


Aniket ki baat suman ko samajh aa rahi thi aur wo bhi ab soch me pad gayi thi, aur aniket bhi shant baith ke use haavbhav notice kar raha tha, bahut der tak kuch sochne ke baad suman boli

Suman-tum jo keh rahe ho wosab sahi hai aniket, faltu me aajtak uske bolne ke intajar me samay gawaya hai bas ab bahut ho gaya ab aaj ya to is paar ya to us paar

Aniket-gazab ab kin a tumne aniket ran eke dost wali baat, ab tum meri dost lag rahhi to fir kya decide kiya hai ab?

Suman ekdum soch ke boli

Suman-uske paas aajka din hai.

Aniket-matlab..?

Suman-tumne abhi tak mujhe kabhi detail bataya hai kya , fir pillu mere se detail kyu maan rahe ho.

Aniket-kya baat kya baat kya baat, hamari billi hamise myao

Suman-waisa nahi hai kuch, it's just ke maine pakka kuch decide nahi kiya hai dekhte hai saamne ko jab samay aayega tab kya karna hai, par jo bhi karna hai aaj hi karna hai, wo tum kya kehte ho ise

Aniket-bhidna, direct bhidne ka.

Suman-barobar, aaj hi bhidna hai.

Aniket-ekdum kadakkk, tu bindass direch bhid main hut ere sath.. tension nai lene ka

Suman-aur ha ek baat batao, ye African dance ka kya prakar hai aur shravni kyu nachegi ispe..

Aniket-abey yaar docter kabhi kabhi discovery channel bhi dekh liya karo be bahut kuch sikhne milta hai usse
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abi tumko samjhata hu, African dance matlab wo African tribes hai adiwasi logo ke unko jab kuch pasand nahi aata hai ya samajhlo koi unke area me ghusa to wo chidh jate hai aur fir us ghuskhor ko pakad te hai ya fir jiske hatho se koi gunah hua ho use pakadte hai aur gaon ke beecho beech leke aate hai, kamar pe patte bandhe huye chehre par laal safed line khiche huye chere rehte hai unke, sar pea lag alag panchiyo ke pankho ka mukut pehan ke jo gunehgar hota hai use ek rod se bandh ke uske niche aag laga dete aur fir sab uske ird gird gol bana ke hula..hula.hu.hu. karte huye vichitra haav bhav karte huye chilla ke naach ke apna gussa dikhate hai , beech me muh pe hath rakh ke.aaallaaa.la..laaa. karke chillate hai, aur fir ek aadmi us gunehgar ko rod se band ke uske niche aag laga ke usko bhun ke kha daalte hai, fir koi us gunehgar ke ungliyo ki haddiya ya pairo ki haddiyo ki mala banake gale me pehan leta hai, tumne mujhe gale lagaya ye shravni agar dekh leti na to us gunehgar ki jagah meko bhun ke kha daalti.

Aniket ne ye sari bate full demonstration ke sath batayi thi jise suman ektak dekhe ja rahi thi aur fir aniket ke bataye situation me shravni aur use imagine karte huye suman hasne lagi..

Suman-tum filme bahut dekhte ho na
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Aniket-hao
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Suman-tabhi..
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Fir baad me suman apni hasi pe control karte huye boli

Suman-acha tumne aage ke liye kya decide kiya tha pehle wo karte hai fir main dekhti hu mujhe kya karna hai aaj to is siddu ko chhodne wali nahi main

Aniket-siddu?? Docter siddharth se direct siddu?

Suman-teri sangat ka asar hai ani..

Aniket-ye kuch bhi mat bol, main apna sadha, sudha, bhola, abodh, niragas, sajjan, baccha hu meko aise badnaam to mat karo
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Suman-pata hai kitne bhole ho tum..

Aniket-arey yaar chhodo ye sab aur aage ka plan suno

Fir aniket se suman ko sara plan bataya aur wo dono siddharth ke cabin ki taraf nikle.

Aniket ne jhuk ke cabin me dekha to siddharth apna sar pakad ke baitha tha jise dekh aniket suman se bola

Aniket-abey tera siddu to khud patient bana baitha hai

Fir suman aur aniket dono cabin me pahuche aur jate huye aniket ne avi ko ek msg kar diya tha

Cabin me jakar suman boli

Suman-sir aaj mujhe half day mil sakta hai kya?

Siddharth-kyu kya hua?

Suman-nahi hua kuch nahi hai bas aniket ke sath movie dekhne jana tha, birthday party thi to.

Jispar aniket jaldi se bola

Aniket-please sir de dijiye na permission

Siddharth-kamal hai tum logo ki sidhe sidhe movie jane ke liye chutti mang rahe ho?

Jispar aniket bola

Aniket-fir kya kare? Baki log tabiyat theek nahi hai aisa keh ke chutti le lete hai par yaha wo bahana nahi bana sakte naisiliye jo sach hai bata diya, de do na permission

Siddharth-theek hai jao ab aaj tumhara birthday hai to naraj karke kaise chalega

Siddharth ne bhari man se kaha aur suman ne ekdum khush hone ka dikhawa karke thank you thank you bolke siddharth ka hath pakad liya

Dono cabin ke baahar aaye aur sidhe jakar canteen me baith gaye aur idhar siddharth jal bin machli ki taraf tadfada raha tha, thoda timepass karke aniket nikal gaya aur suman akeli hospital me wapis aayi aur siddharth ko dikhe aise uske cabin ke samne se gujri, use dekhte hi siddharth khurchi se uth khada hua aur baahar aakar usne suman ko awaj lagayi

Siddharth-kya hua aap ab bhi yaha hai, movie ke liye nahi gayi?

Jispar suman ne dukhi dikhte huye kaha

Suman-sara mood off kar diya ani ne, achanak use uske pitaji ka call aaya aur kaha ki emergency hai to use jana pada aur jate jate ye movie ki 2 tickets bhi chhod gaya par ab iska kya fayda..

Fir suman wapis apne ward ki taraf jane ke liye mudi aur use piche se awaj aaya

Siddharth- ek minute docter..

Suman ne mud ke piche dekha

Siddharth-aise birthday ke din mood kharab nahi karte, agar aapko koi problem na ho to ham chale movie dekhne

Suman-mujhe kya problem hona hai chaliye, badhiya movie hai wo..

Fir dono suman aur siddharth dono siddharth ke gadi se movie ke liye nikal gaye aur aniket unhe jate huye dekh raha tha

Kuch samay baad jab dono film dekh ke baahar aaye to baahar aate hi siddharth bola

Siddharth-yaha paas hi me ek bahut sundermandir hai waha chale kya..?

Jispar suman ne bhi sehmati jatayi, use bhi to siddharth ka sath chahiye tha, aur waise bhi suman ne decide kar liya tha ke agar aaj siddharth kuch nahi bolega to kal wo apni bhavnaye use bata degi, dono ne mandir me jake darshan kiya aur baahar aakar baith gaye, ab kuch to kehna tha siliye suman ne bolna shuru kiya

Suman-movie badhiya thin a..?

Siddharth-ha badhiya to thi aur tumhare sath dekhi to aur bhi badhiya lagi par..

Suman-par kya..?

Siddharth apne man me kuch shabd sochne laga

Siddharth-movie to achi hi thi aur tumhare sath dekhi to aura chi lagi par asal maja tab aayega jab hum dono sath honge ek hi mandap me aur pantit hamari shadi ke mantra padhega.

Siddharth ka ye bolna tha aur suman ko apne kano pe yakin nahi ho raha tha ke usne kya suna hai, siddharth aage bola

Siddharth-matlab agar tum ha kaho to.

Itne salo ka virah, intajar sabkuch ek hi pal me khatam ho gaya tha, jo baat bolne ki siddharth kabhi hmmat nahi kar paya tha aaj usne ek jhatke me bol di thi, jis pal ki suman chatak pakshi jaisi raah dekh rahi thi wo aa gaya tha aur aaj to siddharth ne use direct shadi ke liye puch liya tha., waise to suman kab se is pal ki raah dekh rahi thi par ab jab siddharth ne ise istarh propose kiya tha to uske muh se bol nahi fut rahe the, wo sidha siddharth se bilag gayi, us madhur sham me do premiyo ka Milan ho gaya tha, najane kitni der wo ekdusre ke bahopash me the.

Dono premiyo ki tandri tuti siti ke awaj se.. dono ekdum vartaman me laute to aniket avinash aur komal baarat me jaise naachte huye unke paas aa rahe the aura vi au rani ki sitiyo ki awaj se aasman gunj raha tha, pehle to siddharth unhe chauke ke dekhne laga aur fir wo bhi hasne laga aur jab kuch samay baad ye dhingana shant hua to aniket ki nautanki chalu ho gayi

Aniket-suman tumne mujhe dhoka kyu diya, kyu kiye mere komal dil ke itne tukde, ab main kiske liye jiunga

Aise purine jamane ke dialogue maarte huye aniket avinash ke gale me gir ke rone laga aur uske sath sath avinash aur komal bhi rone lage

Suman-aye bas bahut hua ab mere siddu ko koi nahi satayega

Aniket-aur mere tute dil ka kya..

Jispar siddharth aniket ke kaan me bola

Siddharth-wo apan raat me jod lende, hotel ketki, char beer

Jispar aniket ekdum khush

Aniket-arey gazab docter, (fir suman se bola) ja suman ja jile apni jindagi..

Fir siddharth aur suman jis gadi se aaye the usse hi waha se nikal gaye aur komal mandir me aayi aur hath jod ke bhagwan se boli

Komal-key bhagwan, jaise inki naiyaa paar lagayi hai meri bhi laga do..
 

[color=rgb(184,]Update 25[/color]


Dekhte dekhte samay beet raha tha aur board exams ab kareeb aa chuke the, exam ka timetale aa chukka tha aur apni puri gang ekdum se neend se jag gayi thi, kyuki bhale hi aap saal bhar kitni bhi masti kar le par jab exam aati hai to kitabo ki hi yaad aati hai, avinash aniket aur komal ki ye khas baat thi, teeno bhale hi saal bhar kuch na padhe par exam ke pehle ka ek mahina man maar ke hi sahi padhte jaroor the, aur padhai bhi sab sath karte the aur is waqt bhi sab sath baith ke padh rahe the..

Sab sath padh rahe the aur sab matloab inke sath shravni bhi thi to charo sath the aur padhte padhte achanak avinash ko hasi aa gayi aur wo has diya jisse aniket komal aur shravni ka concentration tut gaya aur komal boli

Komal-teko kya hua aise achanak daat kyu nikal raha?

Avinash- kuch nahi bas aise hi
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Komal-hasa to hasa ab batane me bhi bhav kha raha hai, abe bata na aisa kya ho gaya jo tu hasa?

Avinash-arey kuch nahi meko wo suman aur aniket ka kissa yaad aa gaya

Suman aur aniket ka naam sunte hi shravni ke kaan khade ho gaye.aur idhar avinash haste huye bata raha tha

Avinash-main wo scene imagne kar raha tha jab suman ne ise gale lagaya tha.. tab iski kya halat huyi hogi
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Itna bol ke avinash komal ko tali deke jor se hasne laga aur aniket ne apna matha pit liya aur idhar avinash ki baat sunkar shravni ko charso challis volt ka jhatka laga..

Shravni-kyaaa..? suman ne aniket k hug kiya tha..?

Ab avinash ke dhyan me aa gaya tha ke jo nahi bolna chahiye tha wo wo bol gaya tha aura b bol hi diya hai to avinash baat sambhalte huye bola

Avinash-hug matlab. aise hi. bas paas aayi ti wo aur kuch nahi..

Par shravni bhadak gayi thi

Shravni-ye sab kya hai aniket..?

Aniket ne baithe baithe hi avinash ko lath mari.. aur bola

Aniket-abey haramkhor aadmi.. muh khola ki baas marega
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hajar baar bola hai thjobda band rakha kar par sun liya to tere baap ki estate chali jayegi na sale narad muni laga di na aag

Aur idhar shravni aur bhadak gayi

Shravni-unhhe kuch kyu keh rahe hai aap aniket, unka bola hua dikh gaya par khud ke gun nahi dikhe aapko

Aniket-arey tum samajh rahi ho waisa kuch nahi hai

Par shravni kuch samajhne ke liye tayar hi nahi thi..

Shravni-mujhe kuch nahi sunna bas aap itna batao ki aapne hug kiya ya nahi?

Aniket-meri baat suno shravni faltu me dimag me gussa mat lao

Shravni-ha ya na?

Aur ab jab aniket ko koi dusra rasta nahi mila to wo bola

Aniket-ha..

Aniket ke muh se haa sunkar mano waha jwalamukhi ka visfot hua ho shravni itna bhadak gayi aur gussa itna jyada tha ke usne sikha aniket ke kaan ne niche rakh di ek aur boli

Shravni- jara bhi sharam nahi aati na ha bolte huye

Avinet ne kuch kehne ki koshish ki par shravni kuch sunne ke mood me hi nahi thi

Shravni-aap manmauji ho theek hai maskhare ko masti majak karte ho theek hai par aisa charitraheen vartan main bilkul bardasht nahi karngi..

Itna bol ke shravni ne apni kitabe bag me bhari aur waha se jane lagi.. aniket uske piche piche use samjhate huye jane laga aur jate jate avinash ko do char galiya bhi deta gaya ( ye ladke ladki kea ate hi itne chutiya kyu ho jate hai
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Idhar aniket ke jane ke baad do minute tak shanti rahi, avinash aur komal ko jo hua uspar yakin hi nahi ho raha tha, thode samay baad avinash wapis hasa aur use dekh ke komal bhi hasne lagi

Komal-ek number ka halkat hai tu avi..

Tab avinash ekdum masum chehra karte huye bola

Avinash-maine kya kiya

Komal-kya kiya.! Kya jarurat thi ye baat abhi chhedne ki wo bhi shravni ke saamne..

Avinash-arey maine to aise hi bola tha par kya solid padi na anya ko

Dono fir se hasne lage fir komal boli

Komal-jaanbujh ke bola na tu?

Jispar avinash ne sidha sidha hao bol diya

Komal-kyu jhagda karwana chahta hai dono ka?

Avinash-main kaha jhagda laga raha hu main to ye bata raha hu ke wo chiran anya ke liye sahi nahi hai
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Komal-kyu uska pyaar usse chin raha hai?

Avinash-apna pyaar sambhalna sabka apna kaam hai..

Komal-isiliye to tu jhagda karwa raha hai

Avinash-sidha bolunga to anya sunega?

Komal-ti tumhe nahi lagta ki tum un dono ke beech galat fehmi tayar kar rahe ho

Avinash-prem ka aadhar saundrya nahi vishwas hai main bas ye sabit kar raha hu, aur jaha vishwas hai waha mere jaise dus log bhi kuch bol de na to kuch fark nahi panda chahiye

Komal-ye sab mere liye kar raha hai na?

Avinash-bilkul nahi, anya ko uska saccha pyaar mile isliye..

Komal-shravni ka bhi to pyaar hai

Avinash-vishwas nahi hai aur ye bagair viashwas ka nata kab tak tikega? Upper se gussa bahut hai aur gusse me humk sabse pehle unhe khote hai jo hamare sabse karib hote hai..pyaar karna aasan hai nibhana mushkil..

Komal-to tune kiya hai kisi se pyaar

Avinash-shadi nahi huyi meri par barate bahut dekhi hai, abhi tak koi aisi aayi nahi jindagi me, aayi to tumhe jarur bataunga

Komal-bahut lucky hogi wo

Avinash-wo samay batayega

Komal-kaisi ladki chahiye?

Avinash-aisi jo mere ghar ko swarg banaye gharwalo ko swargwasi nahi

Komal-par please unke beech jhagda mat karwa

Avinash-fir tumhe tumhara pyaar kaise milega

Komal-dusre ki kabar pe main apna ghar kaise banau?

Komal ke is sawal ka avinash ke paas jawab nahi tha isiliye wo baat badalte huye bola

Avinash-shravni sach me ani se pyaar karti haiis mamle me mujhe thoda doubt hai, mujhe lagta hai jis tarah se ani ne use propose kiya wo na nahi keh saki aur ise pyaar samajh baithi

Komal-par sach to ye hai ke ani bhi use pasand karta hai

Avinash-aur sach to ye bhi hai ke tum bhi ani ko chahti ho, kitna difference hai na, unke swabhav alag hai vishwas bilkul nahi hai aur yaha tum, koi bandhan nahi fir bhi purn vishwas

Komal-avi please mere liye aisa kuch mat karo jisse tumme aur aniket ke duriya aaye.

Avinash-agar mere dur hone se tum dono paas aane wale ho to main jara bhi nahi sochunga komal..

Komal-aur tumhe lagta hai main itni swarthi hu?

Avinash-kyu nahi?

Komal-jane do chhodo ye bate aur avi tu na jaisa dikha hai waisa nahi hai

Jispar avi avi daat nikalne laga

Aur idhar aniket shravni ko samjha raha tha

Aniket-shravni ruko to meri baat to suno

Aur shravni aur bhi chidhte huye boli

Shravni-jitna sun liya hai kafi hai aur sunne ki meri bilkul icha nahi hai

Aniket shravni ka rasta rokte huye bola

Aniket-shravni main sirf aur sirf tumse pyaar karta hu..wo halkat ne tumhe bas adhi adhuri baat batayi hai aur tum bhi kamal ho yaar sidhe thappad laga diya, mujhe bas do minute do uske baad jo tum bologi wahi hoga

Shravni kuch boli nahi par ruk gayi, uske baad aniket ne use pura kissa bataya

Aniket-agar ab bhi yakin na ho to tumhari kasam kha ke bolta hu ke main jo bataya wo pura sach hai..

Ab shravni ka gussa thoda shant hua

Shravni-wo hamesha aisa karti hai pehle bhi canteen me usne tumhe dear kaha tha mujhe ye sab bilkul pasan nahi hai wada karo aap suman se kabhi nahi miloge aur agar mile to dur rahoge

Aniket-theek hai baba dur rahunga, khush?

Shravni-nahi

Aniket-to ek dairy milk de deta hu fir khush?

Shravni-nahi

Aniket-to ab kya gana gau?

Shravni- kuch keh nahi sakte

Fir aniket ne shravni ka hath pakad ke use apne karib liya aur gana gane laga (ek aur chutiya karkat
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Aniket-



Ruth na jana tumse kahu to

Main in aankhon me jo rahu to

Tum ye jano, ya na jano

Tum ye mano, ya na mano

Mere jaisa deewana tum paoge nahi

Yaad karoge main jo nah u to

Ruth na jana tumse kahu to.


Aniket ka gana sunkar sravni muskura di

Aniket-arey ladki hasi to fasi.
 

[color=rgb(184,]Update 26[/color]


Samay ki gati ko koi rok paya hai kya, nahi na to wo apni gati se daud raha tha ya yu kahe ki kuch jyada hi fast daud raha tha, ab chuki apne gang ke exams the isiliye is period me jyada kuch khas nahi hua, ha is beech aniket aur shravni ka ruthne manane ka karyakram barabar chalta tha aur jo kabhi nahi hua wo ab hua, avinash aur komal seriously padhne lage, aur iska parinam bhi dekhne mila kyuki jab result aaya tab avinash komal aur shravni to paas ho gaye par aniket fail ho gaya..(ladki ka chakker, jaldi mukti dilana padega ab isko
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Gharwalo ke liye ye kuch naya nahi tha ke aniket fail hua hai unhone to aniket ka aisa parakram pehle bhi dekha tha, narayanrao ne bas usse fail hone ka reason pucha ku wo kyu fail hua kaise fail hua to aniket ne bas itna kaha ke

Aniket-bapu 10vi aur 12vi education ka base hai main base majbut kar raha hu, slow education pragati ka lakshan ( sala purana dialogue chipka diya huh)

Avinet ke chehre par fail hone ka jyada gam nahi tha aur na hi narayanrao ne isse jyada use kuch pucha ya koi aur melo drama hua

Dekhte dekhte chuttiya khatam huyi aur college dobara shuru hua, inlogo ke graduation ke liye bhi usi college me admission liya tha aur fail hone ke baad bhi aniket ka college me aana shuru hi tha waise bhi use waha kaun rokne wala tha aur 12th bhi to paas karni thi use..par in sabme sabse jyada changes aaye the komal me, pehle tomboy jaisi dikhne wali komal ab ek khubsurat ladki me badal gayi thi, pehle kisi se bhi bindass bhid jane wali komal ab sabse pyaar se baat karne lagi thi basically ab komal me strisulabh lakshan dikhne lage the siway uske kapdo ko chhod ke (apun ko malum hai apne readers ko purani kammo pasand hai fikar naat wo kahi nahi jayegi bas thodi gum ho gayi hai usko dhundh layenge apan)

Ek din komal college aa rahi thi to kuch launde baahar katte pe baithe the aur jaise hi unko komal dikhi unki tounting shuru ho gayi aur wo komal ko dekh ke bolne lage

Ladka1-kyu be aaj akela hi..

Ladka2-kya karu mera dost mera nahi raha na, aur ye kam tha to wo fail bhi ho gaya isiliye akela hi

Fir teesra bola

Ladka3- jyada akelapan lag raha ho to hum hai yaha

Waise dekha jaye to komal ko gussa bahut aaya tha par college abhi naya naya shuru hua tha to kyu faltu me jhanjhat mol le isiliye wo unhe ignore karke canteen ki or nikal gayi aniket aur avinash wahi the, unhe dekhte hi komal boli

Komal-tum log kab aaye?

Tab avinash ne kaha

Avinash-abhi abhi aaye hai, tu gate par thi tab hum parking me gadi park kar rahe the.

Aniket chup tha aur use aise chup chap dekh ke komal boli

Komal-naye ladke kuch jyada hi natak karne lage hai college me..

Par aniket kuch nahi bola aur chup chap apni chai pita raha tab komal dobara boli

Komal-wo mujhe ched rahe the..

Aniket aur avinash ne sab kuch pehle hi dekh aur sun liya tha aur aniket gusse se komal ki taraf dekh raha tha

Aniket-teko cheda hai na to fir mujhe kyu bata rahi hai

Komal-tujhe nahi bataungi to kise bataungi?

Aniket-problem tera hai mujhe kyu ghasit rahi hai beech me

Aniket ka aisa bolna komal ke liye anapekshit tha..

Komal-ye tera aur mera alag alag kab se ho gaya?

Ab gussa aniket ke chehre par saaf dikh raha tha

Aniket-tu paagal hai kya komal jara bhi akkal nahi hai tujhme, dena than a rakh ke unke kaan ke niche,

Komal kuch nahi boli aur gardan jhuka kar baithi rahi, aniket fir bola

Aniket-tere jaisi dashing ladki aise gardan jhuka ke baith baith jati hai tabhi to un jaiso ki himmat badhti hai, jab tera ye haal hai to sadharan ladkiyo ka ye haramkhor jina haram kar denge, main koi jindagi bhar tere piche piche nahi rahunga, agar tere problem tu solve nahi kar sakti to unhe sehan karte reh..

Aniket ki baat sun kar komal apni jagah se uth khadi huyi aur uske sath avinash bhi par aniket apni jagah se nahi hila ulta usne avinash ka hath pakad ke use bhi baitha liya.. aur us ek pal me sabse pyaar se bolne wali sadi naram dil ki komal gayab ho gayi aur purani komal wapis aa gayi, jiski aankhon me angar the aur chehra gusse se bhara hua tha, wow aha se uthi aur sidha gate ki taraf badhi, wo teeno ladke ab bhi wahi the, komal sidha unke samne jake khadi huyi aur boli

Komal-tujhe bahut chinta hai na meri, ke main akeli ho gayi hu, le pakad mera hath

Aur jaise hi us ladne ne komal ka hath pakda agle hi pal jamin pe tha wo, kya hua kisi ko kuch nahi samjha, us ladke ne jaise hi komal ka hath pakda komal ne apne ghutne se ek jordar kick mar ke us ladke ke ande fod dale boli to goti suja di aur subah subah uski aankhon ke saamne tare chamak gaye, komal ne use itna jabardast mara tha ke dobara jindagi me wo kisi ladki ko chedne ki himmat nahi karega, dusre ladke ne komal ko thappad maarne ki koshish ki par uska hath komal ke gaal tak pahuchta usse pehle hi komal ne use hawa me rok liya aur ek ke baad ek teen char punch jad diye uske itne me teesre ladke ne najane kaha se hockey stick layi aur usne usse komal ke sar pe mara jisse komal ki aankhon kea age andhera chane laga aur wo niche girne lagi aur wo dono ladke uski taraf lapke aur wo komal ko lath maarte isse pehle hi dono apne teesre dost ke bagal me pade karah rahe the, aniket aur avinash waha pahuch gaye the aur unhone un ladko ka kaam ek hi jhatke me tamam kar diya tha fir wo komal ki taraf mude aur use uthaya air kisi ne pani laga to avinash ne komal ke chehre pe pani maar ke use hosh me laya, aur komal ne dekha ke wo ladke jamin pe pade hai

Waha college ki gardi jama ho gayi thi, aniket komal ko uthate huye waha jama gardi se bola

Aniket-aaj komal ne himmat ki hai aise ladko ko sabak sikhane ki, inhone aap mese kayi ladkiyo ko cheda hoga aur tumne chup chap sun liya sahan kiya par komal ne nahi, mujhe garv hai meri dost pe, in haram khoro ko sahan karne se acha agar ek kaan ke niche rakh ke deti to chedna to dur tumhari taraf najar utha ke bhi nahi dekhte, ek baat dhyan me rakhna har baar koi tumhari madad ko nahi aayega, agar koi tumhari madad kar sakta hai to um khud

Aniket ne to bol diya ab bolne ki bari avinash kit hi

Avinash-aur jab in haramkhoro ne jinko sataya hai wo mauke ka fayda utha kea age aaye aur behti ganga me hath dho le (uske baad un ladko se) in ladkiyo me se ek ko bhi agar hath bhi lagaya to itna marunga ke sharir ki koi haddi nahi bachegi jo dard nahi karegi..

Itna bolke wo hockey stick leke wahi khada ho gaya aur sabse pehle komal ne jake uske lath mari jisne use hockey stick se mara tha aur fir kya sari ladkiya un ladko pe tut padi, wo to un ladko na naseeb pe professors waha pahuch gaye aur unki jaan bach gayi warna ladkiyo ne jo unki halat kit hi unke gharwale bhi nahi pehchan pate unhe..

Komal ko thoda jyada maar laga tha to wo use hospital leke gaye aur waha to suman thi hi ilaj karne ke liye, baadme rade ki khabar sun ke shravni bhi baahar aayi aur aniket ke bare me puchne lagi, jab uske dhyan me aaya ke aniket ko kuch nahi hua hai to uska hath pakad ke use baahar le aayi aur shuru ho gayi..

Shravni-hajar baar kaha hai aisi gundo jaisi harkate mat kiya karo par meri suntan kaun hai? Tumhe kuch ho jata to?

Aniket-mujhe kuch nahi hua hai, komal ko laga hai..

Shravni-use kisne kaha tha aisi harkat karne ke liye, ladki ne ladki jaisa rehna chahiye, kyu un mawaliyo se bhidi wo..

Aniket-kamal hai tum ek ladki hoke ye keh rahi ho..

Shravni-ha main hi keh rahi hu aur aap bhi aise logo ki sangat me mat rahiye..

Aniket-shravni dost hai wo mere

Shravni-huh bade aaye dost, wo to paas hoke aage nikal gaye aur tum baithe ho dost dost karte, ab bahut hua ab se aap unke sath nahi rahoge..

Aniket-tum limit cross kar rahi ho ab shravni

Shravni-mujhe kuch limit wagaire nahi pata hai aaj aapko chun na padega komal ya mai

Aniket-ye kya paagal pan hai, tmhe samajh aa raha hai tum kya keh rahi ho, dimag sahi hai tumhara

Shravni-mujhe kuch nahi pata bas aaj mujhe batao komal ya mai

Aniket-baasss bahut hogaya, bol liya tumne jo bolna tha, paagal ladki tumse pyaar karta hu iska ye matlab nahi ke jo tum bologi main wahi karunga.. aur komal se khudko compare karne ki layaki hai kya tumhari, pyaar kiya to kya sar pe chadh ke nachogi, arey haadd dimag kharab kar diya pura, ye mat karo wo mat karo, sala itna to meri maa ne nahi toka mujhe..

Ab aniket to gusse me tha hi shravni ka gussa bhi saatve aasman pe tha

Shravni-theek hai to raho fir yahi komal komal karte huye aur aainda jindagi me mujhe apni shakal mat dikhana.

Itna bol ke shravni waha se pair patakte huye nikal gayi, avinash wahi piche khada hoke ye sab dekh aur sun raha tha aur wo khud se bola

Avinash-ye to sala ek din hona hi tha..
 

[color=rgb(184,]Update 27[/color]


Shravni ne aniket ko jo kuch bhi kaha tha usse use kafi bura dhakka laga tha aur wo muh latka ke wapis room me aaya aur wo kuch bolta usse pehle hi komal bol padi

Komal-kuch bolne ki jarurat nahi hai maine sab sun liya hai

Aniket ko kafi bura laga

Aniket-ab kaise samjhau ise yahi samajh nahi aa raha

Tab komal aniket ko samjhate huye boli

Komal-don't worry wo gusse me thi abhi aur mujhe uski baat ka bilkul bura nahi laga, tumne uska gussa dekha par uske piche jo tumhare liye chinta thi wo nahi dekhi, wo bas tumhari chinta me aisa boli

Aniket-arey par ye kya faltugiri hai yaarr

Komal-anya wo gusse me boli yaar

Inki bate sun ke idhar avi ka dimag kharab ho raha tha

Avinash-oye bas hogya, gayi to gayi daal usko gadhi ki gand me, waise bhi jate huye shani aur aati huyi Lakshmi ko na nahi bolte, acha hua bala tali BC

Avinash ki baat sun ke komal ne uski taraf gusse se dekha to wo chup ho gaya

Komal-anya iski baat mat sun aur mujhe kuch nahi hua hai tu ja aur jake shanti se shravni ko samjha avi mujhe ghar drop kar dega

Aniket do minute soch ke bola

Aniet-theek hai avya kuch laga to call kariyo main nikalta hu fir

Itna bol ke aniket wala se nikal gaya aur uske jate hi avinash komal ke aye hath jodke usse bola

Avinash-o mother india, kamal hai tub hi, yaha naseeb mathe par tilak lagane aa raha hai aur tu use dusre ka pata bata rahi hai, hockey stick se dimag pe asar ho gaya kya, kuch samajh nahi raha tujhe brain to damage nahi ho gaya na tera

Jispar komal muskurakar boli

Komal-paagal jaisi baat mat kar, aur ek good news hai jo abhi mere dhyan me aayi hai, ab to meko pakka yakin ho gaya hai ke ye shravni kuch aniket se pyaar vyar nahi karti, ulta use to pata hi nahi hai ke pyaar kya hota hai..

Avinash-to fir anya ko kyu bheja use samjhane ke liye

Komal-arey mand buddhi manus pyaar koi geometry ka theorem hai kya samjhane pe samajh aane ke liye, wo to ek bhavna hai jo apne aap man me nirman hoti hai..

Avinash-main na ab pareshan ho gaya hu ye pyaar pyaar sunke (sur shayad readers bhi
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Komal-arey kyuki anya pasand karta hai use, aur ek baat batau aaj mere ye bhi dhyan me aaya ke anya bhi usse pyaar vyar nahi karta..

Komal ki baat sunke avinash ne apna matha pit liya.

Avinash-waah to ye log kya ab tak kabaddi kabadi khel rahe the kya
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Komal-kaisa hai na avi ye baat mere usi din dhyan me aa gayi thi jab shravni ne aniket ke kaan ke niche lagayi thi, kyuki jis insaan se ham pyaar karte hai na use maarne ka sapne me bhi nahi soch sakte aur ye dono murkh hai, dono hi nahi jaante ki prem kya hai, inke beech pyaar hai hi nahi

Avinash-to pyaar nahi to kya hai

Komal-attraction, dono ko ek dusre ke prati akarshan hai aur ye dono ise hi pyaar samajh baite hai, ha manya hai ki pyaar ki shuruwat akarshan se hoti hai par baad me pyaar badhte jata hai aur yaha shravni ko aniket ke apna adhikar chalana hai

Avinash shanti se komal ki baat sun raha tha

Avinash-kammo, kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki main sach me tujhe nahi jaanta ? tune love guru banna tha yaar

Komal-aye chal chal kuch bhi! Subah se koi aur nahi mila kya chake ke jhad pe chadhane ke liye..

Avinash-abe sach bol raha hu main

Itne me docter suman waha aayi aur komal ko check karke dawaiya likh di aur use discharge de diya aur dono hospital ke baahar aaye..

Idhar aniket college pahucha, shravni college me hi thi, aniket ne use canteen me chalne kaha to usne saaf mana kar diya aur akhir me haar ke aniket bola

Aniket-main 2 ghante tumhari raah dekhunga canteen me, aaj mili to theek nahi fir kabhi mulakat nahi hogi

Itna bol ke aniket canteen me jake baith gaya, komal ko call karke puchtach ki aur shravni ki raah dekhne laga, use pura yakin tha ke shravni aayegi aur adha ghanta raah dekhne ke baad shravni aayi aur aakar aniket ke samne wali khurchi par jakar baith gayi par kuch boli nahi aur fir aniket ne baat shuru ki

Aniket-kyo faltu me dimag me gussa bhar rakhi ho? Chhodo is baat ko

Par shravni kuch nahi boli

Aniket-avi aur komal mere bahut karibi dost hai.

Ab aniket ki baat beech me todti shravni boli

Shravni-aur main? Main koi nahi hu?

Aniket-maine aisa kab kaha hai, tum mera pehla pyaar ho shravni

Shravni-tum agar mujhse pyar karte to mera kaha maante

Aniket-acha mujhe batao tumhe kya problem hai avi aur komal se? bhul gayi kya ke aaj avi aur komal ki wajah se hi hum sath hai fir unse kya dikkat hai tumhe

Shravni-mujhe wo dono pasand nahi

Aniket-aur aisa kyu?

Shravni-mujhe nahi pata

Aniket-pata nahi matlab koi to reason hoga

Shravni-pata nahi

Aniket-tumhe nahi pata to kise pata hai fir

Shravni-mujhe wo pasand nahi bas

Aniket-arey par kisi ko napasand karne ke liye koi reason to hona chahiye na?

Shravni-ab jab baat nikli hi hai to batati hu, mujhe na wolog pasand hai na unki bhasha pasand hai aur na unka acharan pasand hai

Aniket-bhasha me kya problem hai, aur dost to aise hi baat karte hai

Shravni-bahut kharab language ka use karte hai wo, sirf chillana, gandi galiya aur hamesha ek dusre ko niche dikhane ki shart..

Aniket-harami, halkat, nalakay ye kya galiya hai kya, ha agar anjan aadmi ko de to galiya ho sakti hai par dosto me nahi, dosto me inhe gali nahi maante, aur ye sab sirf wohi bolte hai kya? Main bhi to bolta hu na unke sath

Shravni-yahi, yahi mujhe nahi pasand, tum mujhe ache se baat karte ho par unke sath ekdum alag rehte ho, mujhe kabhi aise nahi bolte tum

Aniket-wo dost hai mere aur tum pyar ho, agar tumhe dikkat na ho to main tumse bhi aise hi bolunga

Shravni-chii! Khabardar agar mujhe aise baat ki to

Aniket-theek hai main abse kisi ko bhi gali nahi dunga bas fir to theek hai

Shravni-kuch theek nahi hai tumhe unki sangat chhodni padegi

Ab aniket ka para chadhne laga tha aur usne saaf saaf kaha

Aniket-wo to nahi hoga

Shravni- mujhse pyaar karte ho to jarur hoga

Aniket-par mujhe ye samajh nahi aa raha hai ki hamare pyaar ka aur mere dosto ka kya sambandh hai

Shravni-hai na, sambandh hai, insaan ki pehchan uske dosto se hoti hai aur ye aise mawali sadakchap dost hai tumhare, mujhe bilkul nahi pasand, wo avinash aur komal bas galiya dete rehte hai maramari karne wale gunde

Ab aniket ka gussa bhadak gaya tha aur wo table par hath maarte huye bola

Aniket-bas bahut hua shravni ab agar avi aur komal ke bare meek shabd bhi bola na to thobda suja dunga kya samajhti kya hai be tu khud ko? Terko kya laga tere liye main apne dosto ko chhod dunga? Arey aniket rane thukta hai aise pyaar pe jo use uske dosto se alag kare, kya to bole pyar? Pyaar ka p bhi jaanti ho kya tum pagal ladki, jiske naam se yaha baith ke tu chilla rahi hai na usi ne mujhe tujhe manane bheja hai aur wo mawali, sadakchap gunde? Tere rup pe fida hua ye jindagi ki sabse badi galti kar li maine, dikhne me sunder hai tu par man ki kali hai, kabhi shakal dekhi hai aaine me apni aur khud se pucha hai ki kyu koi tumhara dost nahi hai? Ye tumhare isi swabhav ki wajahse, us din suman ne mujhe hug kiya to bada gussa dikha rahi thi, kabhi socha haitumhari soch kitni ghatiya hai, ek ladka aur ladki dost banke nahi mil sakte kya? Par tumhe nahi samjhega kyuki tumhare dimag me gobar bhara hai, komal ka bola hua aaj samajh aaya ki shravni matlab gobar, arey dusre par ungli uthane se pehle khud ke ander jhak lena chahiye, bas kuch bhi shabd jodne se kavitaye nahi banti uske liye bhvanao ko samajhna padta hai aayibadi kavita likhne wali, tujhe bura na lage isiliye kaha nahi kabhi par aaj bolta hu, sun! is prithvi ke alawa kahi aur bhi jivan hua to waha ke log bhi bolenge ki teri kavitaye kitni ghatiya aur bakwas hoti hai, dimag ki maa behan kar di be pure

Aniket ki baat sunkar shravni rone lagi jisse aniket aur bhi khawal gaya

Aniket-ab rone jaisa kya hya, sach hajam nahi hua, dusre ko bolte samay acha lagta hai na par khud ke bare me sunne pe rona aata hai, nafrat hone lagi hai be tumse aura b main keh raha hu apni ye shakalmeko dobara mat dikhana chalo utho aur kat lo idhar se
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Shravni tad se uthi aur aniket ko jhapad maarne ke liye hath uthaya to aniket ne uska hath hawa me hi pakad liya

Aniket-ye galti mat karna ek baar maine ye sehan kiya hai aur main ladkiyo ki ijjat karta hu isiliye maaf kar raha hu, teri jagah ye harkat kisi ladke ne ki hoti to wo dobara hath uthane layak nahi bachta

Aniket ne uska hath jhatak diya aur shravni waha se pair patakte huye nikal gayi, aniket bhi baahar aaya aur usne apne katte pe aake ek cigarette sulgayi, ab use thoda theek lag raha tha.
 

[color=rgb(184,]Update 28[/color]


Ab hum aisa keh sakte hai ke shravni ke sath aniket ka breakup ho gaya tha aur breakup ke baad bhale hi wo aniket upper se kuch dikha nahi raha tha par ander se wo kafi dukhi tha, wo ghar par hi ruka raha kahi aana jana nahi, avinash ne ise kafi phone lagaye par wo hamesha baat to taal deta aur akhir me komal boli

Komal-mat pareshan kar use, use recover hone ke liye thoda samay de, thoda akela aur free rehne de use.

Avinash-arey par aise kaise akela chhod du use..?

Komal-avi tu to aise baat kar raha hai jaise tu aniket ko jaanta hi na ho, wo agar yaha aa bhi gaya to hame nahi batana to dur wo us bare me kuch bolega bhi nahi..

Avinash-ha ye bhi sahi hai

Komal-fir use akela rehde de wo normal hua to khud hi aa jayega.

Aniket do dino tak ghar se baahar nahi nikla aur isi time uska bhai yash waha aaya aur use apne sath 1 hafte ke liye leke gaya..(yash yaad hai na aniket ke chacha ka ladka to aao ab uske bare me thoda jaante hai)

To yash ye aniket ke chacha ka ladka hai sage chacha ka nahi par rishtedari me, swabhav se pura aniket ke jaisa to hua yu ke in bhaisahab ke life me bhi chal raha hai thoda love lafda locha aur apna hero aniket thehra love guru bhale hi khud ka breakup hua ho par bhai ki naiyaa to paar lagwani hi thi isiliye anket uske sath chala gaya, waise is yash ki love story aniket se bilkul alag hai par ab agar wo puri kahani yaha bataunga to 50 update ki story tayar ho jayegi isiliye wo plot ek alag story ke liye agar aap log bole to iske baad wahi shuru kar denge
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, to is bhai yash ko hua ek ladki se pyaar aur ab dono ko pyaar ho gaya to inke gharwalo ko ye sab manjoor nahi tha isiliye dono alag bhi ho gaya aura b aniket ka kaam tha inhe ek karwana par aniket ne kuch yuk and kiye ki wo aur alag ho gaye matlab ladka ladki nai unke pariwar wale

Idhar najane kaha se shravni ka aur fir college ki maramari ka kissa narayanrao tak pahuch gaya aur usme unka aur gussa bhadkaya priya (yash ki premika) ki kahani ne fir kyat ha narayanrao ne pehle hi aniket babu ke aane ki tayari kar rakhi thi aur aniket jaise hi yash ke yaha se wapis aaya to uski narayanrao ne badhiya tarike se aarti utari.

Idhar aniket wapis aa gaya hai ye sunke avinash aur komal usse milne pahucheto aniket ghar me hi tha aur khas baat ke ki ghar me bhi goggle laga ke baitha tha jisse avinash ko thoda ashcharya hua

Avinash-anya abe ye kya hai ghar me goggle laga ke kyu ghum raha hai aankhe aayi hai kya (eye flu, cunjuctivitis) ?

Jispar aniket baat chipate huye bola

Aniket-arey kuch nahi ye to aise hi.

Avinash-aise hi
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Aniket ne goggle nikala to uski ek aankh neeli huyi padi thi jise dekh ke avinash apne shirt ki bahi uper karte bola

Avinash-kisne mara teko tu uska naam bata khali nahi uske hath pair tode maine aaj to mera naam bhi avi nahi

Aniket-nahi tod payega tu

Avinash-abe tu naam to bata khali

Aniket-narayanrao rane :sigh1:

Naam sunte hu avinash niche baith gaya

Avinash-aaila teko kaka ne foda hai to sorry main isme kuch nahi kar sakta kar kuch bhi bol umar ke hisab se tagda foda hai teko
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Avinash aur komal tali deke hasne lage

Avinash-par hua kya? Kyu mara tujhe ?

Aniket ne jab puri hakikat batai to wo aur hasne lage

Sham ko aniket ne avinash ko cal karke bulaya, gaon ke baahar ek tekdi thi, aniket aur avinash do hi samay us tekdi pe jate the ek jab party karni hoti tab aur dusra jab wo udas hote tab

Tekdi ki jagah bahut sunder aur shant thi aur waha tekdi pe ek bada aur juna ped tha aur uske aaju baju chabutara bana hua tha, waha kisi prakar ka halla nahi tha ekdum shant vatavaran, awaj tha to bas haw aka aur ped ke patto ka, teki thodi uchi jagah pe hone ki wajah se waha se shahar ke light raat ke samay me dekhe ja sakte the , ekdum nirmanushya sthal, purnina ki raat hone ki wajah se waha chand ki roshni maujood th, matlab na to waha purn prakash tha aur na hi purn andhera..

Aniket ne char beer li jise dekh ke avinash samajh gaya ke aaj tekdi party hai, dono tekdi par pahuche aur us ped ke niche jakar baith gaye, dono chup the, avinash ke dhyan me aa gaya ke aniket ko apne man ki baat kehni hai par use shabdo me kaise bayan kare use samajh nahi aa raha tha isiliye dono shanti se beer ke ghut le rahe the, kya kamal ki hoti hai na ye dosti bhi, avinash bas aniket ki shanti ko sun raha tha aur bagair shabdo ki uski vyatha ko mehsus kar raha tha aur aakhir me aniket bola

Aniket-avi us din hospital me jab shravn meko chhod ke gayi tab tu kuch bola tha, kya tha wo

Avinash-acha wo, ye to hota hi tha wala

Aniket-kehna kya chahta that u

Avinash muskuraya..

Avinash-uske pehle ek kahani sonata hu sun, main ek baar ek mele me gaya tha, waha main ek dukan me ek sunder sa tajmahal dekha, wo tajmahal itna sunder tha ke maine use kharid liya, chotasa, hath ki hatheli par sama jaye aisa, sbubhra, safed ekdum, aakhir taj hai wo, prem ka Pratik apne desh ki shan, koi murkh hi hoga jise taj me khubsurti na dikhe, main bhi uski khubsurti pe mohit ho gaya aur maine use kharid liya aur ghar ke liye nikla, main bahut khush tha use kharid kar, aate huye raste me bhi maine do teen baar use khol kar dekha, us taj ko bag me rakhne ki meri icha nahi thi maine use apne hath me lekar hi ghar aaya, ghar aakar maine sabko wo taj dikhaya sab khush huye use dekh kar, maine use apne room me tavle par rakha, raat me bhi main najane kitni der use dekhta raha, subah uthne par mere dhyan me aaya ke table par aur bhi saman jaise meri kitabe wagaire rakhe the, unse taj ko dhakka lag kar wo gir kar tut gaya to.. isiliye maine use uthakar TV par rakha, laga ki ab yaha dhakka nahi lagega ye safe jagah hai par do din baad dhyan me aaya ke uspar dhul baithne lagi hai.. maine fir use ache sesaaf karkealmari me rakha, waha wo safetha par ab main use dekh nahi pa raha tha aur jaise jaise din beette gaye main taj ko bhul gaya, ab to yaad bhi nahi ki maine use kab dekha tha

Aniket ko thoda thoda andaj aa raha tha avi ki bato ka par wo sahi se samjha nahi tha to bola

Aniket-avya chadh gayi kya teko kya badbada raha hai sahi se bata

Avinash fir muskuraya aur bola

Avinash-main us taj me ek pal me mohit ho gaya tha isiliye use kharid liya par agle sare pal use sambhalne me nikal gaye, tere sath bhi yahi hua hai, tu ek pal me shravni par mohit hua, uske aur tere swabhav ke jamin aasman ka fark tha fir bhi tu mohit hua aur isiliye tu use sambha;ne laga aur ek din jab tera moh tuta to tu jag gaya, asal me jise tu pyaar samajh raha thaw o to bas akarshan tha aur akarshan aur pyar me yahi fark hai, jaise jasise din beette hai akarshan kam hota hai aur pyaar badhta jata hai, tum dono yaha galat nikle aur ye baat us din mere dhyan me aa gayi isiliye main bola tha ke ye to sala ek din hona hi tha.

Aniket-matlab mera shravni pe pyaar na hoke main bas uski taraf attaracted tha

Avinash-hao

Aniket-aur teko aisa kyu lagta hai

Avinahs-bahut si bate hai, thoda apne dimag pe jor daal smajh jayega, pyaar kabhi adhikar nahi batata be, aur jab aap kisi se pyaar karte ho to uspar aapka pura vishwas hona chahiye uske bagair koi matlab nahi hai. Shravni yahi chuk gayi, uski shak karne ke swabhav se use bhi nahi samajh aaya ke uske dil me pyaar ki jagah shak bhar gaya hai, uske ahankar ne kabhi use pyaar karne hi nahi diya..

Aniket ke aankho se ek aasu tapka

Aniket-avi tu meri jagah hota to kya karta

Avinash-meko lagta hai tune ab shravni se dur rehna chahiye

Aniket-matlab apne naseeb me pyaar nahi hai

Avinash komal ki di huyi kasam me bandha hua tha use yaad karke bola

Avinash-apan sale karmheen daridri, sab kuch aankho ke samne hai sab samajh raha hai par bol nahi sakta aur jise bolna chahiye use samajh nahi raha.

Avinash ki baat sunkar aniket sawaliya najro se use dekhne laga..


To Be Continued.
 

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Avinash ki baat sunkar aniket sawaliya najro se use dekhne laga..

Aniket-avi teko koi pasand hai kya? Kabhi bataya nahi tu.

Avinash-kash!! Par nahi..

Aniket-fir teko ye itna sab kaise malum be pyaar ke bare me?

Avinash-prem kya ladki aur ladke ke beech hi ho sakta hai kya? Ek dost dusre dost se pyar nahi kar sakta kya? Ham bhi to bachpan se sath hai, aur tere to kitne upkar hai mere pe agar tu nahi hota to aaj main kahi majduri kar raha hota

Aniket-bsdk hajar baar bola hai tere ko ye baat mat nikala kar ar maine bola na sara paisa byaj sahit wasulunga par abi ye chhod pyaar ke bare me bata

Avinash-kya pravachan chalu hai kya? Ke main koi bawaji hu?

Aniket- waisa nai be par aaj tak dekha hua avi aur prem ke bare me bolne wala avi inme fark hai re, kaha se sikha ye sab

Avinash-wo kya hai na bhai uperwala akal baat raha than a to main drum leke gaya tha aur tu katori samjha..

Aniket-bsdk matlab merko akal nah hai aisa bolna hai ka tujhe

Avinash-hoti to ab tak teko tera pyaar dikh jata na?

Ab aniket me thodi hi kyu na ho shravni ab bhi baki thi siliye wo avinash ke bolne ka matlab nahi samajh raha tha

Aniket-mujhe to pyaar dikha tha re par mera naseeb use hi nahi dikha

Aniket ki baat sun ke avi ne sar pe hath maar liya aur man me bola

Aninash- iske dimag ka board jab tak kora nahi hoga tab tak komal ka naam likhna mushkil hai

Aur avinash ko aise khoya dekh ke aniket bola\

Aniket- kya hua avya? Kya soch raha hai?

Aur socte sochte avi flow flow me bol gaya

Avinash-board kora kaise kare soch raha hu

Par aniket ko kuch samjha nahi

Aniket-board? Kaisa board, abe kya bol raha?

Avinash ke dhyan me aaya ke wo kya bol raha hai aur wo baat sambhalte huye bola

Avinash-kuch nahi meko lag raha jyada ho gayi aaj

Aniket-abe par ab tak pehli bhi khatam nahi huyi hai

Dono fir se beer pine lage aur aniket dobara bola

Aniket-kyu kiya hoga re usne aisa? Kya mila hoga use aisa karke?

Avinash-swabhav, swabhav hota hai hare k ka, aur gussa mat hona anya wo tere layki ki nahi thi

Aniket-aur teko aisa kyu lagta hai?

Avinash- ek baat ho to batau, shuruwat to yaha se hai ke pyaar logo ko jodna sikhata hai aur wo logo ko todne nikli thi, hamesha ye mat karo wo mat karo, aisa mat bolo, aur tu bas bail jaise uske saamne mundi hilata tha, waise dekha jaye to galti teri bhi hai, tu agar shuru se saribaate clear rakhta tobaat alag thi par tu to uske roop ke moh me un bato me bhi hami bharta chala gaya jo tere swabhav me hi nahi thi, aur sabse buri baat matlab jab tumhara breakup hua to wo apni galtiya manni chhod kar tujhe thappad lagane chali thi, aur bhi bahut si bate hai jo batati hai ke usne tere se kabhi pyaar nahi kiya tha aur wo tere layak nahi thi

Aniket-avya fir jo mere liye sahi hogi wo kaisi hogi?

Avinash-ekdum tere jaisi, tere jaisi mastikhor par saaf dil ki, sirf tumhari masti ko na samajh ke usme shamil hone wali, tere pe dil ki gehrayi se pyaar karne wali aur tujhe free chhodne wali, tere pyaar ne puri tarah dubi huyi aur tujhpar vishwas karne wali, tere jaisi bindaass yaro ki yaar ladki suit hogi teko.

Aniket-sale avya puri beer utar di tune meri, sachme aisi koi ladki hogi kya? Itnni sab qualities wali, ye sab ek ladki me mil jayegi kya, shravni thi kya aisi.

Ab avinash ka dimag fir gaya

Avinash-abey BC bsdk anya aaj ke baad us chiraan ka naam mere saamne liya to chappal se marunga, abe neech aadmi main teko chand dikhaa chahta hu aur tu gobar me atak raha, mar tu main chala tera kuch nahi ho sakta,

Aniket ne use hath pakad ke wapis niche baithaya aur kaan pakadte huye bola

Aniket-avya aise adhe me chhod ke mat ja be apne bhai ko, maaf karo maaf karo aage se nai lunga uska naam

Avinash-dekh main dil se bata raha hu, uska naam hi nahi usko dil se bhi nikal daal, meri guarantee hai hai meri batayi huyi ladki teko jarur milegi aur sirf milegi nahi balki jindagi bhar tera sath bhi degi

Aniket-para kaha milegi wo?

Avinash-milegi aas paas hi par uske pehle aankho pe se shravni naam ki patti hata

Aniket apne khayalo me kho gaya aur avinash ne bhi use nahi cheda. dono baitha ke apni beer pine lage aur fir aniket bola

Aniket-avya main sahime kismet wala hu be jo tere jaisa saccha dost mila hai, sabko aise dost nahi milte.

Avinash-ha na chal fir pair chu ke ashirwad lele.

Aniket-ja na bsdk itna bhi acha nahi hai tu lawde hudd

Baad me wo dono ekdusre ke kandhe pe hath rakh ke waha se nikal gaye.

Baad me wapis se college shuru aur fir wahi tikdi aur unki tigdam bhi, aninash aniket aur komal wapis se apne kaam pe lag gaye the aur kamal baat ye ki itna sab hone ke baad bhi shravni ko apni galti ka ashaas nahi hua tha, galti manna to dur wo ulta usne is sab ka dost avinash aur komal pe laga diya tha aur apne dosto ko ye bata rahi thi ke kaise komal aur avinash ne aniket ke dimag me uske liye ulti baate bhari hai aur jab uski dost jo komal ki bhi dost thi usne ye sab bate in teeno ko batayi to aniket bhadak gaya

Aniket-isko to ab acha sabak sikhana padega..

Par komal pe is baat ka jara bhi asar nahi hua ulta wo aniket ko samjhate huye boli

Komal-arey jane de anya kyu dimag me gussa bhar raha hai, jane de usko jo bolna hai bolne de

Aniket-kammo agar wo mere bare me bolti ti meko ghanta fark nahi padta par tum dono ke bare me bola hua mujhe sehan nahi hoga

Ab avinash samjhate huye bola

Avinash-hamko ghanta fark nahi pada ab kya jake maarega use?

Aniket-avya main nahi chhodne wala usko

Avinash-agar sach me use satana hoga to kuch alag karna hoga bhidu

Aniket sochne laga aur fir thode samay me bola

Aniket-jalne wale ko aur jalaye to

Avinash-abe kehna kya hai teko

Aniket apne idea pe ekdum khush tha wo bola

Aniket-usko jalana hoga to main agar dusri ladki ko girlfriend bana ke uske saamne lau to?

Aniket uth ke khada hua aur komal se bola

Aniket-meri premika banegi??

Aniket ki baat sun kea vi bhi apni jagah se uth gaya

Avinash-arey sahi idea hai

Aur komal ko to usne jo suna uspar vishwas hi nahi ho raha tha aur uske baad jo usne kiya uske baki logo ko yakin nahi hua...

To Be Continued...
 

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