Fantasy RISHI the SAVIOR(BEING EVIL)

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UPDATE 9

Toa guys pichle update mea aap sabi dekha kaise aarti ramu ka dimag kha jati he sawal puch puch ke..

N aarti ke family ka b ek short introduction hua jisme aarti ki 2 beheno ke bareme bataya tha mene..

Toa suri karte hea aaj ke update se..

Ha toa jin 2 beheno ke bareme mene bataya tha usme se 2nd jo aarti judwa behen b hea....
ARUNA RAICHAND wo b pregnant thi..

Aruna apne mansion mea apne room mea baithi thi or ek album ko dekh rahi thi..

Wo album dekhte huye uski aankho se lagatar aasu beh rahe the..

Tabi uske room mea rohit aata hea..
Jise dekh aaruna apne asuoo ko chupane ki nakam kosis karti hea par kar nai pati..

Rohit aruna ke hath me album dekh samaj jata he ki uski biwi q ro rahi hea..

Isliye wo uske pass jakar uske hatho se wo album lea leata hea..
Or uske sar par pyar se hath pherte huye bolta hea..

Q jane wale ko yaad kar ro rahi ho..
Wartam mea jina shikho..
Ab b agar tum unhe yaad karke roti rahogi toa hamare bache par b iska asar hoga..

Rohit ka dular pakar aruna jo ab tak apne aap ko sambhali huyi thi uska sabar b tut jata hea..
Or wo rohit se lipat rone lagti hea or kehti hea..

Jab khud ki he behen aisa karegi toa dusman ki kya jarurat hea..
Kya kuch ni kiya mene aarti ke liye or badle mea muje kya mila dhoka..

Kuch der rohit ke samjane ke baad aaruna sambhal jati hea or apne aasu pohach te huye kehti hea..

Usse mere har ek aasu ki kimat chukani hogi..
Jitna me royi hu usse 10 guna jadda wo royegi or uss samay me hasungi uspar..

Wahi aarti b ramu ka sar khate huye mumbai pohach jati hea or wo itne salo baad apne desh apne ghar aakar kafi utsahit thi..

Or ye baat koi b uske chere ko dekh bata sakta tha..
Ramu b aarti utsukta dekh mand mand muskura raha tha..
Aarti toa bas apne maa papa or behno se milna chahti thi..

Yahi sab sochte huye wo dono airport se bahar aagaye jaha
Bohot sari cars line mea khadi thi or un sab ke bicho bich thi..
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(Ye)
Aarti or ramu ki najar jab samne khadi gadiyo ka kafila dikhta hea toa dono heran hojate hea ki tabi ramu ke face pe smile aajati hea..
Sayad wo samaj gaya tha ki in gadiyo mea kon hea..
Isliye wo aarti ko lekar un cars ke taraf jane lagga..

Tabi us car mea se ek shaks bahar aata hea..
Jisse dekh aarti ke aankho me gussa bar uth tha hea wahi ramu uss sakhs ko dekh aage bar usse gale mil ta hea..

Or kehta hea..

Kaise ho bhai..
Bade dino baad dino baad mile ho..

Yaha ramu us shaks se baat karne mea wyast tha wahi aarti us admi ko gure ja rahi thi..
Use dekh aarti ka khoon khol raha tha..
Or usse b jada gussa usse is baat ka tha ki ramu uss insan se has haske baat kar raha hea jisne meri duniya(aarti) he ujad di thi...

Jab ramu ko aarti ka yaad aata he or vo piche palat dekhta hea toa aarti waha khadi gussese ramu or us shaks ko gure ja rahi thi..

Ramu aarti ki aankho me gussa dekh smaj jata hea ki kya baat he isliye wo uss shaks ko badme milne ka bolkar waha se aarti ke pass aajata hea..

Aarti jab ramu ko apne taraf aata dekhti hea toa uspar rasan pani lea chad jati hea..

Ki kya jarurat thi uss kamine se baat karne ki..
Kya ab wo aapko apni behen se b pyaara hogaya hea..
Bhulgaye kaise uss insaan ke wajase aaj ham behene dushman banchuki hea..
Ussne mera hasta khelta pariwar mujse chin liya..
Ek ye or ek wo hawasii..
Indono ke wajase muje or raaj ko aaj apne apne pariwar se sare riste naate tor australia jana para..
Ye sab kehte huye aarti rone lagi..

Ramu b bichara kya kehta..
Uski safai aarti kabul he nai karti qki bichari ne jo kuch b kaha bhale he adha sach ho magar sach toa tha..
Or aaj fir ramu nea usse un purani yaado ko yaad dila kar uske jakam hare kar diye hea jisse ab usse kafi taklif ho rahi hea..

Ramu kuch na bola or aarti or uska saman lekar car mea bethgaya..
Jo unko he pick karne waha aayi thi..
Or fir dono chal para aarti ke ghar ke taraf..

Wahi australia mea..
Raaj ne jabse apne bache ka sach jana tha tabse usse ek umid ki kiran dikhayi dene lagi thi ki sayad uska bacha he usse is musibat se nikalega..

Par usse insab kamo ko karne mea bohot samay lag jayega..
Or usse b pehlea uske pass koi wajah toa honi chahiye ye sab karneki..
Aisehi toa wo in sabko khatam ni karega..
Hmm kaise usse yaha tak lau or kaise usse insab ko khatam karne par majbur karu..

Kuch der or in sab ke bareme sochte huye wo yaha se waha tehel ne lagga apne he room mea tabi usse apne dad ke dost or apne mentor RAW HEAD Yashpal singh ki yaad aayi..

INTRODUCTION
Raw head - YASHPAL SINGH
(Ye veer bahadur ke cousin lagte hea or kafi ache dost b hea..
Or raaj kaha hea or kya karta he inhe sab pata hea..
Par inhone kabi uske pitaji ko nai bataya is bareme .
Q ye aage bataungi)

Wo he ek hea jo in sab kamo ko mere bache se karwa payengea..
Or usse guide b karenge..
Itna sab soch usne yashpal ko phone laga diya apne satellite phone se jisse koi tap ni kar sakta..
Or unhe ab tak jo kuch b hua hea sab bata diya..
Or yashpal b uski madad karne ke liye raji hogaya qki..
Kahi na kahi ye puri world ki security ki baat thi..
Or sidhe ho ya indirect par iska asar india par b parta isliye unhone raaj ki request ko accept kiya or ek plan banaya..
Jisse sanp b marjayega or lathi b na tutegi..

Or yaha aarti or ramu pure raste chup rahe..
Par ghar ke karib pohacte he ramu aarti se bola..

Dekhi choti me tumhare sare sawalo ka jawab dunga..
Par aaj tum 3.5 saal baad ghar jarahi ho..
Tum apna chera aisa utar rakhoge toa tumhare mata pita ko b ye acha ni lagega..

Aarti ko b ramu ki baat sahi lagi..
Isliye usne apne aap ko sambhala or mood tk karne ki kosis karne lagi..

Or itne mea unki car ek banglow ke entrance ke anadar aakar ruki..
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Kuch galtiya hui hea is update mea..
Usse mea raat tak tk kar edit kardungi..
Filal toa aise he post kar rahi hu..
N raatko ek or update aayega..
Jaisa ki mene kal wada kiya tha..
Ye update kesa lagga jarur batayega..


Read my story..
Rishi the SAVIOR
(Being evil)..
A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..


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UPDATE 10

Toa guys bohot sochne par ye vichar aaya ki story ko meri jagha aap readers likhe toa kaisa hoga..
Jaise aap sabi ko ab tak ka story ka plot or view toa samaj he agaya hoga..

Toa ab aap sabi jo jo is kahani ko kuch alag or hatke banana chahte hea..
Wo muje next update ya agle padav ke liye apne views beje ki aisa hona chahiye ya vaisa..

Yaa ye hosakta he ya wo..

Par bejiyega jarur..
Jiska b view sabse alag or hatke hoga jo story ke plot mea fit bethega..
Us update ka credit idea dene wale ko jayega..

Ab ye b boldu..
Ye sab sirf fun ke liye kar rahi hu..
Taki aap readers b writer banSAKE.
OR ISKA ye matlab mat nikal lena ki aage kya likhna he muje samaj ni aara ya muje story ko likhne mea koi dikkat hea..

Bas aisa karne se majja aayega..
Kosis karyega..
If success huaa toa is story ke ek nai balke anek writers honge..
Depends on ur response..

Ye toa kal ki baat hui..
Toa ab aate hea aaj ke update par..

Jaha aarti or ramu aarti ke ghar ke bahar khare the..
Or aarti apne ghar ko itne samay baad dekh kafi emotional hogayi thi..

Vo toa bas apne ghar ko nihareja rahi thi..
Or aisa karte huye wo ghar ke garden mea aagayi jaha par bichme chota sa pond tha jisse dekh toa bichari aarti ro he pari..

Wo us pond ke pass beth apne purane yaado me khogayi ki kaise wo or aruna mil archana ko tang karte the..
Or kahi bar toa is pond mea b dakhel dete archana ko..

In sab yadon ko yaad kar aarti ke aankh e assu or mu par hasi thi..

Jisse dekh ramu ne b usse rokna sahi nai samja qki..
Bachpan ki yaade hoti hea aisi hea..

Na Kuchh Paane Ki Aasha Na Kuchh Khone Ka Dar
Bas Apni Hii Dhoon, Bas Apne Sapno Ka Ghar
Kaash Mil Jaaye Phir Mujhe Bachpan Ka Pahar..

Abi aarti apne yado mea khoyi he thi ki piche se uske kandhe par kisine hath rakha..

Or apne kandhe par hath mehsoos kar aarti turant piche mudi or apne samne apni maa ko dekh wo bas ek tak apni maa ko he dekhe jaa rahi thi..

Maa b aarti ko 3.5 saal baad apne saamne sahi salamat dekh kafi khush thi or unke chere par dard khusi or tadap ka mile jule bhav the..
Jisse sayad ek beti hea samaj sakti hea..

Or yaha b kuch aisa he hua..
Dono maa beti bas ek dusre mea khoye huye the..
Naa aarti kuch bolrahi thi na he uski maa..

Is hasin riste par do line jarur likhungi..

Har riste mea mene milawat dekhi hea..
Har chere par mene nakli muskurahat dekhi hea..
Lekin jab dekhti hu maa ka chera..
Uske mamta mea na kabi milawat dekhi hea..

Sayad yahi aarti b kuch issi tarha apni maa ko apni feelings jahir kar rahi hogi ankho he ankho mea..
Or rote rote sahas juta kar aarti nea badi muskil se apne mu sea..

MAA... Kaha jisse sunte he uski maa ekdam se usse lipat gayi or fir suru hua maa beti ka rona..
Jaisa aksar hota hea..

Indono ko pyaar dekh pass khade ramu ke b chere se aasu behne lagge..
Or usse b is baat ka abas ni tha..

Or sone pe suhaga toa tab hua jab aarti ke dad ARUNLAL RAJAWAT window se he ye sab dekh rahe the..

Unka dil kiya ki jaaye abi or kaske gale lagga le apni beti ko apne dil ke tukde ko..
Apne uss bete ko jo hamesa unhe yaad dilati ki baba me huna aapka beta...

Par kuch tha jo unko rok raka tha..
Har pita ke tarha ARUNLAL ko b bohot dukh hua tha jab aarti unhe or apne pariwar ko chor raaj ko chuna tha..

Par wo jante the aarti jo karegi hamesa sahi he hoga par ek baap ka dil uss din roya tha..
Jese har beta apne maa ke karib hota hea wese he har beti apne papa ke karib hoti hea..

Ye jo rista hota he sayad he mea sabdo mea baya kar pau..
Fir b kosis jarur karungi..

Apna sab kuch apne bacho par luta khush hojata he wo..
Wo pita he joapne bacho ko khush dekh kar he khus hojata hea..

Sry guys isse aage na likh paungi..
Muje ab ma baba ki yaad aarahi hea..
Socha tha kuch acha likungi par ye toa kuch ajib he hogaya..
Ab or likha toa mea ro dungi..
Baki kal b 2 update aayengea jinme ek bada dhamka hoga jisse hero ka future decide hoga n kal ke update ke baad story ko jaldi bagha hero ko bada kar dengea.


Read my story..
Rishi the SAVIOR
(Being evil)..
A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..


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UPDATE 11

Toa guys aaj ka update kal ki tarha adhura ni chodungi..
Kal thora emotional hogai thi mea b bcz i leave away from my house n saal mea ek ya 2 baar he jaa sakti hu unse milne wo b 4-5 din ke liye..

Choro ye toa hui personal bate ab aate hea story par..
Jisme kal aap sab ne dekha kaise aarti apne maa se milti hea or kese aarti ke dad dur se he sahi par apni beti ko pyaar jarur dete hea..

Toa ab badte hea aage..

Jaha aarti ko uski maa ghar mea lea aati hea or unke piche ramu b aaraha tha aarti ka saman lete huye..

Ghar mea enter hote hea aarti ki aankhe uske pita ko dhund rahi thi par we usse kahi naa dikhe..
Sayad ye baat uski maa b samaj gayi thi isliye unhone usse upar ki or ek kamre ke taraf ishara kiya..

Aarti b apni maa ka ishara pate he uss kamre ki taraf bacho jaise daudte huye gayi..
Or us kamre ke bahar khadi ho jab usne darwaje ko dhakka diya toa wo samne ka najara dekh chounk gayi thi..

Ye kamra pehlea aarti or aruna sath share karte the..
Aisa ni tha ghar mea rooms ki koi kami thi..
Par undono ko har dam sath rehna he pasand tha..

Or aaj itne samay baad apne he kamre ko dekh aarti counk gayi thi qki aaj b wo kamra waise ka waisa he hea jaisa 3.5 saal pehlea tha..

Aarti apne kamre ko dekhte huye andar aarahi thi tabi uski najar khidki ke pass khade apne baba par gayi..

Jo khidki se bahar dekh rahe the..
Aarti ko apne baba ko kahi khoya dekh sararat suji or wo dire se chalte huye unke piche gayi or unko pichese hug karliya..

Or pyaarse apni mithi awaj mea baba boli jisse sun arunlal ka sara gussa ek he bar mea kahi phur hogaya..

Or unhone palatkar turant aarti ko gale laga liya..
Or fir thora rutne manane ka session chala..
Agar fir mea ye sab describe karne baithi toa emotional fool na ban jau..

Isliye ham indono baap beti ko yahi chor chalte hea rohit ke taraf..
Rohit raichand..
Inke naam jitna rob hea usse jada inki personality mea hea..

Har galat ho ya sahi chij ye badi safai sea karte hea..
Or ek jamane mea ye or raaj (chalo choro ye baat abi pending rakhte hea..)

Ha toa rohit apne office building ke top floor par khare ho..
Shubhe jo wakya hua uske bareme soch raha tha..

Aaj b bilkul ni badli wo..
Gussa abi b uske naak par he betha rehta hea..
Ye baat agar mene aruna ko batayi ki wo aagayi hea..
Toa wo toa gun lekar he uske piche na lag jaye..
Muje filal aruna se ye baat chupaye rakhni hogi warna iska asar kahi hamre bache par na gire..

Or iske liye muje indono ko dur rakhna hoga..
Par kaisea.....
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Ek min wo kamina kab kaam aayega
Itna soch rohit kisi ko call lagata hea or kuch der baat karne ke baad samne wale ki baate sun rohit b chounk jata hea or kehta hea..

Par mere dost jo tum karne ka soch rahe ho kya wo sahi hoga..
Isme ek galti or tumhari jaan b jaa sakti hea or fir jiske liye tum ye sab kar rahe ho unka kya hoga..

Meri mano toa mea abi apne kuch bande bejta hu..
Tum unke sath waha se nikal jau or fir tum apne pariwar ke sath hamare secret island par chale jana..

Waha toa is janam mea choro agle 7 janam tak b koi ni aa payega..

Samne se - .....

Rohit - Tk hea bhai ab tumne man bana he liya hea toa tk hea..
Par mea ab b bolunga ek baar or sochlo..

Samne se - ...

Rohit - Tk he bhai..
Tum chinta mat karo abse meri b najar unpar bani rahegi har pal..
Unhe mea kuch ni hone dunga..
Par tum apna khyal rakhna or uss yashpal ke sath jo kuch b plan kiya ho tumne dyan rakhna ki raw wale kabi kisike sage ni hote..
Unke liye unka farz se bara kuch ni hota..
Toa kahi wo tumhe he tekka na dea dea..

Itna bol wo call rakh deta hea or chal padta hea apne mansion ke taraf..

(Hmm lag raha he ki kuch bul rahi hu..
Haa yaad aaya veer bahadur ko toa ham bhul he gaye..
Chalo unka b haal dekh lete hea..
Akhir hero ke dadajaan hea vo..)

Veer bahadur yaaha ramu ke janeke baad secret agency yani raw ke head apni cousin bhai yashpal ko call lagate heeah.

Or usse b apne bete or bahu ki khabar ke bareme puchte hea..
Or ye b kehte hea ki tu raw ka itna bara head hea or mere bete tak ko dhund ni pa raha..
Or na jane kya kya apne gum mea unko boldete hea..

Or bichare yashpal b sab kuch jante huye b veer ko kuch ni batasakte khair..

Aishe waqt bitata gaya..
Or 3 mahine or beet gaye..
Ab aarti 6 mahine ke pet se thi..
Or guess what aruna b ..

Is bich..
Aarti b apne badi behen archana se mili thi or dono beheno nea apne gile sikhwe b dur kiye..

Par na he aarti ne aruna ke bareme pucha or na archana ne uski baat nikali qki ye har garbhwati ke jewan ka wo samay hota he jaha choti se choti baat b dil mea ghar kar jati hea..

Yaha aruna b 6 mahine ke pet se hone ke karan thora jada aaram karti thi or waise b usse kuch kaam karne ki jarurat toa thi hea nai aakhir itne naukar jo the ghar mea..
Par is bich usse uske mom dad 1-2 baar milne gaye the..
Par unhone usse ye ni bataya ki aarti b mumbai aachuki hea..

In teen mahino mea raaj 15-20 din mea ek baar aarti se baat karta or har baar ye b kehta ki bas kaam khatam hone ko hea mea tumhare delivery date se pehlea aajaunga..
Or iss baat par unki behes b hojaya karti thi..

Insabi baato ki bich samay aaya indono ke god bhari ka...
Jisske liye sabse bari pareshani ye hui ki dono ki god bharai ki date ek hea aai or mahurat b..

Ab unke mata pita yaa toa aarti ke pass ja sakte yaa aruna ke..

Qki dono jagha ek sath hona sambhav nai tha na he dono ki god bharai ek sath karna..
Isliye kafi vichar vimash ke baad yashpal ne ye nirnay liya ki wo or archana aruna ki god bharai mea jayengea or aarti ki goad bharai mea uski maa or kuch rishtedar honge jo unke karibi the jinka intro as per requirement hota jayega..

Fir shuru hui do jagha dono beheno ki god bharai..
Jo dono he jagha kafi jor shor se chalrahi thi..
Panditji b aagaye the..
Par yaha fir ek problem hui..
(Hamare yaha god bharai ke samay pandtji pregnant women ka hath dekh uske hone wale bache kea bareme batate the....
Myths..)

Ab dono jagha ek he samay tha goad bharai ka par gurudev dono jagga ek sath toa ni ja pate..
Isliye unhone pehlea aarti ke yaha janeka socha..
Taki pehlea waha ki rashme khatam kar wo aruna ke yaha ja sake..

Gurudev ne aarti se pehle kuch puja or rashme karwai or fir uska hath tham uske honewale bache ka bhavishya dekhne lagge..
Jisse dekh unke sar se pasine ki bunde tapakne lagi.
Or wo kafi gabragaye the..

Ab unhone aisa kya dekha ye mea 2nd update mea bataungi..
Till is update ke bareme apni raai jarur dena or agar aap b is story mea apna kuch sayog dena chahte ho or aapke pass koi idea ho ki aage aisa karna chahiye ya hona chahiye toa muje pm jarur karna..


Read my story..
Rishi the SAVIOR
(Being evil)..
A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..


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UPDATE 13

Yaha se story as a hero he likhungi..
Par bich bich me aajaya karungi aap sabi sea baat karne..
Ha toa..
18 SAAL BAAD
Aurat - Utha ja beta utha jaa..
Din chad aaya hea or sab apne apne kamo me lag gaye hea or tu hea ki ullu ke tarha raat bar jagega or din mea soyega..
Uth jaa batarahi hu..
Nai toa fir naa kehna mene warn ni kiya tha..
Yaha bichari ye mahila chik chik kar kise jaga rahi hea dekhte hea..
Aray aray ye toa apna hero hea..
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Haye mea mar java gud khake..
Kitna cute dikhray sote huye..
Or ye mahila he ki itne cute ladke ko jaga rahi hea..
Mera bas chale toa bas dekhti jau..
Sry sry story par aati hu..
Ha toa ye mahila or koi nai aarti hea jo apne bache or hamare hero RISHI ko jaga rahi hea..
Jo der raat party se aaneke baad ludke huye hea..
Aarti nea har prakar ki kosis karli RISHI ko uthane ke liye..
Par ye he ki hil b ni raha..
Tabi aarti ko kuch yaad aaya or wo rishi ke kaan ke pass jakar boli..
Aarti - Beta uthja tu bulgaya hea kya aaj kya hea..
Rishi yani mera itna he sunna tha ki mea jathse uth beth gaya apne bed par or yaha waha dekh apne mobile ko dhundne lagga jisse meri maa yani aarti ne mere aage kiya..
Mobile hath me lete he sabse pehlea mene date check ki or fir tym..
Or fir apna mata pith liya..
Meri iss harkat par maa ke face par smile aagayi or we haste huye boli..
Mene pehle he kaha tha tuje na ho payega kisi or ko ye kaam dea deti hu..
Par tu kaha sunta hea meri..
Waha toa bate bare dialogue mar raha tha or ab dekho..
Sar pea hath rakhke betha hea..
Mene jaise he maa ki baate suni mere face par meri evil wali smile aagayi jo tab he aati hea jab kuch hone wala hota hea..
Mea jatse bed se khara hua or maa ka right-hand pakad gol gumate huye bed par bithaya or apna chera unke chere ke pass lakar bola..
Mammy jaan tumhare bete ne ek baar agar koi kaam hath mea lea liya toa usse wo pura karne se tumhare shivji b ni rok sakte..
Or yaha baat meri darling me birthday ke preparation ki thi mea kaise bhul jata..
Tayariya toa sari kabki hochuki hea..
Mene jo kuch der pehlea maa ko gol ghumaya tha or fir unko bed pe bitha apna chera unke pass lea gaya tab se wo bas meri ankho mea he dekhe ja rahi thi..
Or meri baate sun unke face par smile aagayi or we boli..
Toa fir q apna matha pitliya tha tune..
Kuch toa garbar jarur hui hea..
Mom ki baat se muje yaad aagaya ki mea sabse important chij toa bhul he gaya hu..
Or ye baat yaad aate he mera chera ek bar fir utar gaya or mea maa ke baju mea he bed par bethgaya or bola..
Haa maa sahi kaha ek badi wali gadbad hogayi hea..
Mea meri Darling ke liye gift he leana bhul gaya hu..
Ab jab ye baat usse pata chalegi toa wo mujse ruth jayegi...
Maa meri overacting dekh mand mand muskura rahi thi or muskurate huye hea we boli..
Ye toa bohot bada sayapa hogaya hea..
Ab tu toa gaya teri darling ne tuje kacha chaba jana hea..
Ek kaam kar function ko abi b tym hea..
Tab tak jaa or ek acha sa gift lea aa apni darling ke liye or raste mea aate huye teri bua ko b pick karleana..
Unki flight 4 baje tak land hojayegi..
Or haa unke sath unki nanad b hogi toa tym par pohach jana tu..
Deri ni honi chahiye bilkul b waise b unki nanad kaisi hea tumhe pata hea..
Badme jiji (maa bua ko jiji hea bolti hea ye unki bachpan ki aadat hea aisa unhone he muje bataya tha) ko sunayegi agar kahi kuch kami reh gayi toa..
Mom ki baat sun mea double khush hogaya..
Pehla meri archana bua aarahi thi rajasthan se or dusra unke sath unki nanad b aanewali hea..
Fir toa mere maje maje honge..
Mea jatse maa ke gaal par kiss kar bathroom mea bhag gaya apna towel lekar..
Taki jald se jald tayar hojau..
Ha toa guys jab tak apna hero tayar hota hea tab tak mea thora gyan baat deti hu..
Hero - Rishi bahadur singh..
Age 18
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Bhaisahab ne abi abi 12th complete kari hea or apne vacation ke maje lea rahe hea..
Parties n pubs mea jana inka shok hea..
Or har galat aadat jo inke umar ki bacho mea hoti hea wo sabi inmea hea..
Jaise smoking drinking bla bla..
Par har chij ki ek limit hea inki..
Deeply toa inke bareme muje b ni pata ye toa story mea he pata chalega..
Ha par duniya mea sabse jada ye apni maa ko pyaar karte hea..
Or unki khushi kea liye ye kuch b kar sakte hea..
Or inki 2nd priority hea inka parivar jinme filal toa sirf inke maa ka pariwar he aata hea..
Dad ke side wale parivar ki abi tak inhe koi khabar ni hea..
Par jald he pata chal jayega..
Or aaj inki darling ka birthday hea jiske liye inhone ne he sara tam jam kiya hea raat ke party ke liye..
Ye toa rahi RISHI ki baat ab chalte hea aaruna ke taraf..
Yaha b same to same scene repeat horaha hea..
Aaruna bed ke pass khadi hokar apni beti ko utha rahi hea..
Par wo b theri deet uthne ko raaji nai.
Jab aaruna ne ye dekha toa wo apni beti jiska naam Riya hea uske pass beth usko hilane lagi or bar bar utha jau beti uthajau (bla bla ) bole ja rahi thi..
Or jab riya ko kuch jada he pareshani hone lagi sone mea toa wo ekdam se muskurane lagi (devil smile)
Or jatse apni maa ko he khich apne baju mea leta diya or ek hath aruna ki kamar par or ek pera uske per par rakh apne app se aruna ko sata liya..
Or apni madhur awaj me boli..
So jau maa q itni shubha jaldi uth jati ho tum ..
Murge ki tarha sabko jagane..
Just take a chill pill or so jau..
Aaruna riya ki baho me kasmaste huye boli..
Jalli kahi ki..khud toa raat rat ullu ke tarha jaag kar bahar pehra deti hea or sabha chamakadar ban so jati hea..
Or muje murga bol rahi hea..
Riya - Sry sry maa..
Aaruna ko laga ki riya ko apni galti ka ehasas hogaya hea..
Par tabi riya boli..
Mene aapko murga boldiya wo kya heana nind mea hu thori..
Aap toa murgi ho murgi wo b desi wali..
Itna bol riya ne aruna ke bum ko dabba diya..
Or hasne lagi ..
Aruna ko riya par gussa toa aaraha tha par uski hasi dekh uska sara gussa kahi phur gaya..
SacHi guys kitni cute dikh rahi thi wo haste huye..
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Agar me ladka hoti toa mene usse pata lena tha ya bhaga lena tha..
Khair inko inki masti mea chor ham ab chalte hea Rohit ke pass..
Jo is waqt kisi sea phone par baat kar raha tha..
Chalo dekh te hea kya chal raha hea..
Rohit - Beta par kya ye sahi rahega..
Tum jante ho agar wo dono amne samne aaye toa pichle bar ke tarha na hojaye..
Last tym toa jada bhakeda ni hua tha par agar is bar agar fir wo dono apas me takrai toa world war 3 hojana hea..
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Rohit - Tk hea mea usse lekar aajaunga party mea..
Par yaad heana abi tak usse tumhare bareme patta ni hea..
Or aaj jo tumhara plan uss hisab se toa tum apna patta he cut karva rahe ho khudse..
Wo sayad he fir tumse baat karegi..
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Rohit - Tk hea fir shamko party mea milte hea..
Or ho sake toa tum uske samne mat aana..
Usse jab tumhari asliyat pata chalegi toa usse bohot dukh hoga tumhare juth bolne par..
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Rohit - Tk hea beta..
Byee..
(Back to heros side)
Yaha mea ready hokar jaise he niche aaya toa dining table par koi ni tha..
Sab sayad pehle hea break fast kar chuke the..
Hoga b q nai..
Ab toa lunch ka tym hone aaya tha..
Khair mene dining table ke pass aa dekha toa maa kitchen mea mere liye bread toast kar rahi thi..
Jisse dekh mea kitchen mea jaa unhe piche se hug karte huye ek toast utha liya or apna chera unke kandhe par rakh wo toasted bread khane lagga..
Maa pehle toa had bada gayi thi..
Par muje dekh wo normal hogai or apna kam karne lagi jisse mene break lagaya or apna toast finish kar bola..
Maa rehne do mea jaa raha hu..
Mene nikki ko call kar ready hone ko bol diya hea taki mea darling ke liye acha gift select kar saku..
Maa b jada kuch nai boli..
Qki mea ne agar decision lea liya hea toa wo karna he tha mene..
Par maa ka dil rakhne ke liye mene ek toast kha liya tha or fir unke gal par kiss kar mea kitchen se nikal gaya bahar ke taraf...
Bahar aa mea apne garage mea gaya or apni car nikali

Or chal para nikki ke ghar ke taraf..
Ha toa guys yaha batadu ki nikki meri best frnd hea..
Hamdono bachpan se he sath pare hea or junior clg b sath hea kiya hea..
SHORT INTRO
NIKKI RUHIA
Age 18
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Maa ki death ho chuki hea or papa aarmy mea hea..
ISLIYE ye apni nani ke pass mumbai mea rehti hea..
Nikki ki nani or meri nani dono b ache dost he jiske chalte hamari b dosti hui thi..
Par ek incident ke karan jisse mea fir kabi bataunga..
Filal toa aaj ka update yahi khatam..
Toa guys apne reviews dena mat bhuliye ga..
Or kuch suggestion ho toa just pm me..


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UPDATE 14

Toa guys thori deri hogai ye update aane mea par kya karu vacation the toa ghar jane ka plan kiya or nikal aayi hostel se..
Toa traveling ke karan wo din toa gaya ab free hui hu toa ye update likh rahi hu..

Ha toa jada bore na karte huye ye update ki suruwat karti hu..

Jaisa aapne last mea dekha tha (dekha toa bohot kuch tha par last wala scene yaad dila deti hu) ki rishi ne nikki ko call kar shopping ke liye bulaya tha joki wo apni darling ke liye karne wala hea..
Toa chalo aaj dekhte hea kya hotay shopping par or kon hea wo darling..

Rishis POV-..

Ghar se nikal te he mene gadi nikki ke ghar ke taraf mod di jo mere ghar se jada toa nai par itni dur jarur tha ki waha pohachne mea muje 15 min toa lag he jaye..

(Jab tak ye nikki ke pass pohach ta hea ham aruna ke yaha hoke aate hea)

Aaruna riya ko jaga kar uske liye breakfast banane kitchen mea chali gayi or unki ghar ki maid (jisse ham filal maid he kahengea) ko riya ke room mea jaa waha ki saaf safai karneko bol gayi thi..

Or upar riya apne kamre mea maa ke jate he firse bed par bed jati hea..

Or apne dono per fold karke unpar hath rakh..
Pagalo jaise apne bal gol gol gumane lagti hea..
Isse dekh aisa lag raha tha ki iske andar chandramukhi aagayi ho..

Kher riya aisa karte huye apni shaitani smile mu par lekar aati hea..
Tabi uske kamre ke bahar kisi ki dar se chikne ki awaje aati hea..

Uski awaj itni daravni thi ki kitchen mea kaam kar rahi aaruna b dar jati hea..
Par bichari maid toa riya ko dekh itni dar gayi thi wo ek chik ke baad wahi ke wahi dadam se gir gayi..

Jisse dekhte hea riya apna pet pakar jor jorse hasne lagi or aruna jo ab tak thori sambhal chuki thi wo maid ki chik sun pehle toa gabra gayi par jab usse yaad aaya ki usne maid ko riya ke kamre mea beja tha toa aruna ka b mata thanka or usne apna matha pit liya..

Or khud se boli..
Ye shaitan ki nani aaj nai bachegi mere hato se..

Itna bol aruna ne kitchen mea se belen utha liya or chal pari riya ke kamre ke taraf..

(Ye scene yahi par rokna parega qki waha rishi nikki ke yaha pohach gaya hea..
Ab wo scene b imp heana..)

Rishi nikki ke ghar ke bahar ko ki normal si society mea tha..
Par wo society b kafi achi thi..
Like high Porsche society hoti hea..
Usmea nikki ka ghar 18th floor par tha (3bhk) jisme nikki or uske nana nani rehte the..
Nikki ke mama mami us mea job karte hea kisi software company mea...
Or wahi se inke liye har mahine paise bej diya karte the..

Ha toa mea(rishi) nikki ke society ke niche pohach usse fir ek bar call karta hu or niche aajaneko kehta hu..

Nikki b 2 min ka aaneka bol call rakh deti hea..
Or aglea 2 min ke he andar he muje nikki apni society ke wing mea sea aate huyi dikhi..
Usne is waqt red crop top or niche short jeans pehna tha..
Jo ki uske gutno ke thore he upar tak tha..
Yani na jada body show tha na he jada decent nikki ko aise he dresses pasand the..
Or isme wo kamal dikh rahi thi..

Mene usse car se bahar nikal greet kiya hug kar ke or fir uske liye car ka door b khola like a gentleman..

Jispar usne car mea bethte huye meri tang khichte huye kaha..

Aaj bada gentleman bana gum raha hea tu yaar kya baat he..
Lagtay aaj bohot jaruri kaam he rishi tuje warna tu or
Ye sab impossible..

Mene bas uski bato par smile kiya or car aage bada di jo sidha AR mall ke samne jaa rukhi( sahi pehchana ye mall mere dad ka yani mera he hea aise he kayi or business mea unhone invest kar rakha tha jiske bareme aage batadegi aapko ye lekika mohtarma..
N muje ye sab pata he ki nai ye baat ko filal suspense he rakh te hea..)

Mall ke parking mea car park kar ham dono bahar nikle..
Or mall mea enter huye..
Waha har koi ham dono ko he dekh raha tha..

Akhir meri personality he itni solid thi bale he 18 ka he hu par 6 pack and..
Nice face cut or posture..
Or upar se sath me nikki jaisi khubsurat ladki toa har kisi ka hame dekhna ban ta tha..

Khair hamdono ne insabi chijo ko ignore karte huye mall mea aage badte badte ek jwelljewe shop par aakar rukhe or fir mene nikki se kaha..

Yaar nikku tuje pata hena aaj darling ka birthday hea toa unke liye koi acha sa set select karlenaa.
Tuje toa pata hea mea insab chijo mea anadi hu..

Ye sab mene badi he masumiyat se kaha jisse sun or dekh nikki nea haste huye mere shoulder par punch mara or boli..

Oye gareebo ke darshan raval(i know ye meri insult thi kamse kam ameero ke darshan raval boldeti par ye writer na apne man aaya wo kar rahi hea iska kuch karna parega)
Tujpar ye bhole banne wali acting suit na hoti..
Sidhe sidhe apne rang mea aa or bata darling ke liye toa necklace or usse select karne ke liye meri kitni commission hea..
Saste mea toa ni choudungi tuje aaj..

Ye sab bolte huye nikki kisi dayan se kam na lag rahi thi..
Par me marta kya karta koi chara na tha mere pass is musibat se nikal ne ka isliye mene b usse apne liye jo uska man kare wo select karne ke liye keh diya tha..

Jispar nikki ne meri pit thap thap thapate huyegood boy bola or lag gayi meri darling ke liye necklace select karne mea..

(Ab yaha ek ladki shopping par lagi hui hea wo b jewellery ki toa aam baat he usme inko gante bit jane hea tab tak ham yaha inko dekh bore hone se acha kahi gum aate hea..
Toa fir
Rishi ke dadaji ke yaha b ek round laga aate hea..
Aakhir unka b hal chal lena jaruri hea..)

Toa yaha rajgadh mea mohol mea thori chal pahal thi..
Har taraf bas aane wale mele ke bareme he baat chit horahi thi..
Joki aaj se tk 11 mahine baad tha..
Par yaha chal pahal mele ki khusi mea nai balki dar mea thi..
Qki raajgadh or uske sath jude 101 gaavo ka raaja isi mele mea niyukt hoga jo ki aane wale 50 saal tak raaj karega if wo chal basa bich me he toa uska waris uske baad raaja banta hea..

Or yaha veer bahadur ke pariwar se abi tak koi b khabar ni aayi thi Ki unka umidwar kon hoga..

Wahi unke opposition mea is baat ka fayda uthakar 5 umidwar ab tak gosit hochuke hea..

Ab inme kon dost hea or kon dusman ye toa aage he pata chalega..

Khair bam haveli mea chalte hea jaha veer bahadur ramu se baat kar rahe the..
Chalo dekhte hea kya chal raha hea..

Veer - Ramu ab ham kuch ni karsakte..
Mere kiye ke wajase aaj mere pariwar ke sath sath mere praja ko b iska bugtan karna padega..

Ramu - Malik q fikar karte ho upar wale ke ghar der hea ander nai..
Jarur usne kuch acha socha hoga isliye ab tak aapko intazar karwaya hea unhone..

Veer - Par raamu raak ki maa ki halat ab din ba din bigadti jaa rahi hea..
Ab agar usne raaj ko nai dekha toa aage kya hoga mea bata b ni sakta..

Itna bol veer bahadur ke ankho se b 2 bund aasu nikal gaye..

Jisse dekh ramu in mind..

Maaf karna malik par raaj bhai ke kasam ke wajase rukna para he muje par ab waqt aagaya he ki is haveli or yaha ki praja ko unko agala raaja mile..

Bas ek baar uski training hojaye fir mea usse yaha lea aaunga malik..

Rishis POV-
(Yaha rishi or nikki ki shopping hogayi thi jisme nikki nea ek sundar sa kundan wala necklace choose kiya rishi ke darling ke liye or wahi apne liye usne sirf ek simple sa bracelet liya jisme ek secret locket tha or usme kuch likhwaya tha usne par ye baat usne muje(rishi) ni batayi thi..
Mene b koi jada dyan ni diya..
Par usse itna jarur kaha tha ki wo b apne liya kuch b lea sakti hea..
Par usne simple sa bracelet he liya..

Khair waha se nikal hamdono chal pare food court ke taraf qki shopping mea he nikki nea 3 gante lagwa diye the..

Bichre sales person b pareshan hogaya tha usse dikha te dikhate par isse kuch pasand he nai aaraha tha..
Bari muskil se usne ye necklace choose kara tha..

Khair hamdono food court mea pohach mera all tym favorite mc. Fries with peri peri + coke or nikki ka b same he tha..

Ab hamdono beth suru hogaye apne apne kaam mea..
Joki batadu ki nikki toa sirf mujse bate karte huye khaye ja rahi thi..

Par mea yaha waha dekh raha tha khate huye..
Ye baat toa yaha kuch readers samaj he gaye honge ki ek jawan ladka yaha waha q dekh ta hea wo b mall mea..

Tabi meri najar tk mere samne ke 2 table chor ladki par padi haye daya..

Kya cute dikh rahi thi wo..
Fair color + indian dress upar se specs wo gol gol..
Mea toa ek he baar me flat hogaya..

Or mere samne baithi nikki jo sirf khate huye mujse baat kar rahi thi..
Par mera koi response na paa usne muje dekha toa..

Muje uske piche ke taraf gurta paya
Or jab ussne meri najar ka picha kiya toa usse dekh nikki ka chera lal hogaya..
Or usne table ke niche se he mere pero par apne heels se hole karne lagi..

Jis karan mera dyan tutta..
Or mene nikki ke taraf sawaliya najro se dekha..

Jispar usne kaha..

Ankhe sekhna hogayi ho toa khane pe dyan doo..
Sharam nai aati ha tumhe..
Mea tumhare samne baithi hu or tum ladkia tad rahe hoo..
Sudar jau..
Warna kisi din kisi ladki se pit jauge..

Jispar mea haste huye bola .

Kya yaar nikku tu janti he hea...
Duniya mea 2 chijo ko kitna b dekhU mera man nai bharta

Nikki - Ha ha pata hea pata wahi gishpita dialogue maroge..
Bachpan se sunti aarahi hu..
Ab bas hua..
Ha..

Rishi - Aise kaise chor du..
Ek toa mera favorite dialogue hea upar se tu aisa kar rahi hea..
Dekh sunna hea toa sun..
Warna mea toa waise b bolunga hee..

Nikki irritate hote huye ab jaldi bolo or chalo yaha se..

Rishi - jaldi me kuch hota mujse..
Ha toa..
Mea kaha tha..

Haa yaad aaya..

Toa duniya mea 2 chije mea kitna b dekhu mera man ni bharta
Pehli DDLJ or dusri ladkiya..

Ye line bolte huye mene sharukh khan wala pose mara tha baithe baithe..
Apne dono bahe faila kar..

Jisse dekh aas pass ke kuch loglhas rahe the..
Or inme wo specs wali ladki b samil thi..
Haye mea toa apne hatho ko failaye huye he freeze hoagaya uski smile dekhke..

Or wo b muje apne taraf yu dekhta dekh aankho se muje kya hea ka ishara kiya jispar mea bas ek smile pass karta rehgaya..

Isbar mera dyan mere mobile ke ring se tuti..
Or jab mene mobile screen par naam dekha toa mere ankho mea chamak se aagayi thi..

Toa frnds jarur batana ki ye update kaisa tha..
Or koi suggestion ho toa pm kar deana muje..
Qki ab mea 2 kahaniya simultaneously likhungi toa kahi koi garbar na hojaye mujse..

So just keep commenting positive or negative..
Everything is acceptable but only on story haa..

Warna ...

Just kidding..


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A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..


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UPDATE 15

Toa frnds pichle update mea aapne dekha tha ki rishi n nikki shopping par jate hea or wahi uske dadaji apne waris or gaave ke hone wale raja ko lekar chintit hea..
Wahi riya ki shaitanio ki b kuch jalak dekhne mea mili hame..

Toa fir aaj ke update se suruwat karte hea..

Rishis pov

Mea abi us ladki(specs wali)
Ko haste huye dekh he raha tha ki mera mobile baja or call tha meri masi archana ka..

Jisse dekh mea kafi khush tha..

Mene jatse call pick kiya or unhe namaste karte huye pucha..

Kaha ho masi aaye nai ab tak..

Archana masi(masi maa likhunga yaha se) - masi ke bache kaha hea tu aaya nai ab tak..
Pichle aadhe gante se khadi hu mea airport par..

Masi ki baat sun mea jatse apne mobile screen par tym daikha toa mea shock mea tha qki maa ne kaha tha masi ki flight sham ko 4-5 baje ke pass land hogi par abi toa bas 2 hi baje the..

Tabi muje masi maa ke piche se kisi ladki ke hasi ke aawaj aai jisse mea samaj gaya ki masi maa mujse majak kar rahi hea..

Tabi mene kaha..

Masi maa kya aap b juth bol rahe ho mea kabi ka airport ke bahar he lounge mea khada hu..
Or aap ho ki rajasthan airport par khade rah kar mera majak bana rahe ho..

Par aap bhul gaye ho..
Rishi ko bevkoof bana itna ashan nai hea..
Or aap ke piche jo has rahi hea usse b batadena ki last tym wo mujse bach gayi thi par isbar uski chutiya(choti) mene kaat deni hea..

Tabi masi maa b jor jor se hasne lagi meri baat sun or mujse boli..

Rishi tuje har bar kaise pata chal jata hea mea majak kar rahi hu..
Ye radhika(masi maa ki nanad ) ko mene kaha tha par wo kaha meri baate sunti hea..
Ye sab uski ka plan tha..
Mea b tere sath hu kaat dena tu iski chutiya ko..

Hamdono he last wali line par milkar thaka mar hasne lagge tabi radhika ne masi maa se phone chin liya or mujse boli..

Q be chapad ganju tu har dam meri chutiya ke piche he q para rehta hea..

Uski baat par mene haste huye kaha..

Qki chudailo ki shakti unki chutiya(choti) me he hoti hea or jo koi b usse katle wo us chudail ka malik ban jata hea..
Toa jahir se baat he mea b tumhara malik banna chahta hu..

Mene apni baat ko complete kar hasne laga or wahi radhika ne bina kuch kahe he call cut kardiya..

Masi maa ne radhika ka chera lal surkdekh pucha

radhu kya baat hea tumhara chera itna lal q hogaya hea..

Jis par radhika ko airport announcement walo ne bacha liya unki flight announce kar..

Par yaha radhika ka chera gusse se lal tha ya phir kuch or baat thi ye toa waqt he batayega..

Wahi rishi ne phone rakhne ke baad nikki se kaha..
Joki call aane se lekar ab tak bas rishi ko he dekhe ja rahi thi or fir ek bar usse gussa aaraha tha..
Najane kis baat par..

Rishi - kya hua nikku lal phul jadi q bani hui hoo..
Kya hua tumhe..

Jispar nikki ne kuch nai kaha or fir dono ne chup chap apna khana khatam kiya..

Par yaha ab wo chasmis larki rishi ko dekhe ja rahi thi..
Jisse rishi ne b note kiya par dyan nai diya..

Khair undono ke khane pine ke program ke baad wo dono kuch der mall me gum tym pass kiya or phir nikki ko uske ghar chor aaya rishi party ke liye tayar hone ke liye..
Or wo chal para airport par apni masi maa or radhika ko pick karne ke liye

Yaha rohit raichand ke yaha uske ghar aate he usne aaruna or riya ko ready hone ko kaha ye kehkar ki ek business frnd ke party mea jana hea..

Aaruna na pehlea toa mana kiya par badme usse rohit ki baat mani pari..

Wahi riya toa party ka naam sun jatse ready hone bhag gayi apne kamre mea..

Jisse dekh uske maa papa hasne lagge..
Tabi aruna ne rohit se kaha..

Aruna - Rohit mea kya keh rahi thi rishi ko b bula lo hamre sath aajayega party mea wo..
Bichara pure din akele he rehta he apne ghar..
Bas wo or uski kitabe..

Jispar rohit ne gabrate huye kaha..

Aruna rishi ko ni bulasakte he ham..
Qki wo kal he kahi bahar chala gaya tha kaam se..
Mene call kiya tha usse ghar aanesea pehlea tabi usne ye baat batayi..

Aruna rohit ki baat sun udass hote huye apnea kamre mea chali gayi or wahi rohit uparwale ko bachane ke liye thnx kehne lagga qki..
Aruna kabi baat ke teh tak jaye bina nai rukti thi wahi aaj usne rohit ke baat ka asani se yakin kar liya tha..

(Ab aap log socho ge ki agar aruna itni he tej hea toa uske or aarti ke bich aisa kya hua jispar dono ke bich ab tak coldwar chal raha hea toa wo b jald pata chalega)

Wahi rishi ke airport lounge mea pohachte he archana ke flight ke landing announcement hui..
Or wo (rishi) bas airport exit ke taraf dekhne lagga apni masi maa ke aaneke intazar mea..

Tabi usse masi maa apne luggage ke sath aate huyi dikhi or unke piche radhika aarahi thi
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Short introduction

Radhika singh
Age 20
Ye filal apne second year engineering mea hea..
Par inhone apne ghar se dur dusre state mea admission liya hea taki ye khulke apni life enjoy kar sake..
Kafi khule vicharo ki hea..
Or iske or archana ki bohot achi banti hea..
Dono saheliya jaise rehtea..

(Back to story)
Radhika ko dekhte he mea toa bas apne jagga par khade khade he jam sa gaya tha..
Kya dikh rahi thi wo..
Yea haal sirf mera nai balki airport par majuud lag bhag har male carraspond ka tha..

Meara dyan tab tuta jab masi maa mere samne aa apna hatho se muje hilaya..
Or haste huye mujse boli .

Kya hua beta kaha kho gaye tum..

Mea unki baat par jepsa gaya tha..
Jispar us chudail(radhika) ne or aag laga te huye kaha..

Q be chapad ganju kaha dekh raha tha itne der se..

Usne ye baat apni kamar par hath rakh apni navel dikhate huye kaha tha..

Jispar meri halat or b bigadne lagi or mere sarir me halchal hona suru hogai thi..
Isliye apne aap ko bachane ke liye mene masi maa ko hug karte huye greet kiya or unke bags lekar unko car ke taraf chalne ko kaha..

Mene ye sab had baddi mea kaha tha jispar wo dono piche khadi ho has rahi thi..
Or masi maa ne haste huye radhika ke sar par tapli marte huye kaha..

Q pareshan kar rahi hea mere bache ko..

Radhika - mea kaha kar rahi hu didi apka bacha he muje gure jaa raha tha..
Dekha nai aapne uski kya halat ho rahi thi..

Masi maa - Tum na kabi nai sudhrogi..
Abi tum uske maje lea rahi ho..
Par jab wo apne pe aaya na tab muje naa kehna..
Ki rishi aisa kiya waisa kiya .
Tum he bichare ko jala rahi ho..

Yahi sab baate karte huye wo dono meri piche piche car tak aagaye..
Or usme beth ham tino ghar ke liye rawana hogaye..

Car chalate huye mene undono se kuch baat nai ki thi bas apne man me kaha .

Is radhika ki bachi ko mea chodunga nai..
Bas ek baar party hojaye fir isse dikha ta hu..
Rishi se panga lene se kya hota hea..

Wahi radhika man me..

Bachu abi toa sirf surwat he aage aage dekh kaise tuje tadpati hu mea apna ye husn se..
Itna bol wo apne man me he hasne laggi..

Aise he ham dono apne apne man me aage ke planning karne lagge or pohach gaye ghar

Ghadi se utarte huye ham tino ghar ke andar ke taraf barne lagge..
Or andar pohach masi maa
ek najar charo taraf gumate huye fir boli..

Waise sab kaha hea koi dikh nai raha..

Tabi unke piche se awaj aai..
Jijii..

Ji ha ye koi or nai balki meri maa he thi wo dono apass me gale mil unko bato mea lag gaye jisse mene break lagate huye kaha..

Baate badme karna jaldi se aap sab ready hojau hame party hall ke liye nikal na hea..
Warna aisa na jo jiski party hea wahi tym na pohache..

Meri baat maan wo sab b ready hone apne kamre mea chalagaye..
Jisme masi maa ka toa pehlea se ek room tha he..
Jaha wo pehlea raha karti thi..
Radhika ko 1st floor par mere baju wala room mila..

Or wo b apne kamre mea chaligayi tayar hone..

Karib 1 gante baad ham sabi tayar ho ghar ke hall mea mile jisme mere nana nani mom masi maa radhika or mea majud the..

Fir ham sabi do gadio mea baith party hall ke liye nikal pare..
Jisme ek car mea toa ek car driver drive kar raha tha..
Mere sath nana nani or radhika bethe the..

Ham abi aadhe raste he pohache the tabi nani ne nana se pucha..

Waise ye kisiki party hea jiske liye ham sabi jarahe hea..
Ghar par b pucha tha tabi aapne koi jawab nai diya tha..

Jispar nana ke jagha mene kaha..

Kya hua nani darling q pareshan hoingg.
Ab jaa he rahe hea party mea tab dekh leana..

Wahi rohit or uski family party hall pohach chuke the..
Sath he sare invited guests b..
Bas intazar ho raha tha toa hamara..

Ham b kuch he der mea party hall pohach gaye..
Or jaise he andar enter huye tabi hall ke sari lights band higayi or ek spot light aa meri darling nani par pari jisse sab ka dyan hamare upar gaya..

Tabi mene mike pakad nani ke liye gana gana suru kiya..

Bar bar din ye aaye..
Bar bar dil ye gaye..
..
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...
Happy birthday to you..
Ha ha happy birthday to you..

Jispar hall mea ek sath talliyo ki garh garahat gunj uthi..

Nani itna acha gift dekh unke ankho se aasu behene lagge..
Or wo yaha waha muje dundne laagi par mea abi waha se thodi dur apne dusre plan ko anjam dene ke liye khada tha..

Wahi aruna apni maa baba or didi ko dekh kafi khush thi or wo aage bad apne maa ko gale lagne jaa rahi thi tabi fir ek baar hall mea mari awaj gunji jisse wo wahi khadi hogaye jaha wo khade the..

Rishi - toa guys muje batate huye behad khushi horahi hea..
Ki meri dream girl meri darling ka aaj 55th birthday hea..
Par aaj b wo 24 ki dikhti hea..

Khair sidhe mudde par aate huye yahi kahunga ki har maa ki tarha meri nani maa ki b ek icha hea or mea aap sabi se puchna chahunga kya unke bacho ko unki icha puri karni chahiye ki nai..

Iss waqt hall mea sirf meri awaj he aarahi thi par kisiko me dikhai nai dea raha tha..

Tabi hall mea ek sath haa ka swar gunjaa..

Tabi mene fir kaha..
Meri darling ki b ek ichaa he jo ki aaj se nai balke pichle 22 saal se adhuri hea..
Or ab mea aap sabi se ye nivedan karna chahunga ki aap sabi mere behaafpar unke bacho se request kare ki wo apni maa ki wish puri karre tabi hall me fir ek bar andhera hua or tin spot light aakar 3 logo par giri..

Un tino ke sath sath unke pariwar wale b shock the ye sab dekh..

Tabi upar se ek badi screen niche aane lagi or hall mea majud sabi ka dyan uspar gaya or uss screen par kuch drisya chalne lagge jisse dekh un tino ke sath sath waha khade har vyakti ki aankhe nam hogayi..


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UPDATE 16

Screen par chal rahe drishy dekh waha khade sabi logo ke ankho se aasu behne lagge..

Infact jin tin logo par spot light thi wo b rone lagge..
Or rote huye ek dusre ko apass mea dekhne lage..

Jab aruna or aarti ki ankhe mili toa dono ki ankho mea he ek gujarish thi..
Dono he ek dusre se gale mil bohot kuch kehna chahti thi..
Par dono b apni jagha se hil ni paa rahi thi..
Dono ke kadam jaha the wahi jamse gaye ho..

Jispar hall mea khade dursr sabi logo ki hooting se in tino behno ka dyan tuta..

Or sabi log chilla chilla kar yahi keh rahe the..
Gale milo or purane sare gille shikhwe dur karo..
Par aarti or aruna apne jagha se hil he nai rahe thi..

Dono ko bas samne wale ki pehel karne ka intazar tha..
Tabi fir ek baar mene screen par ek video play kiya jispar mea apne nana nani ka interview lea raha tha..
(Ye video meane kuch mahine pehlea banaya tha..
Apne college ka project hea bolkar)
(In video mea nai dikh raha hu qki mene camera pakadte huye question kiye hea)
{In video..

Me - So mr.arunlal rajawat jaisa ki aapne pehle bataya ki aapki 3 betiya hea..
Or har pita ko apne bete se jada beti he pyaari hoti in most of the cases..
Toa aapko aapki tino betiyo mea se kon sabse jada pyari hea..

Mere iss sawal par nanaji ne haste huye bole..

Beta mere liye meri tino betiya samaan hea..
Tino he ek dusre se alag hea..
Par yahi baat unki taqat hea..
Archana sabse jadda shant or disciplined hea toa aarti chulbali or nathkat hea wahi aaruna nathkat toa wo b hea qki wo or aarti ki judwa he par wo sath he sath tej or thori gusel be hea..
Gussa bohot jaldi aata hea usse..
In tino mea apni he khubi hea jisse ye agar tino sath hea toa inko kabi koi ni hara sakta par agar ye alag alag he toa..

Last wali baat kehte huye unke aankhe jara naam hogai thi..

Fir video change hua or iss baar meri darling nani ka interview tha..

Me - toa mrs.shantidevi jaisa aapne dekha mene aapke pati se kya sawal kiya tha par unhone sawal ke jawab ke jagha puri kahani he chap di..
Toa aapse me koi sawal kiye bina ye kahunga ki aap koi yaadgar kissa sunao apni betiyo ke bachpan ka jisse sun muje b thora maja aay..

Meri baat par nani ne haste huye mere kandhe par mara jisse camera jara hil sa gaya tha jisse mere left shoulder par bana tatto kuch he seconds ke liye dikha..

Jispar mera dyan ni tha..

Nani - beta ab koi ek yaadgar kissa ho toa sunauu ye tino jab b sath hoti toa bas ghar par sabi ki samat hoti..
Ghar chodo inke school college mea b issi wajase koi b ladki ho ya ladka inse panga ni leta tha..
Par fir b ab tum puch he rahe ho toa batati hu kuch..

Baat tab ki hea jab aarti or aruna ka 1st day tha college mea..

Ab dono behne fresher thi par unka nasib acha tha ki uss clg mea ragging ban thi..
Yaa yu kahu ki waha ke students iss mamle mea kuch had tak ache the..

Par jab ye baat indono ko pata chali toa inhone pura clg sir par utha liya..
Or khud ja jakar seniors ko pareshan karne laggi..

Jisse thak har kar raaj or rohit jo ki aarti aruna ke ek saal he senior the unhe inki ragging leni pari..

Mene ispar nani ko rokte huye kaha tha..

Isme kya majedar tha..
Muje toa kuch b maja nai aaya..

Jispar nani ne muje ankhe dikhate huye boli..

Tu thora sabar rakh nai toa me ni batari kuch..

Fir wapas nani bolne lage ki..

Baat yaha tak toa tk thi par aruna kaha itne mea manti..
Wo toa theri shetano ki nani..

Usne pehle he sab kuch plan kar rakha tha in dono ke sath..(aarti or archana)..

Jaise he wo dono bichare in dono ki ragging lene lagge tabi police jeep aayi clg mea..

Jisme sea archana nakli inspector bane huye nikli..

Ab tum samaj he gaye hoge aage kya hua hoga..
Bichare dono ko 10000 rupay ka jurmana lagaya..
Or jo baate sunayi wo alag...

Wo toa acha hua raaj ke papa us clg ke trusty the kar ke bachgaye wo dono warna sayad undono ko bina galti ke clg se b nikalwa deti ye dono..

Ispar mene jagrukta was pucha..
Fir jab un dono ko sach(raaj or rohit) pata chala tab kya hua..

Ispar nani nea haste huye bola .
Tab indono shaitano ki sahi mayne mea ragging hui..
Archana badi thi isliye bach gayi par indono ko pure clg ke samne 50 uthak baithak karni padi..

Nani ki baat complete hotay he ham dono he ek sath hasne lagge..

Sath he hall mea majud sabi log b has rahe the..
Or tino behene b us pal ko yaad kar muskurate huye aage badi or tino ek sath gale mile..

Jispar pura hall ek baar fir talliyo ke gar garahat se gunj utha tha..
Or kuch der inka milap hua par isko brake laga te huye mene mic par kaha..

Toa nani darling ye raha is nachis ke taraf se ek chota sa gift..

Jispar nani ne haste huye rote huye mujse bahar aa milne ko kaha..
(Q ki ab tak iss pure scene mea gayab tha..
Kisi ne b muje dekha ni tha bas meri awaj sunai dea rahi thi unhe)
Jispar mene pause lagate huye cake wale waiter ko isara kiya or fir sare light ka color ek baar fir change hua..

Or cake hall ke bicho bich laya gaya jispar happy birthday darling likha hua tha..

Par nani cake he nai cut kar rahi thi..
Muje bahar aaneko bole ja rahi thi..
Unke sath sath baki sabi log b yahi keh rahe the..
Khass kar aruna masi par ab agar mea bahar aajata toa sare kiye daraye ka banta ghar hone wala tha..

Tabi muje kuch yaad aaya or mene dusre waiter ko ishara kiya plan b ka toa wo b maska leke chal para..
Sabi logo ke hatho mea jab waiters ne mask thama diye tab mea bola..

Mea aise thori aaunga samne..
Sabi ko ye mask pehena parega..

Fir kuch na nukur ke baad sabi ne mask pehen liya or mea b apni jagha se bahar nikal un sabi ke pass ja nani ke baju mea aagaya..

Jispar unhone muje hug karke mere kaan me thnx kaha..

Ab yaha mohol senti na hojaye kahi isliye mene fir ek baar wahi gana gana suru kiya...
Or fir talliyo ke sath nani ne cake cut kar pehla piece muje khilaya or fir riya ko..

Aap sab soch rahe honge ki riya ab tak kaha thi..
Wo kaise shant hosakti hea itni der se..
Toa iska karan b jald pata chalega..

Ek ek kar nani ne sabi ko cake khilaya .
Or fir start hua couple dance..

Jispar sabiko kuch b hojaye dance karna hea tha..
Jispar mene start kiya nani ke sath dance..
(Masi maa - maa,aruna masi-rohit,riya-radhika aise pair ban dance kar rahe the ham sab..
Or ye couple changing dance tha..
Or jo last tak 2 jan rahenge unke liye surprise gift rakha gaya tha jisme hall me majud baki sabi logone b participate kiya siway nanaji ke qki unko thora badan dard tha so he opted ki wo nai karenge dance)
Dance start huye kuch he der hui thi ki nani boli..

Beta tune meri akhri khwahish puri kardi hea..
Meri tino betiyo ko fir ek kar..
Ab mea chain se ma..

Nani isse aage kuch bolti usse pehle mene unke kamr pe rakhe hath ko nikal unke hotho par rakh bola.
(Party me music high hone ke wajase mera face unke karib lana parta bolne ke liye)

Nani Darling abi toa tumhare or mere bache kaha huye hea..
Abi b tum tin or bacho ko aaram se janam dea do..
Or marne ki baat kar rahi ho tu..
Bhulgayi kya nanaji ko unke pote kam bete/betiyo ka chera dikhane ki baat hui thi hamari..

Ispar nani ne ek jor dar mukka mere pit par mara jo hath unhone mere kandhe par rakha tha usse..
Or boli..

Kitna bigad gaya hea tu haa..
Apni nani se aisi baat karte huye sharam ni aati tuje..

Ispar mene unke kaan ke paas apna face laga kar phuk marte huye kaha
Sharam aati hena darling par tumhe dekh firsf chalijati hea..

Mera itna kehte he couples change huye or nani ki jagha aruna masi aagai thi ab mere sath dance karneko..

Unke sath kuch der dance kiya mene..
Par masi muje bas gure jaa rahi thi..
Par pyaar bhari najro se..
Ab unka bina kuch bole muje gure jana muje acha ni lag raha tha isliye mene kaha..

Kya hua masi..
Pehli baar mili ho aap or apne bhanje ko aise ghur ke dara rahi ho..
Aise koi karta he kya..

Meri baat par aruna masi ne haste huye kaha..
Jaisa suna tha tumhare bareme usse badkar paaya..
Tum bilkul raaj ke tarha he ho..

Itna bol unki or meri dono ki ankhe halki chalak uthi par dono ke karan bhin bhin the..
Par jo b ho senti hona na muje pasand he na me kisi ko hone deata hu..

Isliye mene baat badalte huye masi se kaha..

Waise masi wo phuljadi apki behen hea kya..
Mene riya ke taraf isara karte huye kaha..

Jispar masi ne haste huye kaha..
Dekh bachu mere sath tere ye flirting tricks nai chalegi..
Muje sab pata he tere bareme .
Bhale he aaj mili hu pehli baar par fir b tumhare bareme muje sab pata hea..

Isbaat par hamdono hasne lagge or fir couple change huye..
Or thodi der baad sirf 3 he couple bache the jisme mea riya rohit or maa or bache 2 anjan shaks the..

Or ab final round announce hua..
Isme couple change ni honge..
Or jo best hoga wo he winner hoga..
Or isme mea riya couple the toa rohit or maa dusre or bache huye tisra couple the..

Sry very very sry frnds..
Family ki sath thi 31st or 1st ko isliye update ni dea payi or aaj wapas kolkata aagayi hu hostle mea so aake he ye wala update likha hea..
Par bina edit kiye post kar rahi hu..

Or last mea..
Aap sabi ko late par..
Happywala New Year Frnds..
Hope This Year Will Bring Joy To Your Life N
Our This Forum..

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[color=rgb(255,]UPDATE 17

Ab final round start ho chuka tha jisme sirf 3 couples the..
Jinme mea or riya ek or dusre couple the maa or rohit or tisre unknown tha..
Ab tisre couple ka koi role nai hea yaha isliye mene kuch mention nai kiya hea...
Or iss round mea couples change ni hone wale the..
Bas gane ke end hone tak hame music par dance karna tha or agar baki do couple voluntarily haar mane toa tk warna music band hone ke baad winner gosit hoga jiske liye ek khubsurat sa price tha...

Yaha meri puri family khush ho talliya baja rahi thi..
Par do chere aise the jispar khushi ke bhaav nai the..
Ek thi maa or dusri thi riya..

Maa ka toa pata nai par riya ke expression dekh muje dar lag raha tha qki ek yahi thi jo yaha mere baad sabse jada smart he( aisa muje lagta hea )

Toa pehle maa ke taraf chalte hea..

Maa or rohit jab dance kar rahe the..
Tab maa kafi uncomfortable feel kar rahi thi tabi rohit ne unse kaha..

Apni behen ko toa tumne maaf kardiya ab iss dost ko b kardo..

Jispar maa ne turant jawab diya..

Meri behen toa nadan thi tab or ab b hea jo usne tumhara sath chuna mea tumhe kabi maaf nahi kar sakti tumne or uss haramzade ne milkar muje or mere raaj ko apne pariwar se dur kiya tha..

Jispar rohit slowly par gid gidate huye bola..

Tumhe sachme ni pata aarti uss raat kya hua tha..
Meri koi b galti ni thi..
Mana ki mea or wo (unknown he ye shaks filal par confuse na ho aap sabi isliye batadu ki yaha uss admi ki baat ho rahi hea jis wajase raaj ke pita ne usse ghar se chale jane ko kaha tha)
Dost the tab par mera yakin mano raaj mera bhai jaisa nai usse b badkar tha mere liye mea kaise uske sath aisa karta..
Tumne naa tab meri baat suni naa ab sun rahi ho..
Par mea ant tak yahi kahunga ki mea nirdosh hu aarti mea nirdosh hu..

Itna bol rohit ke aankho se 2 boond pani chalak pare jisse aarti ne b dekha or wo uski baate or reaction dekh asmanjas mea padgayi or insab mea in dono ne nachna he band kardiya jisse ye dono disqualify hogaye ab bache the sirf 2 couple ek rishi or riya or dusra unknown couple

Ab yaha meane or riya ne jab se dance start kiya tha tab se riya bas meri greenish ankho mea he dekhe jaa rahi thi..

Kuch der toa muje kuch ni samja par jab muje meri ankho ke bareme realize hua toa mea man mea he khudko galiya dene lagga ki mene lenses q nai lagai..

Muje pata tha riya agar shant he toa ye tufaan ke pehle ki shanti hea or ye baat muje khaye ja rahi thi..

Tabi meane hamare bich ki chupi todte huye usse dance karte karte bola..

Mat dekho in ankho me yu dubkar..
Kahi behna jao issme hamari aashiqui me jumkar.

Jispar riya ne apni chit parichit or rahasyamayi muskan late huye mujse kaha..

Rishi ke bache tum yaha sabi ko ullu banalo par muje kabi nai bana paoge..

Uski baate sun mea hadbada sa gaya tha jisse mera ek step dagmagaya par riya ne turant he usse b improvise kar aisa dikhya ki ye b ek step tha..

Jispar sabi ne talliya bajai..
Par yaha meri baji hui thi ki agar ye baat riya ko pata he toa beta rishi tu toa gaya beta..
Ye dayan ni chodne wali he tuje aise..

Tabi mene kaha..

Tum ye kya bolrahi ho..
Mana ki mera naam rishi he par ham aaj pehli baar mile he samji riya..

Bas yahi galti hogayi mujse.
Uska naam lekar qki muje uska naam nai pata tha uske mutabik par yaha mene uska naam lekar sab gud gobar kardiya..

Tabi riya haste huye boli..
Ab bas b karo rishi tumhara tatto mene dekh liya tha screen par kisika dyan jaye ya nai par wo tatto iss duniya mea sirf tumhare he kandhe par ho sakta he or kisi ke nai..
(Konsa tatto tha wo ek secret hea jo aage pata chalega)

Ab mene b kabul karna he sahi samja apni sachai ko taki mea riya ke sath kuch settlement kar saku warna isne meri maar leni hea..

Isliye mene ek dam pyaar se usse kaha..

Riya pls ye baat masi ko abi pata nai chalni chahiye warna ab tak ki ki gayi mehnat sab waste hojayegi...

Jispar riya ne fir ek baar haste huye boli..

Tk hea par tumse kuch purane hisab chutta karne hea isliye ab jab tak mena kahu tumhe meri sari baate manni hogi..

Mea marta kya karta uski ye baat muje maani padi or manme usse galiya dete huye hamne apna focus baato se hata dance par kiya..

Hamdono dance mea itna khogaye the ki music kab band hua pata he nai chala wo toa logo ki talliyo ke awajse hamara dyan tutta or tabi pata chala ki jo couple hamare sath dance kar raha tha usne toa 1 min pehle he har man li thi..

Sabi majood log talliyo ke sath ham dono ki tarif karne lagge..

Or fir hame surprise mila jo ki winner ko milna tha iss dance ke jo ki ek bugati verron thi latest model..

Jab muje or riya ko car ki chabi dea rahe the tab riya ne aage bad car ki keys lea li or muje jeeb dikhate huye boli ki..

Aajse ye car meri or wo keys leakar hamare family ke taraf chal padi..
Or mea piche bas daat pista rehgaya..

Tabi mere pass mera dost aaryan aaya or mere kaan me kuch bola jisse sun mere chere par jaha ab tak riya ke karan sad wale emotions the wahi abb ek jeherili muskan thi..[/color]


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UPDATE 18

SHORT INTRODUCTION

Aaryan - bestest frnd ever
Age 18

Aaryan mere sath school tym se hea..
Or ham dono itne ache or khass dost he ki mea puri duniya mea apni maa ke baad sirf tin logo par aankh band kar bharosa kar sakta hu or usme se aaryan b ek hea..

Bachpan se he anath raha he or anath asaram mea pala bada hea..
Mere kaafi insist karne par b mere sath mere ghar pe rehne kabi nai aaya..
Par anath asaram ke rule ke mutabik 10th ke baad waha reh rahe bacho ko anath asaram chod jana hota he isliye aaryan ko b waha se nikalna pada..
Par aaryan ko waha se nikalne par kafi pareshaniya hui or kayi part tym jobs b ki usne par kahi b usse jada din tikneni diya gaya..
Qki aarayn thora teda tha isliye uske sath kafi bura bartav hota aaraha he bachpan se ab tak..

Tede ka matlab homo nai par uske rehen sehen or bolne ka tarika thoda alag tha..
Or ye sab bachpan me huye hadse ke wajase hua tha jo uske sath 8th std me hua tha..
Or uss waqt mea yaha nai tha..
Matlab me apni family ke sath bahar gaya hua tha..
Or us hadse me kya hua tha ye baat muje b nai pata he ab tak..

So jab muje pata chalegi ye baat toa iss anpad writer ko kehkar aap sabi ko b batadunga..

Par uss hadse ke baad jab mene fir Aaryan ko mere sath mere ghar rehne ko kaha tab wo jaldi he mangaya tha..

Ab aap sab socho ge ki mene ab tak usse introduce q nai karwaya aap sabi se toa batadu ki wo he party ke sare aarangements dekh raha tha..

Ab aate he uss baat par jo usne mere kaan me kahi..
Darasal baat ye he ki..

Flashback...

Baat mere 18th janam din ki he jo ki kuch mahine pehle he tha..

Ab aarayn anath asaram me rehta tha toa usski janam din ki date usse pata nai thi ..
Par jab se ham dost bane tab se hamdono sath he janam din manaya karte the..

Toa hamdono hamara clg frnds ke sath hamara 18th birthday mana rahe the duper ka samay tha..

Ham sab mouj masti kar karib 4 baje ke aas pass ghar loutne ke liye nikle the qki mere ghar par b birthday party rakhi gayi thi hamare liyl..

Toa mea or aaryan meri car me beth ghar ke taraf bhad rahe the ke tabi rohit (ye mere mosaji jarur he par hamari mulakat he kuch aisi hui thi ki ham dono dost jaise rehte hea)
Ka muje call aaya or muje jald he bataye huye address par aaneko kaha..

Pehle toa mene mana kiya qki aaj ghar par party thi or jiske liye party he wohi agar party me tym pe na pohache toa acha thodi lagega..

Par rohit he jab ye kaha ki baat mere papa se related he toa mene bina waqt gawaye aaryan ko lekar rohit ke bataye huye address par pohach gaya..

Ye jagha seher se kafi dur or sunshan ilake me thi..
Or dikhne me kisi tute phute godam ya purani factory jaisi lag rahi thi..

Aaryan jo ab tak chup tha wo iss jagha ko dekh darte huye mujse bola ki..

Bhai ye kaha lea aaya he tu..
Dekhne se he lag raha he ki yaha bhuto or chudailo ka dera hea..
(Aaryan bhuto se bohot darta he or iss baat ka mene kabi kabi fayda b uthaya he par uske bhale ke liye he..)

Muje uski baate sun uski tang khichne ka maan toa hua par yaha baat mere papa ke bareme thi isliye mea kafi serious tha..
Or mene usse kaha..

Aaryan filal mere pass tere kisi b sawal ka jawab nai he qki mea khud pareshan hu..
Ab mosaji ne yaha bulaya he toa wahi batayenge q..

Itna bol mene uska hath pakar andar ke taraf jane lagga..
Ham abi kuch dur he gaye the ki mere samne tin sakhs aa khade huye..

Jinmese ek ko toa me jaanta tha(rohit) par bache dono shaks mere liye anjan the..

Tabi hamdono ko dekh unme se jo sabse umar me tha wo shaks bola..

Rohit ye kya he..
Tumne isse yaha akele aaneko kaha thana fir ye iske sath kon he..
Tum jante hona..
Ye baat kitni important hea galtise b agar kisiko ye raaj pata chala toa kitni problem ho sakti hea..

Unki baate sun rohit bola..

Gabrane ki baat nai hea yashpal kaka ye bacha (aaryan)bharosemand he..
Iski garuntee mea leta hu

(Ab rohit aaryan ko kese jante he iska b khulasa jald hoga jab aruna masi ko mera sach pata chalega)..

Inki aapas me ho rahi bate mere or aarayn ke upar se ja rahi thi fir b mene rohit se pucha ki..

Mosaji aapne mere papa ke bareme kuch baat karni he kaha tha..

Meri baat sun unmese tisra shaks jo ab tak chup tha aage aa mere gale laga..

Or fir mujse alag ho usne rote huye mere papa ke sath jo kuch b hua ab tak sab kuch bataya or kese usne or papa ne mil muje or maa ko bachane ke liye mumbai beja(ye or koi nai ramu tha or dusra shaks raw head yashpal singh the)

(Writres pow - yaha Rishi ko uske dad ke death ko lekar in tino ne kuch nai kaha tha..
Balki ramu ne usse jo kuch b kaha usse yahi lag raha tha ki ko organisation raaj yani rishi ke dad ke piche pari he unhone he raaj ko marwaya tha..)

Raamu ki baate sun meari aankho se aansu behne lage or mea gutno ke bal beth rone lagga..
Ussi pal mene maan me soch liya tha kis jis jis shaks ke wajase aaj mere papa mere sath nai he usse mea bat se batar mout dunga..

Or fir kuch der rone ke baad mene apne aansu pohachte huye raamu se kaha..

Chachaji pls muje bataye ki kon he insab ke piche..
Jab tak mea unsabiko mout ke gath na utardu muje chain nai milega..

Tabi yaspal bole .

Rishi ussikeliye hamne tumhe yaha bulaya hea..
Par jinse tumne ladne ka man banaya he wo koi ek shaks nai he balki puri aarmy he jisse aaj ki date me world ki har country darti hea..
Yaha tak ki america b unko hara nai payi hea..
Or agar tumhe un tak pohachna he toa tumhe pehle training leni hogi or apni team banani hogi..

Or jaisa ramu ne bataya he uss formula ke bareme toa kya tum uss formula ko khud par test karne ko raaji ho..
Qki tumhare pita ne sirf andaja lagaya he ki uss formula ka tumpar koi asar nai hoga..
Qki tumhara dna structure kafi strong he..
Par agar thodi b galti hui toa tum mar b sakte ho..

Tabi mene kaha..

Bhale he mea marjau par mea ab piche nai hatunga..
Mea har haal mea uss formula ko apne andar inject kar training lunga taki mea apne papa ke mout ka badla lea saku..
Or muje mere papa par pura bharosa he agar unhone kaha he muje kuch ni hoga uss formula se toa kuch ni hoga..

Or fir raamu ne wo box jo papa ne unhe diya tha mumbai bejne se pehle wo muje diya..

Mere hath lagte he wo box pe laga lock apne app open hogaya..
Or usme ek green color ka solution tha choti se tube mea..

Usse fir yashpal ne mere shoulder mea jaha tatto bana hua hea waha inject kiya..
Jisse muje kuch der toa kuch feel nai hua..

Par jaise jaise wo formula mere blood mea mix ho puri body mea felne lagga muje bohot jada garmi mehsoos hone lagi or mere dil mea tej dard hone lagga..
Meri heart beat itni fast hogai thi ki abi bahar ko ajaeyega mera heart aisa lag raha tha..

Itna dard meh seh ni paya or mea behosh hogaya tha..
Or jab meri ankh khuli toa mea apne kamre me tha or maa or nani dono mere aaju baju beth ek ek hath tham rakha tha.


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UPDATE 19

Muje hos mea aata dekh maa ne muje gale laga liya or rote huye pucha ki tu tk heana beta..

Jispar meane sirf haa mea sar hilaya..
Aisehi nani nea b muje gale lagaya..

Tabi bahar sea raamu aata he mere kamre mea..
Or aate sangh he mera haal chaal puchte he or kehte hea..

Tum tk toa hona beta..

Jispar mene kuch na kaha sirf haa mea sar hilaya tabi maa boli .

Beta yea tumhare papa ke dost kam bade bhai hea..
Or yehi tumhe aaryan ke sath yaha lekar aaye hea..

Maa ki baat sun mene bethe bethe he unhe pranam kiya..
Par muje ab ye dar lag raha tha ki maa ko kya bolunga ki mea behosh kaise hua..
Or sayad raamu b meri halat samajte huye mere pass beth the huye mujse bole..

Beta tumhari car ka sayad accident hogaya tha..
Jiswajase tumhare sar par car ka handle lagga or tum behosh hogaye..
Par aarayn hosh me tha or ussine meri car ko rukwakar help mangithi..
Or jab mea tumhe lekar aaryan ke bataye huye address par aaya tab muje pata chala ki tum raaj ke bete ho..

Unki baate sun meane apne sar par haath lagaya jaha pati bandi hui thi..

Ye dekh mea man me bola..

Waa yaar kya solid planning ke sath liya he inhone sab..
Gajab bhai gajab..
Par sala uss formula ke wajase abi b body mea kuch ajeeb sa feel horaha he..

Tabi maa or nani hame mere room me chor bahar ko aagaye or jate jate mujse kaha ki tum dono baate karo mea party ke tayari hui ki nai ye dekh ke aati hu..

Yaha maa ke jaate he raamu ne mujse pucha..

Rishi ab kaisa lagraha he tumhe..
Matlab kuch alag feel horaha he yaa nai..

Jispar mene..

Haa thora ajeeb lagraha he jaise body me kuch hal chal se ho rahi hoo..

Raamu - Hmm tk hea..
Par ye acha hua ki formula ka tumpar filal toa koi side effect nai hua hea..
Par aage ka keh nai sakte ..
Or ab tumhe aajse tk 2 din baad apni training suru karni hogi..
Taki tum world ka best agent ban sako...

Raamu ki baat sun mea kafi excited tha..
Qki mera hamesha se dream raha he ki mea ek raw agent banu or yaha muje ghar bethe ye opportunity mil rahi hea..
Bas fark ye tha..
Tab mea pehle desh ke fir apne liye kuch karta par aaj mea apne liye apne dad ke liye raw agent banna chahta hu..
Wo b The Best..

Khair mere khayalo se raamu ne muje bahar nikalte huye mujse kaha..

Rishi aaryan ko b tumhare sath agent banane ka socha hea mene..
Taki tumhe aage help ho..
Aaryan se b mene ye baat ki toa pata chala ki wo computer n technology related chijo mea acha he toa q na usse issi ki training dea usse in sab me profesional banaya jayee..

Unki baat par mene sehmati jatate huye kaha..

Aap tk bol rahe ho chachaji..
Par mom ko ya kisi b family member ko insab ke bareme pata ni hona chahiye plss..
Mea or aaryan dono he apni identity chupake rakhenge..
Aap tino ke siway koi b ni janega hame...
Par ek problem hea..
Maa ko mea ni batasakta ye sab toa mea or aarayan training ko kaise aayengea..

Meri baat sun raamu ne turant jawab diya..

Iska hal mene pehle he dund rakha hea..
Meane aarti se baat karli hea ki tumhe or aaryan dono ko ab thodi fighting shikh leni chahiye taki tum dono future mea apni raksha khud kar sako.
Jispar aarti maan b gayi hea..
So aaj se tik 2 din baad tum or aaryan shubhe 4 baje uth mere sath chaloge training ke liye .

Ispar mene jagrukta was pucha ki hamari training kaha hogi..
Or kon karega hame train..

Jispar raamu ne haste huye kaha..
Ye toa tumhe khud he 2 din baad dekhna hoga..

Fir aisehi baat karte karte raat hogai..
Itni der ki baato mea raamu ne muje apne dono pariwaro ki puri history geography batadi thi..
Unki baate sun mea us kamine ko man he man galiya dene lagga jiske wajase mere mom dad ko ghar chodke jana pada..

Unhone muje ye b bataya tha ki agle saal mela he jisme muje dadaji ke taraf se pratinidhi ban utarna hea..
Jispar mea jald he raaji hogaya qki mea b apne dada dadi or baki ke ristedaro ko dekhne ke liye utsuk tha.

Fir raat me party hui..
Jaha bohot sare guest aaye the jinme sahar ke top businessman or politicians b the..

Ho b q naa aakhir AR GRP of companies ka mallik tha mea..
Jo ki pure desh meahe nai balke world ke top ke companies mea se ek thi..
(Mene pehle bataya tha ki mere papa yani raaj ne marne se pehle he apna pura legal bhsibusi india mea shift kar liya tha..
Ye baat muje maa se pata chali thi..
Company toa papa ke kuch barosemand subordinates milkar chala rahe the..
Par company ke 60 percent share mere or mom ke naam the..
Mea bas kabi kabi mumbai headquarter mea jaa ata tha..
Mom ke kehne par..
Qki wo hamesa kehti thi..

Ek acha boss wohi hota he..
Jo apne business ko dusro ke barose na chod khud b dekhe..)

Khair party mea bohot se log the isliye party der tak chali or fir jab party khatam hui toa mea thaka haara apne kamre mea aa sogaya qki party me logo se mil milke mea bohot thak gaya tha..
Or bed par lette he muje nind aagayi..

Mea abi soya he tha ki muje sapna aaya jisme..
Mea mere samne ek ajib sa planet tha jispar sirf ek he mehel bana hua tha or waha koi or nai tha..
Or pata nai q mea apne aap us mehel ke andar chala jaa raha tha..
Or jab mea andar gaya toa waha koinai tha..
Pura mehel gumliya mene par koi mila he nai..
Or jab mea thak har kar mehel se jane wala tha tabi muje awaj aai .

Kaha jaa rahe ho rishi..
Jis kaam ke liye tumhara janam hua he ab uss karya ki pehli sidhi charne ka waqt aagaya he..
Bohot jald tumhe khudse rubaroo hona parega..
Bas yahi kahunga..
Kabi gamand mat karna kisi chij ka or apne app ko pehchana hoga tumhe..
Uss liye roj training par jane se pehle kuch der dyan lagana jisse tum apne andar jhak sakoge..

Mea abi kuch puchta yaa bolta usse pehle meri neend khul gayi..
Or mea bas sochta rehgaya ki ye kaisa sapna tha..
Par jab kuch samaj nai aaya tab mene ye baat taalte huye utha or apne underground gym mea agaya ..

Jaha mene kuch der kasarat ki or fir ready ho aaryan ke sath clg aagaya or 2 din aisehi normal bitgaye .

Siway uss sapne ke jo ki muje har roj aane lagata..
Or jaisi mea kuch puchpata meri neend khul jati hea..

Ek tarha se ek alarm ban gaya tha ye sapne mere liye..
Khair mea aaj 3.30 ko he uthgaya tha sapne ke badolat par aaryan ko bohot mehnat kar uthana para or fir hamdono ready ho nikal gaye ramu ke sath training ke liye..

Sry for delay frnds..
Par jaise ki mene bataya tha..
Pichle kuch hafto se clg ke kaamo mea busy hone ke karan mea tym nai nikal paa rahi hu..
Par mea weekly sirf 4 updates he likh sakti hu..
Jisse mene iss thread par do or meri dusri threaad par do aise divide kiya he..
Jo ki mere free hote he alternate days pe ana suru hojayenge..

Hope you all will understand..


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Rishi the SAVIOR
(Being evil)..
A story full of suspense,thriller,fantasy and etc..


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