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Part-10
Kavita aur mitali aa chukki thi ghar.
Bike park kar ke dono ander aa gaye.
Radhika ki maa ne gussa kiya ke uss ne itne pese ku kharach kiye.
Suraj mitali ko dekh hassta hua: yeh meri iss pyari aur sookhi sadhi behan ke liye jis pe maans ka to naamo nishan tak nahi.
Mitali apna muh khol jeebh ko poora bahar nikal dikhati boli: bhagwan ne saara maans meri jheeb mein laga diya. He yaha koi haddi??
Sab hass diye
Mitali fir khud hi hassti hui boli: issi liye main sara din tukar tukar bolti rehti hu.
Suraj hassta hua kavita ko dekh bola: aur iss bhabi maa ke liye jo jaldi hi mujhe chachu banane wali he.
Kavita thoda sharmate hue kitchen mein chali gayi.
Suraj ne juice ka packet kitchen mein ja kavita ko de diya. Kavita ne sab ko juice diya pehle.
To suraj ki zid pe uss ne pehle piya.
Baaton baaton mein sab ne mehsoos kiya ke suraj ko bacho se bahut lagav he.
Radhika ki maa ne poochh hi liya ke uss ki behno ke bache nahi.
Suraj: hina di ka to abhi tak nahi he koi. Kitty di ke do he. Badi beti chhotta beta. Par di laati nahi unn ko. Unn ki daadi ke paas chhod aati he.
Fir suraj ne baaton baaton mein radhika ko poochha ke mitali itni kamjor ku he.
Radhika: yaar ek to iss ke khaane ka time nahi koi. Pehle subah school mein job fir evening college mein study karti he.
Suraj: yaar tum iss ko kaho ke yeh job chhod de. Sirf study kare.
Radhika: jnab yeh delhi he. Yaha mostly sab esa hi karte he. Plus two ke baad higher study ya evening college ya correspondence se. din mein job. Ta ke studies poori hone tak experience bhi ban jaye to achhi job jhat se mil jaati he.
Kuch der mein kavita chai ke sath pastries aur snacks le aai.
Chai ke baad radhika ne maa ko ishara kiya to maa uth ke ander chali gayi.
Lauti to uss ke haath mein pese the.
Uss ne radhika ko diye aur radhika ne suraj ko dete kaha: Suraj yeh pandra hazaar he. Tu hisab kar ke bata de kitne kharach hue main baaki papa se le ke de deti hu.
Suraj pese ko dhakelta hua wapas: oye chal chal badi aai pese dene wali. Koi kharcha varcha nahi hua.’
Radhika: nahi yaar ese thode na hota he. Mujhe office se kharcha mil hi jaye ga.
Suraj: mil jayega kharach lena mazze se. bhabi aur mitali ko juice pilana daily.
Kavita hasste hue beech mein: main juice pee liya karu gi mere baap.
Bol ke uss ne jab haath jodh ke sarr ko nivaya to sab hass diye.
Uss ke baad fir se dono mein behas hoti rahi.
Haar ke suraj ne dus hazaar le liye aur baki ke radhika ko de diye.
Yeh kehte hue ke: thik he hotel rooms aur ticket ke ho gaye.
Khane peene mein hum friends mein no sharing.
Radhika thoda naraj hoti dikhi to suraj hass ke Punjabi mein: o sohneyo russde keo ho jad lodh pau tuhade to hi mangu.
Keh ke suraj ne radhika ko kheench ke sab ke saamne gale laga liya.
Uss ke Punjabi bolne pe sabhi hass diye.
Mitali hassti hui: haye veera tu te badi sohni Punjabi bolda ae.
Suraj: yaar main Punjabi haa ta Punjabi ta bolu i. tenu vi te aandi aa Punjabi. Tere muho veer bada sohna lagda menu tu hun sadaa veer hi keha kari hun.
Mitali: thik aa mere cutie pie veer.
Kavita ne bhi batya ke uss ke papa bhi Punjabi the. Iss liye wo bhi Punjabi achhe se bol leti he.
Dus baje tak radhika ke papa aur bhai bhi aa gaye.
Fir se sab ne ek saath dinner kiya.
Suraj ne sab se vadda liya ke ab aap sab ek saath dinner kara kare uss ki khushi ke liye.
Dinner ke baad kavita ooper unn teeno ke saath aa bethi.
Kavita to pone ek chali gayi sone par Raat dedh pone do baje tak teeno bethe hasste khelte baatein karte rahe.
Mitali suraj aur radhika ki achi khaasi taangein kheechti rahi.
Uss ne radhika ko dheere se poochh hi liya: didi sachi batao aap alag alag rooms mein ruke the ya ek hi….
Iss pe radhika ne khoob gussa bhi dikhaya aur hassi bhi.
Subah 5.30 am pe suraj uth gaya tha.
Kavita hi uss ko chai dene aai thi.
kavita ne kaha ke wo naha ke neeche aa jaye wo nashta banati he.
Tab suraj: bhabi chai ke saath bas bread butter. Main shatabdi mein ja raha hu to nashta mil hi jana he.
Suraj jaldi se ready hua.
Uss ke jaane ke kaaran sabhi uth gaye.
Hassne hassane wali Mitali udas thi. wo jor se hug kar ke uss ko mili.
Suraj: udaas nahi hote. Tu jab bhi kahe gi main aa jaya karu ga milne.
Mitali fir se gale lag gayi suraj ke. Suraj ne sab se vida li.
Sab uss ko fir se aane ka kaha aur suraj ne bhi sab ko Chandigarh ke liye invite kiya.
6.30 pe radhika uss ko manish ki car le se ke station pe chhodne aai.
Subah rush nahi tha. 7.20 tak dono platform pe the.
Train ka time 7.40 am ka tha. Suraj ne bags ander rakh diye.
Suraj bags chhod wapas platform pe aa gaya.
Dono ne ek doosre ko bahon mein bhar liya.
Ek doosre ke gaalon ko chooma.
Radhika bas yahi kehti rahi ke wo apna khayal rakhe aur koshish kare ke parul ko bhi khush rakhne ki.
Uss ki yahi wish thi ke dono kese bhi kar ke jaldi ek ho jaye.
Radhika ne nam aankhon se suraj ko vidai di.
Suraj ne vadda kiya ke wo ab delhi aata jata rahe ga papa ke kaam se.
wo business kare ga aur saath hi m.sc maths private.
Ku ke baki sab sapne to pehle toot chukke the uss ke.
Bas ab yahi ek sapna bacha tha jis ko uss ko poora karna tha.
Radhika ne uss ka haath choom kar ke kaha ke uss ko aur parul ko ek karna yeh uss ka sapna he. Yeh sapna suraj ko poora karna hi hoga uss ki khushi ke liye
Suraj ki train chal padhi to radhika station ke exit ki aur chal di.
Radhika car mein aa beth kafi der tak roti rahi suraj se juda ho ke.
Udhar suraj train mein betha radhika, Chennai aur Chennai mein parul ke saath beete lamho ko yaad karta raha.
Kareeb aath baje uss ke papa ka phone aya yeh poochhne ko ke uss ne train li.
Suraj ne kaha ke wo train mein hi he.
Hari ne kaha ke wo sava giarah tak driver bhej dega station pe car ke saath.
Itne mein chai aa gayi, wo chai peene laga.
Thodi der baad hi parul ka phone aya to uss ko batane laga ke wo train mein he. Baraa baje tak ghar hoga.
Kareeb pone nau baje radhika ka phone aya ke wo abhi abhi ghar pahuchi he.
Radhika ki awaaz hi bata rahi thi wo bahut udass he.
Call end hone pe sochne laga fir beete dino ki.
Beech beech mein khana peena serve hota raha.
Poore sava giarah train Chandigarh ja pahuchi.
Driver pehle se waha tha car le ke. Uss ne suraj ko wish kar ke haal chaal poochha. Fir dono chal diye.
Pone baara suraj apni kothi tha sector 32 b mein.
Papa drawing haal mein hi bethe the wait kar rahe. Galle laga pyar kiya.
Mom ka poochha to hari ne ishare se bataya ke wo aa rahi he.
Kanta apne room se aa rahi thi. wo mom ki taraf bada. Aage jhuka to kanta ne ek formal ci hug di.
Aur fir nokrani ko oonche se boli ke suraj aa gaya he chai lao.
Nokrani suraj ka naam sunte hi kitchen se bhaagti aai aur suraj ke paas aa ke: aap aa gaye suraj baba, aap thik he na. dekho kitna kamjor lag rahe ho. Aap gaye to ghar ki ronak hi chali gayi.
Kanta uss ko thoda ghoorte hue boli: bas bas bahut ho gaya. Tu to ese kar rahi he jese badi jang jeet ke aya he yeh. Ghar se bhaag ke gaya tha. Khud hi dhakke kha ke laut aya, ab pata chal gaya iss ko aate daal ka bhaav.
Kanta uss ke Saturday na aane se khaffa thi. kyu ke uss ne kitty ki party miss kar di thi. wo issi baat ki kheej nikal rahi thi bête pe.
Hari ko gussa aa gaya: kanta shut up. Itne dino baad ladka ghar aya he. Yeh nahi ke uss ko pyar se gale lagao. Haal chal poochho. Shuru ho gayi aate hi.
Nokrani aankhein saaf karti kitchen mein chali gayi.
Kanta bhi gusse se pati ko: gale lagane wali harkat he kya iss ki. Aap ke karan hi itna sar chadh gaya he yeh.
Suraj ko dukh hua unn dono ke ese ladne pe.
suraj: chhodiye papa aap please mom ko kuch na kahe. Main kar lunga inn ka gussa shaant.
Keh ke suraj apne room ki aur chal pada.
Do chotte bags uss ne le liye saath. Room mein aa joote utare. Washroom mein ghuss gaya.
Haath muh dho bahar aya to nokrani jis ka naam rani aur age kareeb 35 ki thi chai aur bread with half fry egg le ke khadi thi.
Suraj uss ko dekh bola: tum batao kesi ho rani aur tere baal bache pati sab kese he.
Rani: sab badiya he suraj baba.
Suraj: mere kaaran aap sab ko khoob daant padi ho gi mom se. mera sara gussa mom ne aap logo pe utara hoga.
Rani: aap thik se laut aaye suraj baba hum sab bhool gaye aap ko dekh. Bhagwan sadaa aap ko achhe se rakhe. Aap hum sab ki jaan ho suraj baba.
Kehte kehte fir se aankhein bhar aai rani ki. Jis ko wo saree ke pallu se saaf karti chali gayi.
Suraj ko bahut bura laga uss ko rote dekh.
Suraj chai aur bread egg le bahar hari ke paas aa gaya. Wo paper reading mein busy the.
Suraj paas beth bread egg khane laga aur saath hi hari se baatein karne laga.
Chennai ke customers ka batane laga.
Fir uss ne dono cheques nikal papa ko diye.
Cheques dekh hari khushi se uchhal ke room ki aur lapka. ‘yeh dekh kanti tere bête ki pehli kamai. Five lac ke ooper ke do orders aur 2 lacs advance. Pehle main akela tha ab hum do nahi giarah he.
Thodi der baad kanta jis ka gussa orders sun ke shant ho chukka tha suraj ke paas room mein aai.
Aur galle laga ke pyar kiya bête ko.
Suraj ne kaha ke wo ab sona chahta he to kanta chali gayi.
Suraj ne kapde change kiye.
Apna android nikala wo off tha.
Uss ko charging pe laga room ka door thoda band kar bed pe aa gaya.
Radhika ko call kar bataya ke wo ab ghar he.
Fir parul ko call ki aur uss ke baad bed pe pasar gaya.
Apne ghar ke bed pe sone ka anand hi kuch aur tha.
Sham ko kareeb chaar baje rani ne hi uthaya. ‘chalo suraj baba uth ke lunch kar lo.’
Rani ne uss ka kandha pakad hilaya.
Suraj ne aankhein khol ke rani ko dekha aur ek smile di.
Rani jaanti thi agar wo chali gayi to yeh fir so jaaye ga. Wo uss ke sar pe khadi rahi.
Suraj ek angdai le ke utha.
Jese hi rani jaane lagi to suraj: arey rani darling aaj kitne din baad yeh bed mila. So ke maza aa gaya.
Yeh bolte bolte suraj ne rani ka bajoo pakad uss ko bed pe bitha liya apne saamne.
Rani ek jhatke se khade hote, ‘arey baba kya karta he tu. Yaha ese bethe maalkin ne dekh liya to bahut gaali de gi.’
Yeh keh rani nikal gayi bahar aur jaate jaate boli, ‘chalo baba jaldi aao dinning table pe khana rakh ri hu.’
Suraj rani aur ghar ke baaki nokron se ese hi laad karta tha hamesha.
Jo ke kanta ko jara bhi pasand nahi tha.
Kanta ki soch thi ke yeh chotte log he yeh sar chadhane layak nahi.
Kanta ki iss soch ka apni betiyon pe to poora asar hua par yeh soch suraj pe haavi na ho saki.
Wo samjhta tha ke yeh log bhi insaan he unn ki hi tarah.
Agar yeh gareeb he to iss mein inn ka kya kasoor.
Inn ke seene mein bhi dil he jis mein pyar hota he.
Uss ko yeh pyar apni maa aur behno se kahi adhik najar aata tha inn mein.
Rani iss ghar mein dai maa ki death ke baad aai thi.
shuru shuru mein uss ki main duty suraj ko hi sambhalne ki thi.
wo ab kareeb 8-9 saal se iss ghar mein thi.
jab wo iss ghar mein aai thi to 25-26 ki thi do bacho ki maa ban chuki thi tab.
Apne bacho ke saath saath uss ne apni mamata ka kuch hissa suraj ko bhi diya.
Dai maa ke baad suraj ko maa ki mamta ya kuch rani se ya fir apni chachi se mili kuch der.
Chachi to uss se kanta ke ghamand ke kaaran dur ho gayi to peechhe reh gayi sirf rani.
Shuru shuru mein wo rani ko didi kehta tha.
Par kanta ke kehne pe ke nokron se koi rishta nahi banaya jata.
Nokar nokar hote he to suraj ne uss ko didi kehna chhod sirf rani ya kabhi kabhi rani auntie kehne laga.
Par uss ko rani kehna jayada achha lagta tha.
Baad mein wo rani se itna ghull mil gaya ke laad se uss ko rani darling ya rani jaan bhi keh leta.
Jis ka rani kabhi bura nahi manaati. Rani ka pati pehle inn ke ghar mein driver tha.
Par kitty ki shadi mein ek car uss ko dahej mein di gayi to rani ka pati bhi ek tarah se dahej mein hi uss car ka driver bann ke chala gaya.
Ku ke kitty ka pati apni car to khud drive karta tha.
Hari ne kothi ki back side mein jo dai maa ke liye do room ka set banwa rakha tha. Wahi rani ko de diya.
Jis mein rani, uss ka pati, do bache aur rani ki vidhwa saas rehte the.
Wese waha do rooms aur the. Ek chowkidar ka tha.
Doosra aksar khali pada rehta tha.
Kabhi kabhar jab kisi driver ko der ho jaati ya subah early jana hota kahi to driver uss room mein ruk jaate.
Rani ka pati subah chala jata tha kitty ke ghar aur raat ko laut aata apne parivar ke paas.
Suraj aksar maa se chhupa ke rani ke bacho ke liye kuch na kuch lata rehta tha apni pocket money se.
Suraj ab chahe jawan ho chukka tha par wo ab bhi wese hi behave karta rani se jese 12-13 saal ki umar se karta aya tha.
Rani ne bhi kabhi uss ka bura na maana ku ke wo jaanti thi ke uss ka suraj baba dil ka saaf he.
Itne saalo se paas rehne se rani ko suraj se kuch khaas hi lagaav sa ho gaya tha.
Suraj utha haath muh dho ke dinning table pe aa gaya.
Rani ne lunch serve kiya.
Poochhne pe pata chala ke hari kahi gaya he kissi se milne aur kanta ander ready ho rhi thi uss ko kisi apni saheli se milne jana tha.
Suraj ke lunch karne ke beech ghar mein kaam karne wala maali kaka milne aya.
Ek driver ke saath wo aya tha. Wo uss ke papa ki car chalata tha.
Doosra jo kanta ki gaadi chalata tha wo aur chowkidar jo ek gorkha tha pahadi wo aate hi gate pe mil liye the.
Ek aur thi kaam wali bai jo subah sham bartan aur ghar ki safai karne aati thi uss se nahi mila tha suraj abhi ku k wo subah subah aati thi ya fir sham ko paanch baje.
lunch ke baad suraj room mein aya. Cupboard khol ek pant shirt nikali aur pehan li.
Baal swarne se pehle uss ko cell ki yaad aai. Wo to abhi off tha. Charging check ki ab full thi.
charger dc kar uss ne cell on kiya. Uss ko sab se pehle prem se baat karni thi.
uss ko pata tha ke prem bahut gusse mein hoga to wo jehni taur pe prem ki gaali ke liye tayar tha.
(note- kishu main Punjabi mein hone wali baaton ko hindi mein saath mein brackets mein likh raha hu ta ke tum ko samajh aa jaye)
suraj ne prem ka number nikal ke dial kiya. Do chaar bells ke saath jese hi call connect hui.
Suraj: kida prem veere? (kese ho prem bhai)
Udhar se prem poore gusse mein shayad suraj ki call aati dekh hi uss ko gussa aa gayaa.
Prem: bund maar veere di. Tu maa I yahveya he kithe. Dopehar da mareya tu Chandigarh ch te hun tak eh kudi yahve mobile nu on ku na kita. Saala kutta kanjar…..( gaand maar bhai ki. Maa yahve tu he kaha. Dopehar se tu marra hua he Chandigarh mein abhi tak mobile on kyu na kiya)
Suraj hassta hua: yaar o main aa ke so gaya ci. Bas hune lunch kar ke cell on kita te pehli call tenu. (ya wo aa ke so gaya tha. abhi lunch kar ke cell on kiya aur pehli call tujhi ko)
Prem firse ussi lehje mein: saun di bhain chodni jayada jaruri ci. (sone ki behan chodni jayada jaruri thi)
Suraj: yaar thand rakh.
Prem: thand gayi maa chudan. Ethe meri gaand fatti payi. Bike chak te ik mint to vi pehla ghar aa. (thand gayi maa chudane. Yaha meri fatti padi he. bike utha aur ek mint se bhi pehle ghar aa.)
Suraj: yes boss.
Yeh bol ke call disconnect ki. Baal set kiye.
Punjabi jutti daali. Aur bahar ko bhaga.
Bike uthai to dekha bike ke front tyre mein hawa nahi thi. wo fir se bhaga ander.
Mom ke paas ja bola: mom aap ki gaadi le jau. Thodi der mein aa jau ga. Prem ke ghar tak jana tha. Bike mein hawa nahi he.
Kanta: na na mujhe jana he abhi urgently.
Suraj: mom aap ja kis side pe rahi ho.
Kanta: mohali.
Suraj: shit.
Wo teji se bahar ki aur bhaga. Gate ke paas uss ko maa ka driver najar aya. Wo 30-32 ka youngman tha.
Suraj uss ke paas ja bola: yaar meri bike to thik karva ke rakh dete.
Driver: sorry suraj baba. Sahib ne kaha bhi tha par main bhool gya. Aap ko kaha jana he. Main chhod aata hu.
Suraj: nahi yaar main auto se nikal jata hu. Tu mom ke saath ja.
Suraj teji se bahar nikla. Bahar ek auto najar aa gaya. Wo bhaag ke auto mein betha. Auto wale ko sector 17 chowk ki aur jaane ko kaha.
Fir cell nikal prem ko call lagai.
Suraj: yaar oh bike ch hawa ni ci main auto te aa rea. (yaar wo bike mein hawa nahi thi main auto se aa raha hu)
Prem: jidda da gaandu tu odda di teri bike. Chal tu na sector 18 di church kol pahuch main aa reha othe. (jesa gaandu tu wesi teri bike. Chal tu sector 18 ki church ke paas pahuch main aa raha hu wahi.)
Suraj ne auto wale ko waha jaane ka kaha.
Suraj ne pahuchte hi pese diye. Aur saamne prem ko dekh baahein fela di.
Jese hi wo prem ke kareeb pahucha to prem ka ek ghoonsa jor se suraj ke pet pe padha.
Suraj duhra hota chala gaya dard se.
prem itne mein hi na ruka. Uss ki left arm pakad marodi aur peeth pe laga di aur gali bak ke,’bhain yahvi jayada agg lagi na teri bund ch. Chal pehla ehnu bujawa.’ (behan yahvi jayada aag lagi he na teri gaand mein. Chal pehle iss ko bujha du.)
Yeh kehte hi prem ne apna right ghutna jadh diya suraj ke pichhwade pe.
suraj dard se cheekha: maar ta oye maa I yahveya. (maar diya oye……)
Kuch pal pehle suraj ko gali dene wala aur peetne wale prem ne ek dum se suraj ko kheench apni baahon mein bhar ro diya.
Rote rote sher dil prem: maa choda tu Chennai ja ke aish karda reha te ethe pata kina vada siapa khada ho gea. (maa chod tu Chennai ja ke aish karta raha aur yaha pata he kitna bada panga padh gaya.)
Suraj ke dil ki dhadkan tej hui ye sunte hi.
Suraj: ki gal hoi oye. (suraj kya baat hui)
Prem ne alag ho rumal se aankh saaf ki. Aur bike ko kick maar bola: chal beh jhatpat. (chal beth jaldi se.)
Suraj peechhe beth ke: yaar kujh das ta sahi. (yaar kuch bata to sahi)
Prem: yaar tenu ni pata ki panga pe gaya. Baba ji da shukar aa tu time te aa gaya. Nahi ta……….. (yaar tujhe nahi pata kya panga padh gaya. Baba ji (God) ka shukar he tu time pe aa gaya. Nahi to………)
Suraj kaamp utha tha prem ki baaton se.
Suraj: please prem tell wat happened?
Par prem kuch na bola bas goli ki teji bike udha raha tha.
Peechhe betha suraj ek anjane darr se kaamp raha tha.
Prem ne manimajra ke ek private nursing home ke aage ja bike ko break maari.
Nursing home ko dekhte hi suraj sar se paon tak kaampa.
Suraj: prem ethe kaun? Who is here?
Prem ne bike ko lock kiya.
Aur fir suraj ka haath pakad prem nursing home ki aur chal pada.
Suraj ek bejaan laash ki tarah prem ke saath chala ja raha tha.
Nursing home chotta sa tha.
Do manzila building thi. doosri manzil ke corner room ka door khol prem pehle khud ander gaya.
Fir suraj ko ander kheechte hue bola: le bhaine aa gaya tera mujrim. (le behan aa gaya tera mujrim)
Suraj wo to jaha tha wahi pe jamm hi gya saamne pade bed ki aur dekh.
Bed pe koi aur nahi uss ki neelu padi thi.
aankhein band baajoo pe drip lagi thi.
Neeeee……. luuuuuuu…… badi mushkil se bas hont hi hille the suraj ke par awaaz na nikal payi.
Prem teji se neelima ke sar ki aur ja uss pe jhuka.
Prem: neela…….bhaine…….
Neelima ne hole hole palke uthai aur prem ko dekh dheemi ci awaaz mein : bhaiya mera raju.
Prem ne pyar se uss ke sar par haath fera aur bola: oh dekh saamne khada tera raju. (wo dekh saamne khada he tera raju.)
Neelima ki aankhon mein aansoo the jis ke karan wo suraj ko saaf dekh na pai.
Neelima: kaha?
Prem: athroo poonje gi tad hi najar aau. (aansu ponchhe gi tabhi najar aaye ga)
Prem ne paas pade tissue paper uthaye uss ki aankhein saaf ki.
Aur fir jo hua uss room mein wo prem ko heran kar dene wala tha.
Wo uss ki soch se kahi dur tha.
Wo neelima jis ne pichhle do din se kuch na khaya tha na piya tha. Jo na uth pa rahi thi aur na hi bol pa rahi thi. uss mein jese ek ajeeb hi shakti aa gayi.
Wo ek jhatke se uthi. Baajoo pe lagi drip ki sui ko ukhaadh fenka aur aandhi ki tarah bed se utri aur bhaag ke suraj se aa lipat gayi.
Mera raju mera raju keh wo suraj ke chehre ko be-tahasha choomne lagi. Suraj ne bhi dheere se uss ko baahon mein bhar liya.
Suraj jo ek baar to pathar ban gaya tha neelima ki chhoh paate hi uss ka hosh laut aya.
Neelu neelu kya ho gaya tujhe. Suraj ne uss ko apni baahon mein samet ke kaha.
Roti hui neelima ko wo chup karata hua bed ki aur le aaya.
Prem ko shayad idea tha ke esa kuch ho sakta he yaha issi liye uss ne pehle hi neelima ki ek khaas friend jyoti ko bula liye tha yaha phone kar ke wo iss time pe neelima ki maa ko ghar le jaye roti laane ke bahane se.
Jyoti wahi ladki thi jis ne suraj ko neelima ki shadi ki khabar di thi.
aur ussi ne hi prem ko bhi neelima ki iss haalat ki khabar di thi.
teen char din pehle hi neelima shadi ke baad pehli baar maa ke ghar panchkula aayi thi.
jab se uss ki shadi hui thi uss ko na to suraj ki koi khabar thi aur na hi uss ne koi koshish ki thi uss se baat karne ki.
Wo baat karti bhi to kya karti. Kya kehti suraj se.
wo to bas chhup chhup ke roti rehti thi.
uss ne yaha shadi ka sab se pehle kisi ko bataya to jyoti ko tha.
jyoti ko yakeen na aya to uss ne shadi ki pics bhej di.
Yeh jyoti hi thi jis ne suraj ko bataya tha ke neelima ki shadi kese hui aur kin halaat mein hui.
Neelima ke pati ko delhi kisi kaam se jana tha kuch din ke liye.
Iss liye wo jaate jaate neelima ko maa ke paas chhod gaya.
Uss ne jaate jaate yeh khushkhabri di thi saas ko ke neelima pet se he.
Neelima mein itni himmat to na hui ke wo suraj ko direct phone kare.
Iss liye uss ne sab se pehle jyoti ko call ki yaha aa ke.
Neelima ka phone milte hi jyoti khush ho ke activa utha ke uss ke ghar chali aayi.
Dono saheliya pehli baar milli thi neelima ki shaddi ke baad.
Beena ne chai bana ke di dono ko aur abhi aayi ka keh ke chali gayi apne kisi kaam se.
Maa ke jaate hi neelima ne jyoti se suraj ka poochha.
Jyoti ne neelima ko bataya ke suraj ko wo bata chukki he shadi ka.
Par uss ke baad suraj se uss ki koi baat nahi ho payi.
Yeh sunte neelima ka dil kaampa ke pata nahi suraj ne kya kiya hoga yeh sun ke.
Neelima ne jyoti ko call karne ko kaha suraj ko.
Par suraj ka number switch off aa raha tha.
Jyoti ne neelima ko kaha: yaar suraj ka cell to off aa raha he.
Yeh sunnte hi neelima buri tarah darr gayi.
Uss ne apne cell se try kiya to wahi result raha.
Neelima kaampti awaz se boli: jyoti mujhe darr lag raha. Raju thik to he na.
Jyoti: tu to aise hi darr rahi he neela. Agar koi esi wesi baat hui hoti to prem batata na. wo to dono milte hi rehte honge.
Neelima prem ka naam sunte hi boli: tu prem bhaiya se poochh jyoti.
Jyoti prem ko call lagane lagi to neelima ne uss ko phone speaker pe karne ko kaha.
Jyoti ne wesa hi kar diya.
Jese hi prem ne phone pick kiya to uss ne kaha ke wo busy he baad mein baat karta he.
Jyoti ne neelima ko samjhaya ke agar koi esi wesi baat hoti to prem jarur bata deta khud hi.
Wo normal he it means sab thik he. ho sakta he suraj kahi gaya ho aur uss ke cell ki battery low ho.
Jyoti thodi der ruk ke chali gayi.
Jyoti ke samjhane par bhi neelima ko chain na mila.
Uss ne kai baar suraj ka number dial kiya har baar switch off aata raha.
Raat ko uss ne watsapp kiye suraj ko.
Raat ko neelima na thik se kha payi aur na hi so payi.
Agle din subah hote hi neelima ne pehle suraj ko phone try kiya fir jyoti ko call kar poocha.
Jyoti ne fir se try ki. Par phone switch off tha.
Jyoti soch mein padh gayi.
Fir uss ne prem ko fir se call laga kar suraj ka poochha.
Prem ne jyoti ko bataya ke suraj ghar chhod ke kahi chala gaya he.
wo cell bhi saath nahi le ke gaya.
Uss ki family mein sab preshan he aur koi kuch nahi bata raha.
Par uss ko yeh pata chal gaya he ke wo kuch din mein aa raha he wapas.
Yeh sunte hi jyoti ko ek tej jhatka laga.
Subah ke giarah baje ka time tha. uss ko yeh khabar neelima ko phone pe deni thik na lagi.
Wo activa utha ke neelima ke ghar ko chal di.
Door neelima ki maa beena ne khola.
Uss ko mil ke wo room mein aa gayi jaha neelima bethi thi.
Neelima uss ko galle lag ke mili.
Jyoti ne darrte hue uss ka haal poocha.
Jawab mein neelima boli: jyoti raju se baat hui.
Jyoti ghabrai ci: neela maine prem ko keh diya he wo suraj ke ghar ja ke pata kar ke batata he abhi.
Beena ko kuch kaam tha to wo abhi aayi keh ke nikal gayi.
Beena ke jaate hi neelima ne fir jyoti se kaha ke wo pata kare prem se suraj ka.
Asal mein neelima khud bhi prem se baat karne se katra rahi thi.
Uss ko lagta tha ke prem bhi uss se suraj ko dhokha dene ke karan naraaj hoga.
Issi liye uss ne kal bhi sham ko prem ko call na ki.
Issi liye abhi bhi wo jyoti se keh rahi thi. par jyoti jo sach jaan chukki thi neelima ko baaton baaton mein uljha ke taalne lagi.
Par wo kab tak taalti.
Neelima: thik he mujhe prem bhaiya se khud baat karni hi pade gi. Wo mujhe bhalla bura kahe ge na keh le. Mujhe gaaliya de ge na de le.
Yeh bol ke jese hi neelima paas rakha apna cell uthane lagi to jyoti ne aage ho teji se uss ka cell uthate kaha: ruk neela thodi wait to kar.
Neelima ne gehri najar se jyoti ko dekha.
Fir bade ukhde se sawar mein boli: jyoti tu mujh se kuch chuppa to nahi rahi.
Jyoti kaamp uthi.
Neelima uss ko kandho se pakad: jyoti mujhe ghabrahat hone lagi he. raju thik to he na. mera raju kaha he jyoti he. uss ko……..
Jyoti ne kheench ke uss ko galle laga liya. Aur sar ko choom ke boli: kuch nahi hua tere raju ko.
Neelima ab alag ho cheekhi uss pe: tu jhooth bol rahi he. tu mujh se kuch chhuppa rahi he. raju thik he to kaha he wo. Uss ka mobile kyu band he.
Jyoti ne aankhein saaf kar dil ko majboot kar kaha: wo thik he bas uss ka yeh nahi pata ke kaha he wo. Kuch din se wo ghar se gayab he. kisi ko kuch bhi bataye bina chala gaya he wo. Prem keh raha tha ke uss ko pata chal gaya he wo do char din mein laut aaye ga.
Aur jyoti ko jo prem ne bataya tha wo sab neelima ko batane lagi.
Neelima yeh sab sunte hi pathar ka butt ban gayi.
Kuch der baad jab beena laut ke aayi to neelima ne badi nafrat se bhari nigah se dekha maa ko.
Beena uss ko ese dekhte dekh boli: arey kya hua tujhe neela beti?
Cheekhi neelima: marr gayi teri beti mamma. Jeete ji maar dala tum sab ne mil ke mujhe.
Beena gusse se kaampi: yeh kya bakwas kar rahi ho neela.
Jyoti: neela tu yeh auntie se kese baat kar rahi.
Neelima: kyu na karu ese baat? Mujh se mera raju chheen liya inn sab ne mil ke. Aaj uss ka pata nahi kaha he wo. Kis haal mein he wo.
Wo bed se uthi aur beena ke saamne aa khadi hui.
Fir se cheekhti hui boli: mamma kyu kiya aap sab ne esa? Kis baat ki dushmani nikali mere saath? Dhokhe se mujhe gaon le gayi. Apni kasam de ke meri jabran shadi kar di. Iss se to acha hota mujhe galla ghont ke maar hi deti.
Yeh kehte hue neelima ne beena ke haath pakde aur apne galle pe rakh diye.
Beena kamp ke peechhe hatti: neela.
Jyoti uthi aur uth ke neelima ko pakda: pagal ho gayi he kya?
Neelima roti hui: haan haan jyoti main pagal ho gayi. Inn sab ne mil ke mujh se mera raju chheen liya.
Neelima fir beena ko dekh: mamma aap ko pata he mera raju sab ko chhod ke chala gaya he. agar uss ko kuch hua to main bhi jinda nahi rahu gi. Fir jawab deti firna apne damaad ko kyu marr gayi main? Aur saath mein uss ka bacha bhi.
Neelima ro rahi thi. aansoo to jyoti ki ankhon se bhi beh rahe the. Par beena kisi darr se kaamp uthi thi.
Bache ka sunn ke jyoti ne beena se poocha: auntie kya yeh maa………
Kehte kehte jyoti roti hui neelima ko bed pe le aai.
Wo bed pe late ke bacho ki tarah sisak sisak ke ro rahi thi.
Beena: haan jyoti beti. Mujhe bhi damaad ji ne jaate jaate hi bataya. Main to ussi pal darr gayi thi jab yeh suna. Kyu ke mujhe pata he suraj kahi chala gaya he. main nahi chahti thi ke neela ko iss ki khabar ho……… par…… wahi hua…… jis ka darr tha…. agar iss ko ya iss ke bache ko……….
Yeh sunte hi neelima ne fir se nafrat bhari nigah se dekha maa ko: wah mamma wah….. aap ko apni beti ki fikar he……… uss ki fikar he jo abhi iss duniya mein aya hi nahi……. Aur mere raju…….. uss ki koi fikar nahi aap ko……
Beena kuch na boli bas room se nikli aur kitchen ki aur chal di.
Aayi to haath mein ek plate mein seb liye hue.
Jyoti se boli ke yeh lo iss bhi khilao aur khud bhi kha lo.
Yeh sunte hi neelima uthi aur plate pe jor se haath de maara.
Neelima: kuch ni khana mujhe. Pani tak nhi peeu gi jab tak mera raju mere saamne sahi salamat nahi aata.
Yeh sunte hi beena aur jyoti dono hi kaamp uthi.
Beena pyar se neelima ke paas beth uss ko samjhane ki koshish karne lagi.
Par neelima iss time pe kuch na sun rahi thi kisi ki.
Wo to bas yahi keh rahi thi ke tum sab dushman ho mere pyar ke mere raju ke.
Yeh sun ke ek baar beena ko gussa aa gaya. Wo suraj aur uss ki maa ko kosne lagi.
Neelima se yeh sab sehan na hua.
Uss ne maa ko fir se nafrat bhari nigah se dekha. Kuch kehna chahti thi.
Par dil itna bharra hua tha uss ka ke wo kuch na bol payi thi.
Jyoti ne hi roka beena ko: auntie please aap kuch mat kahiye.
Beena bud-budati roti hui waha se uth gayi.
Jyoti ko kuch samajh na aa raha tha wo kya kare?
Kuch der wo bina kuch bole bethi rahi neelima ko rote dekhte hue.
Aansoo uss ke bhi nahi sookh rahe the.
Fir neelima rote rote hi so gayi.
Jyoti Beena ke paas gayi uth ke aur uss ko samjhaya ke wo kuch na kahe ab.
Wo so gayi he to uth ke thoda sambhal jaye gi.
Neelima jo wese hi shadi se pehle bhi dubli patli thi. shadi ke baad wo ander ander ghutti ghutti si reh rahi thi. na apna dard kisi ko keh pa rahi thi aur na hi seh pa rahi thi.
Bas jese tese haalat se samjhauta kar ke jee rahi thi wo. Aur ab jab wo garb se hui tab bhi apne gham se ubhar na payi thi.
Uss ke pati ko laga tha shayad wo apni maa se dur rehne ke karan itni khoyi khoyi ci rehti he.
Issi liye wo delhi jaate time uss ko beena ke paas chhod gaya iss umeed mein ke wo maa se mil ke ya fir purani friends se mil ke thodi sambhal jaaye.
Jyoti uss time to ghar chali gayi. Par uss ko neelima ki fikar ho rahi thi.
Ghar aa ke uss ne prem ko call ki. Uss ko poori baat batai.
Prem ne kaha ke wo fikar na kare. Neelima se wo baat kare ga raat ko ghar pahuch ke.
Raat ko prem ne neelima ko call ki par uss ka cell off aa raha tha.
Agle din subah bhi yahi haal tha.
Tab prem neelima ke ghar gaya.
Uss ne jyoti ko bhi bula liya wahi.
Beena ne dono ko bulaya ke kal dopehar se iss ne khana peena chhod diya he. na kisi ki sunti he na hi maanti he.
Prem aur jyoti ne samjaaya ke wo apne bache ki khatir hi kuch kha le.
Par neelima ne saaf keh diya ke uss ko nahi chahiye kuch bhi…. Na bacha……. Na pati…… na maa…….. na koi aur………. Bas uss ko chahiye to uss ka raju.
Prem to yeh sunte hi pagal ho utha. Dil mein suraj ko gaaliya deta hua bahar nikla.
Seedha suraj ke papa ke office pahucha.
Hari ne uss ko bataya ke kal dopehar tak suraj aa jaye ga ghar.
Prem ne neelima ko phone kar bataya ke suraj kal wapas ghar aa raha he.
Par neelima ne apni zid na chhodi.
Sham ko prem aur jyoti fir se gaye neelima ko milne.
Ussi din sham ko jab neelima roti hui mera raju la do bhaiya kehti hui behosh ho gayi to sabhi buri tarah ghabra uthe.
Prem ghar se bhaag ke car laya aur neelima ko nursing home le gaya.
Par neelima ne fir bhi apne khane peene ki zid na chhodi.
Uss ne lagi hui drip tak kai baar nikal di.
Drip ke liye wo tab ja ke raji hui jab prem ne kaha ke agar Sunday sham tak suraj na aya to fir wo jo chahe kare.
Par na khaane ki zid pe neelima fir bhi adhi rahi.
Prem ke liye yeh ek raat kisi qyamat se kam na gujri thi.
Esa hi kuch haal jyoti ka bhi tha.
Suraj ke liye neelima ki tadap dekh jyoti bhi raat bhar thik se so na payi.
Uss ko jab prem ne poora confirm kiya ke suraj sachi aa raha he to wo utsak ho uthi inn dono ko ek saath dekhne ko.
Par ab jab suraj neelima ke paas aa raha tha to jyoti ko beena ko le ke uss ke ghar jana pada.
Tab jyoti khud bhi do premi dilon ke iss haseen Milan ko dekhna chahti thi par prem nahi chahta tha ke iss time neelima ki maa waha pe ho.
Iss liye uss ne jyoti se kaha tha ke wo room mein gujrne wale inn palon ko apne cell mein qaid kar lega.
Par prem yeh nahi jaanta tha ke jyoti jab aaj yaha aai thi to wo ek video cam chhupa ke room mein esi jagah fit kar gayi thi jis se poora room cover ho jaaye.
Suraj neelima ko baahon mein le bed pe le aya.
Prem ne aankhein saaf kar apne cell ki recording band ki aur suraj ko wahi rukne ka keh bahar nikal gaya.
Neelima fir se let gayi suraj ke kehne pe.
suraj uss ke sar ke paas hi beth gaya.
Suraj ne kuch na bolne de raha tha neelima ko.
Chand hi minto mein prem haaton mein juice ka glass liye aur saath hi kuch apples liye ek plate mein aa gaya room mein.
Uss ke peechhe hi doctor bhi chala aya.
Unn dono ko dekh suraj uth khada hua.
Prem juice ka glass suraj ko dete hue: le oye piya aah ehnu duffer ji nu. (le pila iss duffer ko)
Suraj ne glass liya. Neelima prem ko dekh halke se muskrai. Tab tak doctor ne drip fir se laga di.
Suraj ne apne haath jese hi neelima ko juice pilane ko aage kiya to neelima ne aankhon ke ishare se pehle suraj ko peene ko kaha.
Suraj ne ishara bhi kiya ke doctor khada he par neelima kaha sun-ne wali thi suraj ki.
Uss ne bade hi pyar se ghoora halki smile ke saath.
Wo apni neelu ki iss killer addaa ka agar kayal tha to iss se darta bhi tha.
Suraj ne glass ko honto se lagaya ek ghoont bhara aur fir apne haathon se uss ko juice pilane lag gaya.
‘yeh hui na achhe bacho wali baat.’ Doctor ne pyar se neelima ke sar pe haath ferte kaha.
Fir wo bola: Juice ke kuch der baad iss ko patle patle apple ke pieces dena wo bhi chhilka utar ke aur uss ke baad moong daal ke saath ek chapatti. Bas kal tak yeh bachi bilkul thik ho jaye gi aur aap ghar le jana iss ko.
Fir doctor ne suraj ki aur dekha jo ke juice pila rha tha.
Asal mein prem ne doctor ko confidence mein le ke brief mein poori story bata di thi dono ki.
Doctor fir kuch soch ke: yaar tum kahi chopra sahib ke bête to nahi. Mr. hari chopra ke bete.
Suraj: ji doctor sahib.
‘arey singh sahib fir to yeh apne ghar ka maamla he. Chopra sahib aur main bahut achhe dost he.’
Prem se yeh keh doctor jaane laga.
Suraj uss ke peechhe lapka door se bahar ja ke,’uncle please aap papa se kuch mat kehna. Aur haan aap inn se koi payment mat lena. Main kal hi aap ko sari payment de jau ga. Agar abhi chahiye to main kisi atm se niklva deta hu.’
Doctor ne ek pal suraj ko dekha fir uss ka kandha thapthapate, ‘don’t worry youngman. Payment ki koi problem nahi ab. jab dil chahe de dena. But please iss ladki ko thoda pyar se samjao. She is pregnant doosra month chal raha he. Wese to bhagwan ki kirpa se sab thik he. Par yeh sab hone ke baad thodi extra care chahiye aur regular check up bhi.’
Suraj hil sa gaya yeh sun ke ke neelima maa ban-ne wali he.
Suraj fir se neelima ke paas room mein aa gaya.
Wo paas rakhi chair pe bethna chahta tha. Par neelima ne ishare se uss ko paas bulaya.
Prem apple chheel raha tha.
Suraj uss ke paas aa thoda jhuka, ‘bolo neelu.’
Neelima ne uss ka haath pakda aur apne sar pe rakh dheeme se kaha, ‘meri kasam khao raju ke fir aap kabhi ese ghar chhod ke nahi jao ge.’
Neelima weakness ke kaaran bade hi dheeme sawar mein bol pa rahi thi.
Suraj uss ko bas dekhe ja raha tha.
Suraj rok na paya khud ko thoda aur jhuk ke neelima ka maatha choom ke ,’haan neelu main vadda karta hu fir se esa kabhi nahi hoga. Teri kasam.’
Fir suraj neelima se bola, ‘tum bhi vaada karo neelu tu bhi fir esa kuch nahi karo gi. Tere saath ab ek nai jindgi jud chukki he. Har aurat ke liye yeh duniya ka sab se sukhad anubhav hota ke wo ek din maa bane gi. Yeh to gorav he neelu har maa ka aur tu iss gorav ko khone chali thi. meri bhool ki saza uss ko kyu neelu jo abhi iss duniya mein aaya bhi nahi.’
yeh sunte hi neelima ki aankhein chhalak gayi.
Neelima: par main to sirf aap ke bache……….’
Suraj yeh sunte hi cheekh hi to pada tha “Neeeeeeluuuuuuuu”.
Suraj ka haath utha but fir uss ne apne gusse ko kaboo kiya. Aur uss ke kareeb aa.
Suraj: yeh tu kya keh rahi he neelu. Tu bhool ku gayi ke tu ab ek shadi shuda aurat he. Tu kisi aur ki amanat he. Iss janam mein hum ab esa soch bhi nahi sakte. Tu wo sab bhi bhool gayi tu kya kaha karti thi mujh se ke raju hamara pyar iss janam ka nahi kai janmo ka he. Agar hum iss janam mein na bhi mil paye to hum intezar kare ge agle janam ka. Neelu hamara pyar jismani Milan ka mohtaj nahi he. Hamara pyar do dilo ka Milan aur yeh Milan to kab ka ho chukka he.
Itne mein prem ne beech mein dono ko toka.
Prem: oye heer ranjhe di satvi pushto agle janam di baad ch socheyo. Pehla aah janam ta jee lao changi tarah. Le oye ehnu seb khua. (oye heer ranjhe ki saatvi peedhi. Agle janam ki baad mein sochna. Pehle yeh janam to jee lo ache se. le oye iss ko seb khila)
Prem ne seb ki plate suraj ko thamma di. Dono aankhein saaf karte smile de prem ko dekhne lage.
Suraj uss ko seb khilane laga. Issi beech nurse aai aur drip change ki drip mein uss ne digestion improve karne ka ek injection dala.
Neelima ko apple khate dekh wo smile de chali gayi.
Suraj seb khilate khilate fir bola, ‘tu vadda kar bache ka khayal rakhe gi.’
Neelima ne smile de suraj ka haath thama aur choom ke kaha, ‘vaada pakka vaada.’
Suraj abhi seb khilla hi raha tha ke neelima ki maa Beena jyoti ke saath enter hui.
Neelima ko seb khata dekh jyoti khushi se cheekh ke, ‘haye oye meri sweetie.’
Wo bhaagi aur bhaag ke neelima se lipat gayi.
Beena ne suraj ko dekha jo unn dono ko dekh peechhe hat chukka tha.
Suraj ne mehsoos kiya ke beena uss ko badi nafrat bhari nigaho se dekh rahi thi.
wo kuch kehna chahti thi suraj se par keh na paa rahi thi.
Aaj se pehle kabhi beena ne uss ko ese na dekha tha.
Wo sab jaanti thi dono ke pyar baare mein.
Ku ke neelima maa se kuch na chhipati thi.
kuch der baad jab beena ki sehan shakti jwab de gayi to wo foot padi.
Suraj ko khoob khari khotti sunate hue bhalla bura kehne lagi ke kese uss ke ghar chhod jane ke agle din subah subah uss ki maa kanta aai aur dhamki de ke gayi ke agar uss ke bête ko kuch hua to wo unn sab ko marwa degi apne bhaiyo se keh ke.
Neelima maa ko rokti rahi par wo ruki na. uss ke ander ek gubhar tha jo uss ne sara suraj pe nikal diya.
Jab bol ke uss ka dil halka hua to wo foot foot ke rone lagi.
Suraj jo pathar bana sab sun raha tha.
Uth ke beena ke saamne haath jodh ke zameen pe ghutno ke bal beth gaya.
Suraj: maa tera yeh beta kasoor vaar he tera. Jo tu sazaa degi manjoor he mujhe. Chahe iss badan ke tukde tukde kar de main uff tak nahi karu ga.
Beena ne suraj ko ese dekha to kheench ke seene se laga ke roti rahi.
Fir kuch pal ruk ke boli beena: tera kya kasoor iss mein beta. Tum ne jo saha tum ne jo khoeya main samjti hoon. Main tere maa ke gunaho ki sazaa tujhe kese du. Tu bhi mere kisi bête se kam nhi mujhe. Gunahgaar to main bhi hu teri aur neela ki bhi. Teri maa ki dhamkiyo ke darr se dhokhe se neela ko gaon bhej uss ki shadi karva di. Pata nahi bhagwan iss ki kya kya sazaa dega mujhe.
Bed ke kone pe bethi beena ki goddi mein suraj ka sar tha.
Maa ki peeth se neelima chipki hui.
Neelima ke paas beena ki left side pe jyoti bethi thi aur beena ki right side pe prem tha.
Prem ko chhod sab ki aankhein beh rahi thi.
Prem ne mahaul ko thoda change karne ke liye kaha, ‘lao ji kaka apna ghar wapas aa gea te kaki ne vi zid chhad khana peena shuru kar ta. Means happy ending. Chalo auntie ji kudi nu hun roti khuao te aah rona dhona karo band.’ (lo ji bacha(suraj) apne ghar wapas aa gaya aur bachi (neelima) ne bhi zid chhod ke khana peena shuru kar diya. Means happy ending. Chalo auntie ji bachi ko ab roti khilao aur aur yeh rona dhona band karo.)
Sab ne apni apni aankhein ponchhi aur beena uth ke khana daalne lagi.
Uss ne plate jyoti ko de ke kaha ke iss ko roti khila do.
Jyoti ne plate suraj ki aur ki to suraj ne beena ki aur dekh jyoti ko ishara kar ke inkar kar diya.
Par neelima ke ghoorne se uss ko majbooran apne haath se khilane laga.
Neelima bhi beech beech mein suraj ke muh mein ek tukda daalne lagi.
Jyoti dono ko bade chaav se dekh rahi thi.
wo soch rahi thi kaash inn dono ki jodi bann jaati. Par ab to yeh ho nahi sakta tha.
Prem utha aur sab ke liye chai aur snacks le thodi der mein aa gaya.
Chai pee ke beena uthi aur boli ke wo beth ke baatein kare aur wo doctor ke paas jaane ka bol ke chal di.
Uss ke jaane ke baad prem apne Punjabi ke jumlon se sab ko hassane laga.
Neelima ko Punjabi ache se bolni to nahi aati thi ku ke wo himachal ki thi, pahadi hirni, par wo suraj ke saath reh reh ke samajne lagi thi poori tarah se.
Baaton mein inn sab ka topic ek hi tha pyar.
Jyoti keh rahi thi ke pyar karna hi nahi chahiye.
Prem kehne laga ke pyar karo yeh dekho ke wo aap se pyar karta he? fir yeh dekho ke dono ka Milan possible he? raaste mein koi roda to nahi tab hi pyar mein aage bado.
Jyoti hass di wah kya philosophy he prem teri.
Fir uss ne prem ko kaha ke uss ko to pyar karna hi nahi aata hoga. Wo kya jaane pyar kis chidiya ka naam he.
Tab Prem bola: oye yaar pyar sanu vi hoeya ci. Par dasseya na kise nu? (oye yaar pyar to mujhe bhi hua tha. Par bataya ni kise ko?) Nahi na….. ni daseya (nhi bataya).
Yeh sun sabhi chonke.
Suraj: oye kutteya tenu kad pyar hoeya te kis nal. Tu kade bhonkeya I na. (oye kutte tujhe kab pyar hua aur kis se? tu kabhi bhonka hi nahi.)
Prem: o yaar bas ho gaya te ho gaya. Pata ci ni sire chadhna so aapa chup vatt lai. (arey yaar bas ho gaya to ho gaya. Pata tha sire nahi chadhe ga iss liye main chup reh gaya)
Sab yeh sun be-had heran the.
Suraj aur neelima jor dene lage ke wo bataye.
Prem: yaar asal ch oh he laleya (Hindu) di dhi te app va sardar. Menu pata na ohde budha-budhi (maa-baap) nu aah sardar jawai pasand aana ni te na I mere budha-budhi nu oh laali. Es lai ik chup te sau sukh. (yaar in fact wo hindu family ki beti thi aur main hu sikh. Mujhe pata tha ke na to uss ke maa-baap ko sardar damaad pasand aaye ga aur na hi mere maa-baap ko wo hindu ladki. Iss liye ek chup aur so sukh.)
Jyoti aage badh prem ki baajoo pakad boli: yaar prem dass na ehna di love story da end ta tragic rea. Shayad assi saare mile ke teri happy ending kar daiye. (yaar prem bata na inn ki story ka end to tragic raha. Shayad hum sab mil ke teri happy ending kar de.)
Prem ne ek pal jyoti ko dekha gehri najar se.
Prem: ni ho sakda kudiye. (nahi ho sakta ladki)
Neelima: ku ni ho sakta bhaiya batao na please. Apni behan ko to batao.
Prem: le bhaina tu keha ta dassna hi pau. Wese ik gal das aah jehdi teri saheli meri baah fadh ke khadi ehnu puchh jara ki eh mera hath fadhu hamesha lai. (le behan tum ne kaha to batana hi pade ga. Wese ek baat bataa yeh jo teri saheli mera baajoo pakad ke khadi he iss ko poochh to jara kya yeh mera haath thaame gi hamesha ke liye.)
‘wat’ jyoti uss ko chhod chaar kadam peechhe jati hui bol padi, ‘prem u mean main. When how where?’
jyoti pe jese bijli si giri.
Suraj aur neelima bhi gaur se prem ko dekhne lage.
Prem hass ke: ku laga jhatka 440 volt da?
Jyoti sookh rahe halak mein thook nigal ke: nahi nahi I don’t think so. Tu aive menu tang kar reha. (tu ese hi mujhe tang kar raha he)
Prem uss ko dekh: o tenu yaad jad pehli vaar mile ci appa saare college ch. Tenu pehli vaar dekheya te dil ch ghau mau jeha feel hoeya. Lageya aah tota ta baba ji apne lai banaya. Sochea ci set kar lau. Tenu do chaar vaar ishare vi maare par tu har vaar muh jea bana ke oh gayi oh gayi. Main vi fer soch lea ke chal nai te na sahi. (arey tujhe yaad he jab pehli baar mile the hum sabhi college mein. Tujhe pehli baar dekha to dil mein kuch kuch sa feel hua. Ese laga jese iss ko baba ji ne mere liye banaya he. socha tha tujhe set kar lu. Do char baar ishare bhi kiye. But tu har baar muh sa bana ke nikal jaati. Maine fir soch liya nahi to na sahi.)
Sabhi heran the prem ki baaton se aur jyoti ko to kuch sooj hi nahi raha tha ke wo kya kahe.
Abhi yeh baat chal rahi thi. shayad aur chalti but beena aa gayi. Sab chup kar gaye.
Jyoti ke bhai ki call aai to wo thoda side pe ho baat karne lagi.
Asal mein uss ka bhai jo usse lenne aane wala tha ussi ne poochhna tha ke wo kaha aaye.
Jyoti ne bata diya.
Baat karte karte jyoti ne jab dekha ke sab neelima ke saath busy ho gaye he to uss ne chupke se wo video cam nikal liya aur jhat se purse mein daal liya.
Dus mint baad hi jyoti ka bhai aa gaya.
Uss ne neelima ka haal poocha aur saath yeh bhi kaha ke mummy uss ka fikar kar rahi thi. subah aaye gi milne.
Wo suraj aur prem se bhi mila. Prem ko wo jaanta tha ku ke prem ke chcacha ke bête ka dost tha aur class fellow tha wo.
Jyoti subah aane ka keh sab ko bye bol nikal gayi.
Ghar aa ke uss ne aram karne ka bahana kiya aur apne room mein chali aayi.
Uss ne video cam ka card nikal apne laptop se attach kiya aur wo recording dekhne lagi jo aaj hui thi uss mein.
Har scene dekh wo kaampne lagi. Uss ki aankhon se aansoo beh nikle.
Jab wo khatam hui recording fir se uss ne laga li ek baar.
Fir uss ne uss ki ek copy apne laptop mein save ki aur card se delete kar di.
Aankhein band ke wo bed pe adh-leti si ho ke beth gayi.
Suraj aur neelima ke baare mein sochne lagi.
Yeh pyar he ke pagalpan? Kya pyar mein itna dard hota he? kisi aur se shadi hone ke baad bhi neelima ke dil pe suraj ka raaj he. aur suraj ka yeh kehna ke unn ke jism nahi mile to kya hua dil to ek he na. kya suraj aur neelima kabhi nahi bhool paye ge ek doosre ko?
Nahi nahi ese thode na hota he. yeh to bas kuch din ka pagalpan he. waqt ke saath ek doosre se dur reh ke dono dheere dheere sab bhool jaye ge.
Fir wo school ke dino ko yaad karne lagi. Waha se aage badi to college ke din yaad aane lage.
College ke dino ki yaad aate hi jyoti ko prem ka pehli baar unn se milna yaad aa gaya.
Fir uss ki soche prem ki aur mudh gayi.
Prem uss ko pyar karta he. par yeh kesa pyar he uss ne aaj tak kabhi iss ka jikar tak na kiya.
Suraj aur prem dono best friends he par dono mein kitna farak. Suraj apni bhavnaye chhupa nhi pata. Par prem ne ek baar apne dil ki na juban pe aane di aur na hi kisi ko ehsas hone diya.
Kya prem bhi uss ko wese hi chahta he jese suraj neelima ko.
Par wo to prem ko nahi chahti. Wese prem mein esa kuch he bhi nahi ke uss ko prem se pyar ho jaye.
Par prem mein esa sab kuch he jo doosro ko apni aur kheenchta he. wo ek acha dost hi nahi ek acha insaan bhi he. jo kisi ke bhi kabhi bhi kaam aa sakta he. wo dosti karta he to nibhata he wo bhi poori shiddat se.
Uss ko neelima ne hi to bataya tha ke kese wo neelima aur uss bhabi ke liye gundo se akela bhidh gaya tha.
Sunder he, brave he, ache aur dyalu dil ka maalik he, ache khaate peete parivar se he. aur kya chahiye kisi ko pyar karne ko.
Kitni ladkiya thi college mein jo prem pe marrti thi. par prem ne aaj tak kisi ko koi bhaav na diya.
Uss ko to lagta tha ke prem pyar jese chakkro se dur he. uss ko pyar vyar mein koi interest nahi he. ya shayad uss ko pyar karna hi nahi aata.
Par yeh to uss ne sapne mein bhi nhi socha tha ke prem to dil hi dil mein ussi ko chahta he. pyar karta he uss ko.
To ab uss ko prem ki proposal kabool kar leni chahiye. Par wo to ek sikh he. agar unn ke pyar ka bhi wahi hashar hua jo neelima aur suraj ka hua to……… waha pesa pyar ke beech aya to yaha dharam deewar bann sakta he……
To kya prem bhi suraj ki tarah…… aur wo khud bhi kya neelima ki tarah………..
Nahi nahi wo prem se pyar nahi karti…… wo uss ko saaf bol degi…….. they are just friends……
Par wo kya yeh keh paye gi…… kya wo prem ka dil todh paye gi……….
Uff…… main pagal ho jau gi…….. mujhe kya ho gaya he……….
Nahi nahi main kuch nahi sochu gi.
Yeh soch ke jyoti ne apna sarr jhatka. Uth ke pehle bathroom gayi aur fir bahar chali aayi apni maa ke paas.
Maa se baat karne lagi ta ke uss ka dhayan kahi aur lage.
Idhar Kareeb aath baje suraj aur prem bhi nikle waha se.
unn ke chalne se pehle neelima ne uss se wadaa liya ke wo apni mom se koi baat nahi kare ga aur na hi unn ko kuch kahe ga.
Suraj jaanta tha ke uss ke ander ek aag jal rahi he par wo uss ko kese shaant kare.
Prem ke peeche bethe bethe uss ne cell nikala.
Kai missed calls thi. papa, radhika aur parul ki.
Ek do uss ke do purane friends ki bhi. Uss ne hospital aate hi phone silent pe kar diya tha.
Uss ne pehle papa ko call kar ke kaha ke wo bas thodi der mein aa raha he.
Fir uss ne radhika ko call ki aur kaha ke wo friends ke saath busy tha. Yahi baat uss ne parul se bhi kahi.
Aadhe ghante baad prem ne uss ko ghar chhoda aur apne ghar ko chal diya.
Uss ko dekh chowkidar ne gate khola.
Porch mein dekha dono cars khadi thi. it means mom aur papa dono ghar pe hi the.
Jab drawing room mein dakhil hua to uss ko dono mein se koi najar na aya.
Wo seedha apne room mein chala aya.
Wo abhi joote utar ke betha hi tha ke rani chali aayi pani ka glass liye.
Pani ka glass saamne bane rack pe rakh.
Rani: aa gya mera suraj baba? Suraj ne sar utha ke dekha par bola kuch nahi.
Kya loge suraj baba? Rani fir se boli.
Suraj thoda kheej ke: zehar.
Suraj ne jalti aankhon se Rani ko dekh kaha.
Yeh sunte hi Rani ko ek tej jhatka laga.
Rani: kya hua suraj baba? Itne preshan…….
Iss se pehle ke rani kuch aur bol pati Suraj ne uss ko beech mein toka.
Suraj: mujhe akela chhod do aur preshan mat karo.
Suraj ne apne ander ki sari kheej rani pe nikal di. Wo aaj se pehle kabhi rani se ese na bola tha chahe kitne bhi khraab mood se ghar ku na aaye.
Suraj ke iss bartav se rani ka dil dukh gaya.
Wo aankhein saaf karti waha se chal di.
Suraj ne uss ko aankhein saaf karte dekh liya.
Ab uss ko ehsas hua ke rani ke saath uss ne kya kiya.
Apni mom ka sara gussa iss bechari pe nikal diya. Ab uss ko khud pe gussa aane laga.
Suraj utha uth ke room se bahar aya.
Wo kitchen ki aur chal diya. Jese hi kuch kadam badhaye to peechhe se hari ki awaaz aai.
Hari: aa gaye beta ji.
Suraj wahi ruk ke: yes papa.
Baat wo hari se kar raha tha par najar kitchen pe thi. rani ki uss ko peeth najar aai.
Par yeh saaf dikh gaya ke wo sari ke pallu se aankhein saaf kar rahi thi.
suraj ko khud pe bahut gussa aa raha tha.
Hari fir se bole.
Hari: rani se bolo mere liye kuch boiled eggs aur salad le aaye.
Suraj samaj gaya ke papa ab drinks kare ge.
Suraj ji papa keh kitchen ki aur chal diya.
Kitchen mein aate hi uss ne papa ka order diya rani ko. Rani ne uss aur dekhe bina hi boli.
Rani: thik he suraj baba.
Rani ke sawar mein itna sab hone ke baad bhi apne liye wahi pyar mehsoos kiya suraj ne.
Suraj ne dekha ke rani pehle hi eggs chheel ke plate mein rakh rahi he.
Suraj kuch pal wahi khada raha.
Wo rani se baat karna chahta tha par himmat na juta pa raha tha.
Sar khujata wo wapas chal diya aur sochne laga ke iss aurat ko kitna khyal he sab ka.
Pata he ke papa ke peene ka time ho gaya he to eggs pehle hi boil kar diye. Yeh sochta hua wo room ki aur bada.
Fir papa ko peg banate dekh uss ka dil bhi machlne laga. Wo jhijkta sa hari ki aur bada.
Hari ne uss ko dekh ek smile ki. Aur saamne bethne ka ishara kiya.
Pehle jab bhi suraj uss ke drinks ke time pe paas aata tha to uss ko kuch maangna hota tha to yahi soch hari bola.
Hari: kahiye beta ji hum aap ki kya khidmat kar sakte he?
Suraj ne hari ki aur dekha aur kafi jhijak ke baad.
Suraj: papa wo……
Suraj ek pal kehte kehte ruka…..
fir bola poori himmat se: papa I wanna drink. If u don’t mind.
Hari ne uss ko dekha fir ek gehri smile di.
Hari: y shud I mind it man? Its my pleasure.
Keh ke hari ne ek glass aur seedha kiya aur fir poochha.
Hari: pehle kabhi pee he kya?
Yeh sunte hi suraj soch mein pad gaya ke wo bataye ke nahi. Uss ko sochte dekh hari hass diya.
Hari: arey yaar, itna sochna ku pee he to pee he. Iss age mein sab chalta he. Yeh jawani na diwani hoti he.
Bol ke hari peg banane laga. Itne mein rani eggs aur salad le aai. Uss ke saman rakhte hi hari rani se bole.
Hari: rani dekh mera beta ab jawan ho gaya he. Aaj se hum dono baap beta nahi dost he dost. We are friends.
Hari ne uth ke suraj ko baahon mein bhar liya. Wesa hi suraj ne bhi kiya.
Hari ne uss ko pehle bhi kai baar gale lagaya tha. Par aaj kuch khaas hi garamjoshi thi hari ki hug mein.
Rani halke se muskarai to jaroor par suraj ko aaj pehli baar peeta dekh wo heran thi.
dono business ki baate karte drink karne lage.
Rani issi beech kafi sara fruit kaat ke de gayi.
Hari ne poochha ke ab aage uss ka kya prog he.
Suraj ne bataya ke bas do chaar din aur fir wo office aana shuru kar dega.
Hari: yaar ese kar tu na ek car le le nayi.
Suraj: papa mujhe bike jayada jaruri he. Yeh ab purani ho gayi he.
Hari smile de: to esa kar dono le le.
Suraj halki smile de: chaliye kal subah dekhte he.
Dono ne ek ek peg khatam kar doosra shuru kar liya tha.
Tabhi kanta nikli apne room se. rani ko awaaj lagane lagi to uss ki najar dono baap bête pe padi.
Wo smile dete hue unn ki aur chali aai.
Mom ko dekhte hi suraj ki smile gayab hoti chali gayi.
Kanta dono ke kareeb aa gayi.
Kanta: arey aaj yeh suraj paschim se kese nikal aya.
Uss ne bade hi fakhar se bête ke sar haath ferte kaha, ‘beta ese hi life ko enjoy karna seekho. Tujhe yeh kabhi nahi bhoolna chahiye tu ek bade ghar ka beta he. Teri harktein, tera uthna bethna apne status ke brabar ke logo se hona chahiye.’
Suraj jo baap se aankhein mila ke baat kar raha tha. Maa ko dekhte hi sar jhuka liya.
Wo nahi chahta tha ke maa ke liye panap rahi nafrat ko koi notice kare.
Ku ke uss ko neelu se kiya vaada yaad tha ke mom ko kuch nahi kehna.
Uss ko mom ki baaton se bada ajeeb feel ho raha tha.
Mom ko dekh uss ko laga tha ke wo gussa kare gi ke suraj pee ku raha he.
Par yaha to sab ulta ho raha tha. Peena uss ke liye status symbol tha. Bade hone ki nishani.
Fir kuch pal ruk ke wo boli.
Kanta: enjoy ur life at the fullest. Tujhe main na kitty ke in laws mein kuch ladkiyo ke contact de deti hu. Tu unn se mil thoda ghoomo firo. Unn mein jo tujhe sab se achhi lage bata dena. Uss se teri baat chalaye ge. Choice is urs.
Suraj: please mom. Aaj keh diya fir se kabhi na kehna.
Iss se pehle ke kanta aage bolti kuch hari bol pade.
Hari: kanti this is not time to discuss all these things. Go and take ur dinner.
Kanta ne kuch kehne ke liye hont hilaye hi the ke hari fir se
Hari: kanti, u ll not utter a single word now. I said go.
Suraj papa ke iss lehje pe heran tha.
Uss ke papa to juban nahi kholte the mom ke aage par aaj to sab ulta ho gea.
Hari ne suraj ko chill karne ka kaha.
Kanta muh mein budbudate hue chali gayi kitchen ki aur. Jiss ko na hari ne suna na hi suraj ne.
Kanta kitchen mein gayi.
Rani ko dinner room mein dene ka keh dono baap bête ko ghoorti apne bed room mein ghuss gayi.
Wese to hari do hi peg lete the par aaj teen le gaye.
Shayad suraj ke saath peene ki khushi mein.
Dinner ka keh hari washroom mein ghuss gaye.
Suraj ne jhat se apna teesra peg khali kiya aur ek large peg bana ke do ghoont bhar dinning table pe aa betha.
Suraj ko laga ke iss ka koi nahi jaan paya par rani kitchen mein khadi sab dekh rahi thi.
Dinner lag gaya.
Aaj shayad pehli baar tha ke dono baap beta ne ek saath dinner kiya.
Dinner khatam hote hi hari good night keh bed room ki aur chal diya.
Aur suraj bhi apne room mein aa gaya.
Rani ne pehle bartan samete aur fir khud kitchen mein neeche beth ke dinner kiya.
Sab kaam khatam kar ke wo suraj ke room mein chali aayi.
Aate aate uss ne drawing room aur dinning room ki lights off kar night lamps jala diye.
Suraj ke room mein aa uss ne dekha ke suraj abhi tak jaag raha tha aur bed se tek lagaye betha tha.
Rani: suraj baba aur kuch chahiye. Suraj uss ko dekh thoda seedha ho ke kaan pakad bola.
Suraj: I m sorry. Main preshani mein tum se bahut galat bol diya. Please maaf kar do na.
Yeh dekh rani ko bahut herani hui.
Wo bed ke corner ke paas aa khadi hui.
Rani: esa mat kaho suraj baba. Aap hamare maalik ho aur hum to bas nokar he. Aap jese chaho keh sakte ho. Aap bade logo ka hak he.
Rani ke ye shabad suraj ke dil mein teer ki tarah lage.
Uss ke hont budbudaye: r…….a…….n……i…….
Suraj ki aankhein nam hoti chali gayi. Uss ki aankhon mein nami dekh rani bhi tadap uthi.
Dil chaha ke aage badh ke uss ko seene se bheench le par wo dono ke beech jo maalik nokar ka rishta tha uss ko undekha na kar pai.
Suraj: dayi maa ke baad ek tum hi to ho rani jis ko maine apna samjha iss ghar mein. Aur aaj tum ne bhi. Maana maine tera dil dukhaya tujhe rula diya. Par yeh bata tu hi kya maine ghar mein tum sab kaam karne walo ko kabhi nokar samjha ya paraya maana.
Yeh bol suraj chup ho gaya.
Rani uss ki aankhon mein bhar aayi nammi ko gaalon pe behte dekh khud ko rok na payi.
Teji se chalti hui uss ke paas chali aayi aur uss ke chehre ko apne seene se bheench liya.
Rani uss ko seene se bheenche hue: mujhe tumare kehne ka bura nahi laga suraj baba. Bura laga to bas jo tum ne wo nigodi sharab pee. Mat peena suraj baba. Bahut gandi hoti he ye. Sharab buri he.
Suraj: bura hu na issi liye to bura kaam karta hu.
Rani ne yeh sunn aur jor se uss ko seene se lagate hue.
Rani: nahi nahi mere suraj baba bure nahi he. Wo to bahut achhe he. Sab se achhe.
Fir uss ne apni saree ke pallu se suraj ka chehra saaf kiya aur boli.
Rani: chalo mere achhe suraj baba ab so jao. Mujhe subah bibi ji ko jaldi chai deni hoti he. Unn ko yoga pe jana hota he na.
wo suraj se alag ho jaane lagi to suraj ne achanak uss ka haath pakad liya.
Rani: ab kya hua suraj baba.
Suraj: mujhe apni goddi mein sula do na rani.
Suraj ne jesse minnat ci ki.
Barso pehle rani uss ko kabhi goddi mein sulati thi. jab kanta ya hari kisi baat pe uss ki pitai kar dete.
Rani sharmati hui: dhatt. Ab tum bade ho gaye ho suraj baba. Ab mujhe laaj aaye gi.
Rani ne haath chhudaya aur lights off kar door ko band kar chali gayi.
Jaate jaate rani ne drawing aur hall room ke doors band kiye jin pe automatic locks ander se khud hi lag gaye.
Suraj ka cell kai baar baj ke pehle hi band ho chukka tha.
Parul, radhika, neelima aur prem sab ki call aai par suraj ne kisi se baat na ki.
Yeh sab calls suraj ke drink ya dinner karte time aai.
Suraj jab soya to baara bajne wale the.
Subah ke nau bajne ko the. Suraj ke cell ki bell ring kar rahi thi.
Suraj ne bina aankhein khole takiye ke paas pade cell ko utha on kiya.
Suraj: hello
Kavita aur mitali aa chukki thi ghar.
Bike park kar ke dono ander aa gaye.
Radhika ki maa ne gussa kiya ke uss ne itne pese ku kharach kiye.
Suraj mitali ko dekh hassta hua: yeh meri iss pyari aur sookhi sadhi behan ke liye jis pe maans ka to naamo nishan tak nahi.
Mitali apna muh khol jeebh ko poora bahar nikal dikhati boli: bhagwan ne saara maans meri jheeb mein laga diya. He yaha koi haddi??
Sab hass diye
Mitali fir khud hi hassti hui boli: issi liye main sara din tukar tukar bolti rehti hu.
Suraj hassta hua kavita ko dekh bola: aur iss bhabi maa ke liye jo jaldi hi mujhe chachu banane wali he.
Kavita thoda sharmate hue kitchen mein chali gayi.
Suraj ne juice ka packet kitchen mein ja kavita ko de diya. Kavita ne sab ko juice diya pehle.
To suraj ki zid pe uss ne pehle piya.
Baaton baaton mein sab ne mehsoos kiya ke suraj ko bacho se bahut lagav he.
Radhika ki maa ne poochh hi liya ke uss ki behno ke bache nahi.
Suraj: hina di ka to abhi tak nahi he koi. Kitty di ke do he. Badi beti chhotta beta. Par di laati nahi unn ko. Unn ki daadi ke paas chhod aati he.
Fir suraj ne baaton baaton mein radhika ko poochha ke mitali itni kamjor ku he.
Radhika: yaar ek to iss ke khaane ka time nahi koi. Pehle subah school mein job fir evening college mein study karti he.
Suraj: yaar tum iss ko kaho ke yeh job chhod de. Sirf study kare.
Radhika: jnab yeh delhi he. Yaha mostly sab esa hi karte he. Plus two ke baad higher study ya evening college ya correspondence se. din mein job. Ta ke studies poori hone tak experience bhi ban jaye to achhi job jhat se mil jaati he.
Kuch der mein kavita chai ke sath pastries aur snacks le aai.
Chai ke baad radhika ne maa ko ishara kiya to maa uth ke ander chali gayi.
Lauti to uss ke haath mein pese the.
Uss ne radhika ko diye aur radhika ne suraj ko dete kaha: Suraj yeh pandra hazaar he. Tu hisab kar ke bata de kitne kharach hue main baaki papa se le ke de deti hu.
Suraj pese ko dhakelta hua wapas: oye chal chal badi aai pese dene wali. Koi kharcha varcha nahi hua.’
Radhika: nahi yaar ese thode na hota he. Mujhe office se kharcha mil hi jaye ga.
Suraj: mil jayega kharach lena mazze se. bhabi aur mitali ko juice pilana daily.
Kavita hasste hue beech mein: main juice pee liya karu gi mere baap.
Bol ke uss ne jab haath jodh ke sarr ko nivaya to sab hass diye.
Uss ke baad fir se dono mein behas hoti rahi.
Haar ke suraj ne dus hazaar le liye aur baki ke radhika ko de diye.
Yeh kehte hue ke: thik he hotel rooms aur ticket ke ho gaye.
Khane peene mein hum friends mein no sharing.
Radhika thoda naraj hoti dikhi to suraj hass ke Punjabi mein: o sohneyo russde keo ho jad lodh pau tuhade to hi mangu.
Keh ke suraj ne radhika ko kheench ke sab ke saamne gale laga liya.
Uss ke Punjabi bolne pe sabhi hass diye.
Mitali hassti hui: haye veera tu te badi sohni Punjabi bolda ae.
Suraj: yaar main Punjabi haa ta Punjabi ta bolu i. tenu vi te aandi aa Punjabi. Tere muho veer bada sohna lagda menu tu hun sadaa veer hi keha kari hun.
Mitali: thik aa mere cutie pie veer.
Kavita ne bhi batya ke uss ke papa bhi Punjabi the. Iss liye wo bhi Punjabi achhe se bol leti he.
Dus baje tak radhika ke papa aur bhai bhi aa gaye.
Fir se sab ne ek saath dinner kiya.
Suraj ne sab se vadda liya ke ab aap sab ek saath dinner kara kare uss ki khushi ke liye.
Dinner ke baad kavita ooper unn teeno ke saath aa bethi.
Kavita to pone ek chali gayi sone par Raat dedh pone do baje tak teeno bethe hasste khelte baatein karte rahe.
Mitali suraj aur radhika ki achi khaasi taangein kheechti rahi.
Uss ne radhika ko dheere se poochh hi liya: didi sachi batao aap alag alag rooms mein ruke the ya ek hi….
Iss pe radhika ne khoob gussa bhi dikhaya aur hassi bhi.
Subah 5.30 am pe suraj uth gaya tha.
Kavita hi uss ko chai dene aai thi.
kavita ne kaha ke wo naha ke neeche aa jaye wo nashta banati he.
Tab suraj: bhabi chai ke saath bas bread butter. Main shatabdi mein ja raha hu to nashta mil hi jana he.
Suraj jaldi se ready hua.
Uss ke jaane ke kaaran sabhi uth gaye.
Hassne hassane wali Mitali udas thi. wo jor se hug kar ke uss ko mili.
Suraj: udaas nahi hote. Tu jab bhi kahe gi main aa jaya karu ga milne.
Mitali fir se gale lag gayi suraj ke. Suraj ne sab se vida li.
Sab uss ko fir se aane ka kaha aur suraj ne bhi sab ko Chandigarh ke liye invite kiya.
6.30 pe radhika uss ko manish ki car le se ke station pe chhodne aai.
Subah rush nahi tha. 7.20 tak dono platform pe the.
Train ka time 7.40 am ka tha. Suraj ne bags ander rakh diye.
Suraj bags chhod wapas platform pe aa gaya.
Dono ne ek doosre ko bahon mein bhar liya.
Ek doosre ke gaalon ko chooma.
Radhika bas yahi kehti rahi ke wo apna khayal rakhe aur koshish kare ke parul ko bhi khush rakhne ki.
Uss ki yahi wish thi ke dono kese bhi kar ke jaldi ek ho jaye.
Radhika ne nam aankhon se suraj ko vidai di.
Suraj ne vadda kiya ke wo ab delhi aata jata rahe ga papa ke kaam se.
wo business kare ga aur saath hi m.sc maths private.
Ku ke baki sab sapne to pehle toot chukke the uss ke.
Bas ab yahi ek sapna bacha tha jis ko uss ko poora karna tha.
Radhika ne uss ka haath choom kar ke kaha ke uss ko aur parul ko ek karna yeh uss ka sapna he. Yeh sapna suraj ko poora karna hi hoga uss ki khushi ke liye
Suraj ki train chal padhi to radhika station ke exit ki aur chal di.
Radhika car mein aa beth kafi der tak roti rahi suraj se juda ho ke.
Udhar suraj train mein betha radhika, Chennai aur Chennai mein parul ke saath beete lamho ko yaad karta raha.
Kareeb aath baje uss ke papa ka phone aya yeh poochhne ko ke uss ne train li.
Suraj ne kaha ke wo train mein hi he.
Hari ne kaha ke wo sava giarah tak driver bhej dega station pe car ke saath.
Itne mein chai aa gayi, wo chai peene laga.
Thodi der baad hi parul ka phone aya to uss ko batane laga ke wo train mein he. Baraa baje tak ghar hoga.
Kareeb pone nau baje radhika ka phone aya ke wo abhi abhi ghar pahuchi he.
Radhika ki awaaz hi bata rahi thi wo bahut udass he.
Call end hone pe sochne laga fir beete dino ki.
Beech beech mein khana peena serve hota raha.
Poore sava giarah train Chandigarh ja pahuchi.
Driver pehle se waha tha car le ke. Uss ne suraj ko wish kar ke haal chaal poochha. Fir dono chal diye.
Pone baara suraj apni kothi tha sector 32 b mein.
Papa drawing haal mein hi bethe the wait kar rahe. Galle laga pyar kiya.
Mom ka poochha to hari ne ishare se bataya ke wo aa rahi he.
Kanta apne room se aa rahi thi. wo mom ki taraf bada. Aage jhuka to kanta ne ek formal ci hug di.
Aur fir nokrani ko oonche se boli ke suraj aa gaya he chai lao.
Nokrani suraj ka naam sunte hi kitchen se bhaagti aai aur suraj ke paas aa ke: aap aa gaye suraj baba, aap thik he na. dekho kitna kamjor lag rahe ho. Aap gaye to ghar ki ronak hi chali gayi.
Kanta uss ko thoda ghoorte hue boli: bas bas bahut ho gaya. Tu to ese kar rahi he jese badi jang jeet ke aya he yeh. Ghar se bhaag ke gaya tha. Khud hi dhakke kha ke laut aya, ab pata chal gaya iss ko aate daal ka bhaav.
Kanta uss ke Saturday na aane se khaffa thi. kyu ke uss ne kitty ki party miss kar di thi. wo issi baat ki kheej nikal rahi thi bête pe.
Hari ko gussa aa gaya: kanta shut up. Itne dino baad ladka ghar aya he. Yeh nahi ke uss ko pyar se gale lagao. Haal chal poochho. Shuru ho gayi aate hi.
Nokrani aankhein saaf karti kitchen mein chali gayi.
Kanta bhi gusse se pati ko: gale lagane wali harkat he kya iss ki. Aap ke karan hi itna sar chadh gaya he yeh.
Suraj ko dukh hua unn dono ke ese ladne pe.
suraj: chhodiye papa aap please mom ko kuch na kahe. Main kar lunga inn ka gussa shaant.
Keh ke suraj apne room ki aur chal pada.
Do chotte bags uss ne le liye saath. Room mein aa joote utare. Washroom mein ghuss gaya.
Haath muh dho bahar aya to nokrani jis ka naam rani aur age kareeb 35 ki thi chai aur bread with half fry egg le ke khadi thi.
Suraj uss ko dekh bola: tum batao kesi ho rani aur tere baal bache pati sab kese he.
Rani: sab badiya he suraj baba.
Suraj: mere kaaran aap sab ko khoob daant padi ho gi mom se. mera sara gussa mom ne aap logo pe utara hoga.
Rani: aap thik se laut aaye suraj baba hum sab bhool gaye aap ko dekh. Bhagwan sadaa aap ko achhe se rakhe. Aap hum sab ki jaan ho suraj baba.
Kehte kehte fir se aankhein bhar aai rani ki. Jis ko wo saree ke pallu se saaf karti chali gayi.
Suraj ko bahut bura laga uss ko rote dekh.
Suraj chai aur bread egg le bahar hari ke paas aa gaya. Wo paper reading mein busy the.
Suraj paas beth bread egg khane laga aur saath hi hari se baatein karne laga.
Chennai ke customers ka batane laga.
Fir uss ne dono cheques nikal papa ko diye.
Cheques dekh hari khushi se uchhal ke room ki aur lapka. ‘yeh dekh kanti tere bête ki pehli kamai. Five lac ke ooper ke do orders aur 2 lacs advance. Pehle main akela tha ab hum do nahi giarah he.
Thodi der baad kanta jis ka gussa orders sun ke shant ho chukka tha suraj ke paas room mein aai.
Aur galle laga ke pyar kiya bête ko.
Suraj ne kaha ke wo ab sona chahta he to kanta chali gayi.
Suraj ne kapde change kiye.
Apna android nikala wo off tha.
Uss ko charging pe laga room ka door thoda band kar bed pe aa gaya.
Radhika ko call kar bataya ke wo ab ghar he.
Fir parul ko call ki aur uss ke baad bed pe pasar gaya.
Apne ghar ke bed pe sone ka anand hi kuch aur tha.
Sham ko kareeb chaar baje rani ne hi uthaya. ‘chalo suraj baba uth ke lunch kar lo.’
Rani ne uss ka kandha pakad hilaya.
Suraj ne aankhein khol ke rani ko dekha aur ek smile di.
Rani jaanti thi agar wo chali gayi to yeh fir so jaaye ga. Wo uss ke sar pe khadi rahi.
Suraj ek angdai le ke utha.
Jese hi rani jaane lagi to suraj: arey rani darling aaj kitne din baad yeh bed mila. So ke maza aa gaya.
Yeh bolte bolte suraj ne rani ka bajoo pakad uss ko bed pe bitha liya apne saamne.
Rani ek jhatke se khade hote, ‘arey baba kya karta he tu. Yaha ese bethe maalkin ne dekh liya to bahut gaali de gi.’
Yeh keh rani nikal gayi bahar aur jaate jaate boli, ‘chalo baba jaldi aao dinning table pe khana rakh ri hu.’
Suraj rani aur ghar ke baaki nokron se ese hi laad karta tha hamesha.
Jo ke kanta ko jara bhi pasand nahi tha.
Kanta ki soch thi ke yeh chotte log he yeh sar chadhane layak nahi.
Kanta ki iss soch ka apni betiyon pe to poora asar hua par yeh soch suraj pe haavi na ho saki.
Wo samjhta tha ke yeh log bhi insaan he unn ki hi tarah.
Agar yeh gareeb he to iss mein inn ka kya kasoor.
Inn ke seene mein bhi dil he jis mein pyar hota he.
Uss ko yeh pyar apni maa aur behno se kahi adhik najar aata tha inn mein.
Rani iss ghar mein dai maa ki death ke baad aai thi.
shuru shuru mein uss ki main duty suraj ko hi sambhalne ki thi.
wo ab kareeb 8-9 saal se iss ghar mein thi.
jab wo iss ghar mein aai thi to 25-26 ki thi do bacho ki maa ban chuki thi tab.
Apne bacho ke saath saath uss ne apni mamata ka kuch hissa suraj ko bhi diya.
Dai maa ke baad suraj ko maa ki mamta ya kuch rani se ya fir apni chachi se mili kuch der.
Chachi to uss se kanta ke ghamand ke kaaran dur ho gayi to peechhe reh gayi sirf rani.
Shuru shuru mein wo rani ko didi kehta tha.
Par kanta ke kehne pe ke nokron se koi rishta nahi banaya jata.
Nokar nokar hote he to suraj ne uss ko didi kehna chhod sirf rani ya kabhi kabhi rani auntie kehne laga.
Par uss ko rani kehna jayada achha lagta tha.
Baad mein wo rani se itna ghull mil gaya ke laad se uss ko rani darling ya rani jaan bhi keh leta.
Jis ka rani kabhi bura nahi manaati. Rani ka pati pehle inn ke ghar mein driver tha.
Par kitty ki shadi mein ek car uss ko dahej mein di gayi to rani ka pati bhi ek tarah se dahej mein hi uss car ka driver bann ke chala gaya.
Ku ke kitty ka pati apni car to khud drive karta tha.
Hari ne kothi ki back side mein jo dai maa ke liye do room ka set banwa rakha tha. Wahi rani ko de diya.
Jis mein rani, uss ka pati, do bache aur rani ki vidhwa saas rehte the.
Wese waha do rooms aur the. Ek chowkidar ka tha.
Doosra aksar khali pada rehta tha.
Kabhi kabhar jab kisi driver ko der ho jaati ya subah early jana hota kahi to driver uss room mein ruk jaate.
Rani ka pati subah chala jata tha kitty ke ghar aur raat ko laut aata apne parivar ke paas.
Suraj aksar maa se chhupa ke rani ke bacho ke liye kuch na kuch lata rehta tha apni pocket money se.
Suraj ab chahe jawan ho chukka tha par wo ab bhi wese hi behave karta rani se jese 12-13 saal ki umar se karta aya tha.
Rani ne bhi kabhi uss ka bura na maana ku ke wo jaanti thi ke uss ka suraj baba dil ka saaf he.
Itne saalo se paas rehne se rani ko suraj se kuch khaas hi lagaav sa ho gaya tha.
Suraj utha haath muh dho ke dinning table pe aa gaya.
Rani ne lunch serve kiya.
Poochhne pe pata chala ke hari kahi gaya he kissi se milne aur kanta ander ready ho rhi thi uss ko kisi apni saheli se milne jana tha.
Suraj ke lunch karne ke beech ghar mein kaam karne wala maali kaka milne aya.
Ek driver ke saath wo aya tha. Wo uss ke papa ki car chalata tha.
Doosra jo kanta ki gaadi chalata tha wo aur chowkidar jo ek gorkha tha pahadi wo aate hi gate pe mil liye the.
Ek aur thi kaam wali bai jo subah sham bartan aur ghar ki safai karne aati thi uss se nahi mila tha suraj abhi ku k wo subah subah aati thi ya fir sham ko paanch baje.
lunch ke baad suraj room mein aya. Cupboard khol ek pant shirt nikali aur pehan li.
Baal swarne se pehle uss ko cell ki yaad aai. Wo to abhi off tha. Charging check ki ab full thi.
charger dc kar uss ne cell on kiya. Uss ko sab se pehle prem se baat karni thi.
uss ko pata tha ke prem bahut gusse mein hoga to wo jehni taur pe prem ki gaali ke liye tayar tha.
(note- kishu main Punjabi mein hone wali baaton ko hindi mein saath mein brackets mein likh raha hu ta ke tum ko samajh aa jaye)
suraj ne prem ka number nikal ke dial kiya. Do chaar bells ke saath jese hi call connect hui.
Suraj: kida prem veere? (kese ho prem bhai)
Udhar se prem poore gusse mein shayad suraj ki call aati dekh hi uss ko gussa aa gayaa.
Prem: bund maar veere di. Tu maa I yahveya he kithe. Dopehar da mareya tu Chandigarh ch te hun tak eh kudi yahve mobile nu on ku na kita. Saala kutta kanjar…..( gaand maar bhai ki. Maa yahve tu he kaha. Dopehar se tu marra hua he Chandigarh mein abhi tak mobile on kyu na kiya)
Suraj hassta hua: yaar o main aa ke so gaya ci. Bas hune lunch kar ke cell on kita te pehli call tenu. (ya wo aa ke so gaya tha. abhi lunch kar ke cell on kiya aur pehli call tujhi ko)
Prem firse ussi lehje mein: saun di bhain chodni jayada jaruri ci. (sone ki behan chodni jayada jaruri thi)
Suraj: yaar thand rakh.
Prem: thand gayi maa chudan. Ethe meri gaand fatti payi. Bike chak te ik mint to vi pehla ghar aa. (thand gayi maa chudane. Yaha meri fatti padi he. bike utha aur ek mint se bhi pehle ghar aa.)
Suraj: yes boss.
Yeh bol ke call disconnect ki. Baal set kiye.
Punjabi jutti daali. Aur bahar ko bhaga.
Bike uthai to dekha bike ke front tyre mein hawa nahi thi. wo fir se bhaga ander.
Mom ke paas ja bola: mom aap ki gaadi le jau. Thodi der mein aa jau ga. Prem ke ghar tak jana tha. Bike mein hawa nahi he.
Kanta: na na mujhe jana he abhi urgently.
Suraj: mom aap ja kis side pe rahi ho.
Kanta: mohali.
Suraj: shit.
Wo teji se bahar ki aur bhaga. Gate ke paas uss ko maa ka driver najar aya. Wo 30-32 ka youngman tha.
Suraj uss ke paas ja bola: yaar meri bike to thik karva ke rakh dete.
Driver: sorry suraj baba. Sahib ne kaha bhi tha par main bhool gya. Aap ko kaha jana he. Main chhod aata hu.
Suraj: nahi yaar main auto se nikal jata hu. Tu mom ke saath ja.
Suraj teji se bahar nikla. Bahar ek auto najar aa gaya. Wo bhaag ke auto mein betha. Auto wale ko sector 17 chowk ki aur jaane ko kaha.
Fir cell nikal prem ko call lagai.
Suraj: yaar oh bike ch hawa ni ci main auto te aa rea. (yaar wo bike mein hawa nahi thi main auto se aa raha hu)
Prem: jidda da gaandu tu odda di teri bike. Chal tu na sector 18 di church kol pahuch main aa reha othe. (jesa gaandu tu wesi teri bike. Chal tu sector 18 ki church ke paas pahuch main aa raha hu wahi.)
Suraj ne auto wale ko waha jaane ka kaha.
Suraj ne pahuchte hi pese diye. Aur saamne prem ko dekh baahein fela di.
Jese hi wo prem ke kareeb pahucha to prem ka ek ghoonsa jor se suraj ke pet pe padha.
Suraj duhra hota chala gaya dard se.
prem itne mein hi na ruka. Uss ki left arm pakad marodi aur peeth pe laga di aur gali bak ke,’bhain yahvi jayada agg lagi na teri bund ch. Chal pehla ehnu bujawa.’ (behan yahvi jayada aag lagi he na teri gaand mein. Chal pehle iss ko bujha du.)
Yeh kehte hi prem ne apna right ghutna jadh diya suraj ke pichhwade pe.
suraj dard se cheekha: maar ta oye maa I yahveya. (maar diya oye……)
Kuch pal pehle suraj ko gali dene wala aur peetne wale prem ne ek dum se suraj ko kheench apni baahon mein bhar ro diya.
Rote rote sher dil prem: maa choda tu Chennai ja ke aish karda reha te ethe pata kina vada siapa khada ho gea. (maa chod tu Chennai ja ke aish karta raha aur yaha pata he kitna bada panga padh gaya.)
Suraj ke dil ki dhadkan tej hui ye sunte hi.
Suraj: ki gal hoi oye. (suraj kya baat hui)
Prem ne alag ho rumal se aankh saaf ki. Aur bike ko kick maar bola: chal beh jhatpat. (chal beth jaldi se.)
Suraj peechhe beth ke: yaar kujh das ta sahi. (yaar kuch bata to sahi)
Prem: yaar tenu ni pata ki panga pe gaya. Baba ji da shukar aa tu time te aa gaya. Nahi ta……….. (yaar tujhe nahi pata kya panga padh gaya. Baba ji (God) ka shukar he tu time pe aa gaya. Nahi to………)
Suraj kaamp utha tha prem ki baaton se.
Suraj: please prem tell wat happened?
Par prem kuch na bola bas goli ki teji bike udha raha tha.
Peechhe betha suraj ek anjane darr se kaamp raha tha.
Prem ne manimajra ke ek private nursing home ke aage ja bike ko break maari.
Nursing home ko dekhte hi suraj sar se paon tak kaampa.
Suraj: prem ethe kaun? Who is here?
Prem ne bike ko lock kiya.
Aur fir suraj ka haath pakad prem nursing home ki aur chal pada.
Suraj ek bejaan laash ki tarah prem ke saath chala ja raha tha.
Nursing home chotta sa tha.
Do manzila building thi. doosri manzil ke corner room ka door khol prem pehle khud ander gaya.
Fir suraj ko ander kheechte hue bola: le bhaine aa gaya tera mujrim. (le behan aa gaya tera mujrim)
Suraj wo to jaha tha wahi pe jamm hi gya saamne pade bed ki aur dekh.
Bed pe koi aur nahi uss ki neelu padi thi.
aankhein band baajoo pe drip lagi thi.
Neeeee……. luuuuuuu…… badi mushkil se bas hont hi hille the suraj ke par awaaz na nikal payi.
Prem teji se neelima ke sar ki aur ja uss pe jhuka.
Prem: neela…….bhaine…….
Neelima ne hole hole palke uthai aur prem ko dekh dheemi ci awaaz mein : bhaiya mera raju.
Prem ne pyar se uss ke sar par haath fera aur bola: oh dekh saamne khada tera raju. (wo dekh saamne khada he tera raju.)
Neelima ki aankhon mein aansoo the jis ke karan wo suraj ko saaf dekh na pai.
Neelima: kaha?
Prem: athroo poonje gi tad hi najar aau. (aansu ponchhe gi tabhi najar aaye ga)
Prem ne paas pade tissue paper uthaye uss ki aankhein saaf ki.
Aur fir jo hua uss room mein wo prem ko heran kar dene wala tha.
Wo uss ki soch se kahi dur tha.
Wo neelima jis ne pichhle do din se kuch na khaya tha na piya tha. Jo na uth pa rahi thi aur na hi bol pa rahi thi. uss mein jese ek ajeeb hi shakti aa gayi.
Wo ek jhatke se uthi. Baajoo pe lagi drip ki sui ko ukhaadh fenka aur aandhi ki tarah bed se utri aur bhaag ke suraj se aa lipat gayi.
Mera raju mera raju keh wo suraj ke chehre ko be-tahasha choomne lagi. Suraj ne bhi dheere se uss ko baahon mein bhar liya.
Suraj jo ek baar to pathar ban gaya tha neelima ki chhoh paate hi uss ka hosh laut aya.
Neelu neelu kya ho gaya tujhe. Suraj ne uss ko apni baahon mein samet ke kaha.
Roti hui neelima ko wo chup karata hua bed ki aur le aaya.
Prem ko shayad idea tha ke esa kuch ho sakta he yaha issi liye uss ne pehle hi neelima ki ek khaas friend jyoti ko bula liye tha yaha phone kar ke wo iss time pe neelima ki maa ko ghar le jaye roti laane ke bahane se.
Jyoti wahi ladki thi jis ne suraj ko neelima ki shadi ki khabar di thi.
aur ussi ne hi prem ko bhi neelima ki iss haalat ki khabar di thi.
teen char din pehle hi neelima shadi ke baad pehli baar maa ke ghar panchkula aayi thi.
jab se uss ki shadi hui thi uss ko na to suraj ki koi khabar thi aur na hi uss ne koi koshish ki thi uss se baat karne ki.
Wo baat karti bhi to kya karti. Kya kehti suraj se.
wo to bas chhup chhup ke roti rehti thi.
uss ne yaha shadi ka sab se pehle kisi ko bataya to jyoti ko tha.
jyoti ko yakeen na aya to uss ne shadi ki pics bhej di.
Yeh jyoti hi thi jis ne suraj ko bataya tha ke neelima ki shadi kese hui aur kin halaat mein hui.
Neelima ke pati ko delhi kisi kaam se jana tha kuch din ke liye.
Iss liye wo jaate jaate neelima ko maa ke paas chhod gaya.
Uss ne jaate jaate yeh khushkhabri di thi saas ko ke neelima pet se he.
Neelima mein itni himmat to na hui ke wo suraj ko direct phone kare.
Iss liye uss ne sab se pehle jyoti ko call ki yaha aa ke.
Neelima ka phone milte hi jyoti khush ho ke activa utha ke uss ke ghar chali aayi.
Dono saheliya pehli baar milli thi neelima ki shaddi ke baad.
Beena ne chai bana ke di dono ko aur abhi aayi ka keh ke chali gayi apne kisi kaam se.
Maa ke jaate hi neelima ne jyoti se suraj ka poochha.
Jyoti ne neelima ko bataya ke suraj ko wo bata chukki he shadi ka.
Par uss ke baad suraj se uss ki koi baat nahi ho payi.
Yeh sunte neelima ka dil kaampa ke pata nahi suraj ne kya kiya hoga yeh sun ke.
Neelima ne jyoti ko call karne ko kaha suraj ko.
Par suraj ka number switch off aa raha tha.
Jyoti ne neelima ko kaha: yaar suraj ka cell to off aa raha he.
Yeh sunnte hi neelima buri tarah darr gayi.
Uss ne apne cell se try kiya to wahi result raha.
Neelima kaampti awaz se boli: jyoti mujhe darr lag raha. Raju thik to he na.
Jyoti: tu to aise hi darr rahi he neela. Agar koi esi wesi baat hui hoti to prem batata na. wo to dono milte hi rehte honge.
Neelima prem ka naam sunte hi boli: tu prem bhaiya se poochh jyoti.
Jyoti prem ko call lagane lagi to neelima ne uss ko phone speaker pe karne ko kaha.
Jyoti ne wesa hi kar diya.
Jese hi prem ne phone pick kiya to uss ne kaha ke wo busy he baad mein baat karta he.
Jyoti ne neelima ko samjhaya ke agar koi esi wesi baat hoti to prem jarur bata deta khud hi.
Wo normal he it means sab thik he. ho sakta he suraj kahi gaya ho aur uss ke cell ki battery low ho.
Jyoti thodi der ruk ke chali gayi.
Jyoti ke samjhane par bhi neelima ko chain na mila.
Uss ne kai baar suraj ka number dial kiya har baar switch off aata raha.
Raat ko uss ne watsapp kiye suraj ko.
Raat ko neelima na thik se kha payi aur na hi so payi.
Agle din subah hote hi neelima ne pehle suraj ko phone try kiya fir jyoti ko call kar poocha.
Jyoti ne fir se try ki. Par phone switch off tha.
Jyoti soch mein padh gayi.
Fir uss ne prem ko fir se call laga kar suraj ka poochha.
Prem ne jyoti ko bataya ke suraj ghar chhod ke kahi chala gaya he.
wo cell bhi saath nahi le ke gaya.
Uss ki family mein sab preshan he aur koi kuch nahi bata raha.
Par uss ko yeh pata chal gaya he ke wo kuch din mein aa raha he wapas.
Yeh sunte hi jyoti ko ek tej jhatka laga.
Subah ke giarah baje ka time tha. uss ko yeh khabar neelima ko phone pe deni thik na lagi.
Wo activa utha ke neelima ke ghar ko chal di.
Door neelima ki maa beena ne khola.
Uss ko mil ke wo room mein aa gayi jaha neelima bethi thi.
Neelima uss ko galle lag ke mili.
Jyoti ne darrte hue uss ka haal poocha.
Jawab mein neelima boli: jyoti raju se baat hui.
Jyoti ghabrai ci: neela maine prem ko keh diya he wo suraj ke ghar ja ke pata kar ke batata he abhi.
Beena ko kuch kaam tha to wo abhi aayi keh ke nikal gayi.
Beena ke jaate hi neelima ne fir jyoti se kaha ke wo pata kare prem se suraj ka.
Asal mein neelima khud bhi prem se baat karne se katra rahi thi.
Uss ko lagta tha ke prem bhi uss se suraj ko dhokha dene ke karan naraaj hoga.
Issi liye uss ne kal bhi sham ko prem ko call na ki.
Issi liye abhi bhi wo jyoti se keh rahi thi. par jyoti jo sach jaan chukki thi neelima ko baaton baaton mein uljha ke taalne lagi.
Par wo kab tak taalti.
Neelima: thik he mujhe prem bhaiya se khud baat karni hi pade gi. Wo mujhe bhalla bura kahe ge na keh le. Mujhe gaaliya de ge na de le.
Yeh bol ke jese hi neelima paas rakha apna cell uthane lagi to jyoti ne aage ho teji se uss ka cell uthate kaha: ruk neela thodi wait to kar.
Neelima ne gehri najar se jyoti ko dekha.
Fir bade ukhde se sawar mein boli: jyoti tu mujh se kuch chuppa to nahi rahi.
Jyoti kaamp uthi.
Neelima uss ko kandho se pakad: jyoti mujhe ghabrahat hone lagi he. raju thik to he na. mera raju kaha he jyoti he. uss ko……..
Jyoti ne kheench ke uss ko galle laga liya. Aur sar ko choom ke boli: kuch nahi hua tere raju ko.
Neelima ab alag ho cheekhi uss pe: tu jhooth bol rahi he. tu mujh se kuch chhuppa rahi he. raju thik he to kaha he wo. Uss ka mobile kyu band he.
Jyoti ne aankhein saaf kar dil ko majboot kar kaha: wo thik he bas uss ka yeh nahi pata ke kaha he wo. Kuch din se wo ghar se gayab he. kisi ko kuch bhi bataye bina chala gaya he wo. Prem keh raha tha ke uss ko pata chal gaya he wo do char din mein laut aaye ga.
Aur jyoti ko jo prem ne bataya tha wo sab neelima ko batane lagi.
Neelima yeh sab sunte hi pathar ka butt ban gayi.
Kuch der baad jab beena laut ke aayi to neelima ne badi nafrat se bhari nigah se dekha maa ko.
Beena uss ko ese dekhte dekh boli: arey kya hua tujhe neela beti?
Cheekhi neelima: marr gayi teri beti mamma. Jeete ji maar dala tum sab ne mil ke mujhe.
Beena gusse se kaampi: yeh kya bakwas kar rahi ho neela.
Jyoti: neela tu yeh auntie se kese baat kar rahi.
Neelima: kyu na karu ese baat? Mujh se mera raju chheen liya inn sab ne mil ke. Aaj uss ka pata nahi kaha he wo. Kis haal mein he wo.
Wo bed se uthi aur beena ke saamne aa khadi hui.
Fir se cheekhti hui boli: mamma kyu kiya aap sab ne esa? Kis baat ki dushmani nikali mere saath? Dhokhe se mujhe gaon le gayi. Apni kasam de ke meri jabran shadi kar di. Iss se to acha hota mujhe galla ghont ke maar hi deti.
Yeh kehte hue neelima ne beena ke haath pakde aur apne galle pe rakh diye.
Beena kamp ke peechhe hatti: neela.
Jyoti uthi aur uth ke neelima ko pakda: pagal ho gayi he kya?
Neelima roti hui: haan haan jyoti main pagal ho gayi. Inn sab ne mil ke mujh se mera raju chheen liya.
Neelima fir beena ko dekh: mamma aap ko pata he mera raju sab ko chhod ke chala gaya he. agar uss ko kuch hua to main bhi jinda nahi rahu gi. Fir jawab deti firna apne damaad ko kyu marr gayi main? Aur saath mein uss ka bacha bhi.
Neelima ro rahi thi. aansoo to jyoti ki ankhon se bhi beh rahe the. Par beena kisi darr se kaamp uthi thi.
Bache ka sunn ke jyoti ne beena se poocha: auntie kya yeh maa………
Kehte kehte jyoti roti hui neelima ko bed pe le aai.
Wo bed pe late ke bacho ki tarah sisak sisak ke ro rahi thi.
Beena: haan jyoti beti. Mujhe bhi damaad ji ne jaate jaate hi bataya. Main to ussi pal darr gayi thi jab yeh suna. Kyu ke mujhe pata he suraj kahi chala gaya he. main nahi chahti thi ke neela ko iss ki khabar ho……… par…… wahi hua…… jis ka darr tha…. agar iss ko ya iss ke bache ko……….
Yeh sunte hi neelima ne fir se nafrat bhari nigah se dekha maa ko: wah mamma wah….. aap ko apni beti ki fikar he……… uss ki fikar he jo abhi iss duniya mein aya hi nahi……. Aur mere raju…….. uss ki koi fikar nahi aap ko……
Beena kuch na boli bas room se nikli aur kitchen ki aur chal di.
Aayi to haath mein ek plate mein seb liye hue.
Jyoti se boli ke yeh lo iss bhi khilao aur khud bhi kha lo.
Yeh sunte hi neelima uthi aur plate pe jor se haath de maara.
Neelima: kuch ni khana mujhe. Pani tak nhi peeu gi jab tak mera raju mere saamne sahi salamat nahi aata.
Yeh sunte hi beena aur jyoti dono hi kaamp uthi.
Beena pyar se neelima ke paas beth uss ko samjhane ki koshish karne lagi.
Par neelima iss time pe kuch na sun rahi thi kisi ki.
Wo to bas yahi keh rahi thi ke tum sab dushman ho mere pyar ke mere raju ke.
Yeh sun ke ek baar beena ko gussa aa gaya. Wo suraj aur uss ki maa ko kosne lagi.
Neelima se yeh sab sehan na hua.
Uss ne maa ko fir se nafrat bhari nigah se dekha. Kuch kehna chahti thi.
Par dil itna bharra hua tha uss ka ke wo kuch na bol payi thi.
Jyoti ne hi roka beena ko: auntie please aap kuch mat kahiye.
Beena bud-budati roti hui waha se uth gayi.
Jyoti ko kuch samajh na aa raha tha wo kya kare?
Kuch der wo bina kuch bole bethi rahi neelima ko rote dekhte hue.
Aansoo uss ke bhi nahi sookh rahe the.
Fir neelima rote rote hi so gayi.
Jyoti Beena ke paas gayi uth ke aur uss ko samjhaya ke wo kuch na kahe ab.
Wo so gayi he to uth ke thoda sambhal jaye gi.
Neelima jo wese hi shadi se pehle bhi dubli patli thi. shadi ke baad wo ander ander ghutti ghutti si reh rahi thi. na apna dard kisi ko keh pa rahi thi aur na hi seh pa rahi thi.
Bas jese tese haalat se samjhauta kar ke jee rahi thi wo. Aur ab jab wo garb se hui tab bhi apne gham se ubhar na payi thi.
Uss ke pati ko laga tha shayad wo apni maa se dur rehne ke karan itni khoyi khoyi ci rehti he.
Issi liye wo delhi jaate time uss ko beena ke paas chhod gaya iss umeed mein ke wo maa se mil ke ya fir purani friends se mil ke thodi sambhal jaaye.
Jyoti uss time to ghar chali gayi. Par uss ko neelima ki fikar ho rahi thi.
Ghar aa ke uss ne prem ko call ki. Uss ko poori baat batai.
Prem ne kaha ke wo fikar na kare. Neelima se wo baat kare ga raat ko ghar pahuch ke.
Raat ko prem ne neelima ko call ki par uss ka cell off aa raha tha.
Agle din subah bhi yahi haal tha.
Tab prem neelima ke ghar gaya.
Uss ne jyoti ko bhi bula liya wahi.
Beena ne dono ko bulaya ke kal dopehar se iss ne khana peena chhod diya he. na kisi ki sunti he na hi maanti he.
Prem aur jyoti ne samjaaya ke wo apne bache ki khatir hi kuch kha le.
Par neelima ne saaf keh diya ke uss ko nahi chahiye kuch bhi…. Na bacha……. Na pati…… na maa…….. na koi aur………. Bas uss ko chahiye to uss ka raju.
Prem to yeh sunte hi pagal ho utha. Dil mein suraj ko gaaliya deta hua bahar nikla.
Seedha suraj ke papa ke office pahucha.
Hari ne uss ko bataya ke kal dopehar tak suraj aa jaye ga ghar.
Prem ne neelima ko phone kar bataya ke suraj kal wapas ghar aa raha he.
Par neelima ne apni zid na chhodi.
Sham ko prem aur jyoti fir se gaye neelima ko milne.
Ussi din sham ko jab neelima roti hui mera raju la do bhaiya kehti hui behosh ho gayi to sabhi buri tarah ghabra uthe.
Prem ghar se bhaag ke car laya aur neelima ko nursing home le gaya.
Par neelima ne fir bhi apne khane peene ki zid na chhodi.
Uss ne lagi hui drip tak kai baar nikal di.
Drip ke liye wo tab ja ke raji hui jab prem ne kaha ke agar Sunday sham tak suraj na aya to fir wo jo chahe kare.
Par na khaane ki zid pe neelima fir bhi adhi rahi.
Prem ke liye yeh ek raat kisi qyamat se kam na gujri thi.
Esa hi kuch haal jyoti ka bhi tha.
Suraj ke liye neelima ki tadap dekh jyoti bhi raat bhar thik se so na payi.
Uss ko jab prem ne poora confirm kiya ke suraj sachi aa raha he to wo utsak ho uthi inn dono ko ek saath dekhne ko.
Par ab jab suraj neelima ke paas aa raha tha to jyoti ko beena ko le ke uss ke ghar jana pada.
Tab jyoti khud bhi do premi dilon ke iss haseen Milan ko dekhna chahti thi par prem nahi chahta tha ke iss time neelima ki maa waha pe ho.
Iss liye uss ne jyoti se kaha tha ke wo room mein gujrne wale inn palon ko apne cell mein qaid kar lega.
Par prem yeh nahi jaanta tha ke jyoti jab aaj yaha aai thi to wo ek video cam chhupa ke room mein esi jagah fit kar gayi thi jis se poora room cover ho jaaye.
Suraj neelima ko baahon mein le bed pe le aya.
Prem ne aankhein saaf kar apne cell ki recording band ki aur suraj ko wahi rukne ka keh bahar nikal gaya.
Neelima fir se let gayi suraj ke kehne pe.
suraj uss ke sar ke paas hi beth gaya.
Suraj ne kuch na bolne de raha tha neelima ko.
Chand hi minto mein prem haaton mein juice ka glass liye aur saath hi kuch apples liye ek plate mein aa gaya room mein.
Uss ke peechhe hi doctor bhi chala aya.
Unn dono ko dekh suraj uth khada hua.
Prem juice ka glass suraj ko dete hue: le oye piya aah ehnu duffer ji nu. (le pila iss duffer ko)
Suraj ne glass liya. Neelima prem ko dekh halke se muskrai. Tab tak doctor ne drip fir se laga di.
Suraj ne apne haath jese hi neelima ko juice pilane ko aage kiya to neelima ne aankhon ke ishare se pehle suraj ko peene ko kaha.
Suraj ne ishara bhi kiya ke doctor khada he par neelima kaha sun-ne wali thi suraj ki.
Uss ne bade hi pyar se ghoora halki smile ke saath.
Wo apni neelu ki iss killer addaa ka agar kayal tha to iss se darta bhi tha.
Suraj ne glass ko honto se lagaya ek ghoont bhara aur fir apne haathon se uss ko juice pilane lag gaya.
‘yeh hui na achhe bacho wali baat.’ Doctor ne pyar se neelima ke sar pe haath ferte kaha.
Fir wo bola: Juice ke kuch der baad iss ko patle patle apple ke pieces dena wo bhi chhilka utar ke aur uss ke baad moong daal ke saath ek chapatti. Bas kal tak yeh bachi bilkul thik ho jaye gi aur aap ghar le jana iss ko.
Fir doctor ne suraj ki aur dekha jo ke juice pila rha tha.
Asal mein prem ne doctor ko confidence mein le ke brief mein poori story bata di thi dono ki.
Doctor fir kuch soch ke: yaar tum kahi chopra sahib ke bête to nahi. Mr. hari chopra ke bete.
Suraj: ji doctor sahib.
‘arey singh sahib fir to yeh apne ghar ka maamla he. Chopra sahib aur main bahut achhe dost he.’
Prem se yeh keh doctor jaane laga.
Suraj uss ke peechhe lapka door se bahar ja ke,’uncle please aap papa se kuch mat kehna. Aur haan aap inn se koi payment mat lena. Main kal hi aap ko sari payment de jau ga. Agar abhi chahiye to main kisi atm se niklva deta hu.’
Doctor ne ek pal suraj ko dekha fir uss ka kandha thapthapate, ‘don’t worry youngman. Payment ki koi problem nahi ab. jab dil chahe de dena. But please iss ladki ko thoda pyar se samjao. She is pregnant doosra month chal raha he. Wese to bhagwan ki kirpa se sab thik he. Par yeh sab hone ke baad thodi extra care chahiye aur regular check up bhi.’
Suraj hil sa gaya yeh sun ke ke neelima maa ban-ne wali he.
Suraj fir se neelima ke paas room mein aa gaya.
Wo paas rakhi chair pe bethna chahta tha. Par neelima ne ishare se uss ko paas bulaya.
Prem apple chheel raha tha.
Suraj uss ke paas aa thoda jhuka, ‘bolo neelu.’
Neelima ne uss ka haath pakda aur apne sar pe rakh dheeme se kaha, ‘meri kasam khao raju ke fir aap kabhi ese ghar chhod ke nahi jao ge.’
Neelima weakness ke kaaran bade hi dheeme sawar mein bol pa rahi thi.
Suraj uss ko bas dekhe ja raha tha.
Suraj rok na paya khud ko thoda aur jhuk ke neelima ka maatha choom ke ,’haan neelu main vadda karta hu fir se esa kabhi nahi hoga. Teri kasam.’
Fir suraj neelima se bola, ‘tum bhi vaada karo neelu tu bhi fir esa kuch nahi karo gi. Tere saath ab ek nai jindgi jud chukki he. Har aurat ke liye yeh duniya ka sab se sukhad anubhav hota ke wo ek din maa bane gi. Yeh to gorav he neelu har maa ka aur tu iss gorav ko khone chali thi. meri bhool ki saza uss ko kyu neelu jo abhi iss duniya mein aaya bhi nahi.’
yeh sunte hi neelima ki aankhein chhalak gayi.
Neelima: par main to sirf aap ke bache……….’
Suraj yeh sunte hi cheekh hi to pada tha “Neeeeeeluuuuuuuu”.
Suraj ka haath utha but fir uss ne apne gusse ko kaboo kiya. Aur uss ke kareeb aa.
Suraj: yeh tu kya keh rahi he neelu. Tu bhool ku gayi ke tu ab ek shadi shuda aurat he. Tu kisi aur ki amanat he. Iss janam mein hum ab esa soch bhi nahi sakte. Tu wo sab bhi bhool gayi tu kya kaha karti thi mujh se ke raju hamara pyar iss janam ka nahi kai janmo ka he. Agar hum iss janam mein na bhi mil paye to hum intezar kare ge agle janam ka. Neelu hamara pyar jismani Milan ka mohtaj nahi he. Hamara pyar do dilo ka Milan aur yeh Milan to kab ka ho chukka he.
Itne mein prem ne beech mein dono ko toka.
Prem: oye heer ranjhe di satvi pushto agle janam di baad ch socheyo. Pehla aah janam ta jee lao changi tarah. Le oye ehnu seb khua. (oye heer ranjhe ki saatvi peedhi. Agle janam ki baad mein sochna. Pehle yeh janam to jee lo ache se. le oye iss ko seb khila)
Prem ne seb ki plate suraj ko thamma di. Dono aankhein saaf karte smile de prem ko dekhne lage.
Suraj uss ko seb khilane laga. Issi beech nurse aai aur drip change ki drip mein uss ne digestion improve karne ka ek injection dala.
Neelima ko apple khate dekh wo smile de chali gayi.
Suraj seb khilate khilate fir bola, ‘tu vadda kar bache ka khayal rakhe gi.’
Neelima ne smile de suraj ka haath thama aur choom ke kaha, ‘vaada pakka vaada.’
Suraj abhi seb khilla hi raha tha ke neelima ki maa Beena jyoti ke saath enter hui.
Neelima ko seb khata dekh jyoti khushi se cheekh ke, ‘haye oye meri sweetie.’
Wo bhaagi aur bhaag ke neelima se lipat gayi.
Beena ne suraj ko dekha jo unn dono ko dekh peechhe hat chukka tha.
Suraj ne mehsoos kiya ke beena uss ko badi nafrat bhari nigaho se dekh rahi thi.
wo kuch kehna chahti thi suraj se par keh na paa rahi thi.
Aaj se pehle kabhi beena ne uss ko ese na dekha tha.
Wo sab jaanti thi dono ke pyar baare mein.
Ku ke neelima maa se kuch na chhipati thi.
kuch der baad jab beena ki sehan shakti jwab de gayi to wo foot padi.
Suraj ko khoob khari khotti sunate hue bhalla bura kehne lagi ke kese uss ke ghar chhod jane ke agle din subah subah uss ki maa kanta aai aur dhamki de ke gayi ke agar uss ke bête ko kuch hua to wo unn sab ko marwa degi apne bhaiyo se keh ke.
Neelima maa ko rokti rahi par wo ruki na. uss ke ander ek gubhar tha jo uss ne sara suraj pe nikal diya.
Jab bol ke uss ka dil halka hua to wo foot foot ke rone lagi.
Suraj jo pathar bana sab sun raha tha.
Uth ke beena ke saamne haath jodh ke zameen pe ghutno ke bal beth gaya.
Suraj: maa tera yeh beta kasoor vaar he tera. Jo tu sazaa degi manjoor he mujhe. Chahe iss badan ke tukde tukde kar de main uff tak nahi karu ga.
Beena ne suraj ko ese dekha to kheench ke seene se laga ke roti rahi.
Fir kuch pal ruk ke boli beena: tera kya kasoor iss mein beta. Tum ne jo saha tum ne jo khoeya main samjti hoon. Main tere maa ke gunaho ki sazaa tujhe kese du. Tu bhi mere kisi bête se kam nhi mujhe. Gunahgaar to main bhi hu teri aur neela ki bhi. Teri maa ki dhamkiyo ke darr se dhokhe se neela ko gaon bhej uss ki shadi karva di. Pata nahi bhagwan iss ki kya kya sazaa dega mujhe.
Bed ke kone pe bethi beena ki goddi mein suraj ka sar tha.
Maa ki peeth se neelima chipki hui.
Neelima ke paas beena ki left side pe jyoti bethi thi aur beena ki right side pe prem tha.
Prem ko chhod sab ki aankhein beh rahi thi.
Prem ne mahaul ko thoda change karne ke liye kaha, ‘lao ji kaka apna ghar wapas aa gea te kaki ne vi zid chhad khana peena shuru kar ta. Means happy ending. Chalo auntie ji kudi nu hun roti khuao te aah rona dhona karo band.’ (lo ji bacha(suraj) apne ghar wapas aa gaya aur bachi (neelima) ne bhi zid chhod ke khana peena shuru kar diya. Means happy ending. Chalo auntie ji bachi ko ab roti khilao aur aur yeh rona dhona band karo.)
Sab ne apni apni aankhein ponchhi aur beena uth ke khana daalne lagi.
Uss ne plate jyoti ko de ke kaha ke iss ko roti khila do.
Jyoti ne plate suraj ki aur ki to suraj ne beena ki aur dekh jyoti ko ishara kar ke inkar kar diya.
Par neelima ke ghoorne se uss ko majbooran apne haath se khilane laga.
Neelima bhi beech beech mein suraj ke muh mein ek tukda daalne lagi.
Jyoti dono ko bade chaav se dekh rahi thi.
wo soch rahi thi kaash inn dono ki jodi bann jaati. Par ab to yeh ho nahi sakta tha.
Prem utha aur sab ke liye chai aur snacks le thodi der mein aa gaya.
Chai pee ke beena uthi aur boli ke wo beth ke baatein kare aur wo doctor ke paas jaane ka bol ke chal di.
Uss ke jaane ke baad prem apne Punjabi ke jumlon se sab ko hassane laga.
Neelima ko Punjabi ache se bolni to nahi aati thi ku ke wo himachal ki thi, pahadi hirni, par wo suraj ke saath reh reh ke samajne lagi thi poori tarah se.
Baaton mein inn sab ka topic ek hi tha pyar.
Jyoti keh rahi thi ke pyar karna hi nahi chahiye.
Prem kehne laga ke pyar karo yeh dekho ke wo aap se pyar karta he? fir yeh dekho ke dono ka Milan possible he? raaste mein koi roda to nahi tab hi pyar mein aage bado.
Jyoti hass di wah kya philosophy he prem teri.
Fir uss ne prem ko kaha ke uss ko to pyar karna hi nahi aata hoga. Wo kya jaane pyar kis chidiya ka naam he.
Tab Prem bola: oye yaar pyar sanu vi hoeya ci. Par dasseya na kise nu? (oye yaar pyar to mujhe bhi hua tha. Par bataya ni kise ko?) Nahi na….. ni daseya (nhi bataya).
Yeh sun sabhi chonke.
Suraj: oye kutteya tenu kad pyar hoeya te kis nal. Tu kade bhonkeya I na. (oye kutte tujhe kab pyar hua aur kis se? tu kabhi bhonka hi nahi.)
Prem: o yaar bas ho gaya te ho gaya. Pata ci ni sire chadhna so aapa chup vatt lai. (arey yaar bas ho gaya to ho gaya. Pata tha sire nahi chadhe ga iss liye main chup reh gaya)
Sab yeh sun be-had heran the.
Suraj aur neelima jor dene lage ke wo bataye.
Prem: yaar asal ch oh he laleya (Hindu) di dhi te app va sardar. Menu pata na ohde budha-budhi (maa-baap) nu aah sardar jawai pasand aana ni te na I mere budha-budhi nu oh laali. Es lai ik chup te sau sukh. (yaar in fact wo hindu family ki beti thi aur main hu sikh. Mujhe pata tha ke na to uss ke maa-baap ko sardar damaad pasand aaye ga aur na hi mere maa-baap ko wo hindu ladki. Iss liye ek chup aur so sukh.)
Jyoti aage badh prem ki baajoo pakad boli: yaar prem dass na ehna di love story da end ta tragic rea. Shayad assi saare mile ke teri happy ending kar daiye. (yaar prem bata na inn ki story ka end to tragic raha. Shayad hum sab mil ke teri happy ending kar de.)
Prem ne ek pal jyoti ko dekha gehri najar se.
Prem: ni ho sakda kudiye. (nahi ho sakta ladki)
Neelima: ku ni ho sakta bhaiya batao na please. Apni behan ko to batao.
Prem: le bhaina tu keha ta dassna hi pau. Wese ik gal das aah jehdi teri saheli meri baah fadh ke khadi ehnu puchh jara ki eh mera hath fadhu hamesha lai. (le behan tum ne kaha to batana hi pade ga. Wese ek baat bataa yeh jo teri saheli mera baajoo pakad ke khadi he iss ko poochh to jara kya yeh mera haath thaame gi hamesha ke liye.)
‘wat’ jyoti uss ko chhod chaar kadam peechhe jati hui bol padi, ‘prem u mean main. When how where?’
jyoti pe jese bijli si giri.
Suraj aur neelima bhi gaur se prem ko dekhne lage.
Prem hass ke: ku laga jhatka 440 volt da?
Jyoti sookh rahe halak mein thook nigal ke: nahi nahi I don’t think so. Tu aive menu tang kar reha. (tu ese hi mujhe tang kar raha he)
Prem uss ko dekh: o tenu yaad jad pehli vaar mile ci appa saare college ch. Tenu pehli vaar dekheya te dil ch ghau mau jeha feel hoeya. Lageya aah tota ta baba ji apne lai banaya. Sochea ci set kar lau. Tenu do chaar vaar ishare vi maare par tu har vaar muh jea bana ke oh gayi oh gayi. Main vi fer soch lea ke chal nai te na sahi. (arey tujhe yaad he jab pehli baar mile the hum sabhi college mein. Tujhe pehli baar dekha to dil mein kuch kuch sa feel hua. Ese laga jese iss ko baba ji ne mere liye banaya he. socha tha tujhe set kar lu. Do char baar ishare bhi kiye. But tu har baar muh sa bana ke nikal jaati. Maine fir soch liya nahi to na sahi.)
Sabhi heran the prem ki baaton se aur jyoti ko to kuch sooj hi nahi raha tha ke wo kya kahe.
Abhi yeh baat chal rahi thi. shayad aur chalti but beena aa gayi. Sab chup kar gaye.
Jyoti ke bhai ki call aai to wo thoda side pe ho baat karne lagi.
Asal mein uss ka bhai jo usse lenne aane wala tha ussi ne poochhna tha ke wo kaha aaye.
Jyoti ne bata diya.
Baat karte karte jyoti ne jab dekha ke sab neelima ke saath busy ho gaye he to uss ne chupke se wo video cam nikal liya aur jhat se purse mein daal liya.
Dus mint baad hi jyoti ka bhai aa gaya.
Uss ne neelima ka haal poocha aur saath yeh bhi kaha ke mummy uss ka fikar kar rahi thi. subah aaye gi milne.
Wo suraj aur prem se bhi mila. Prem ko wo jaanta tha ku ke prem ke chcacha ke bête ka dost tha aur class fellow tha wo.
Jyoti subah aane ka keh sab ko bye bol nikal gayi.
Ghar aa ke uss ne aram karne ka bahana kiya aur apne room mein chali aayi.
Uss ne video cam ka card nikal apne laptop se attach kiya aur wo recording dekhne lagi jo aaj hui thi uss mein.
Har scene dekh wo kaampne lagi. Uss ki aankhon se aansoo beh nikle.
Jab wo khatam hui recording fir se uss ne laga li ek baar.
Fir uss ne uss ki ek copy apne laptop mein save ki aur card se delete kar di.
Aankhein band ke wo bed pe adh-leti si ho ke beth gayi.
Suraj aur neelima ke baare mein sochne lagi.
Yeh pyar he ke pagalpan? Kya pyar mein itna dard hota he? kisi aur se shadi hone ke baad bhi neelima ke dil pe suraj ka raaj he. aur suraj ka yeh kehna ke unn ke jism nahi mile to kya hua dil to ek he na. kya suraj aur neelima kabhi nahi bhool paye ge ek doosre ko?
Nahi nahi ese thode na hota he. yeh to bas kuch din ka pagalpan he. waqt ke saath ek doosre se dur reh ke dono dheere dheere sab bhool jaye ge.
Fir wo school ke dino ko yaad karne lagi. Waha se aage badi to college ke din yaad aane lage.
College ke dino ki yaad aate hi jyoti ko prem ka pehli baar unn se milna yaad aa gaya.
Fir uss ki soche prem ki aur mudh gayi.
Prem uss ko pyar karta he. par yeh kesa pyar he uss ne aaj tak kabhi iss ka jikar tak na kiya.
Suraj aur prem dono best friends he par dono mein kitna farak. Suraj apni bhavnaye chhupa nhi pata. Par prem ne ek baar apne dil ki na juban pe aane di aur na hi kisi ko ehsas hone diya.
Kya prem bhi uss ko wese hi chahta he jese suraj neelima ko.
Par wo to prem ko nahi chahti. Wese prem mein esa kuch he bhi nahi ke uss ko prem se pyar ho jaye.
Par prem mein esa sab kuch he jo doosro ko apni aur kheenchta he. wo ek acha dost hi nahi ek acha insaan bhi he. jo kisi ke bhi kabhi bhi kaam aa sakta he. wo dosti karta he to nibhata he wo bhi poori shiddat se.
Uss ko neelima ne hi to bataya tha ke kese wo neelima aur uss bhabi ke liye gundo se akela bhidh gaya tha.
Sunder he, brave he, ache aur dyalu dil ka maalik he, ache khaate peete parivar se he. aur kya chahiye kisi ko pyar karne ko.
Kitni ladkiya thi college mein jo prem pe marrti thi. par prem ne aaj tak kisi ko koi bhaav na diya.
Uss ko to lagta tha ke prem pyar jese chakkro se dur he. uss ko pyar vyar mein koi interest nahi he. ya shayad uss ko pyar karna hi nahi aata.
Par yeh to uss ne sapne mein bhi nhi socha tha ke prem to dil hi dil mein ussi ko chahta he. pyar karta he uss ko.
To ab uss ko prem ki proposal kabool kar leni chahiye. Par wo to ek sikh he. agar unn ke pyar ka bhi wahi hashar hua jo neelima aur suraj ka hua to……… waha pesa pyar ke beech aya to yaha dharam deewar bann sakta he……
To kya prem bhi suraj ki tarah…… aur wo khud bhi kya neelima ki tarah………..
Nahi nahi wo prem se pyar nahi karti…… wo uss ko saaf bol degi…….. they are just friends……
Par wo kya yeh keh paye gi…… kya wo prem ka dil todh paye gi……….
Uff…… main pagal ho jau gi…….. mujhe kya ho gaya he……….
Nahi nahi main kuch nahi sochu gi.
Yeh soch ke jyoti ne apna sarr jhatka. Uth ke pehle bathroom gayi aur fir bahar chali aayi apni maa ke paas.
Maa se baat karne lagi ta ke uss ka dhayan kahi aur lage.
Idhar Kareeb aath baje suraj aur prem bhi nikle waha se.
unn ke chalne se pehle neelima ne uss se wadaa liya ke wo apni mom se koi baat nahi kare ga aur na hi unn ko kuch kahe ga.
Suraj jaanta tha ke uss ke ander ek aag jal rahi he par wo uss ko kese shaant kare.
Prem ke peeche bethe bethe uss ne cell nikala.
Kai missed calls thi. papa, radhika aur parul ki.
Ek do uss ke do purane friends ki bhi. Uss ne hospital aate hi phone silent pe kar diya tha.
Uss ne pehle papa ko call kar ke kaha ke wo bas thodi der mein aa raha he.
Fir uss ne radhika ko call ki aur kaha ke wo friends ke saath busy tha. Yahi baat uss ne parul se bhi kahi.
Aadhe ghante baad prem ne uss ko ghar chhoda aur apne ghar ko chal diya.
Uss ko dekh chowkidar ne gate khola.
Porch mein dekha dono cars khadi thi. it means mom aur papa dono ghar pe hi the.
Jab drawing room mein dakhil hua to uss ko dono mein se koi najar na aya.
Wo seedha apne room mein chala aya.
Wo abhi joote utar ke betha hi tha ke rani chali aayi pani ka glass liye.
Pani ka glass saamne bane rack pe rakh.
Rani: aa gya mera suraj baba? Suraj ne sar utha ke dekha par bola kuch nahi.
Kya loge suraj baba? Rani fir se boli.
Suraj thoda kheej ke: zehar.
Suraj ne jalti aankhon se Rani ko dekh kaha.
Yeh sunte hi Rani ko ek tej jhatka laga.
Rani: kya hua suraj baba? Itne preshan…….
Iss se pehle ke rani kuch aur bol pati Suraj ne uss ko beech mein toka.
Suraj: mujhe akela chhod do aur preshan mat karo.
Suraj ne apne ander ki sari kheej rani pe nikal di. Wo aaj se pehle kabhi rani se ese na bola tha chahe kitne bhi khraab mood se ghar ku na aaye.
Suraj ke iss bartav se rani ka dil dukh gaya.
Wo aankhein saaf karti waha se chal di.
Suraj ne uss ko aankhein saaf karte dekh liya.
Ab uss ko ehsas hua ke rani ke saath uss ne kya kiya.
Apni mom ka sara gussa iss bechari pe nikal diya. Ab uss ko khud pe gussa aane laga.
Suraj utha uth ke room se bahar aya.
Wo kitchen ki aur chal diya. Jese hi kuch kadam badhaye to peechhe se hari ki awaaz aai.
Hari: aa gaye beta ji.
Suraj wahi ruk ke: yes papa.
Baat wo hari se kar raha tha par najar kitchen pe thi. rani ki uss ko peeth najar aai.
Par yeh saaf dikh gaya ke wo sari ke pallu se aankhein saaf kar rahi thi.
suraj ko khud pe bahut gussa aa raha tha.
Hari fir se bole.
Hari: rani se bolo mere liye kuch boiled eggs aur salad le aaye.
Suraj samaj gaya ke papa ab drinks kare ge.
Suraj ji papa keh kitchen ki aur chal diya.
Kitchen mein aate hi uss ne papa ka order diya rani ko. Rani ne uss aur dekhe bina hi boli.
Rani: thik he suraj baba.
Rani ke sawar mein itna sab hone ke baad bhi apne liye wahi pyar mehsoos kiya suraj ne.
Suraj ne dekha ke rani pehle hi eggs chheel ke plate mein rakh rahi he.
Suraj kuch pal wahi khada raha.
Wo rani se baat karna chahta tha par himmat na juta pa raha tha.
Sar khujata wo wapas chal diya aur sochne laga ke iss aurat ko kitna khyal he sab ka.
Pata he ke papa ke peene ka time ho gaya he to eggs pehle hi boil kar diye. Yeh sochta hua wo room ki aur bada.
Fir papa ko peg banate dekh uss ka dil bhi machlne laga. Wo jhijkta sa hari ki aur bada.
Hari ne uss ko dekh ek smile ki. Aur saamne bethne ka ishara kiya.
Pehle jab bhi suraj uss ke drinks ke time pe paas aata tha to uss ko kuch maangna hota tha to yahi soch hari bola.
Hari: kahiye beta ji hum aap ki kya khidmat kar sakte he?
Suraj ne hari ki aur dekha aur kafi jhijak ke baad.
Suraj: papa wo……
Suraj ek pal kehte kehte ruka…..
fir bola poori himmat se: papa I wanna drink. If u don’t mind.
Hari ne uss ko dekha fir ek gehri smile di.
Hari: y shud I mind it man? Its my pleasure.
Keh ke hari ne ek glass aur seedha kiya aur fir poochha.
Hari: pehle kabhi pee he kya?
Yeh sunte hi suraj soch mein pad gaya ke wo bataye ke nahi. Uss ko sochte dekh hari hass diya.
Hari: arey yaar, itna sochna ku pee he to pee he. Iss age mein sab chalta he. Yeh jawani na diwani hoti he.
Bol ke hari peg banane laga. Itne mein rani eggs aur salad le aai. Uss ke saman rakhte hi hari rani se bole.
Hari: rani dekh mera beta ab jawan ho gaya he. Aaj se hum dono baap beta nahi dost he dost. We are friends.
Hari ne uth ke suraj ko baahon mein bhar liya. Wesa hi suraj ne bhi kiya.
Hari ne uss ko pehle bhi kai baar gale lagaya tha. Par aaj kuch khaas hi garamjoshi thi hari ki hug mein.
Rani halke se muskarai to jaroor par suraj ko aaj pehli baar peeta dekh wo heran thi.
dono business ki baate karte drink karne lage.
Rani issi beech kafi sara fruit kaat ke de gayi.
Hari ne poochha ke ab aage uss ka kya prog he.
Suraj ne bataya ke bas do chaar din aur fir wo office aana shuru kar dega.
Hari: yaar ese kar tu na ek car le le nayi.
Suraj: papa mujhe bike jayada jaruri he. Yeh ab purani ho gayi he.
Hari smile de: to esa kar dono le le.
Suraj halki smile de: chaliye kal subah dekhte he.
Dono ne ek ek peg khatam kar doosra shuru kar liya tha.
Tabhi kanta nikli apne room se. rani ko awaaj lagane lagi to uss ki najar dono baap bête pe padi.
Wo smile dete hue unn ki aur chali aai.
Mom ko dekhte hi suraj ki smile gayab hoti chali gayi.
Kanta dono ke kareeb aa gayi.
Kanta: arey aaj yeh suraj paschim se kese nikal aya.
Uss ne bade hi fakhar se bête ke sar haath ferte kaha, ‘beta ese hi life ko enjoy karna seekho. Tujhe yeh kabhi nahi bhoolna chahiye tu ek bade ghar ka beta he. Teri harktein, tera uthna bethna apne status ke brabar ke logo se hona chahiye.’
Suraj jo baap se aankhein mila ke baat kar raha tha. Maa ko dekhte hi sar jhuka liya.
Wo nahi chahta tha ke maa ke liye panap rahi nafrat ko koi notice kare.
Ku ke uss ko neelu se kiya vaada yaad tha ke mom ko kuch nahi kehna.
Uss ko mom ki baaton se bada ajeeb feel ho raha tha.
Mom ko dekh uss ko laga tha ke wo gussa kare gi ke suraj pee ku raha he.
Par yaha to sab ulta ho raha tha. Peena uss ke liye status symbol tha. Bade hone ki nishani.
Fir kuch pal ruk ke wo boli.
Kanta: enjoy ur life at the fullest. Tujhe main na kitty ke in laws mein kuch ladkiyo ke contact de deti hu. Tu unn se mil thoda ghoomo firo. Unn mein jo tujhe sab se achhi lage bata dena. Uss se teri baat chalaye ge. Choice is urs.
Suraj: please mom. Aaj keh diya fir se kabhi na kehna.
Iss se pehle ke kanta aage bolti kuch hari bol pade.
Hari: kanti this is not time to discuss all these things. Go and take ur dinner.
Kanta ne kuch kehne ke liye hont hilaye hi the ke hari fir se
Hari: kanti, u ll not utter a single word now. I said go.
Suraj papa ke iss lehje pe heran tha.
Uss ke papa to juban nahi kholte the mom ke aage par aaj to sab ulta ho gea.
Hari ne suraj ko chill karne ka kaha.
Kanta muh mein budbudate hue chali gayi kitchen ki aur. Jiss ko na hari ne suna na hi suraj ne.
Kanta kitchen mein gayi.
Rani ko dinner room mein dene ka keh dono baap bête ko ghoorti apne bed room mein ghuss gayi.
Wese to hari do hi peg lete the par aaj teen le gaye.
Shayad suraj ke saath peene ki khushi mein.
Dinner ka keh hari washroom mein ghuss gaye.
Suraj ne jhat se apna teesra peg khali kiya aur ek large peg bana ke do ghoont bhar dinning table pe aa betha.
Suraj ko laga ke iss ka koi nahi jaan paya par rani kitchen mein khadi sab dekh rahi thi.
Dinner lag gaya.
Aaj shayad pehli baar tha ke dono baap beta ne ek saath dinner kiya.
Dinner khatam hote hi hari good night keh bed room ki aur chal diya.
Aur suraj bhi apne room mein aa gaya.
Rani ne pehle bartan samete aur fir khud kitchen mein neeche beth ke dinner kiya.
Sab kaam khatam kar ke wo suraj ke room mein chali aayi.
Aate aate uss ne drawing room aur dinning room ki lights off kar night lamps jala diye.
Suraj ke room mein aa uss ne dekha ke suraj abhi tak jaag raha tha aur bed se tek lagaye betha tha.
Rani: suraj baba aur kuch chahiye. Suraj uss ko dekh thoda seedha ho ke kaan pakad bola.
Suraj: I m sorry. Main preshani mein tum se bahut galat bol diya. Please maaf kar do na.
Yeh dekh rani ko bahut herani hui.
Wo bed ke corner ke paas aa khadi hui.
Rani: esa mat kaho suraj baba. Aap hamare maalik ho aur hum to bas nokar he. Aap jese chaho keh sakte ho. Aap bade logo ka hak he.
Rani ke ye shabad suraj ke dil mein teer ki tarah lage.
Uss ke hont budbudaye: r…….a…….n……i…….
Suraj ki aankhein nam hoti chali gayi. Uss ki aankhon mein nami dekh rani bhi tadap uthi.
Dil chaha ke aage badh ke uss ko seene se bheench le par wo dono ke beech jo maalik nokar ka rishta tha uss ko undekha na kar pai.
Suraj: dayi maa ke baad ek tum hi to ho rani jis ko maine apna samjha iss ghar mein. Aur aaj tum ne bhi. Maana maine tera dil dukhaya tujhe rula diya. Par yeh bata tu hi kya maine ghar mein tum sab kaam karne walo ko kabhi nokar samjha ya paraya maana.
Yeh bol suraj chup ho gaya.
Rani uss ki aankhon mein bhar aayi nammi ko gaalon pe behte dekh khud ko rok na payi.
Teji se chalti hui uss ke paas chali aayi aur uss ke chehre ko apne seene se bheench liya.
Rani uss ko seene se bheenche hue: mujhe tumare kehne ka bura nahi laga suraj baba. Bura laga to bas jo tum ne wo nigodi sharab pee. Mat peena suraj baba. Bahut gandi hoti he ye. Sharab buri he.
Suraj: bura hu na issi liye to bura kaam karta hu.
Rani ne yeh sunn aur jor se uss ko seene se lagate hue.
Rani: nahi nahi mere suraj baba bure nahi he. Wo to bahut achhe he. Sab se achhe.
Fir uss ne apni saree ke pallu se suraj ka chehra saaf kiya aur boli.
Rani: chalo mere achhe suraj baba ab so jao. Mujhe subah bibi ji ko jaldi chai deni hoti he. Unn ko yoga pe jana hota he na.
wo suraj se alag ho jaane lagi to suraj ne achanak uss ka haath pakad liya.
Rani: ab kya hua suraj baba.
Suraj: mujhe apni goddi mein sula do na rani.
Suraj ne jesse minnat ci ki.
Barso pehle rani uss ko kabhi goddi mein sulati thi. jab kanta ya hari kisi baat pe uss ki pitai kar dete.
Rani sharmati hui: dhatt. Ab tum bade ho gaye ho suraj baba. Ab mujhe laaj aaye gi.
Rani ne haath chhudaya aur lights off kar door ko band kar chali gayi.
Jaate jaate rani ne drawing aur hall room ke doors band kiye jin pe automatic locks ander se khud hi lag gaye.
Suraj ka cell kai baar baj ke pehle hi band ho chukka tha.
Parul, radhika, neelima aur prem sab ki call aai par suraj ne kisi se baat na ki.
Yeh sab calls suraj ke drink ya dinner karte time aai.
Suraj jab soya to baara bajne wale the.
Subah ke nau bajne ko the. Suraj ke cell ki bell ring kar rahi thi.
Suraj ne bina aankhein khole takiye ke paas pade cell ko utha on kiya.
Suraj: hello