"sorry mai nahi kahungi yash, kyunki mere baare me pata hone ke bawjood tum mere Saath relationship me rahe" sanchita boli

"mai tumhe school se hi did hi dil Me chahta tha sanchita. College me propose karne ka socha. Kya mai galat hoon??" yash bola

"college ka final year khatam ho gaya yash. Look at bunty. Kitna professional hai wo Yaar. Bunty ko choro tumhara khud ka relative dhruv ko dekho. Sharon tumhare bua ki ladki hai na?? Fir usne kaise dhruv se Shaadi ki?? Kyunki use pata tha ki dhruv paisewala hai"sanchita boli

Sharon aur dhruv ke love story ke baare me ise kya pata?? Sharon ne kitni takleef sahi thi dhruv ko paane ke liye. Ye jaante hue ki dhruv ka apna koi nahi fir bhi usne dhruv ka haath thama. Wo to baad me dhruv ke asli Maa Baap mile. Khair is relationship me aur kuch rakha hi nahi

"to hum kal se, kal se kya aaj aur abhi se Sirf ache dost hai yash. Please isse kuch zyada expect mat karna" sanchita boljar chali gayi

Aur yash ke na chahte hue bhi aansu aankhon se behte rahe. Lekin sanchita ko iski parwah nahi thi.

Apne past se present me a gaya yash. Aur whisky ka glass poora khali kar diya usne. Apne hosh me nahi tha wo. Kareeb ek bottle whisky khali kar chuka tha

Komal?? Abhi tak nahi aayi, to kya komal bhi use chor chali gayi.??rohan ne phone kar bataya tha ki raghav ne phone kiya tha komal ko, ye Baat komal ne use kyun nahi batayi??
Yash ne phone nikala aur komal ko phone lagaya

"Haan yash boliye" komal boli

"itni raat ho gayi hai t tum kahan ho??" yash ne poocha

"mai to a rahi hoon. Actually thoda kaam tha isliye late ho gayi hoon

" jaldi ao komal"yash bola

Jaldi?? Kya Baat Ho gayi. Yash ko it a pareshan kabhi nahi dekha komal ne

"please zara Gaadi ka speed badhao" bol komal yash ko phone karne lagi. Damn it phone kyun nahi utha rahe hai yash. Kahin unhe raghav ke baare me pata na chal gaya ho

A agarwo mujhe chor denge to?? Nahi nahi yash ji aise baaton me rishte nahi todenge. Lekin agar toda to kya karegi komal??
Kal tak jo Sirf ek formality ki Shaadi thi. Aaj ek bandhan ban gayi haj
Oh god kisi tarah udkar ye Gaadi ghar pohuncha de

Gadi ruki aur komal ne utarkar daud lagai.
daudkar pohuncha gai apne kamre me
Andhera tha. Komal ne light jalai to dekha yash farsh par gire hue the Ur unke haatho se kuch door whisky ki glass thi

"oh my god yash ji" bol komal ne ysh ko sahara dekar uthaya

"oh..... Kom.... Al.... Tum a gayi........ Mujhe laga... Chorkar ja chuki ho raghav ke.... Saath" ashe me yash bola

Komal ne yash ko bed me litaya. Aur sar par haath fera

"nahi yash mai kahi nahi gayi. Yahi thi mai. Yahi mera ghar hai. Kahan jaungi sab chorkar?? Tumhe cborkar" rote hue komal. Boli

"mujhe chorkar mat Jaana komal...... Mar jaunga.. Mai" itna bolnr ke baad yash hosh me nahi reh saka

Komal bohut dertak roti rahi yash ke seene me apna chehra chupakar
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"itna late??" nisha gussese tilmilane lagi
Rohan ka wait kar rahi thi nisha. Aur chahe kitna bhi Nafrat kare rohan se.use dekhe bina chain nahi milta nisha ko

"hi nisha" Roshan muskurate hue a raha tha.

"hi my foot. Ab a rahe ho idiot??" nisha ka gussa foot pada

"wo actually mere rishte ki Baat chal rahi thi" rohan bola

"r rishta?? Wtf?? Abhi Shaadi karne ki umra hai tumhari?"nisha boli

" ladki meri achi dost bhi hai nisha, mujhe lagta hai mujhe shaadikar leni chahiye"roham bola

"tum nasamajh ho rohan. Abhi tumhare khelne koodne ke din hai, abhi kya Shaadi Yaar" nisha boli

"pata nahi nisha. Waise chalo coffee peete hai" bol rohan aage badh gaya
Nisha ne ek halki si smile di. Lekin pata nahi aisa lag raha tha ki kahin Dard ho raha tha

Aajkal is idiot ke bina chlta hi nahi nisha ka. Baat Baat par ladai jhagda karna. Fir kabhi kabhi hasna. Rohan kab itna close ho gaya pata hi nahi chala. Raat bhar baatein karna. Milna aur ek Saath coffee peete hue apne kisse sunana.

"hello?? Kya???? Haan mai abhi appointment fix karta hoon" Rohan ke phone call ne nisha ki soch me rukawat dal di

"mujhe Jaana hoga nisha urgently" bol rohan daudte hue bahar nikal gaya
 
Rohan jab hospital pohuncha tab yash already admit ho chuka tha
Bagal me komal baithi hui thi aankhen laal thi
Zaahir hai royi hogi khub

"tu kab aaya be??" doctor ne rohan se jaise hi poocha komal chaunk gayi. Rohan kab aaya use pata hi nahi chala

"dekh rohan apni bhabhi ko samjha yash ko kuch halki si hypertension hui hai. Isliye bas ek do din normal hone ke baad ghar ja sakta hai" Dr bola

"imran bhaiyya darne ki zaroorat to nahi hai na??" Rohan ne poocha

"are nahi bilkul nahi bas thoda normal hote hi mai khud drive kar ghar le Aunga khush??" bol muskurane lage Dr imran

Rohan bhi muskura utha. Fir komal ki aur dekha. Kuch khaya nahi hoga bhabhi ne

"bhabhi kuch ke aaun??aapne to kuch khaya nahi lagta hai" Rohan bola

"mai thik hoon rohan" bol yash ko dekhne lagi.yash ne bohut drink kar rakhi thi. Pata nahi kyun. Aur pehli baar yash ke aankhon me ek darr dikha. Kuch khone ka darr. Kaafi der tak jab utha nahi tak komal ne fouran hospital phone kar diya

Tabhi ashok saraf aur urvashi a gayi thi. Ashok. Saraf ne baatein ki doctor se

"Maa nahi aayi papa??" komal ne poocha

"Maa?? Koun Maa?? Jis aurat ko apne siva koi nahi dikhta use tum. Yahan expect kar rahi ho beta??" ashok bola

"bhabhi aap tension mat lijiye bhaiyya thik ho jayenge" urvashi ne komal ke kandhe par haath rakhkar bola

Fir kuch der baad yash ko hosh aaya. Aur usne komal ko apne Paas paaya to rahat ki Saans li usne

Kaafi baatein hui aur urvashi, ashok aur rohan nikal gaye Gaadi me
Komal hospital me hi rahi. Yash ke paas

"komal mujhe lagta hai tumhe jaana chahiye" yash bola

"kahan??" komal ne poocha

"wahi khurana ke ghar. Uski wife ki zindagi khatre me hai" yash bola

"lekin yash....".

"insan ki zindagi ki keemat business se zyada hai." yash bola

Komal aur ek. Minute bhi nahi ruki. Fouran Mr khurana ke ghar gayi.

"t tum??" khurana ko yakeen nahi hua ki usne kise dekha

"Haan khurana sahab har koi aap jaisa nahi hota. Aur waise bhi apne pati ke Kehne par aayi hun wo bhi aapki wife ke liye" bol komal chupchaap mrs khurana ke kamre me gayi

Waha mrs khurana leti hui thi. Komal ne unke sar par haath fera. Mrs khurana ne dheere dheere aankhen kholi

"tu.... Tu..... A gayi... Beti" mrs khurana boli

Beti?? Ye kya hai??? Komal ko samajh nahi aaya ki kya jawab de

"bata na tu meri beti hai na??" mrs khurana boli

Komal ko abhi bhi samajh me nahi a raha tha kya bole

"bata na.... Tu Meri beti hai na??" bilakh bilakh kar rone ragi mrs khurana

"h Haan. Aapki beti hoon mai" bol komal lipat gayi mrs khurana se. Agar inke man ko isse shanti milti hai to aur kya chahiye unhe

Kuch baatein karne ke baad komal ne apne haathon se khana khilaya aur chain se so gayi mrs khurana. Komal ne kal fir wapas aane ka wada kiya aur Jaane lagi

"thanks komal. Mai...." khurana ko aage bolne nahi diya komal ne

"aapne liye nahi apke wife ke liye kiya maine" bol chali gayi komal. Khurana sar jhukakar khada raha
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Sujata ne kapde pack kar liye the

"kahan ja rahi hai beti??" mrs saraf ne poocha

"apne sasural" sujata ne jawab diya aur bag ko check karneagi kuch chuta to nahi??

"kya bakwas kar rahi hai. Tu wapas us bhikari ke Paas Jaana chahti hai??" mrs saraf boli

"izzat se Naam lijiye mera pati hai wo" sujata ne chilla uthi

"oh please tu khud hi to kehti thi ye sab. Ab ami Keh rahi hoon to bura lag raha hai" mrs saraf boli

"andhi thi mai. Aur behkawe me a gayi thi Maa. Ab aur nahi" bol apna suitcase lekar nikal gayi sujata

"accept karega tujhe??" mrs saraf ne ek kutil smile ke Saath ye baat kahi

"naak ragad loongi. Lekin apne pati ko manakar rahu gi mai.lekin aap kya karengi. Aapke Saamne aapka parivar aapse door chala gaya Maa. Aur aap Sirf kitty parties me hi busy rahi. Taras aata hai aap par" do took bol sujata chali gayi

Mrs saraf samajh gayi ki ab sujata ko rokna namumkin hai. Isliye chup rehna hi behtar samjha usne

Isi beech ashok aur urvashi bhi a gaye the. Aapas me baat karte hue kisi ne mrs saraf ki aur dekha hi nahi

Mrs saraf ko achanak darr sa lagne laga. Sujata, urvashi uska apna pati aur beta. Sab door hote ja rahe hai usse. Aur iski ek hi wajah hai.

Komal
 
Sujata ke pair manav ke flat tak ruk gaye
Haath door bell bajane ke liye uth nahi rahe the. Aakhir kis muh se manav ka saamna karegi wo

Nahi jab galti ki hai to saza bhi milni chahiye. Chaahe naak hi kyun na ragadna pade. Manav ko manakar hi manegi wo

DING DONG

darwaza kholte hi manav chaunk pada. Saamne khadi thi sujata. Sar jhukaye
Thodi der tak dono khamosh rahe

"ander aane ke liye nahi kahenge" sar jhukakar hi sujata boli

"oh ander a jao suj....arey ye kya" manav ne sujata ko uthaya jo manav ke pair chune ke liye neeche jhuki

Lekin sujata ko jaise hi manav ne uthaya usne dekho ki sujata ke aankhon me aansu the

"maaf kar dijiye mujhe, andhi ho gayi thi is chakachaund bhare zindagi me, lekin.... Lekin fir maine ek shaks ko dekha jo bilkul aap jaisa tha. Haan komal bhabhi wo bhi khuddar hai. Ghamand nahi hai unme aur wo bohut achi hai. Unke wajah se hi mai samajh paayi aap mere liye kya maayne rakhte hai. Mujhe maaf nahi karenge?? "sujata roye ja rahi thi
Manav ne shant karaya sujata ko aur ghar ke ander le gaya
Uske aansu poche aur saman bedroom me le gaya

" chai piogi?? "manav ne poocha to sujata ne Haan me sar hilaya
Manav chai banane ke liye chala gaya

Sujata charo aur dekh rahi thi. Ghar achi tarah se saja hua tha. Shayad wo bhi itni achi tarah se dekhbhal kar paati
Ghar me kuch naye saman bhi manav lekar aaye hai

Ek car ka brochure bhi hai. Yaa i manav car le raha hai
Man ji man sujata ko garv hone laga apne pati par

"ye lo chai, ye ek. Chori si car ke liye loan le raha hoon. Promotion ho gayi to socha tha ki ye le loon" manav bola

Sujata kuch nahi boli. Chup rahi

Manav uthkar kamre se bahar nikal gaya aur ek phone lagaya usne

"hello kavya"

"Haan bolo manav" kavya boli

"wo.... Sujata wapas a gayi hai" manav bola

"awesome manav. I'm very happy for you. Ab use tang mat karna thik hai, warna sar tod dungi tumhara. Chalo bye" bol kavya ne phone rakha aur zameen par baith bilakh bilakh kar rone lagi

Wahi manav ne bhi phone rakh diya aur usne dekha ki sujata ghar ke kaam me lag gayi hai
Manav man hi man muskuraya
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"urvashi beta aaj shopping par chale??" mrs saraf ne urvashi se poocha

"sorry mom aaj hum teen besties ka movie night hai mai, komal Bhabhi aur nisha bhabhi" bol urvashi Jaane lagi

"apne Maa ke liye bhi Waqt nahi hai beta??" mrs saraf dukhi man se boli

"Waqt aur tumhe??ma tumne kab Waqt diya tha hum bhai bhai behno ko??" urvashi ne poocha
Iska koi jawab nahi tha mrs saraf ke paas

"pehle iska jawab dhoondo fir baat karenge" bol urvashi nikal gayi

Huh jaise ki aur koi nahi hai shopping Jaane ke liye soch mrs saraf ne sanchita ko phone lagaya

"arey aunty aapne phone kiya is Waqt??" sanchita ne poocha

"wo beta soch rahi thi ki kya tum free ho to shopping chale??" mrs saraf ne poocha

"ohh sorry aunty mujhe aaj ek important kaam hai. Kabhi aur cgaleng ek Saath Saas Bahu bankar thik hai, chaliye bye" bol call disconnect kar diya sanchita ne. Lekin galti se wo disconnect nahi ho paya

"arey koun tha sanchu??" bunty ne poocha

"thi ek buddhi. Jisko jawani ka shouk chara hai. Itni buddhi ho gayi fir bhi make up aise lagati hai jaise koi 20 saal ki ladki ho" sanchita boli

Bunty door se hasne laga

Ye sab sunte hi mrw saraf ke haath se mobile choot kar gir gaya aur sa chakra kar gi ne hi wali thi ki do haath ne unko thaam liya
Adhkhuli aankhon se ek chehra hi dikh paaya unko chehra the komal ka
 
Mrs saraf ne aankhen band karte waqt sir Komal ki dhundhli tasveer dekhi

"Maa??kaisi tabiyat hai ab appli??"Komal ne jab poochha tab mrs saraf ne khud ko lete hue paaya

Kuch na bol sirf dekhti ja rahi thi Komal ko.kabhi koi mauka nahi chhoda tha mrs saraf ne Komal ko neecha dikhane me.aur aaj wahi Komal uske paas hai.na sirf sahara diya tha Komal ne balki unhe lita kar doctor ko phone karke check up karwakar yash ko bhi phone kar diya

"Aapne bataya nahi kaisi tabiyat hai ab aapki??"Komal ne fir poochha

"Kyun??"mrs saraf sirf itna hi bol paayi

"Matlab??"komal ne poochha

"Kyun meri jaan bachai tumne.har waqt dutkarti thi,bhala bura kehti thi,neecha dikhane ki koi mauka nahi chhodti thi.fir kyun tumne meri jaan bachai ??"mrs saraf boli

Komal chup rahi.sar jhuka liya fir boli
"Bachpan se hi maa ka pyaar nahi mila tha mujhe.jab aapko dekha tabhi man hi man me aapko apni maa maan baithi.aur shayad isliye aap jo kehti wo dekhti rahi .usme bhi aapka pyaar dikha mujhe.mujhe pata hai maa ki mai gareeb hoon na hi mera koi family back ground hai.isliye to is parivar ko apna maan baithi"

Komal ke na chahte hue bhi uske aankhon se aansu girate rahe

"Idhar a Komal??"mrs saraf ne Komal ko pyaar se bulaya

Komal waha aate hi uske haathon ko pakad liya unhone

"Mujhe maaf nahi karegi beta??mujhe pata hai mai na hi ek achi maa hoon na ek achi patni na ek achi aurat.lekin tune aaj ek badi seekh de di beta.ki sanskar aur achai bade gharon me hi nahi paaye jaate."mrs saraf muskurate hue boli

Tabhi yash,mr saraf, urvashi aur sujata a gaye

Mrs saraf hairan thi aur Komal ki aur dekh rahi thi.komal muskurai.usne hi sab ko bulaya tha.komal ki baat taalna koi nahi chahta tha

"Ab thik hai.doctor ne kaha bp kam ho gaya hai isliye rest chahiye thoda"Komal boli

"Thanks god mai to darr ho gaya tha.mai nikalta hoon shaam ko flight hai dubai me ek meeting hai meri"yash bola

"Koi kahi nahi ja raha aaj"Komal uthkar boli

"Matlab?faaltu ka mazak pasand nahi mujhe Komal"yash bola

"Mai bhi mazak nahi kar rahi.meeting jaye bhad me.maa se zyada important kuch nahi hai"Komal boli

"Bhabhi sahi keh rahi hai yash bhaiya"urvashi khadi ho gayi Komal ke liye

"Mai bhi Komal ke saath agree karti hoon"sujata boli

"Ruk ja na beta"mrs saraf boli

Yash ne komal ki aur dekha.halki si muskurahat chehre par rakhkar yash ki aur dekhe ja rahi thi

Yash ka man kar raha tha ki Komal ko pakadkar kiss kar de.kya???ye kya ho raha hai yash ko
Komal ki aur kheecha chala ja raha hai aajkal.aisa ehsas kabhi sanchita ke saath bhi nahi hua tha
Jaise matlab.....

"Yash baat karni hai"mr saraf bole.aur ishare ke saath bahar bula liya yash ko

"Komal ke saath shaadi jis zameen ke tukade ke liye kiya tha tumne wo ye raha"bol mr saraf ne ek kagaz ka dasta pakda diya hairan dikh rahe yash ko

"Tum jaise insaan ko acting karna shobha nahi deta yash.tum pehle bhi matlabi the.abhi bhi matlabi ho"mr saraf ne ek nazar yash ki aur dekha aur wapas kamre me jaane lage

Lekin jaate jaate ruk kar yash ki aur mud gaye
"Haan ek baat aur.komal is ghar me beti hai bahu nahi.kuch bhi hua use to ashok saraf ka tum wo roop dekhoge jo pehle nahi dekha tha"bol mr saraf kamre me dheere ander chale gaye

Ye sab ek shaks ne sun liya aur uske honto par muskurahat tairne lagi
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Saraf family me aaj bohut dino baad ek saath ek hone ka mauka mila tha
Rohan aur nisha bhi aaye the.jabki Manav bhi a chuka tha

Mrs saraf poori ki poori badal chuki thi.kitty parties se tauba aaj ghar me hi sabke saath time de rahi thi
Tabhi unka phone bajane laga

"Hello??"mrs saraf ne serious hokar phone uthaya

"Hello aunty kaisi hai aap??"sanchita ne doosri aur se poochha

"Kyun ??mere tabiyat ko kya hua??"mrs saraf boli

"Nahi khabar mili thi ki aapki tabiyat kharab thi isliye"sanchita boli

"Jiski Komal kaisi bahu,nahi bahu nahi beti ho uski tabiyat to jhat se thik honi hai"mrs saraf boli

"Aunty wo iski koi chaal hai wo aap par jaadu chalana chahti hai"sanchita boli

"Sanchita usne to kab ka jaadu chala diya sab par.apni achai ka jadu,apne sanskar ka jadu,apne pyaar se poore parivar par acha jaadu chalaya usne.mai andhi thi jo ise dekh na pai"mrs saraf boli

"Aunty aap...."sanchita aage bol na pai

"Sorry beta abhi busy hoon Komal aur mai carrom partner hai.urvashi aur sujata par bhari pad rahe hai.baad me baat karte hai"bol mrs saraf ne phone kaat diya

Sanchita ka gussa itna bada ki uske aankhon se aansu girne laga aur wo foot foot kar rone lagi
Ghar ka sara saman todne lagi bikherne lagi

Tabhi phone baj utha uska

"Hello??"sanchita ne phone uthaya

"Madam mai.ek khaas baat karni hai aapse"doosri aur se awaz aayi

"Bolo"sanchita boli

Fir doosri aur se jo suna sanchita uski aankhen chamak uthi

"Agar ye sach hua to paise itni milegi ki bas"sanchita boli.phone rakha aur paaglo ki tarah hasne lagi

"Yash tum sirf mere ho sirf mere.bas mare"sanchita ne yash ka photo nikal ke kiss kiya us par
 
"aapne Komal bhabhi ko bata diya??"rohan ne yash se poochha

"Nahi"itna hi bola yash aur kaanch ke sheeshe se bahar ke nazare dekhne laga.jab koi kam na ho paye to apna dhyan doosri aur karna hi sahi rehta hai

"Dekhiye sir,mai sirf itna kahunga ki aap sab kuch bata dijiye Komal bhabhi ko, kyunki kisi aur se ye sab sunkar unhe acha nahi lagega"rohan bola

Yash chup raha.kyunki chup rehne me hi sahi lag raha hai use.kyun??
Kyun nahi bata pa raha hai Komal ko ki jo shaadi usne ki thi wo bas zameen ka ek tukda haasil karne ke liye

"Komal bhabhi bhi to apne chacha ki naukari aur karz maaf karne ke liye shaadi ke liye haan boli thi"rohan bola

"Pata nahi rohan ye sab mujhe pareshan kar rahi hai"yash bola

"Dekhiye maine jo kehna tha keh diya ab aap ko jo karna hai kijiye.bas kahi der na ho jaaye"bol rohan uthkar chala gaya
Yash ko akela chhod kar

Yakeen nahi ho raha tha rohan ko.isbkuch hi mahino me yash poori tarah se badal gaya

Kaise kiya Komal bhabhi ne ye sab.kya kamal kar rakha hai Komal bhabhi ne.poore parivar ko bhi ek kar diya

TRING TRING

"Hello??"rohan ne phone uthaya

"Hi rohan disturb to nahi kiya??"Komal boli

"Arey nahi bhabhi boliye na??"rohan bola

"Nisha wapas ja rahi hai rohan.aaj uski flight hai"Komal boli..

"Kya?????????"jaise bijli giri ho uspar

"Kya nahi haan.uska.man nahi hai yahan rehne ka.maine kaafi samjhaya lekin samajhne ko taiyar nahi hai rohan"Komal boli

"Ye sab kya hai bhabhi ??pagal hai kya wo??"rohan bola

"Kyun??tumhe kya problem ho rahi hai??tum to khush ho,shaadi karne wale ho.aur kya chahiye tumhe??"Komal boli

"Arey wo to mai.....abhi aap kahan ho??"rohan ne poochha

"Ghar me hi hoon ,a jao"Komal boli

Damn.ye pagal ladki.batana bhi zaroori nahi samjha .ab kya karega wo???kaise rokega ??
Rohan ne driver ko awaz lagai aur daud pada
Kuch bhi ho jaaye.nisha ko rok ke hi manega wo.chahe uske liye kuch bhi karna pade
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"Mr sanjay aapko kyun phone kiya maloom hi chal gaya hoga aapko??"mr Khurana bola

"Mr Khurana hamare beech me baatein ho to chuki hai"sanjay bola

"Nahi baatein tumne boli thi.aur majboori ka fayda uthaya"Khurana bola

"Haan aisa hi samajh lijiye agar aapko aisa samajhna hai to"sanjay bola

"Mere bimar biwi ke kandhe par bandook rakhkar chalaya tha aapne mr sanjay"Khurana bola

"Well kya kare mr khurana.ek lauti behen hai meri.kuch bhi kar sakta hoon uske liye"sanjay bola

"Agar aisi baat hai to ab ek sad news sun lijiye.khurana collaboration karne ja raha hai yash ke saath."Khurana muskurate hue bola

"What??iska kya anjaam hoga pata hai ja aapko??"sanjay kursi se uthkar bola

"Yahi ki tu mere bichde hue beti ke baare me kuch nahi batayega hai na??"Khurana bola

"H haan.soch lo Khurana saab"sanjay bola

"Soch liya ab tujhe jo karna hai kar,bye"bol Khurana ne phone rakh diya

Sanjay ne sapne me bhi nahi socha ki uski chaal ulti pad jayegi.beti ka jhansa dekar Khurana se sab karwana tha
Lekin sab gadbad ho gaya.ab kya karega sanjay,aur sanchita ko kya kahega???
 
"Komal di chalo na coffee peete hai"nisha Komal ka haath pakadte hue boli

Komal muskurai.nisha dekh rahi hai ki rohan a raha hai ya nahi.bhale hi wo Komal ko na bata paaye.lekin uske aankhon me abhi bhi intezar hai rohan ka

"Waise nisha jaana zaroori tha kya??"Komal ne poochha

"Haan Komal di.family ki yaad a rahi hai.mummy papa wahan akele hai.samajh to sakti hai na aap??"nisha boli

Komal chup rahi.kya kehti,nisha ki hi zid thi yahan aane ki.komalmse.milne ki.isliye uske gharwalo ne usa me admission karwaya uska.lekin wahi aaj nisha wapas india jaane ki zid pakadkar baithi hui hai

"Waise aapka aur yash bhaiyya ka pyaar kaise aage badh raha hai aapne bataya nahi??"nisha baat badalne ki koshish ki

Komal sunkar thoda pareshan ho gayi.kai mahine guzar gaye.komal ko yash ki aadat si lag gayi.haan hai thoda khoosat aur egoist
Lekin beech beech me itna khayal rakhta hai ki kya kehna
Poora support bhi karta hai.lekin kya pyaar karta hai Komal se???

Flight ki announcement hone lagi aur nisha ka man poori tarah se doob gaya tha.apne pair dheer dheere badha diye usne.komal ko gale laga kar aage badh gayi

Rohan haanf haanf kar daudne laga aur car parking ki jagah na milne par car wahi chodd daudne laga.daudte hue usne ghadi dekhi aur apni speed aur badha di.pocket se mobile nikala aur Komal ko phone lagane laga
Lekin phone not reachable tha.nisha ka number bhi lagaya lekin wo bhi not reachable nikla
Lekin rohan ne daudna nahi choda

Aakhirkar pasine me nahakar haanf kar pohuncha hi gaya airport.ander pohunchkar usne yahan waha dekha lekin kuch nazar nahi aaya use.counter par gaya to dekha ki delhi ki flight ja chuki hai

Aankhen nam ho gayi rohan ki.pair bhari hone lage.kuch samajh me nahi aaya aankhon ke saamne andhera chhane laga

"Rohan"ek Komal bhari awaz ke saath ek haath rohan ke kandhe par kisi ne rakha.rohan ne mudkar dekha ki Komal khadi thi peeche

"Bhabhi....."rohan itna hi bol paaya lekin uski aankhen use dhoka de gayi.aansu chalakne lage aankhon se

"Agar itna hi pyaar tha nisha se to batata kyun nahi??"Komal ne pyaar se poochha

Jawab me rohan wahi baith gaya aur apne haatho se chehre ko dhak rone laga

"Aur kitna tadpayegi ise.bahar aja"Komal boli aur hasne lagi

Rohan chaunk kar dekhne laga saamne nisha apna bag liye sar jhukakar khadi thi

"Ni....sha"rohan ki saansein wapas a gayi thi.use naya jeevan mil gaya tha

"Idiot itna pyaar karte the mujhse to pehle kyun nahi bataya"rote rote nisha boli

Rohan paas aakar gale lagane laga to nisha ne rok diya rote rote

"Apni manmani karte rahoge hamesha?shaadi kar rahe ho wo bhi apni marzi ke saath.mai hi pagal hoon jo tumse sachha pyaar karne lagi thi"nisha boli

"To bataya kyun nahi "rohan ne poochha

"Ladka tum ho ya mai??"nisha rote rote boli
Us baar Komal ki hasi choot gayi

"Komal di aap bhi"nisha Komal ki aur dekhte hue boli

"Agar tum dono ka ho gaya ho to chalein??"Komal ne ghadi dekhte hue poochha

Aur haste hue aage badhne lagi.tabhi ek call aya use

"Hello??"Komal ne poochha

"Komal kaisi ho??"sanchita ki awaz aayi doosri aur se

Sanchita ki awaz sunkar Komal serious ho gayi

"Mai koi baat nahi karna chahti tumse sanchita.please ainda call na karna"Komal boli

"Tab bhi nahi jab mai bolu ki tumse shaadi yash ne apne fayde ke liye ki thi.yahan tak ki abhi bhi fayde le raha hai tumse"sanchita boli

Komal ko gussa aaya man to kiya ki sanchita ke gaal par ek tamacha jad de.lekin apne aap ko sambhal liya usne

"Yakeen nahi ho raha hai na??to jao aur dekho kaise apne papa se usne zameen ke badale shaadi ke liye haa kiya tha,wo bhi yakeen na ho to dekho Khurana ke saath deal ke liye usne tumhe use kiya tha"sanchita boli

Komal ko pata tha yash kabhi use dhoka nahi dega.lekin sanchita ko sabak sikhana zaroori tha

"Agar aisa na hua to??"Komal boli

"To mera sar tumhari hoti,aur agar aisa hua to tumhe jo karna hai kar lena.bye"bol sanchita ne phone rakh diya aur Komal ko soch me daal diya
 
Hello bro.....
So Maine aapki ak or achchi kahani beauty and tha beast ko complete kar liya hai....

So first of all.....thanks to gave us a beautiful thread to read....thank you very much.....
Aapki mahanat aapke kaam me dikhti hai....jis tarah se aapne stoey mai....har scene ko describe kiya hai....wo kaabil e taarif hai....and that is the backbone of any story.....
So now let's about story.....
Story ka plot kaafi unique hai....OR upar se aapki writing skills use or bhi behatar bana deti hai....

Mujhe personally komal or sanchita.....
Komal....ak har tarah se perfect ladki....Jo ki kisi ko bhi apna bana le.....OR Sanchita....apni hee zid or ego se giri hui ak aisi ladki .....Jo apni zid ko pura karne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai....

Baaki ke characters jaise ki rohan....Nisha....yash's family all are good....
Ha yash ke father ka role itna nahi aaya hai....par har bar wo yahi kahte hai ki yash badla nahi hai....ya badalne ka naatak kar raha hai....
Ho sakta hai ki unhe yash ke baare mai kuch baate pata ho jo ki unke alawa kisi ko pata na ho....
OR TAB shaayad yash or uske faarhet ka role thoda behatar ho sake.....

Thoda bahut thrill ka bhi aapne use kiya hai...jaise ki 1 ya 2 underworld don't ko dikhaya hai....sanchita ke bhai ko dikhaya hai.....jo ki apni bahan ko khush karne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai....

Khajana ko aapne shaayad starting me ak villain ki tarah introduced kiya tha....lekin baad me change kar diya....
Ya phir uska wo role abhi tak nahi aaya....

Ha ab baat kare hero ki....to ak egoistic....selfish person ke role me hero fit hai.....jiske andar ak dil bhi hai...OR use komal dhire dhire badal rahi hai....

Yanha tak story me sab kuch sahi or achcha hai.....

Mujhe thodi see disappointing sa laga.....story ka naam....
BEAUTY AND THE BEAST.....
waise iss naam se sabko yahi lagta hai ki kisi none handsome ya buri face waale k ke saath....ak khubsurat ladki.....

Beauty ke character ko komal ne puri tarah justify kiya hai....and she's awesome in that.....
But beast ke character ko hero kisi bhi angle se justify dur us ke aas pass bhi nahi pahuch raha hai....
Reason- aapne bhale hee beast ke character ko good looking or handsome dikhaya......but that's doesn't matter....

Matter is.....ki aapne usme aisi ak bhi khubi nahi dikhaai jis se ki use beast kaha jaa sake.....
Aggressiveness......anger.... madness.....and you know other things.....

OR kuch nahi to aap use ak criminal dikha sakte the....ya phir related to underworld.....

Yash ke character ko aapne start se hee....ak rich business minded aadmi dikhaya hai.....ko ki thoda egoistic hai...OR sirf paise ko sab kuch samajh ta hai.....

But jyadatar paise waale log aise hee hote hai.....but ham unhe beast nahi kah sakte.....

Lekin I think story abhi bas 50% kr aas pass hui hai...to Abhi bhi bahut kuch possible hai......

Dr khelte hai aage kya Hota hai....

Anyways
Good story....
Keep it up.....
Thanks....
 
"hello??"itni subah har kisi ka phone nahi aata hai.isliye yash ko ajeeb sa laga.office aaye hue abhi kuch hi minute hue hai

"Hello mr yash"bunty ki awaz doosri aur se sun yash serious ho gaya

"Agar bakwas karna hai to abhi mujhe kaam hai,bye"yash phone me baat karne ke mood me bilkul nahi tha

"Tab bhi nahi agar mai aapke mrs ke baare me kuch baatein bolu??"bunty bola

"Agar Komal ke baare me ek shabd bhi bola to teri zahan...."yash ka para chadhne laga

"Aapki mrs pehle bhi raghav se baatein kar chuki hai mr yash,yakeen na aaye to apne wife se pooch lena,aur haan aaj bhi wo raghav se milne wali hai"bunty bola

"Tujhe nahi lagta teri zabaan lambi hoti ja rahi hai??"yash bola

"Meri baat ka yakeen na ho to aaj shaam ko 6 baje lily coffee house me dekhna apne mrs aur uske purane aashiq ko "bunty bola aur phone rakh diya

Yash gusse se kaampne laga.kabhi use laga nahi ki Komal fir se us harami raghav ke saath judegi.lekin bunty itne yakeen ke saath kaise keh raha hai??agar ye jhoot hua to bunty ko barbaad kar dega yash .lekin....lekin agar ye sach.....hua....to???

Yash ke dimag me kuch nahi a raha tha.bas ab aur nahi balki 6 baje ka wait karna hai fir doodh ka doodh aur paani ka paani ho jayega
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Komal ne ghadi dekhi.6 baje bulaya tha sanchita ne use
Par abhi tak us ladki ka ata pata nahi tha

"Sorry darling late ho gayi"sanchita boli aur Komal ke table par aakar baith gayi

"Tumne mujhe kuch batane ke liye bulaya tha"point par a gayi Komal

"Haan dear pata hai mujhe,pehle ye dekho"bol sanchita ne apne mobile me video in kar Komal ke samne rakha

Us video me mr saraf aur yash ki saari baatein Komal ke saamne thi
Uske baad do teen video bhi dikhaye sanchita ne
Komal ko ek ke baad ek dhakka milta raha

Y yani ye shaadi yash ne sirf zameen ke liye kiya tha??
Koi feelings nahi thi uske dil me??
Tabhi to kabhi khulkar apne feelings ka izhaar nahi kiya tha usne

Aur wo bewkoof ise apna ghar samajh baithi thi,yash ko apna pati maan baithi thi

"Waise ek shaks tumse maafi maangna chahta hai komal.ho sake to use maaf kar do"sanchita boli

"KOUN hai wo??"Komal ne poochha

Jawab me sanchita ne ek ishara kiya aur door khada raghav saamne a gaya

"Komal i a very sorry meri wajah se tumhe itni takleef hui,mujhe maaf nahi karogi??"radhav Komal ka haath pakadkar bola
Komal ne turant apna haath churaya

"Kai baatein maafi ke layak nahi hoti raghav.ainda apni shakl mat dikhana"Komal boli

"Please Komal mere liye nahi to apne behen ke liye hi sahi"raghav ne ek akhiri try maara

Komal muskurai
"Thik hai.lekin please mujh se door raho.aur mujhe contact karne ki koshish mat karna"
Bol nikal gayi Komal aur raghav aur sanchita ek doosre ko dekh muskurane lage

Door dekh rahe yash ko ek zordar dhakka laga
Kya baatein hui wo to sunai nahi diya use lekin haan usne raghav aur Komal ko ek doosre se milte dekha
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Komal jab ghar aayi to usne kamra andhere me paaya

"Light off hi rehne do"yash ki awaz aayi jab Komal ne lights on karne ki koshish ki to

"Kyun??khud ke saath doosro ke zindagi ko bhi andhere me dalne ka irada hai kya?"koman ne poochha

"Ye tum poochh rahi ho jo doosro ko khud andhere me rakhti ho??"yash bola

"Sahi hai baatein chupao tum aur ilzaam mujhpar dalo"Komal boli

"Kam se kam chupkar apne yaar se to nahi mil raha na??"yash bola

"Yash apni zubaan ko lagam dijiye"Komal chilla uthi

"Kyun??sach sunana nahi chahti ??"yash bola

"Sach to ye hai ki shaadi sirf ek natak tha aapko sirf zameen chahiye the india me"rote hue Komal boli

"Natak to tumne bhi kiya Komal,chup chup kar raghav se milti rahi aur mujhe bataya nahi"yash bola

"Chi,aapke dil me ye sab hai mere liye??"Komal ne yash ki aur dekhkar bola

Yash chup raha

"Aap kab sanchita se baat karte hai coffee shop me maine dekha tha.fir bhi chup rahi.aapse safai nahi maangi.lekin aap??"Komal roye ja rahi thi.
Lekin yash ko fark nahi pada

"Fine ab aapko aur pareshan nahi karungi.chali jaungi aapke zindagi se hamesha hamesha ke liye"bol Komal dheere dheere kamre se nikal gayi
 
Komal apna bag lekar seediyon se neeche utri

Ghar ke sab naukar dekh rahe the ye sab.sabke aankhon me aansu the.komal ke kabhi bhi in logo ko naukar nahi balki apna dost banakar rakha tha.kabhi kabhi to khud haath bata deti thi in logo ke saath

"Alex brother can you please take me to airport"Komal ne alex se roasi aankhon se saath kaha
Kuch hi dino me yash ka right hand alex se alex brother ho gaya tha Komal ke liye
Apna bhai banana aur alex ke kalai me rakhi bandhna Komal ne alex jaise patthar ke insan ko bhi jeet liya tha

"Sorry madam i can't"Alex bola

"You have to ,your boss doesn't want me to stay here anymore brother"Komal boli

Alex man maarkar Komal ko airport chodd aya

Aur wapas aakar yash ke andhere kamre me daakhil hua
Yash alex ko dekh raha tha lekin chup raha

"Sorry sir ,i cannot serve you anymore"bol alex apna uniform yash ke saamne rakh kar chala gaya hamesha hamesha ke liye yash aur uske naukri ko bye bye bol kar
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"bhabhi??bhabhi dekhiye maine aaj apna salwar ke hi liya.bhabhi??"urvashi daudkar Komal ko khojne lagi

"Bhaiyya andhere me kyun baitha hua hai??bhabhi kahan hai??"urvashi ne poochha

Yash chup raha

"Dekh Komal bhabhi hamesha se bolti thi ki mai t shirt aur jeans se zyada salwar kameez me achi lagungi.maine kabhi dhyan nahi diya lekin aaj ek apne liye ek unke liye le aayi.lekin bhabhi kahan hai??"urvashi ne poochha

"Urvashi,beta komal ko bula la aaj mandir jaana tha na??bohut dino se usne bol rakha tha mandir jaana hai.lekin maine hi socha sujata aur urvashi ke saath chali jaun"mrs saraf boli

"Bhaiyya bol na kahan hai bhabhi??"sujata ne poochha

Yash chup raha.sabbi ek doosre ko dekhne lage

"Kya baat hai beta batata kyun nahi Komal kahan hai??"mrs saraf bol uthi

"Aur ghar ke sab naukar dukhi kyun lag rahe hai??"sujata ne poochha

"Mai batata hoon"mr saraf ki awaz ne sabko unki aur dekhne par majboor kar diya

"Aap batayenge??kya batayenge??"mrs saraf ne poochha

"Yahi ki tumhare honhar bete ne komal ko ghar se nikal diya"mr saraf bole
Sab ki aankhen hairani se fati ja rahi thi

"K Komal b......bha.....bhabhi ko ghar se......nikal diya"urvashi apna aansu nahi chupa paayi rote hue daudkar apne kamre me chali gayi

"Maine kisi ko nahi nikala wo khud apni marzi se gayi "yash khada hua

Chataaakkkkk

Ek thappad raseed diya mrs saraf ne

"Rok to sakta tha??kuch kar to sakta tha??pata hai tujhe uska apna koi nahi,kaha jayegi wo??"mrs saraf bhi apne aapko rone se nahi rok paayi

"Chi bhaiyya chi"sujata mrs saraf ko unke kamre me le jaate hue boli

"Beta mujhe laga tha ki Komal ke saath shaadi hone ke baad shayad tu sudhar gaya hoga,lekin aaj mujhe pata chal gaya tere kismat me shayad Komal hai hi nahi.jo sirf paiso aur success ke peeche pagal hai us par bhagwan itna meherban nahi ho sakta hai
Tere liye sanchita hi sahi hai"bol yash ke kandhe par haath rakh kar mr saraf chale gaye
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Komal airport me baithi hui thi.kuch pata nahi tha ki kya karna hai.wapas chachaji ke ghar jaana sahi nahi hoga.kyunki raghav ke saath india me jo hua tha isake baad chachaji ke parivar ne saare rishte tod diye the

"Soch me padi hui ho??"ek awaz ne chaunka diya Komal ko usne dekha mr Khurana uske paas a rahe the

"Aap...yahan....??"Komal ne poochha

"Bas aise hi ek dost ko drop karne aaya tha.lekin tum bag lekar aise ....??"mr Khurana ne poochha

"Aapko alex ne bola ,hai na??"Komal ne poochha

"Jo humse pyaar karte hai wo hamare liye acha karne chahte hai komal.alex ne hi mujhe bola."mr Khurana bola

Kuch der tak dono chupchap rahe

"Chalo"mr Khurana achanak bole

"Kahan??"Komal ne poochha

"India"mr Khurana muskurate hue bole

Komal chup rahi.india ???lekin kyun???

"Daro mat Komal tumne meri wife ki jaan bachayi hai.tumhe jeene ki nayi wajah mil jayegi wahan,trust me"mr Khurana bole

Komal chup rahi.ab durga mata ka hi bharosa hai
Jo wo chahengi wahi hoga
 
bahut badhiya.............. yash aur komal ka confusion ek din aisi naubat lana hi tha
rishta chalate rahne ke liye sirf vishwas hi kafi nahi hota...............
jaruri hai ki us vishwas ko sachchai ki khaad lagakar hara bhara rakha jaye

galtiyan sirf yash ne nahi ki thi
komal ne bhi ki....................
wahi raghav jo uska ghanauna ateet tha.............
usse fir se communicate karna kya komal ki galti nahi thi.....................

sanchita aur yash ke beech kuchh bhi hua............yash ne kabhi komal ko knowingly avoid nahi kiya
lekin komal .............. usne to sanchita par vishwas kiya aur fir raghav par bhi................
aur unse mili bhi unko entertain karne mein itna kho gayi ki .............yash ko hi avoid kar diya

ham jindgi me hazaron logon ke touch mein ate hain.................unmein kuchh sahi hote hain aur kuchh galat
lekin agar ham galat logo ko unki galtiyon ke liye mafiya dekar dobara judte rahe
to bahut se achchhe log hamse chhoot jayeinge.....................

kam se kam mera to yahi manna hai.........................
isiliye .................... raghav ya sanchita jaise logo ke liye meri jindgi ki kitab mein maafi nam ka shabd nahi hai
ham aise logo ke bina bhi ji sakte hain.......................
to kyon maaf karein ya kyon unki sunein

dekhte hain aage.....................khurana ke sath komal ki jindgi kya rang layegi

agle update ka intzar hai
 
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